Sophocles Electra 182

Robert Potter (Translator)

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Theseus
thou comest a little dust
Closed in a little urn. Unhappy me,
How vain is all my former nurturing care,
All the sweet toil for thee employ'd, how lost!
E'en for thy mother thou didst never show
More fondness than for me; no menial hand
Around thee was engaged; thou wast my charge,
And thy fond tongue still lisp'd thy sister's name.
All these endearments in one day are lost,
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With thee they died; thou, like a rushing storm
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Hast pass'd away, and with thee swept them all.
My father is no more, I am no more,
And death hath snatch'd thee hence; our foes exult;
My mother, how unworthy of that name!
Is wild with joy: yet secret message oft
Aforetime hast thou sent, that thou wou'dst come
Dreadful in vengeance; but unhappy fate,
Thy fate and mine, hath check'd the great intent,
And, for my loved Orestes, sent thee thus,
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Cold ashes, and an unavailing shade.
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Wretched remains! And what a wretch am I!
Thus art thou come? How mournful! Woe is me!
What ruin on thy sister hast thou brought!
Yes, dear Orestes, ruin on my head
Thy death hath brought. O miserable me!
Receive me then within thy sheltering urn.
Nothing to nothing; that henceforth with thee
I in the realms beneath may ever dwell.
For whilst thou here hadst life, with thee I shared
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One common fortune: now it is my wish
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In death to share thy tomb. The dead are free
From all the various woes of mortal life.

Electra. Sophocles. Robert Potter (Translator). London. 1820.

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Editions (2)
Greek (Lewis Campbell, 1879) (OCR draft) Experimental (Greek (Lewis Campbell, 1879)) — 182 focus
παῖς Ἀγαμεμνονίδας ἀγαμεμνίδας L. ἀπερίτροπος,
Greek (F. Storr, 1912) (OCR draft) Experimental (Greek (F. Storr, 1912)) — 121-250 focus
Translations (4)
English (Lewis Campbell, 1906) (OCR draft) Experimental (English (Lewis Campbell, 1906)) — 182 focus
EL
I find no profit in thee. Go thy way.
German (J. J. C. Donner, 1875; OCR review) (OCR draft) Experimental (German (J. J. C. Donner, 1875; OCR review)) — 174 focus
Nur muthig, o Kind, nur muthig!
Noch lebt im Himmel Zeus,
Der große, der Alles sieht und ordnet:
170
Dem Gott befiehl deines Grolles Schmerzen,
Nicht der Gehaßten vergessend und nicht zu sehr sie befeindend.
Allwaltend herrscht der Zeitgott,
Und weder auf Krisa's 1
Stierweiden säumt ewig,
175
Nimmer zu kehren, der Sohn Agamemnons,
Noch Hades, der am Acheron gebietet.
English (Thomas Francklin, 1758–1759) (OCR draft) Experimental (English (Thomas Francklin, 1758–1759)) — 182 focus
Electra
By Strophius's command.
What is it, say ;
Oh, how I dread thy message !
English (Sir Richard Jebb, 1904) (OCR draft) Experimental (English (Sir Richard Jebb, 1904)) — 121-250 focus

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Commentary (R. C. Jebb) (OCR draft) (Commentary (R. C. Jebb))

mvp-comment-636-1 ψυχῆς Ὀρέστου λοιπόν 1

mvp-comment-636-2 ἀπ’ ἐλπίδων 2

mvp-comment-636-3 Then οὐχ ὧνπερ 3

mvp-comment-636-4 Other possibilities are the following. (1) Keeping both

οὐχ ὧνπερ
and
ἀπ’
, to take
ἀπ’ ἐλπίδων
as=‘ with hopes.’ The prep. would then be used as when it denotes a resource: 1378
ἀφ’ ὧν ἔχοιμι
: Thuc. 1. 91 § 7
ἀπὸ ἀντιπάλου παρασκευῆς
. (Observe that in Soph. Tr. 667
ἀπ’ ἐλπίδος καλῆς
is not really similar; it means, ‘as the outcome of a fair hope.’) The prevailing usage of
ἀπό
condemns this view.

mvp-comment-636-5 (2) Still keeping

οὐχ ὧνπερ
, to change
ἀπ’
, with Schaefer, to
ὑπ’
. Cp. Eur. Hec. 351
ἐθρέφθην ἐλπίδων καλῶν ὕπο
. This is possible; though
ὑπό
, when thus used, commonly denotes an external accompaniment ( Soph. Tr. 419 n.); as, indeed, even in Hec. l. c., the hopes are not merely Polyxena's own, but those of her friends. Further:
ὥς σ’ ἀπ’ ἐλπίδων— ἀπό
meaning ‘contrary to’—strikes the note of despair more forcibly.

mvp-comment-636-6 (3) Keeping

ἀπ’
as=‘contrary to,’ to alter
οὐχ ὧνπερ
either to οὐχ ὅνπερ 4 οὐχ ὥσπερ 5

mvp-comment-636-7 On the whole, I retain the traditional reading, though not without a suspicion that either

ἀπ’
or
ὧνπερ
is unsound.

mvp-comment-637-1 νῦν μὲν γὰρ 6

mvp-comment-637-2 οὐδὲν ὄντα 7

mvp-comment-637-3 βαστάζω 8

mvp-comment-637-4 λαμπρὸν 9

mvp-comment-638-1 ὡς ὤφελον 10

mvp-comment-638-2 The v.l. ὤφελες 11 κλέψασα 12

mvp-comment-638-3 τοῖνδε 13

mvp-comment-638-4 κἀνασώσασθαι 14

mvp-comment-638-5 φόνου 15

mvp-comment-639-1 ὅπως … ἔκεισο 16

mvp-comment-639-2 τύμβου πατρῴου 17

mvp-comment-640-1 φυγὰς 18

mvp-comment-641-1 ἐν 19

mvp-comment-641-2 φίλαισι 20

mvp-comment-642-1 λουτροῖς σ’ ἐκόσμης’ 21

mvp-comment-643-1 ἄθλιον βάρος 22

mvp-comment-644-1 ἐν ξέναισι χερσὶ κηδευθεὶς 23

mvp-comment-644-2 σμικρὸς … ὄγκος 24

Commentary (Lewis Campbell, 1879) (OCR draft) (Commentary (Lewis Campbell, 1879)) focus

1126-1128. mvp-comment-539-1 O sole memorial and relic of the living Orestes, dearest of mankind to me, how far otherwise than I had hoped do I receive thee! with thoughts how different from those with which I sent thee forth!" By a confusion to which double negatives are liable (Essay on L. § 29. p. 49), the negative implied in ἀπό is first expanded in a negative sense, and then ἀπό is resumed with ὧνπερ in a different (positive) sense. For a negative similarly ignored in the relative clause, cp. Ant. 1064-7, κάτισθι, μὴ πολλοὺς .. τελῶν | ἐν οἷσι, κ.τ.λ. Wecklein in l. 1128 reads οὐχ ὅνπερ with an inferior MS. • How contrary to my hopes I receive- not him whom I sent forth.'

1130. mvp-comment-540-1 λαμπρόν] 'Bright,' i.e. full of promise. Cp. supr. 685, εἰσῆλθε λαμπρός. ἐγώ has a pathetic, not a logical emphasis, and reminds the spectator that Electra's action at the critical moment was the saving of her father's house. Cp. supr. 12.

1131. mvp-comment-541-1 The v. r. ὡς ὤφελες (suggested by 1134) is far inferior to ὡς ὤφελον. The struggle of the intervening years now seems worse than yain.

1139-1140. mvp-comment-542-1 οὔτε .. βάρος] ‘Nor took up, as I should have done, from the all-consuming fire, the miserable remains.' See E. on L. § 8. p. 11. For βάρος, cp. Aesch. Ag. 442, βαρὺ ψήγμα, παμφλέκτου suggests that the fire has done its utmost. Cp. Od. 11. 220, 1, ἀλλὰ τὰ μέν τε πυρὸς κρατερὸν μένος αἰθομένοιο | δαμνᾷ, ἐπεί κε πρῶτα λίπῃ λεύκ᾿ ὄστεα θυμός. See Essay on L. $ 53. p. 98.