W. S. Teuffel Persians 1002-1007.comm-1002-1007

ed. N. Wecklein

Persians. W. S. Teuffel. ed. N. Wecklein. . .

Current edition Experimental

Commentary (W. S. Teuffel; revised by N. Wecklein, 1886; German; OCR draft) (German) (Persians, explanatory commentary pp. 43–97. Single-witness OCR; source readings and all reference placements require scan review.)

Provisional text from uncorrected OCR; expect errors.

Editions (5)
Πέρσαι (OCR draft) Experimental (Πέρσαι. Guilielmus Dindorfius, 1882.) — 962 focus
Πέρσαι (OCR draft) Experimental (Πέρσαι. Gottfried Hermann, 1852.) — 962 focus
ὀλοοὺς ἀπέλειπον
Τυρίας ἐκ ναὸς ἔρροντας ἐπ᾽ ἀκταῖς
Σαλαμινιάσι στυφέλου
θείνοντας ἐπ᾽ ἀκτᾶς.
ἰώ, ἰώ μοι, τὰς ὠγυγίους κατιδόντες
στυγνὰς Ἀθάνας πάντες ἑνὶ πιτύλῳ,
ἐ ἔ,
τλάμονες ἀσπαίρουσι χέρσῳ.
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ἵυγγά μοι δῆτ᾽ ἀγαθῶν ἑτάρων ὑπομιμνῄσκεις,
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ἄλαστ' ἄλαστα στυγνὰ πρόκακα λέγων,
βεβᾶσι γὰρ τοίπερ ἀκρότατοι στρατοῦ.
ΠΕΡΣΑΙ (OCR draft) Experimental (ΠΕΡΣΑΙ. Paul Mazon, 1920-1925.) — 962 focus
Πέρσαι (OCR draft) Experimental (Πέρσαι. N. Wecklein, 1885.) — 962 focus
ὀλοοὺς ἀπέλειπον
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Τυρίας ἐκ ναὸς
ἔρροντας ἐπ᾽ ἀκταῖς
Σαλαμινιάσιν στυφέλου
θείνοντας ἐπ᾽ ἀκτᾶς.
ἰώ ἰώ μοι,
τὰς ὠγυγίους κατιδόντες
στυγνὰς Ἀθάνας πάντες ἑνὶ πιτύλῳ,
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ὤ ὤ ὤ, τλάμονες ἀσπαίρουσι χέρσῳ.
ἴυγγά μοι δήτ'
ἀγαθῶν ἑτάρων ὑπομιμνήσκεις,
ἄλαστ᾽ ἄλαστα στυγνὰ πρόκακα λέγων.
βοᾷ βοᾷ μελέων ἔντοσθεν ἦτορ.
βεβᾶσι γὰρ οἵπερ ἀγρόται στρατοῦ.
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Aeschyli Persae (OCR draft) Experimental (Aeschyli Persae. Ulrich von Wilamowitz-Moellendorff, 1914.) — 962 focus
Translations (7)
The Persians. (OCR draft) Experimental (The Persians.. Theodore Alois Buckley, 1849.) — 962 focus
I left them fallen in death out of a Tyrian ship on the shores of Salamis, striking on the rugged headland.
Alas for me! after having beheld ancient Athens the hateful, all in one shock of fight, ah! ah! ah! wretched, lie gasping on the ground.
Thou dost in sooth call to my mind a lament for my excellent friends, while thou speakest of baleful, hateful, exceeding hateful horrors. My heart within me moans aloud, moans aloud for them unhappy.
For they that were commanders of the host are gone.
LES PERSES (OCR draft) Experimental (LES PERSES. Paul Mazon, 1920-1925.) — 962 focus
Las ! hélas ! crie et achève d'apprendre 1 . Où
donc est ce qui reste de la multitude des tiens ? Où sont tes lieutenants, Pharandakès, Sousas, Pélagôn, Dotamas et Agda-
batas, Psammis, Sousiskanès, qui naguère quittait Ecbatane 2 ?
où est ton Pharnoukos ? et le preux Ariomardos ? Où donc sire Seuakès ? Lilaios aux
nobles aïeux, Memphis, Tharybis ? Et Masistras, Artembarès, Hystaichmas ? Réponds à mes demandes.
fidèle, Alpistos 5 , ... fils de Batanôkos, fils de Sésamas ? Et Parthos, et le grand Oïbarès ? Tu les as
donc laissés, laissés ? Ah ! ah ! misères ! pour les Perses altiers douleurs plus que douloureuses !
qui guidait dix mille cavaliers Mardes 6 , Xanthis ; et le valeureux Ankharès ; et Diaïxis, et Arsamès, à la tête de leurs cavaliers ! Et Dadakès, et Lythimnès, et Tolmos
l'insatiable lanceur de javelines, je m'étonne, je m'étonne de ne pas les voir derrière ton char à baldaquin 7 !
The Persians (OCR draft) Experimental (The Persians. Robert Potter, 1779.) — 962 focus
Daſh'd from the Tyrian veſſel on the rocks
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Of Salamis they ſunk, and ſmear'd with gore
The heroes on the dreary ſtrand are ſtretch'd.
Wretch that I am!
Theſe on th' abhorred town
Ogygian Athens d , roll'd their glowing eyes
Indignant;
THE PERSIANS.
Indignant;
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but at once in the fierce ſhock
Of battle fell, daſh'd breathleſs on the ground.
To my griev'd memory thy mournful voice,
Tuned to the ſaddeſt notes of woe, recals
My brave friends loſt; and my rent heart returns
In dreadful ſymphony the ſorrowing ſtrain.
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O woe, woe, woe! Unutterable woe
The Dæmons of Revenge have ſpread;
And Ate from her drear abode below
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Riſes to view the horrid deed.
Eschilo, I Persiani: traduzione italiana di Ettore Romagnoli (OCR draft) Experimental (Eschilo, I Persiani: traduzione italiana di Ettore Romagnoli. Ettore Romagnoli, 1922.) — 962 focus
Quando io li lasciai, giú da un tirio
navile piombavano.
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Erravano verso le spiagge
Salamine dispersi: i cadaveri
sbatteano alle rupi selvagge.
Ahimè, ahi!, procombettero
tutti ad un colpo. A la vetusta Atene
odïosa, le palpebre
fisse, ahi miseri! guizzan su le arene.
Ahimè! Ché tu dei validi
compagni in me rinnovi ora il desio.
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Mali estremi tu parli, infami, orribili.
Grida, grida pei miseri il cuor mio.
Cadder quei che guidavano gli eserciti.
Aeschylus, Persae: versio Latina Ioannis Sanravii (OCR draft) Experimental (Aeschylus, Persae: versio Latina Ioannis Sanravii. Ioannes Sanravius, 1555.) — 962 focus
Miferos reliqui, Tyria
Ex naui pereuntes in littoribus Satamincis.
Heu beu antiquas uidentes
Molestas Athenas, omnes uno tumultu
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Heuheu, miferi eunt in terram.
Voluptate uidelicet bonorū fociorŭ in memoria reducis,
Intollerabilia odiofaq; mala dicēs.
Clamat clamat miferorum intra cor.
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Afcenderunt prefecti exercitus,
Afcenderunt ignobiles.
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English (E. D. A. Morshead, 1908) (OCR draft) Experimental (Aeschylus, Persians — Morshead translation. Wikisource transcription; speech corresp and card milestones aligned to Smyth perseus-grc2.) — 962 focus
I left them, mangled castaways,
Flung from their Tyrian deck, and tossed
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On Salaminian water-ways,
From surging tides to rocky coast!
Alas, alas, they came, their eyes surveyed
Ancestral Athens on that fatal day.
Then with a rending struggle were they laid
Upon the land, and gasped their life away!
Bitter indeed the pang for comrades slain,
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The brave and bold! thou strikest to my soul
Pain, pain beyond forgetting, hateful pain.
My inner spirit sobs and sighs with dole!
Yea, gone are they who mustered once the host!
German (J. J. C. Donner, 1854; OCR review) (OCR draft) Experimental (Aeschylos. Deutsch in den Versmaßen der Urschrift. Stuttgart: Hoffmann, 1854. Native Donner line citations, Smyth card correspondence, selected textual readings and metrical facsimiles. Remaining OCR differences and unattributed reading notes are documented in the linked review inventory.) — 962 focus
Todt ließ ich sie dort, sah
Aus dem tyrischen Schiffe
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Sie stürzen am Strande
Von Salamis, sah sie zerschellt
An der zackigen Klippe.
Nach dem grauen Athen, dem verhaßten,
Den Blick gewendet, niedergeschmettert zumal,
Die Armen, ach!
Liegen sie zuckend am Ufer alle.
925
Sehnsucht nach den tapferen Freunden,
Dein Wort erweckt mir Leid, unermeßliches Leid.
Es stöhnt, es stöhnt
Ueber dem Jammer das Herz im Busen.
Sie sind dahin, ach, des Heeres erster Schmuck!
Sie sind dahin, namenlos!
950
O Graun, o Graun! O Leid, o Leid!

Notes on the current edition

Persians

1. Single-witness OCR: uncollated. Source layout and readings require scan review; automatic flags are not exhaustive.
2. Reference placement provisional: provisional local reference window from running Greek. Verify the printed source numbering and note scope against the scan.

Commentary

Critical apparatus to The Persians (OCR draft) (Latin and Greek critical apparatus to Gottfried Hermann's 1852 edition of The Persians.) focus

1002. mvp-aeschylus-tlg0085-tlg002-hermann1852-appcrit-lat1-979

γάρ ἐστι:
γὰρ ἔστι
Vit.
1002

1003. mvp-aeschylus-tlg0085-tlg002-hermann1852-appcrit-lat1-980

χάρματα: Chori notam omittunt Ald. Turn.
χαρίσματα
Ven. A. Ald.
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1004. mvp-aeschylus-tlg0085-tlg002-hermann1852-appcrit-lat1-981

καὶ σθένος γ᾽ ἐκολούσθη:
xai oféros y
M. G. Vit. Lips. Cantabr. 1. Colb. 1. Par. A. B. C. Ven. A. Ald. (sic Ald.) Rob. Turn.
σ9έvos 9'
inde ab ed. Vict. propagatum erat. Ven. B. particulam omittit.
zolovn
G. Lips. Colb.1. Ven. A. Ox. Ald.
1004

1006. mvp-aeschylus-tlg0085-tlg002-hermann1852-appcrit-lat1-982

ποντίαισιν:
ποντίαισιν
Μ.
ποντίαισι
G. Vit. Lips. Ven. A. Ald. Rob. Turn.
novτías
Cantabr. 1. Rob. In Ven. B. hic versus ita interpolatus est,
φίλων τ᾽ ἐν ἄταις ποντίαις
.
1006

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δραῖνε, δραῖνε πῆμα, πρὸς δόμους δ᾽ ἴθι: Neque synizesis admittenda est, et multo minus, quod G. Dindorfio placuit,
δίαιν, díaure
. Videtur potius recitatum esse divisim
δίαινε, — δίαινε πῆμα, πρὸς δόμους δ᾽ ἴθι
, et in antistropha
ἔρεσσε, -- ἔρεσσε καὶ στένας' ἐμὴν χάριν
.
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ἴθι:
191
Ald.
'91
Rob.
vide
Colb. 1.
to
Lips.
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Commentary (W. S. Teuffel; revised by N. Wecklein, 1886; German; OCR draft) (Persians, explanatory commentary pp. 43–97. Single-witness OCR; source readings and all reference placements require scan review.) focus

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Vgl. Westphal 2 ΙΙ S. 524. βεβᾶσιν, vgl. 916. γὰρ, Grund warum sie nicht mit- gekommen ἀγρέται (Sammler, Führer), vgl. ἱππαγρέται, Hesych. ἀγρέταν· ἡγεμόνα κ. 981. διαist in διαπρέπον, im zweiten δίαινε 1038, wie Sept. 288, Suppl. 799 in καρδίας einsilbig zu lesen (Dindorf schreibt ζαπρέπον, κάρζας). Αn einem unverhofften Unglück habt ihr deutlich gezeigt, wie scharf der Blick der Ate ist.