Sophocles Electra 181

Robert Potter (Translator)

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Electra
1126
Thou sad memorial, now the sole remains
Of what was once Orestes, to my heart
Most dear, with other hopes I sent thee hence,
Not to receive thee thus; for in my hands
I bear thee, nothing now; a splendid Youth,
To glory born, I sent thee from this house.
1130
Oh hadst thou died, ere by these hands preserved,
And, snatch'd from slaughter, to a foreign land
I sent thee! Hadst thou died in that sad day,
Some little portion of thy father's tomb
Thou wou'dst have shared: but thou hast perish'd now
1135
Far from thy house, and from thy country far,
A wandering exile, from thy sister far.
Nor in the cleansing lavers did I bathe
With these fond hands thy corse, nor, as became
A sister, bear from the consuming flames
1140
The mournful burden. By a stranger's hands

Electra. Sophocles. Robert Potter (Translator). London. 1820.

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Editions (2)
Greek (Lewis Campbell, 1879) (OCR draft) Experimental (Greek (Lewis Campbell, 1879)) — 181 focus
βουνόμον βούνομον L. βουνόμον C2A. βουνόμενον L2. ἔχων ἀκτὰν
Greek (F. Storr, 1912) (OCR draft) Experimental (Greek (F. Storr, 1912)) — 121-250 focus
Translations (4)
English (Lewis Campbell, 1906) (OCR draft) Experimental (English (Lewis Campbell, 1906)) — 181 focus
CHR
Long time remains to settle that account.
German (J. J. C. Donner, 1875; OCR review) (OCR draft) Experimental (German (J. J. C. Donner, 1875; OCR review)) — 174 focus
Nur muthig, o Kind, nur muthig!
Noch lebt im Himmel Zeus,
Der große, der Alles sieht und ordnet:
170
Dem Gott befiehl deines Grolles Schmerzen,
Nicht der Gehaßten vergessend und nicht zu sehr sie befeindend.
Allwaltend herrscht der Zeitgott,
Und weder auf Krisa's 1
Stierweiden säumt ewig,
175
Nimmer zu kehren, der Sohn Agamemnons,
Noch Hades, der am Acheron gebietet.
English (Thomas Francklin, 1758–1759) (OCR draft) Experimental (English (Thomas Francklin, 1758–1759)) — 181 focus
Orestes
What you have heard I know not,
1110
But of Orestes came I here to speak
English (Sir Richard Jebb, 1904) (OCR draft) Experimental (English (Sir Richard Jebb, 1904)) — 121-250 focus

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Commentary (R. C. Jebb) (OCR draft) (Commentary (R. C. Jebb))

mvp-comment-636-1 ψυχῆς Ὀρέστου λοιπόν 1

mvp-comment-636-2 ἀπ’ ἐλπίδων 2

mvp-comment-636-3 Then οὐχ ὧνπερ 3

mvp-comment-636-4 Other possibilities are the following. (1) Keeping both

οὐχ ὧνπερ
and
ἀπ’
, to take
ἀπ’ ἐλπίδων
as=‘ with hopes.’ The prep. would then be used as when it denotes a resource: 1378
ἀφ’ ὧν ἔχοιμι
: Thuc. 1. 91 § 7
ἀπὸ ἀντιπάλου παρασκευῆς
. (Observe that in Soph. Tr. 667
ἀπ’ ἐλπίδος καλῆς
is not really similar; it means, ‘as the outcome of a fair hope.’) The prevailing usage of
ἀπό
condemns this view.

mvp-comment-636-5 (2) Still keeping

οὐχ ὧνπερ
, to change
ἀπ’
, with Schaefer, to
ὑπ’
. Cp. Eur. Hec. 351
ἐθρέφθην ἐλπίδων καλῶν ὕπο
. This is possible; though
ὑπό
, when thus used, commonly denotes an external accompaniment ( Soph. Tr. 419 n.); as, indeed, even in Hec. l. c., the hopes are not merely Polyxena's own, but those of her friends. Further:
ὥς σ’ ἀπ’ ἐλπίδων— ἀπό
meaning ‘contrary to’—strikes the note of despair more forcibly.

mvp-comment-636-6 (3) Keeping

ἀπ’
as=‘contrary to,’ to alter
οὐχ ὧνπερ
either to οὐχ ὅνπερ 4 οὐχ ὥσπερ 5

mvp-comment-636-7 On the whole, I retain the traditional reading, though not without a suspicion that either

ἀπ’
or
ὧνπερ
is unsound.

mvp-comment-637-1 νῦν μὲν γὰρ 6

mvp-comment-637-2 οὐδὲν ὄντα 7

mvp-comment-637-3 βαστάζω 8

mvp-comment-637-4 λαμπρὸν 9

mvp-comment-638-1 ὡς ὤφελον 10

mvp-comment-638-2 The v.l. ὤφελες 11 κλέψασα 12

mvp-comment-638-3 τοῖνδε 13

mvp-comment-638-4 κἀνασώσασθαι 14

mvp-comment-638-5 φόνου 15

mvp-comment-639-1 ὅπως … ἔκεισο 16

mvp-comment-639-2 τύμβου πατρῴου 17

mvp-comment-640-1 φυγὰς 18

mvp-comment-641-1 ἐν 19

mvp-comment-641-2 φίλαισι 20

mvp-comment-642-1 λουτροῖς σ’ ἐκόσμης’ 21

mvp-comment-643-1 ἄθλιον βάρος 22

mvp-comment-644-1 ἐν ξέναισι χερσὶ κηδευθεὶς 23

mvp-comment-644-2 σμικρὸς … ὄγκος 24

Commentary (Lewis Campbell, 1879) (OCR draft) (Commentary (Lewis Campbell, 1879)) focus

1126-1128. mvp-comment-539-1 O sole memorial and relic of the living Orestes, dearest of mankind to me, how far otherwise than I had hoped do I receive thee! with thoughts how different from those with which I sent thee forth!" By a confusion to which double negatives are liable (Essay on L. § 29. p. 49), the negative implied in ἀπό is first expanded in a negative sense, and then ἀπό is resumed with ὧνπερ in a different (positive) sense. For a negative similarly ignored in the relative clause, cp. Ant. 1064-7, κάτισθι, μὴ πολλοὺς .. τελῶν | ἐν οἷσι, κ.τ.λ. Wecklein in l. 1128 reads οὐχ ὅνπερ with an inferior MS. • How contrary to my hopes I receive- not him whom I sent forth.'

1130. mvp-comment-540-1 λαμπρόν] 'Bright,' i.e. full of promise. Cp. supr. 685, εἰσῆλθε λαμπρός. ἐγώ has a pathetic, not a logical emphasis, and reminds the spectator that Electra's action at the critical moment was the saving of her father's house. Cp. supr. 12.

1131. mvp-comment-541-1 The v. r. ὡς ὤφελες (suggested by 1134) is far inferior to ὡς ὤφελον. The struggle of the intervening years now seems worse than yain.

1139-1140. mvp-comment-542-1 οὔτε .. βάρος] ‘Nor took up, as I should have done, from the all-consuming fire, the miserable remains.' See E. on L. § 8. p. 11. For βάρος, cp. Aesch. Ag. 442, βαρὺ ψήγμα, παμφλέκτου suggests that the fire has done its utmost. Cp. Od. 11. 220, 1, ἀλλὰ τὰ μέν τε πυρὸς κρατερὸν μένος αἰθομένοιο | δαμνᾷ, ἐπεί κε πρῶτα λίπῃ λεύκ᾿ ὄστεα θυμός. See Essay on L. $ 53. p. 98.