W. S. Teuffel Persians 973-987.comm-973-987

ed. N. Wecklein

Persians. W. S. Teuffel. ed. N. Wecklein. . .

Current edition Experimental

Commentary (W. S. Teuffel; revised by N. Wecklein, 1886; German; OCR draft) (German) (Persians, explanatory commentary pp. 43–97. Single-witness OCR; source readings and all reference placements require scan review.)

Provisional text from uncorrected OCR; expect errors.

Editions (5)
Πέρσαι (OCR draft) Experimental (Πέρσαι. Guilielmus Dindorfius, 1882.) — 941 focus
Πέρσαι (OCR draft) Experimental (Πέρσαι. Gottfried Hermann, 1852.) — 941 focus
ἵετ' αἰανὴν πάνδυρτον
δύςθροον αὐδάν. δαίμων γὰρ ὅδ᾽ αὖ
μετάτροπος ἐπ' ἐμοί.
920
Ἰάνων γὰρ ἀπηύρα,
925
Ἰάνων ναύφρακτος Ἄρης ἑτεραλκὴς
νυχίαν πλάκα κερσάμενος
δυσδαίμονά τ᾽ ἀκτάν.
ὀλοοὺς ἀπέλειπον
Τυρίας ἐκ ναὸς ἔρροντας ἐπ᾽ ἀκταῖς
Σαλαμινιάσι στυφέλου
θείνοντας ἐπ᾽ ἀκτᾶς.
ἰώ, ἰώ μοι, τὰς ὠγυγίους κατιδόντες
στυγνὰς Ἀθάνας πάντες ἑνὶ πιτύλῳ,
ἐ ἔ,
τλάμονες ἀσπαίρουσι χέρσῳ.
950
ΠΕΡΣΑΙ (OCR draft) Experimental (ΠΕΡΣΑΙ. Paul Mazon, 1920-1925.) — 941 focus
Πέρσαι (OCR draft) Experimental (Πέρσαι. N. Wecklein, 1885.) — 941 focus
ἵετ᾽ αἰανῆ πάνδυρτον
δύσθροον αὐδάν. δαίμων γὰρ ὅδ᾽ αὖ
μετάτροπος ἐπ᾽ ἐμοί.
945
Ἰάνων γὰρ ἀπηύρα,
Ἰάνων ναύφρακτος
Ἄρης ἑτεραλκὴς
νυχίαν πλάκα κερσάμενος
955
δυσδαίμονά τ᾽ ἀκτάν.
ὀλοοὺς ἀπέλειπον
965
Τυρίας ἐκ ναὸς
ἔρροντας ἐπ᾽ ἀκταῖς
Σαλαμινιάσιν στυφέλου
θείνοντας ἐπ᾽ ἀκτᾶς.
ἰώ ἰώ μοι,
τὰς ὠγυγίους κατιδόντες
στυγνὰς Ἀθάνας πάντες ἑνὶ πιτύλῳ,
980
ὤ ὤ ὤ, τλάμονες ἀσπαίρουσι χέρσῳ.
Aeschyli Persae (OCR draft) Experimental (Aeschyli Persae. Ulrich von Wilamowitz-Moellendorff, 1914.) — 941 focus
Translations (7)
The Persians. (OCR draft) Experimental (The Persians.. Theodore Alois Buckley, 1849.) — 941 focus
Pour ye forth a grievous all-lamentable, sad-re-sounding voice; for this daemon hath made a turn back upon me.
For our ship-fenced Mars, yielding the victory to others, hath reaped mischief from the Ionians, after laying waste the darkling surface of the main and the ill-fated shore.
I left them fallen in death out of a Tyrian ship on the shores of Salamis, striking on the rugged headland.
Alas for me! after having beheld ancient Athens the hateful, all in one shock of fight, ah! ah! ah! wretched, lie gasping on the ground.
LES PERSES (OCR draft) Experimental (LES PERSES. Paul Mazon, 1920-1925.) — 941 focus
race et de ma patrie !
gémissants, lugubres : le Destin désormais s'est tourné contre moi !
Las ! hélas ! crie et achève d'apprendre 4 . Où
donc est ce qui reste de la multitude des tiens ? Où sont tes lieutenants, Pharandakès, Sousas, Pélagôn, Dotamas et Agda-
batas, Psammis, Sousiskanès, qui naguère quittait Ecbatane 5 ?
où est ton Pharnoukos ? et le preux Ariomardos ? Où donc sire Seuakès ? Lilaios aux
nobles aïeux, Memphis, Tharybis ? Et Masistras, Artembarès, Hystaichmas ? Réponds à mes demandes.
The Persians (OCR draft) Experimental (The Persians. Robert Potter, 1779.) — 941 focus
Then bid them flow, bid the wild meaſures flow,
Hollow, unmuſical, the notes of grief;
They ſuit my fortune, and dejected ſtate.
Again the voice of wild deſpair
With ſhrilling ſhrieks ſhall pierce the air;
For high the God of War his flaming creſt
1155
Raiſ'd, with the fleet of Greece ſurrounded,
The haughty arms of Greece with conqueſt bleſt,
And Perſia's wither'd force confounded,
Daſh'd on the dreary beach her heroes ſlain,
Or whelm'd them in the darken'd main.
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Daſh'd from the Tyrian veſſel on the rocks
1170
Of Salamis they ſunk, and ſmear'd with gore
The heroes on the dreary ſtrand are ſtretch'd.
Wretch that I am!
Theſe on th' abhorred town
Ogygian Athens d , roll'd their glowing eyes
Indignant;
THE PERSIANS.
Indignant;
1185
but at once in the fierce ſhock
Of battle fell, daſh'd breathleſs on the ground.
Eschilo, I Persiani: traduzione italiana di Ettore Romagnoli (OCR draft) Experimental (Eschilo, I Persiani: traduzione italiana di Ettore Romagnoli. Ettore Romagnoli, 1922.) — 941 focus
Sí, levate lamento funesto
1075
con clamore di lutto: ché il Dèmone
contro noi volge l'impeto infesto.
Da spalti di navi, sterminio,
il Marte di Ionia,
ne fece, che, agli Elleni fido.
la pianura del mar fra le tenebre
1085
radeva e l'infausto lido.
Quando io li lasciai, giú da un tirio
navile piombavano.
1095
Erravano verso le spiagge
Salamine dispersi: i cadaveri
sbatteano alle rupi selvagge.
Ahimè, ahi!, procombettero
tutti ad un colpo. A la vetusta Atene
odïosa, le palpebre
fisse, ahi miseri! guizzan su le arene.
Aeschylus, Persae: versio Latina Ioannis Sanravii (OCR draft) Experimental (Aeschylus, Persae: versio Latina Ioannis Sanravii. Ioannes Sanravius, 1555.) — 941 focus
Emittite grauelugubrē tumultutriaq uocem.
Nam fortunarursus mutabilis est in me.
860
Ionum enim
Eripuit, Ionũ claße instructus, Mars alijs das auxiliŭ,
865
Noctură gleba profligans, infæliceq; dolorě.
Miferos reliqui, Tyria
Ex naui pereuntes in littoribus Satamincis.
Heu beu antiquas uidentes
Molestas Athenas, omnes uno tumultu
880
Heuheu, miferi eunt in terram.
English (E. D. A. Morshead, 1908) (OCR draft) Experimental (Aeschylus, Persians — Morshead translation. Wikisource transcription; speech corresp and card milestones aligned to Smyth perseus-grc2.) — 941 focus
Ay, launch the woeful sorrow's cry,
The harsh, discordant melody,
For lo, the power, we held for sure,
Hath turned to my discomfiture!
950
Alas, the god of war, who sways
The scales of fight in diverse ways,
Gives glory to Ionia!
Ionian ships, in fenced array,
960
Have reaped their harvest in the bay,
A darkling harvest-field of Fate,
A sea, a shore, of doom and hate!
I left them, mangled castaways,
Flung from their Tyrian deck, and tossed
975
On Salaminian water-ways,
From surging tides to rocky coast!
Alas, alas, they came, their eyes surveyed
Ancestral Athens on that fatal day.
Then with a rending struggle were they laid
Upon the land, and gasped their life away!
German (J. J. C. Donner, 1854; OCR review) (OCR draft) Experimental (Aeschylos. Deutsch in den Versmaßen der Urschrift. Stuttgart: Hoffmann, 1854. Native Donner line citations, Smyth card correspondence, selected textual readings and metrical facsimiles. Remaining OCR differences and unattributed reading notes are documented in the linked review inventory.) — 941 focus
Hebt an wehklagenden Jammers
890
Dumpfhallenden Laut: denn es stürmte der Zorn
Des Geschickes auf mich!
Der Hellene vertilgt' euch,
Der hellenische Ares,
Anstürmend in Schiffen;
Er mähte die nächtliche Flur,
900
Das Gestade des Todes.
Todt ließ ich sie dort, sah
Aus dem tyrischen Schiffe
910
Sie stürzen am Strande
Von Salamis, sah sie zerschellt
An der zackigen Klippe.
Nach dem grauen Athen, dem verhaßten,
Den Blick gewendet, niedergeschmettert zumal,
Die Armen, ach!
Liegen sie zuckend am Ufer alle.
925

Notes on the current edition

Persians

1. Single-witness OCR: uncollated. Source layout and readings require scan review; automatic flags are not exhaustive.
2. Reference placement provisional: provisional local reference window from running Greek. Verify the printed source numbering and note scope against the scan.

Commentary

Critical apparatus to The Persians (OCR draft) (Latin and Greek critical apparatus to Gottfried Hermann's 1852 edition of The Persians.) focus

973. mvp-aeschylus-tlg0085-tlg002-hermann1852-appcrit-lat1-953

τοίπερ ἀκρότατοι: Libri
οίπερ
. Scribendum esse
τοίπερ
etiam Passovius vidit.
ἀγρόται
libri, praeter ed. Rob. quae
ακρόται
exhibet. In Lips. adscriptum est
γρ. ἀκρόται
. Plenius in margine M.
γρ. καὶ ἀκρόται. ἐξ οὗ ἔσται ἀπὸ τοῦ ἄκρου. εἰ δὲ ἀγρόται, ἀπὸ τοῦ ἄγειν καὶ ἀγείρειν
, el inter versus
οἱ ἄρχοντες. εἰ δὲ ἀκρόται, οἱ ἄκροι
. Toupius ad Suidam t. IV. p. 353. scribendum coniecit
ἀγρέται
, conferens quod Hesychius habet,
ἀγρέταν, ἡγέμονα, θεόν
. Mihi in illo
ἀκρόται
latere visum est
ἀκρῶται
. V. ad v. 979.
973

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νώνυμοι: Hunc versum, qui in libris cum praecedentibus Xerxis est, choro tribuendum esse antistropha monstrat.
οι νώνυμνοι
Μ.
Ο νώνυμοι
G. Cantabr. 1. Colb. 1. 2. Par. G. Turn.
οἳ νώνυμοι
Vit. Ven. A.
οινώνυμοι
Lips. Ald.
ἀνώνυμοι
Rob.
οι οι νώνυμοι
Ven. B. ed. Vict.
974

975-978. mvp-aeschylus-tlg0085-tlg002-hermann1852-appcrit-lat1-955

ἰὴ ἰή, ἰω ἰώ. ἰω ἰώ, δαίμονες δ᾽ ἔθεντ᾽ ἄελπτον κακόν, πάγκακον οἷον δέδρακεν ἄτα.: Xerxi dedi hunc versum, quem libri cum sequentibus choro tribuunt.
δὴ τὴ ἰὼ ἐω ] ἰὼ ἐὼ δαίμονες
Μ.
δὴ τὴ ἰὼ τὰ ἰὼ δαίμονες
Vit. Lips.
ἰὴ τὴς τὴ τὴ. ἰὼ ἰ. ἰω ἰω. ὦ δαίμονες
G.
ἰὴ τὴ ἰὼ ἰὼ ὦ δαίμονες
Rob.
i
quinquies,
Ζω
octies Colb. 1. Ox. et omisso
δαίμονες
Ald.
ή
sexies et deinde
ω ἰὼ δυσδαίμονες
sic Ven. A.
ὴ τὴ ἰὼ ἰὼ ἰὼ ἰὼ δυςδαίμονες
Turn.
δαίμονες
enotatum ex Ask. A. Mosc.
ὦ δαίμονες
ex Cantabr. 1. Par. K. L. Colb. 2. Ven. B. Tum omnes libri,
δ'
non addito,
ἔθετ᾽ ἄελπτον κακὸν διαπρέπον οἷον δέδορκεν ἄτα
, nisi quod
έλθετ'
habent Vit. Mosc. Colb. 1.
κακὸν
bis et
διαπρεπή
Vit.
οἵαν
Colb. 1.
ἄτα
ad alterum
a
supra scripto
η
Lips.
ἄταν
Colb. 1. Οx. Ven. A. Ald. Rob. Corrupta haec esse facile ex antistropha, quae optimos habet et certissimos numeros, intelligitur. Ac primum quidem
eť
mutandum esse in
ἔθεσθ'
olim putavi, nunc
δ'
inserto scripsi
ἔθεντο
. Deinde
διαπρέπον
neque synizesi fieri posse videtur trisyllabum, neque probabile est Dindorfii
ζαπρέπον
, sed
διαπρέπον
, vocabulum satis tenne, interpretatio videtur alius vocabuli, quod
πρόκακον
vel
πάγκακον
fuisse puto. Denique
oἷον δέδορκεν ἄτα
scholiastae ita explicant,
οἷον κακόν ἡ Ἄτη ἐφορᾷ
et
εθεάσατο ἡ βλαβή
. Hoc vero Graeca verba ne posse quidem significare mihi videntur. Puto restituisse quod Aeschylus scripsit,
ἰὼ ἐώ, δαίμονες δ' ἔθεντ᾽ ἄελπτον κακόν, πάγκακον οἷον δέδρακεν ἄτα
.

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δι' αἰῶνος τύχαι: Hic versus in M. Vit. scriptus est in margine et in M. quidem in litura praeter ultimas quattuor syllabas, sed, ut videtur, a prima manu: adscriptum autem supra est
γρ. δαίμονος τύχαι
. In illo
δαίμονος
latere videtur
διαίμονες
, cruentae, quam vocem Marklandus Euripidi Iph. Aul. v.1514. restituit. Eadem sententia est Dindorfii. Sed puto tamen
δι' αἰῶνος
verum esse, neque in stropha v. 973.
ἀγρέται
scribendum esse, sed
ἀκρῶται
.
οἶαι δὴ δι' αἰῶνος τύχαι
Ven. B. Rob. quod grammatici inventum est senarium exhibere volentis.
τύχα
G.
979

980. mvp-aeschylus-tlg0085-tlg002-hermann1852-appcrit-lat1-957

εὔδηλα γάρ: Personae notam omittunt Ald. Turn. In Vit. Xerxi haec usque ad
εὐτυχῶς
tribuuntur, versus autem 984. choro.
εύδηλον
, omnisso
γάρ
, Rob.
980

981. mvp-aeschylus-tlg0085-tlg002-hermann1852-appcrit-lat1-958

νέαι νέαι δύαι δύαι: Hunc versum Xerxi dedi.
νέα νέα δύαι δύαι
Ald.
981

982. mvp-aeschylus-tlg0085-tlg002-hermann1852-appcrit-lat1-959

Ἰαόνων ναυβατᾶν:
Ιαόνων
Lips. Cantabr. 1. Colb. 1. Turn.
ἰαώνων
Ven. A. Colb. 2.
ἰώνων
Rob. Ald.
λάνων
Μ. G. Vit. Ven. B. Par. L.
ναυ-βάτων
sic M. Turn.
ναυατῶν
Ven. A. Cantabr. 1. Colb. 1.
ναβατῶν
Ald.
ναυάτων
Vit.
ναυάτοις
, supra scripto
wr
, Lips.
ναυατᾶν
G. (sic G.) Par. A. Inde Brunckius
ναυβατᾶν
restituit, atque ita iam Rob. In Par. C. totus versus ita scriptus est,
ἰάνωναν βάτων
, supra scripto ad ultimam syllabam
or
.
982

984. mvp-aeschylus-tlg0085-tlg002-hermann1852-appcrit-lat1-960

γένος τὸ Περσῶν:
γένος τὸ περσῶν
Μ. Ven. A.
γένος τὸ περσῶν
G. Vit. Lips. Ald. Turn.
γένος περσῶν
Rob.
τὸ γένος περσῶν
Ven. Β.
τὸ γένος τὸ περσῶν
Colb. 2.
τὸ γένος τῶν περσῶν
Cantabr. 1.
984

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πῶς δ᾽ οὐ:
πῶς δ᾽ οὐ
sine interpunctione M. Vit. Ald.
πῶς δ᾽ οὔ
. G. Lips. et commate addito Turn.
πῶς θ᾽ οὐ;
Rob.
985

985. mvp-aeschylus-tlg0085-tlg002-hermann1852-appcrit-lat1-962

στρατὸν γὰρ: Libri
στρατὸν μὲν
, nisi quod Rob. cum scholiasta metrico
uèv
omittit. Mutavi
μὲν
in
γάρ
.
985

985. mvp-aeschylus-tlg0085-tlg002-hermann1852-appcrit-lat1-963

τοσοῦτον:
τί δ᾽ οὐ
Ven. Β. In
τοσοῦτον
littera
σ
a sec. manu reficta in M.
985

987. mvp-aeschylus-tlg0085-tlg002-hermann1852-appcrit-lat1-964

τί δ᾽ οὐκ; ὄλωλεν μεγάλως τὰ Περσᾶν: Chori nomen omittunt Ald. Turn. Comma post
ri d'
in G. Turn. positum est, interrogandi signum hic et in fine versus a Brunckio. Nulla interpunctio in M. Vit. Lips. Ald. Rob. Scribendum esse
τί d'orz;
et in fine punctum ponendum Wellauerus vidit.
όλωλεν
Μ.
όλωλε
Vit. Lips. Cantabr. 1. Ald. Rob. Turn.
ὤλωλε
G.
μεγάλατε περσῶν
M. Vit.
μέγα τὰ περσῶν
Ven. A. Ald.
μεγάλα τὰ περσῶν
ceteri. Scribendum
μεγάλως τὰ Περσῶν
. Εt
μεγάλως
quidem Butlerus Cantabr. 1. et G. tribuit. Sed G.
μεγάλα
habet.
987

Commentary (W. S. Teuffel; revised by N. Wecklein, 1886; German; OCR draft) (Persians, explanatory commentary pp. 43–97. Single-witness OCR; source readings and all reference placements require scan review.) focus

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2
ὠγυγ. 37. – – στυγνάς 286. Die Klage des Xerxes ver- läuft metrisch frei; häufig alloio- metrische Reihen zwischen den Anapästen. Anders beim Chor. ᾿Αντιστρ. β΄. Στρ. γ΄. πίτυλος, das plätschernde Ein- schlagen des Ruders, hier der Schlag, durch welchen sie ins Wasser stürzen. Vgl. ἐν μιᾷ πληγῇ 251. - ἀσπαίρω (zapple) homerisch; später σπαίρω. G. Curtius, griech. Et.2 S. 651. – Περσᾶν abhängig von μύρια (wie von μυριάδας). αὐτοῦ τα ἔλιπες. πάντα πιστόν, Kr. 46, 4. Α. 4. - Hesych. : ἐπέμ- πετό τις ὑπὸ βασιλέως ἐπίσκοπος, ὃς ἐφεωρᾶτο τὰ πράγματα, ὃν τοῦ βασιλέως ὀφθαλμὸν ἐκάλουν. Vgl. Xen. Kyrup. VIII 2, 10: τοὺς βασι- λέως καλουμένους ὀφθαλμοὺς καὶ τὰ βασιλέως ώτα. - μύρια μύρια Zehntausende und (aber) Zehn- tausende; der Acc. abhängig von dem Verbalbegriff des Substantivs. Vgl. 523 u. Choeph. 23: χοὰς προ- πομπός. Herod. VII 60: ἐξηρίθ- μησαν δὲ τόνδε τὸν τρόπον. συνα- γαγόντες ἐς ἕνα χῶρον μυριάδα ἀνθρώπων etc., vgl. 81: οἱ διατά- ξαντες καὶ ἐξαριθμήσαντες οὗτοι ἔσαν. ἄλπνιστος (süfs, lieblich) auch Pind. Isthm. 5, 14. Der Name ist ausgefallen. ( παῖδα) τοῦ Σησάμα ( παιδὸς) τοῦ Μεγαβάτα, wenn nicht der ursprüngliche Text eine andere Beziehung gestattete. δάων, Schol. διακοπτικῶν πολε- μίων κακῶν.