W. S. Teuffel Persians 949-961.comm-949-961

ed. N. Wecklein

Persians. W. S. Teuffel. ed. N. Wecklein. . .

Current edition Experimental

Commentary (W. S. Teuffel; revised by N. Wecklein, 1886; German; OCR draft) (German) (Persians, explanatory commentary pp. 43–97. Single-witness OCR; source readings and all reference placements require scan review.)

Provisional text from uncorrected OCR; expect errors.

Editions (6)
Πέρσαι Perseus (Aeschylus, Volume 1. Smyth, Herbert Weir, editor. London; New York: William Heinemann; G.P. Putnam's Sons, 1922.) — 932-1076 focus
Πέρσαι (OCR draft) Experimental (Πέρσαι. Guilielmus Dindorfius, 1882.) — 932 focus
Πέρσαι (OCR draft) Experimental (Πέρσαι. Gottfried Hermann, 1852.) — 932 focus
ὅδ᾽ ἐγών, οἰοῖ, αἰακτὸς
μέλεος γέννα γῇ τε πατρώα
κακὸν ἄρ᾽ ἐγενόμην.
ἵετ' αἰανὴν πάνδυρτον
δύςθροον αὐδάν. δαίμων γὰρ ὅδ᾽ αὖ
μετάτροπος ἐπ' ἐμοί.
920
Ἰάνων γὰρ ἀπηύρα,
925
Ἰάνων ναύφρακτος Ἄρης ἑτεραλκὴς
νυχίαν πλάκα κερσάμενος
δυσδαίμονά τ᾽ ἀκτάν.
ΠΕΡΣΑΙ (OCR draft) Experimental (ΠΕΡΣΑΙ. Paul Mazon, 1920-1925.) — 932 focus
Πέρσαι (OCR draft) Experimental (Πέρσαι. N. Wecklein, 1885.) — 932 focus
ὅδ᾽ ἐγών, οἰοῖ, αἰακτὸς
ἵετ᾽ αἰανῆ πάνδυρτον
δύσθροον αὐδάν. δαίμων γὰρ ὅδ᾽ αὖ
μετάτροπος ἐπ᾽ ἐμοί.
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Ἰάνων γὰρ ἀπηύρα,
Ἰάνων ναύφρακτος
Ἄρης ἑτεραλκὴς
νυχίαν πλάκα κερσάμενος
955
δυσδαίμονά τ᾽ ἀκτάν.
Aeschyli Persae (OCR draft) Experimental (Aeschyli Persae. Ulrich von Wilamowitz-Moellendorff, 1914.) — 932 focus
Translations (8)
Persians Perseus (Aeschylus, Volume 1. Smyth, Herbert Weir, translator. London; New York: William Heinemann; G.P. Putnam's Sons, 1922. (Modernized by Perseus.)) — 932-1076 focus
The Persians. (OCR draft) Experimental (The Persians.. Theodore Alois Buckley, 1849.) — 932 focus
I here before you, alas! alas! meet subject for wailing, hapless have been born an evil to my family, and my father-land.
Pour ye forth a grievous all-lamentable, sad-re-sounding voice; for this daemon hath made a turn back upon me.
For our ship-fenced Mars, yielding the victory to others, hath reaped mischief from the Ionians, after laying waste the darkling surface of the main and the ill-fated shore.
LES PERSES (OCR draft) Experimental (LES PERSES. Paul Mazon, 1920-1925.) — 932 focus
sur nos vaillants soutiens ! — et l'Asie, roi de cette terre, pitoya-
blement, pitoyablement, a fléchi le genou.
race et de ma patrie !
gémissants, lugubres : le Destin désormais s'est tourné contre moi !
The Persians (OCR draft) Experimental (The Persians. Robert Potter, 1779.) — 932 focus
Your fall, heroic youths, diſtracts my ſoul.
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Then bid them flow, bid the wild meaſures flow,
Hollow, unmuſical, the notes of grief;
They ſuit my fortune, and dejected ſtate.
Again the voice of wild deſpair
With ſhrilling ſhrieks ſhall pierce the air;
For high the God of War his flaming creſt
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Raiſ'd, with the fleet of Greece ſurrounded,
The haughty arms of Greece with conqueſt bleſt,
And Perſia's wither'd force confounded,
Daſh'd on the dreary beach her heroes ſlain,
Or whelm'd them in the darken'd main.
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Eschilo, I Persiani: traduzione italiana di Ettore Romagnoli (OCR draft) Experimental (Eschilo, I Persiani: traduzione italiana di Ettore Romagnoli. Ettore Romagnoli, 1922.) — 932 focus
Questo io sono: e di pianto son degno,
tristo me!, che alla nostra progenie
di sciagura fui causa, e al mio regno.
1070
Sí, levate lamento funesto
1075
con clamore di lutto: ché il Dèmone
contro noi volge l'impeto infesto.
Da spalti di navi, sterminio,
il Marte di Ionia,
ne fece, che, agli Elleni fido.
la pianura del mar fra le tenebre
1085
radeva e l'infausto lido.
Aeschylus, Persae: versio Latina Ioannis Sanravii (OCR draft) Experimental (Aeschylus, Persae: versio Latina Ioannis Sanravii. Ioannes Sanravius, 1555.) — 932 focus
Ipfe uerò heu heu deflendus mifer, generationi
Et terræ patriæ malum extiti.
855
Emittite grauelugubrē tumultutriaq uocem.
Nam fortunarursus mutabilis est in me.
860
Ionum enim
Eripuit, Ionũ claße instructus, Mars alijs das auxiliŭ,
865
Noctură gleba profligans, infæliceq; dolorě.
English (E. D. A. Morshead, 1908) (OCR draft) Experimental (Aeschylus, Persians — Morshead translation. Wikisource transcription; speech corresp and card milestones aligned to Smyth perseus-grc2.) — 932 focus
Alas, a lamentable sound,
A cry of ruth! for I am found
A curse to land and lineage,
With none my sorrow to assuage!
940
Ay, launch the woeful sorrow's cry,
The harsh, discordant melody,
For lo, the power, we held for sure,
Hath turned to my discomfiture!
950
Alas, the god of war, who sways
The scales of fight in diverse ways,
Gives glory to Ionia!
Ionian ships, in fenced array,
960
Have reaped their harvest in the bay,
A darkling harvest-field of Fate,
A sea, a shore, of doom and hate!
German (J. J. C. Donner, 1854; OCR review) (OCR draft) Experimental (Aeschylos. Deutsch in den Versmaßen der Urschrift. Stuttgart: Hoffmann, 1854. Native Donner line citations, Smyth card correspondence, selected textual readings and metrical facsimiles. Remaining OCR differences and unattributed reading notes are documented in the linked review inventory.) — 932 focus
Und Ich Unseliger hier, weh!
Ich Armer, wie ward ich dem Volke zum Fluch
Und dem heimischen Land!
885
Hebt an wehklagenden Jammers
890
Dumpfhallenden Laut: denn es stürmte der Zorn
Des Geschickes auf mich!
Der Hellene vertilgt' euch,
Der hellenische Ares,
Anstürmend in Schiffen;
Er mähte die nächtliche Flur,
900
Das Gestade des Todes.

Notes on the current edition

Persians

1. Single-witness OCR: uncollated. Source layout and readings require scan review; automatic flags are not exhaustive.
2. Reference placement provisional: provisional local reference window from running Greek. Verify the printed source numbering and note scope against the scan.

Commentary

Critical apparatus to The Persians (OCR draft) (Latin and Greek critical apparatus to Gottfried Hermann's 1852 edition of The Persians.) focus

949. mvp-aeschylus-tlg0085-tlg002-hermann1852-appcrit-lat1-927

ἐ ἔ:
¿ri
Vit.
sexies
Cantabr. 1.
M
. Ceteri
è è
, praeter Lips. Ven. B. in quo recte quater
&
scriptum est, sed post
tháμoves
.
949

950. mvp-aeschylus-tlg0085-tlg002-hermann1852-appcrit-lat1-928

ἀσπαίρουσι:
aлaigova
G. Lips. Par. C. F. Ald. Turn.
dozégovor
Colb. 1.
950

951. mvp-aeschylus-tlg0085-tlg002-hermann1852-appcrit-lat1-929

τὸν: Chori nomen non adscriptum est in Lips.
τὸν
cum litura ante
y
M.
Tov
Vit. Lips. Par. C. Turn.
avvor
Ald.
951

952. mvp-aeschylus-tlg0085-tlg002-hermann1852-appcrit-lat1-930

τὸν σὸν:
τὸν σὸν
Μ. Vit. Rob.
τῶν σῶν
, sed mutatum in
τὸν σὸν
, Lips.
Gor tor
Turn.
oov
, omisso
тòr
, G. Ven. A. Cantabr. 1. Colb. 1. 2. Ald.
952

952. mvp-aeschylus-tlg0085-tlg002-hermann1852-appcrit-lat1-931

πάντ':
τ'
pro
πάντ'
G. In Lips. ad
πάντ'
adscriptum
γρ. ὄντα
. Habet
orra
Rob. et Butlero teste Colb. 2. quem
árt'
omittere Blomfieldius dicit.
952

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Βατανώχου:
βατανώχου
M. Vit. Lips.
βατανόχου
G. (sic G.) Ven. A. Par. C. Ald. Rob. Turn.
Bararovyov
Ask. A.
954

954. mvp-aeschylus-tlg0085-tlg002-hermann1852-appcrit-lat1-933

Ἀλπιστὸν:
ἄπιστον
Ask. Α.
954

955. mvp-aeschylus-tlg0085-tlg002-hermann1852-appcrit-lat1-934

NA: Post hunc versum lacunae signa posui, quum monometrum anapaesticum excidisse antistropha doceat.
955

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τοῦ Σησάμα τοῦ Μεγαβάτα:
Tov 61σάua tov
M. (sic M.) Vit. Lips. Ven. B. Cantabr. 1. Par. A.
τοῦ σησαμάτου
Ald. Rob.
τοῦ σησίμα τοῦ
G. Par. L.
τοῦ σημάτου
Οχ.
Tov σεσάua
, altero
tov
omisso, Colb. 1. Ask. A.
peyaẞára
M. (sic M.) G. Vit. Lips. Ven. B. Cantabr. 1. Colb. 1. Ask. A. Par. L. Ald.
yapátar
Rob.
vyaẞára
Colb. 2. Ox. Turn.
956

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Πάρθον τε μέγαν τ' Οἰβάρην:
núg9or tε
M. (sic M.) Vit. Cantabr. 1. Colb. 2. Par. A. Ald. Rob.
πόρθον τε
Ask. A.
σπάρθων τε
Par. K.
σπάρθεόν τε
Lips.
πάρ-9εor TE
G. Par. L. Turn.
olságn
Ask. A. Colb. 2. Rob.
t' oisá-ριν
Cantabr. 1.
τ' οἰβάρινον
Par. K. L.
τοιβάρην τ'
M. Vit.
τ' οἰβά-Ζ'
Par. G.
τ' οἴβαριν τ'
G.
τ' οἰβάρινον τ'
, supra scripto
z'
Lips.
τ' οἰνοβάρην τ'
Οx. Ven. A. Ald. Turn.
957

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ἔλιπες ἔλιπες, οἴ, ὢ ὢ δᾴων, Πέρσαις ἀγαυοῖς κακὰ πρόκακα λέγεις: Verba
ἔλιπες ἔλιπες ὢ ὢ δαΐων
Xerxi tribuit Rob. Postrema tantum
à ở dator
in G. Lips. Ven. B. Xerxis sunt. Omnia choro continuantur in M. Vit. Ald. Turn.
Es
semel tantum Lips.
)
, ut in G. Vit. Lips. Ox. Par. A. C. Colb. 1. 2. Ask. A. Ald. Rob. Turn.
semel
habet Ven. B. et cum aliis, ut videtur, codicibus ed. Vict.
dator
libri, nisi quod Vit. hanc vocem omittit.
πέρσας
Αld.
ἀγαυοῖσι
Ven. Β.
ἀγαθοῖς
Colb. 1.
dyaroiç
Ask. A.
κακὰ πρόκακα λέγεις
G. Lips. Turn. et adscriptum in Par. Α.
κακὰ προκακὰ λέγεις
, sed ut ante correctionem
προκακοῦ
fuisse videatur, M.
κακὰ πρὸς κακὰ λέγεις
Vit. Mose. Ox. Par. A. Ven. A. Ald.
κακὰ πρὸς κακοῖς λέγεις
Ven. Β. Rob. Scripsi
ἔλιπες, ἔλιπες, οἷς, ὦ ὢ δάων, Πέρσαις ἀγαυοῖς κακὰ πρόκακα λέγεις?
Sic apte omnia cohaerent: an etiam Alpistum et Parthum et Oebaren reliquisti, prout, hei hei, ex illis colligo, quae strenuis Persis ingentia accidisse mala narras?

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ἵυγγά μοι δῆτ᾽ ἀγαθῶν ἑτάρων ὑπομιμνῄσκεις:
Ειγγά μοι
, sed
fi
litteris a sec. manu scriptis, in margine autem
γρ. ζυγά μοι
Μ.
ἴγα
Ald.
μοι
omittunt Ven. A. Οx.
με
pro eo habent Ven. B. Rob.
ἑταίρων
Vit. Ven. A. Colb. 1.
ἑτέρων
Ald. Libri omnes
υπομιμνήσκεις
, nisi quod
υπομιμνήσκεις
habet Μ.
υπομιμνηάκεις
vitiose Ald.
υπομνήσκεις
Cantabr. 1. Non scripsisse Aeschylum
υπομιμνήσκεις
strophicus versus docet. Videtur ab interprete pro alio verbo adscriptum fuisse. Posui quod aptum est,
υπορίνεις
. Possunt alia excogitari, velut
υπεγείρεις
.
960

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ἄλαστ' ἄλαστα στυγνὰ πρόκακα λέγων: Metri caussa scripsi
ἄλαστ' άλαστα
. Libri omnes semel
ἄλαστα
,
πρὸ κακὰ
Αld. Vulgo post
υπομιμνήσκεις
commate, post
λέγων
plene distinguitur. Sic etiam scholiastes. Sed
ἄλαστ᾽ ἄλαστα στυγνά πρόκακα λέγων
ne per se ipsa quidem satis apte de choro dici puto, nedum quum modo de Xerxe dictum sit
κακὰ πρόκακα λέγεις
. Itaque plene post
ὑπορίνεις
, commate autem post
λέγων
distinxi, quo
λέγων
per anacoluthon pro
λέγοντί μοι
positum esset, ut in Sophoclis Oed. R. v. 158.
πρῶτά σε κεκλόμενος - προφάνητέ μοι
, et similia alibi.
961

Commentary (W. S. Teuffel; revised by N. Wecklein, 1886; German; OCR draft) (Persians, explanatory commentary pp. 43–97. Single-witness OCR; source readings and all reference placements require scan review.) focus

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1
2
γάρ, klaget nur, denn. Ἰάνων (Silbenmessung anders als 1025) Αρης ναύφρ. (navibus munitus) ἑτεραλκής (den Feinden Kraft und Sieg verleihend) ἀπηύρα (hat sie geraubt), nämlich βάρη (Schiffe und Mannschaft). – νυχίαν (Todesnacht) grausig, wenn es nicht ursprünglich μυχίαν (wie 877) ge- heiſsen hat. πλάκα, Meeres- fläche. κερσάμενος depascens, vastans. Hom. N 770 ποῦ τοι Δηίφοβός τε βίη θ' Ἑλένοιο ἄνα- κτος, Ασιάδης τ᾿ Αδάμας ἠδ᾽ ῎Ασιος Υρτάκου υἱός; ποῦ δὲ τοι Όθρυο- νεύς; νῦν ὤλετο πᾶσα κατ᾿ ἄκρης Ἴλιος αἰπεινή. – δέ, 334. – Φαρανδ. 31. – Σουσισκάνης 34. – Dritte An- häufung persischer Namen.