W. S. Teuffel Persians 962-972.comm-962-972

ed. N. Wecklein

Persians. W. S. Teuffel. ed. N. Wecklein. . .

Current edition Experimental

Commentary (W. S. Teuffel; revised by N. Wecklein, 1886; German; OCR draft) (German) (Persians, explanatory commentary pp. 43–97. Single-witness OCR; source readings and all reference placements require scan review.)

Provisional text from uncorrected OCR; expect errors.

Editions (5)
Πέρσαι (OCR draft) Experimental (Πέρσαι. Guilielmus Dindorfius, 1882.) — 941 focus
Πέρσαι (OCR draft) Experimental (Πέρσαι. Gottfried Hermann, 1852.) — 941 focus
ἵετ' αἰανὴν πάνδυρτον
δύςθροον αὐδάν. δαίμων γὰρ ὅδ᾽ αὖ
μετάτροπος ἐπ' ἐμοί.
920
Ἰάνων γὰρ ἀπηύρα,
925
Ἰάνων ναύφρακτος Ἄρης ἑτεραλκὴς
νυχίαν πλάκα κερσάμενος
δυσδαίμονά τ᾽ ἀκτάν.
ὀλοοὺς ἀπέλειπον
Τυρίας ἐκ ναὸς ἔρροντας ἐπ᾽ ἀκταῖς
Σαλαμινιάσι στυφέλου
θείνοντας ἐπ᾽ ἀκτᾶς.
ἰώ, ἰώ μοι, τὰς ὠγυγίους κατιδόντες
στυγνὰς Ἀθάνας πάντες ἑνὶ πιτύλῳ,
ἐ ἔ,
τλάμονες ἀσπαίρουσι χέρσῳ.
950
ΠΕΡΣΑΙ (OCR draft) Experimental (ΠΕΡΣΑΙ. Paul Mazon, 1920-1925.) — 941 focus
Πέρσαι (OCR draft) Experimental (Πέρσαι. N. Wecklein, 1885.) — 941 focus
ἵετ᾽ αἰανῆ πάνδυρτον
δύσθροον αὐδάν. δαίμων γὰρ ὅδ᾽ αὖ
μετάτροπος ἐπ᾽ ἐμοί.
945
Ἰάνων γὰρ ἀπηύρα,
Ἰάνων ναύφρακτος
Ἄρης ἑτεραλκὴς
νυχίαν πλάκα κερσάμενος
955
δυσδαίμονά τ᾽ ἀκτάν.
ὀλοοὺς ἀπέλειπον
965
Τυρίας ἐκ ναὸς
ἔρροντας ἐπ᾽ ἀκταῖς
Σαλαμινιάσιν στυφέλου
θείνοντας ἐπ᾽ ἀκτᾶς.
ἰώ ἰώ μοι,
τὰς ὠγυγίους κατιδόντες
στυγνὰς Ἀθάνας πάντες ἑνὶ πιτύλῳ,
980
ὤ ὤ ὤ, τλάμονες ἀσπαίρουσι χέρσῳ.
Aeschyli Persae (OCR draft) Experimental (Aeschyli Persae. Ulrich von Wilamowitz-Moellendorff, 1914.) — 941 focus
Translations (7)
The Persians. (OCR draft) Experimental (The Persians.. Theodore Alois Buckley, 1849.) — 941 focus
Pour ye forth a grievous all-lamentable, sad-re-sounding voice; for this daemon hath made a turn back upon me.
For our ship-fenced Mars, yielding the victory to others, hath reaped mischief from the Ionians, after laying waste the darkling surface of the main and the ill-fated shore.
I left them fallen in death out of a Tyrian ship on the shores of Salamis, striking on the rugged headland.
Alas for me! after having beheld ancient Athens the hateful, all in one shock of fight, ah! ah! ah! wretched, lie gasping on the ground.
LES PERSES (OCR draft) Experimental (LES PERSES. Paul Mazon, 1920-1925.) — 941 focus
race et de ma patrie !
gémissants, lugubres : le Destin désormais s'est tourné contre moi !
Las ! hélas ! crie et achève d'apprendre 4 . Où
donc est ce qui reste de la multitude des tiens ? Où sont tes lieutenants, Pharandakès, Sousas, Pélagôn, Dotamas et Agda-
batas, Psammis, Sousiskanès, qui naguère quittait Ecbatane 5 ?
où est ton Pharnoukos ? et le preux Ariomardos ? Où donc sire Seuakès ? Lilaios aux
nobles aïeux, Memphis, Tharybis ? Et Masistras, Artembarès, Hystaichmas ? Réponds à mes demandes.
The Persians (OCR draft) Experimental (The Persians. Robert Potter, 1779.) — 941 focus
Then bid them flow, bid the wild meaſures flow,
Hollow, unmuſical, the notes of grief;
They ſuit my fortune, and dejected ſtate.
Again the voice of wild deſpair
With ſhrilling ſhrieks ſhall pierce the air;
For high the God of War his flaming creſt
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Raiſ'd, with the fleet of Greece ſurrounded,
The haughty arms of Greece with conqueſt bleſt,
And Perſia's wither'd force confounded,
Daſh'd on the dreary beach her heroes ſlain,
Or whelm'd them in the darken'd main.
1160
Daſh'd from the Tyrian veſſel on the rocks
1170
Of Salamis they ſunk, and ſmear'd with gore
The heroes on the dreary ſtrand are ſtretch'd.
Wretch that I am!
Theſe on th' abhorred town
Ogygian Athens d , roll'd their glowing eyes
Indignant;
THE PERSIANS.
Indignant;
1185
but at once in the fierce ſhock
Of battle fell, daſh'd breathleſs on the ground.
Eschilo, I Persiani: traduzione italiana di Ettore Romagnoli (OCR draft) Experimental (Eschilo, I Persiani: traduzione italiana di Ettore Romagnoli. Ettore Romagnoli, 1922.) — 941 focus
Sí, levate lamento funesto
1075
con clamore di lutto: ché il Dèmone
contro noi volge l'impeto infesto.
Da spalti di navi, sterminio,
il Marte di Ionia,
ne fece, che, agli Elleni fido.
la pianura del mar fra le tenebre
1085
radeva e l'infausto lido.
Quando io li lasciai, giú da un tirio
navile piombavano.
1095
Erravano verso le spiagge
Salamine dispersi: i cadaveri
sbatteano alle rupi selvagge.
Ahimè, ahi!, procombettero
tutti ad un colpo. A la vetusta Atene
odïosa, le palpebre
fisse, ahi miseri! guizzan su le arene.
Aeschylus, Persae: versio Latina Ioannis Sanravii (OCR draft) Experimental (Aeschylus, Persae: versio Latina Ioannis Sanravii. Ioannes Sanravius, 1555.) — 941 focus
Emittite grauelugubrē tumultutriaq uocem.
Nam fortunarursus mutabilis est in me.
860
Ionum enim
Eripuit, Ionũ claße instructus, Mars alijs das auxiliŭ,
865
Noctură gleba profligans, infæliceq; dolorě.
Miferos reliqui, Tyria
Ex naui pereuntes in littoribus Satamincis.
Heu beu antiquas uidentes
Molestas Athenas, omnes uno tumultu
880
Heuheu, miferi eunt in terram.
English (E. D. A. Morshead, 1908) (OCR draft) Experimental (Aeschylus, Persians — Morshead translation. Wikisource transcription; speech corresp and card milestones aligned to Smyth perseus-grc2.) — 941 focus
Ay, launch the woeful sorrow's cry,
The harsh, discordant melody,
For lo, the power, we held for sure,
Hath turned to my discomfiture!
950
Alas, the god of war, who sways
The scales of fight in diverse ways,
Gives glory to Ionia!
Ionian ships, in fenced array,
960
Have reaped their harvest in the bay,
A darkling harvest-field of Fate,
A sea, a shore, of doom and hate!
I left them, mangled castaways,
Flung from their Tyrian deck, and tossed
975
On Salaminian water-ways,
From surging tides to rocky coast!
Alas, alas, they came, their eyes surveyed
Ancestral Athens on that fatal day.
Then with a rending struggle were they laid
Upon the land, and gasped their life away!
German (J. J. C. Donner, 1854; OCR review) (OCR draft) Experimental (Aeschylos. Deutsch in den Versmaßen der Urschrift. Stuttgart: Hoffmann, 1854. Native Donner line citations, Smyth card correspondence, selected textual readings and metrical facsimiles. Remaining OCR differences and unattributed reading notes are documented in the linked review inventory.) — 941 focus
Hebt an wehklagenden Jammers
890
Dumpfhallenden Laut: denn es stürmte der Zorn
Des Geschickes auf mich!
Der Hellene vertilgt' euch,
Der hellenische Ares,
Anstürmend in Schiffen;
Er mähte die nächtliche Flur,
900
Das Gestade des Todes.
Todt ließ ich sie dort, sah
Aus dem tyrischen Schiffe
910
Sie stürzen am Strande
Von Salamis, sah sie zerschellt
An der zackigen Klippe.
Nach dem grauen Athen, dem verhaßten,
Den Blick gewendet, niedergeschmettert zumal,
Die Armen, ach!
Liegen sie zuckend am Ufer alle.
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Notes on the current edition

Persians

1. Single-witness OCR: uncollated. Source layout and readings require scan review; automatic flags are not exhaustive.
2. Reference placement provisional: provisional local reference window from running Greek. Verify the printed source numbering and note scope against the scan.

Commentary

Critical apparatus to The Persians (OCR draft) (Latin and Greek critical apparatus to Gottfried Hermann's 1852 edition of The Persians.) focus

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ἔντοσθεν: Propter metrum
δὴ
inserui, quo libri carent, et pro
ἔνδοθεν
, quae librorum scriptura est, scripsi
έντοσθεν
. Et
ἔντοσθεν
quidem etiam Blomfieldius.
963

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ἄλλον γε:
ἄλλον γε
Schützius in minore editione et Blomfieldius.
20 γε
M. G. Vit. Lips. Par. A. Colb. 1. Ask. A. Cantabr. 1. Ven. 1. Ald. Rob. Turn.
ἄλλο γέ τι
Ven. Β.
ἄλλο τε
Par. G.
ἄλλο τὶ
Victori editio.
964

965. mvp-aeschylus-tlg0085-tlg002-hermann1852-appcrit-lat1-942

Μάρδον:
μάρδον
Lips. Cantabr. 1. Par. L. et adscripto
μαχόδων
Par. C.
μάρδον
sic G.
965

965. mvp-aeschylus-tlg0085-tlg002-hermann1852-appcrit-lat1-943

μυριάδαρχον: Libri
μυριόνταρχον
, nisi quod in M. prius
μυριστάρχον
, sine accentu et priore
v
, scriptum fuit, Vit. autem
μύριο-ταρχον
habet, sine accentu, relicto autem in media voce spatio appictaque ad
ταρχον
lineola, indice nominis proprii, Rob.
μυριόναρχον
. Non dubitavi scribere
μυριάδαρχον
, in quod etiam Blomfieldius incidit.
965

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Ξάνθιν:
ξάνθον
Ven. Β. Rob. Ceteri libri
ξάνθην
. Scripsi
Ξάνθιν
.
966

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Ἀγχάρην: Deinde Ven. A.
ἀγχάρην τοὺς ἄνακτας τῶν ἵππων
, ex interpretatione v. 968.
966

967. mvp-aeschylus-tlg0085-tlg002-hermann1852-appcrit-lat1-946

Δίαιξίν τ':
δίαιξίν τ'
M. G. Vit. Lips. Ald. Rob.
Διαιξίν τ'
Turn.
967

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Ἀρσάκην:
ἠδ᾽ ἀρσάκον
Lips.
967

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Κηγδαδάταν:
κηγδαδάταν
sic M.
καγδαδάταν
Vit.
κιγδαδάταν
Ask. A.
κηδαδάταν
Colb. 1. Cantabr. 1. et
r
ad
v
supra scripto Colb. 2.
καὶ δαδάταν
Ven. Β.
κιγδάδων
G. Par. G. K. L.
κυγδάταν
Rob.
καγδα-γάταν
Αld.
Κιγδαγάταν
Turn.
τοὺς κηγδαγάτας
Lips.
969

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Λυθίμναν:
λυθίμναν
M. G. Vit. Lips. Ald. Rob. Turn. In Lips. ad
a
supra adscriptum.
2ıðíurar
Colb. 1.
2v9ipar
Par. A.
9viurar
Cantabr. 1.
969

970. mvp-aeschylus-tlg0085-tlg002-hermann1852-appcrit-lat1-950

Τόλμον τ':
tókµov t'
M. Par. A. Ven. B.
Tókuor
, omisso
'
Vit. et cum plerisque, ut videtur, codicibus Turn.
tóµov
Ald.
τόλμav τ'
, ad
a
supra scripto, Lips.
Tókuar
Ask. A. Par. L.
Tókuar Tókuar
, adiecta interpretatione
τολμηρόν
, G.
970

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αἰχμᾶς:
αἰχμᾶς
G. Par. A.
αἰχμὰς
Μ.
αἰγχοῖς
Vit. Ceteri
αἰχμής
.
970

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ἔταφον ἔταφον· οὐκ ἀμφὶ σκηναῖς τροχηλάτοισιν, ὄπιθεν ἑπόμενοι.: Versus 971 974. in libris Xerxi tribuuntur. Sed v. 971. 972. choro esse continuandos strophae comparatio docet, atque in ipsa librorum scriptura est quod moneat, ne temere vices personarum conturbatam esse censeamus. Nam quum omnes libri
ἔταφον ἔταφον
habeant, facilius crediderim scholiastas, qui id partim per
ἀπέθανον
vel
Davor
, partim per
étágyaav
interpretantur, errasse, quam ex Valckenarii ad Eur. Hipp. v. 1247. sententia scribendum esse
étager, étager
. Omninoque quae de sepultura Persarum hic in scholiis tradita sunt, ea vereor ne non petita sint ex idoneis fontibus, sed ficta ad proferendam probabilem loci explicationem. Deinde
oux
in sola ed. Rob. deest. Eadem cum Ven. B.
Tooyrλúrois
habet. A metrico aliquo mutatus est in hunc modum verborum ordo in Ven. Β.
σκηναῖσιν οὐκ ἀμφὶ τροχηλάτοις
. Alio modo in Vit. interpolata est scriptura,
οὐκ ἀμφὶ σκηναῖς δ᾽ ἦν τροχηλάτοισιν ὄπισθεν δ᾽ ἑπόμενοι
. Omnes autem libri
ὄπισθεν 3 Enovo
habent, praeter Par. C. Turn. in quibus
лóueros
legitur, quae mutatio facta est ab aliquo homine qui
etaqov
prima persona dictum esse putabat. Quid multa? Vitium non nisi in altero versu, idque satis leve et haud dubie ex perversa aliqua grammaticorum explicatione ortum, latet. Scribendum est enim, ut Wellauerus quoque vidit, verbis choro continuatis,
ἔταφον, ἔταφον· οὐκ ἀμφὶ σκηναῖς τροχηλάτοισιν, ἔπιθεν ἑπόμενοι
. At verò, inquit, alium quoque desideramus, Mardorum ducem Xanthim, et Ancharen, aliosque. Miror, miror: non circa carpentum tuum sunt, pone sequentes. Xerxes, ut regem decet, non pedibus, sed carpento vectus advenerat, ita, opinor, ut carpentum ex longinquo conspiceretur, unde ille quum descendisset, in conspectum et ad alloquium chori prodierat. Itaque chorus, alios quoque quos desideret commemorans, mirari se dicit, quod eos non videat in comitatu Xerxis, sequentes harmamaxam eius. Nam quas dicit
σκηνὰς τροχηλάτους
, non intelligit aliud quam carpentum vel harmamaxam, id quod vel ex vocabulo
ozý
, etiam aliis scriptoribus in harmamáxae mentione usitato, colligi potest, quum hic
σκηναὶ
istae vocentur
τροχήλατοι
. V. Schefferum de re vehiculari II. 17. p. 217. seq. et Wesselingium ad Herod. VII. 41. Carpento autem uti Xerxen, non curru, consentaneum erat, ut qui non in pompa prodiret, sed fatigatus non intermissis itineribus requie indigeret. Ab omni autem dubitatione tutam hanc interpretationem praestat Herodotus, qui de ipso Xerxe eiusque expeditione explicans, VII. 41. ita scribit ut paene ipsa verba Aeschyli confirmet. Nam quum dixisset Xerxen curru equis Nisaeis iuncto Sardes reliquisse, sic pergit,
ἐξήλασε μὲν οὕτω ἐκ Σαρδίων Ξέρξης, μετεκβαίνεσκε δέ, όκως μιν λόγος αἱρέοι, ἐκ τοῦ ἅρματος ἐς ἁρμάμαξαν. αὐτοῦ δὲ ὄπισθε αἰχμοφόροι Περσέων οἱ ἄριστοι τε καὶ γενναιότατοι, χίλιοι, κατὰ νόμον τὰς λόγχας ἔχοντες
.

Commentary (W. S. Teuffel; revised by N. Wecklein, 1886; German; OCR draft) (Persians, explanatory commentary pp. 43–97. Single-witness OCR; source readings and all reference placements require scan review.) focus

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1
2
τυρίας, φοινίσσης. ἐκ ναὸς 305. ἔρροντας 732. στυφ. 79. 303. – θείνοντας (in- transitiv), vgl. 303 und 310. Φαρνοῦχος 313. ᾿Αριόμαρδος 38. Λίλαιος 308. Θάρ. 51. 323. - Μασίστρας 30. - ᾿Αρτεμβ. 29. 302. – Ὑσταίχμας wohl nach Analogie von Υστάσπης selbstge- bildet. ἐπανερόμαν: der Aor. drückt Ungeduld aus (gleichsam ,,lange schon ist es her").