N. Wecklein Seven Against Thebes 860-871.comm-860-871

Seven Against Thebes. N. Wecklein. . .

Current edition Experimental

Commentary (N. Wecklein, 1902; German; OCR draft) (German) (Seven Against Thebes, explanatory commentary pp. 15–100. Single-witness OCR; source readings and all reference placements require scan review.)

Provisional text from uncorrected OCR; expect errors.

Editions (7)
Ἑπτὰ ἐπὶ Θήβας First1KGreek (Aeschyli Tragoediae. Sidgwick, Arthur, editor. Oxford: Clarendon Press, 1902.) — 822-956 focus
Ἑπτὰ ἐπὶ Θήβας Perseus (Aeschylus, Volume 1. Smyth, Herbert Weir, editor. London; New York: William Heinemann; G.P. Putnam's Sons, 1922.) — 822-956 focus
Ἑπτὰ ἐπὶ θήβας (OCR draft) Experimental (Ἑπτὰ ἐπὶ θήβας. Guilielmus Dindorfius, 1882.) — 875 focus
Ἑπτὰ ἐπὶ θήβας (OCR draft) Experimental (Ἑπτὰ ἐπὶ θήβας. Gottfried Hermann, 1852.) — 875 focus
ΕΠΤΑ ΕΠΙ θΗΒΑΣ (OCR draft) Experimental (ΕΠΤΑ ΕΠΙ θΗΒΑΣ. Paul Mazon, 1920-1925.) — 875 focus
Ἰὼ ἰὼ δύσφρονες,
875
Str.
φίλων ἄπιστοι καὶ κακῶν ἀτρύμονες,
δόμους ἑλόντες πατρῴ-
ους
πατρῴους δόμους ἑλόντες
μέλεοι σὺν ἀλκᾷ αἰχμᾷ.
Μέλεοι δῆθ' οἳ μελέους θανάτους
ηὕροντο εὕροντο δόμων ἐπὶ λύμῃ.
880
Ἑπτὰ ἐπὶ θήβας (OCR draft) Experimental (Ἑπτὰ ἐπὶ θήβας. N. Wecklein, 1885.) — 875 focus
Ἰὼ ἰὼ δύσφρονες,
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φίλων ἄπειστοι καὶ κακῶν ἀτρύμονες,
πατρῴους δόμους ἑλόν-
τες μέλεοι σὺν αἰχμᾷ.
Μέλεοι δῆθ᾽ οἳ μελέους θανάτους
ηὕροντο δόμων ἐπὶ λύμῃ.
865
Aeschyli Septem contra Thebas (OCR draft) Experimental (Aeschyli Septem contra Thebas. Ulrich von Wilamowitz-Moellendorff, 1914.) — 875 focus
Translations (8)
Seven Against Thebes Perseus (Aeschylus, Volume 1. Smyth, Herbert Weir, translator. London; New York: William Heinemann; G.P. Putnam's Sons, 1922. (Modernized by Perseus.)) — 822-955 focus
The Seven against Thebes. (OCR draft) Experimental (The Seven against Thebes.. Theodore Alois Buckley, 1849.) — 875 focus
Alas! alas! ye frantic youths, distrustful of friends, and unsubdued by troubles, have wretched seized on your paternal dwelling with the spear.
LES SEPT CONTRE THÈBES (OCR draft) Experimental (LES SEPT CONTRE THÈBES. Paul Mazon, 1920-1925.) — 875 focus
pauvres fous, incrédules à vos amis, insatiables de misères, vous avez pris possession de la demeure paternelle, malheureux ! les armes à la main.
The Seven Chiefs against Thebes (OCR draft) Experimental (The Seven Chiefs against Thebes. Robert Potter, 1779.) — 875 focus
Ah, what frantic rage possest
Each unyielding, ruthless breast,
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Wisdom scorn'd, and friends defy'd,
By threat'ning ills unterrify'd,
'Gainst their father's house to bear
Wretched they, the fatal spear!
Eschilo, I Sette a Tebe: traduzione italiana di Ettore Romagnoli (OCR draft) Experimental (Eschilo, I Sette a Tebe: traduzione italiana di Ettore Romagnoli. Ettore Romagnoli, 1922.) — 875 focus
Ahimè, ahi! Dissennati e sordi ai mòniti,
né pei guai rinsaviti,
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divider con le spade
vollero i beni aviti.
Miseri! Ed or li colse morte misera,
e la casa nel danno ultimo cade.
Aeschylus, Septem ad Thebas: versio Latina Ioannis Sanravii (OCR draft) Experimental (Aeschylus, Septem ad Thebas: versio Latina Ioannis Sanravii. Ioannes Sanravius, 1555.) — 875 focus
Heuheu ignaui, amicis inſideles,
Et malis indomiti, paternas domos
Occupantes miſeri cum ſubſidio.
Miseri uidelicet, qui infœlicem mortem
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Inuenerunt cum pernicie domorum.
English (E. D. A. Morshead, 1908) (OCR draft) Experimental (Aeschylus, Seven against Thebes — Morshead translation. Wikisource transcription; speech corresp and card milestones aligned to Smyth perseus-grc2.) — 875 focus
( To the dead.)
Children of bitterness, and sternly brave—
One, proud of heart against persuasion's voice,
One, against exile proof! ye win your choice—
Each in your fatherland, a separate grave!
Alack, on house and heritage
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They brought a baneful doom, and death for wage!
German (J. J. C. Donner, 1854; OCR review) (OCR draft) Experimental (Aeschylos. Deutsch in den Versmaßen der Urschrift. Stuttgart: Hoffmann, 1854. Native Donner line citations, Smyth card correspondence, selected textual readings and metrical facsimiles. Remaining OCR differences and unattributed reading notes are documented in the linked review inventory.) — 875 focus
O Graun! Ihr Unsinnigen,
Der Freunde Rath unfolgsam, ungeschreckt vom Leid,
Des Vaters Haus nahmt ihr Unseligen ein im Speerkampf!
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Notes on the current edition

Seven Against Thebes

1. Single-witness OCR: uncollated. Source layout and readings require scan review; automatic flags are not exhaustive.
2. Reference placement provisional: provisional local reference window from running Greek. Verify the printed source numbering and note scope against the scan.

Commentary

Critical apparatus to Seven Against Thebes (OCR draft) (Latin and Greek critical apparatus to Gottfried Hermann's 1852 edition of Seven Against Thebes.) focus

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τί δὴ Libri
δὴ
, nisi quod
δὴ
Rob. habet, Turn. autem hanc vocem omittit. Scribendum esse
τί δὴ
vidit etiam Lachmannus. διήλλαχθε
διήλαχθε
Par. C.
διηλλάχθαι
Arund.
διήλλακτε
Vit.
διήλαχθες
Lips.
860

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σὺν
σὺν
habent M. G. Vit. Lips. Ald. Turn. Omittunt Cantabr. 2. Par. A. K. L. N. Rob. σιδάρῳ
σιδάρη
M. Vit. Ald. Rob. Turn.
σιδήρῳ
vel
σιδήρω
G. Lips. Cantabr. 2. Par. C. Post hunc versum legebantur hi duo,
οὐκ ἔτ᾽ ἐπὶ φιλίᾳ, ἀλλ' ἐπὶ φόνῳ διεκρίθητε
, in quibus
οὐκέτ'
habent Vit. Lips. et, ut videtur, a pr. manu M.
οὐκέτι
G.
οὐκ
, omisso
ἔτ'
, Par. A. Eiiciendam esse hanc adnotationem interpretis monui in libro III. de metris p. 422. idemque vidisse Stanleium Butlerus narrat. Omittit ista verba codex Arund. quod ignorabam, quum librum illum scriberem. Ex codice Farnesiano Elmsleius in Museo critico II. p. 458. hanc adnotationem Triclinii edidit,
περισσὸν ἦν ἐνταῦθα τὸ οὐκέτ' ἐπὶ φιλίᾳ ἀλλ' ἐπὶ φόνῳ διεκρίθητε, καὶ ἄμετρον καὶ κοινόλεκτον. διὸ καὶ ἐξεβλήθη παρ' ἐμοῦ
.
861

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Οἰδιπόδα Hemichorii nota carent libri. Post
οἰδιπόδα
, cui in Vit.
ος
supra adscriptum est, in Rob. additur
τάλαινα
. In Vit. adscripta interpretatio
ἀληθῶς, ἢ τὰ κατεύγματα τοῦ Οἰδίποδος
, in G.
τὰς ἀράς
. Iungendum
Οἰδιπόδα Ἐρινύς
.
862

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ἀληθῆ Accusativum pluralem
ἀληθῆ
Schützius male in
ἀληθὴς
mutavit. Ἐρινὺς Μ.
Ἐριννὺς
vulgo. ἐπέκρανεν M. Par. L. Ald. Rob.
ἐπέρανεν
, eraso
κ
, G.
ἀπέκρανε
Lips. Ceteri
ἐπέκρανε
.
863

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NA Hemichorii notam omittit Arund. et, ut videtur, M.
864

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δῆθ᾽
δῆτα
M. G. Vit. Lips. Arund. Cantabr. 2. regius Spanhemii.
δῆτα δ'
Rob. Hemichorii notam ante
ὁμοσπλάγχνων
habent Lips. Par. L. N. Erasa in M. ὁμοσπλάγχνων Inter
ὁμ
et
οσπλάγχνων
litura in M. γρ.
ὠμοσπλάγχνων
Par. B.
865

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τε omittunt G. Par. E.
866

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NA Versum excidisse viderunt etiam Lachmannus et Elmsleius Mus. crit. II. p. 458.
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αἰαῖ δ᾽ ἀντιφόνων θανάτων ἀραί Hemichorii notam omittunt M. G. Vit. Lips.
αἰ αἰ
M. Lips. Vulgo
αἰαῖ
. Altero loco
αἰ
.
αἴδ'
G.
θανάτῳ
Ald.
θανόντων
Turn. metro quidem, sed non syllabis antistrophico versui respondentibus. V. ad v. 880.

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διανταίαν λέγεις πεπλαγμένους καὶ δόμοισιν ἐννέπειν Vulgo haec ita scripta leguntur,
ΗΜ. διανταίαν λέγεις πλαγάν. ΗΜ. δόμοισι καὶ σώμασι πεπλαγμένους ἐννέπω
. Lineolam, mutatae personae notam, M. ante
διανταίαν
et ante
πεπλαγμένους
habet, ante
δόμοισι
erasa est.
διαντέαν
G.
δι᾽ ἀνταίων
Ald.
πληγὴν
Lips.
πλαγὴν
Cantabr. 2.
δώμασι
pro
δόμοισι
G. Par. F. K. L.
σώμασιν
Μ.
πεπληγμένους
Vit. Lips. Cantabr. 2. Αld.
πεπληγμένην
Cantabr. 1.
πεπληγμένῃ
Ask. Α.
ἐννεπῶ
Lips. Agnoscunt vulgatam lectionem scholiastae. Sed foede haec corrupta esse et metrum ostendit, et non modo exilis, sed etiam barbare expressa sententia. Ac
πλαγάν
quidem ab interprete adiectum esse intellexit Elmsleius, qui ita haec conformavit,
διανταίαν λέγεις δόμοισι καὶ σώμασιν πεπλαγμένους
, omisso
ἐννέπω
. Mihi
σώμασι
nihil aliud esse videtur quam vitiose scriptum
δώμασι
, quod pro
δόμοισι
aliquot libri habent, poetam autem scripsisse puto
διανταίαν λέγεις πεπλαγμένους καὶ δόμοισιν ἐννέπειν
. Etiam domum mortifero vulnere percussam esse dicit.

Commentary (N. Wecklein, 1902; German; OCR draft) (Seven Against Thebes, explanatory commentary pp. 15–100. Single-witness OCR; source readings and all reference placements require scan review.) focus

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2
ein θρῆνος. „Die gegen- seitige Vernichtung der Brüder hat auch das Haus vernichtet und Erinys hat die Flüche des Vaters erfüllt". In den anapästi- schen Systemen 864f. und 870 f. be- stätigt der Κορυφαῖος, was der Gesamtchor vorher gesungen hat.

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φίλων wie κακῶν ist Neu- trum:,,durch Liebes nicht zu über- reden ( ἄπειστοι Hartung für ἄπι- στοι) und durch Schlimmes nicht mürbe zu machen" d. i. denen weder durch die sanfte Hand des Glückes noch durch die rauhe Ge- walt des Unglücks eine andere Gesinnung beigebracht beigebracht werden konnte". Zu dem Gen., welcher durch das a privat. bedingt ist, vgl. μάχας ἄτρεστοι Prom. 432, Δίκας ἀφόβητος Soph. Ο. Τ. 885, ἀδμᾶτες ἀεικελιᾶν νούσων Bakchyl. Fragm. 23 (34).

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6
δόμους πατρώους Schütz für πατρώους δόμους um des Versmaßes willen. ἑλόντες, Schol. πορθή σαντες.

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8
μέλεοι zweisilbig per syni- zesin zu lesen wie 929.

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10
δῆτα wird gern hinzugefügt, wenn das von einem anderen ge- brauchte Wort als richtig und tref- fend wiederholt wird. Vgl. 873, 917, 971, Hik. 222. Ζυ μέλεοι .. μελέους vgl. Soph. Ο. Τ. 479 μέλεος μελές ποδί, Ant. 979 μέλεοι μελέαν πάθαν.

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ηὕροντο: vgl. Prom. 283 ηὑρόμην πόνους, Soph. Αi. 1023 καὶ ταῦτα πάντα σοῦ θανόντος ηρόμην, Tac. ann. I 61 mortem invenerit.

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14
ἐρειψίτοιχοι, die Wände (Mauern) des Hauses zertrümmernd, πικράς: πικρός wird seit dem Homerischen πικρόγαμοι gern zur Bezeichnung einer tragischen Peri- petie gebraucht:,,was sie als Glück erstrebten, ward ihr Verderben". Vgl. Pers. 476 πικρὰν δὲ παῖς ἐμὸς τιμωρίαν κλεινῶν ᾿Αθηνῶν ηύρε.

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καταρὰς (oder καταρὰν) δῆθ᾽ ἡ ist für κάρτα δ' ἀληθῆ gesetzt, da ἀληθῆ πατρός nicht als eine sprachlich richtige Ausdrucksweise erachtet werden kann. Vgl. das Schol. τῷ ὄντι ἡ τοῦ Οἰδίποδος Ἐρινὺς ἐτελείωσε τὰς ἐκείνου ἀρὰς κατὰ τῶν παίδων.

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18
Vgl. πότνι' Αρά Soph. Εl. 111.