N. Wecklein Seven Against Thebes 890.comm-890

Seven Against Thebes. N. Wecklein. . .

Current edition Experimental

Commentary (N. Wecklein, 1902; German; OCR draft) (German) (Seven Against Thebes, explanatory commentary pp. 15–100. Single-witness OCR; source readings and all reference placements require scan review.)

Provisional text from uncorrected OCR; expect errors.

Editions (7)
Ἑπτὰ ἐπὶ Θήβας First1KGreek (Aeschyli Tragoediae. Sidgwick, Arthur, editor. Oxford: Clarendon Press, 1902.) — 957-965 focus
Ἑπτὰ ἐπὶ Θήβας Perseus (Aeschylus, Volume 1. Smyth, Herbert Weir, editor. London; New York: William Heinemann; G.P. Putnam's Sons, 1922.) — 957-965 focus
Ἑπτὰ ἐπὶ θήβας (OCR draft) Experimental (Ἑπτὰ ἐπὶ θήβας. Guilielmus Dindorfius, 1882.) — 911 focus
Ἑπτὰ ἐπὶ θήβας (OCR draft) Experimental (Ἑπτὰ ἐπὶ θήβας. Gottfried Hermann, 1852.) — 911 focus
ΕΠΤΑ ΕΠΙ θΗΒΑΣ (OCR draft) Experimental (ΕΠΤΑ ΕΠΙ θΗΒΑΣ. Paul Mazon, 1920-1925.) — 911 focus
Σιδαρόπλακτοι μὲν ὧδ' ἔχουσιν.
Str. 2.
σιδαρόπλακτοι δὲ τοὺς μένουσιν,
τάχ' ἄν τις εἴποι, τίνες ;
τάφων πατρῴων λαχαί.
Δόμων <μέν> om. μάλ' ἀχήεις τοὺς ἀχάεσσα τοὺς ἀχὼ ἐπ' αὐτοὺς seu ἀχὴν ἐς αὐτοὺς
915
προπέμπει δαϊκτὴρ
γόος αὐτόστονος, αὐτοπήμων,
δαϊόφρων δαίφρων, οὐ δ' οὐ φιλογαθής,
ἐτύμως δακρυχέων δ' ἐκ ἐκ
φρενός, ἃ κλαομένας μου
920
μινύθει τοῖνδε δυοῖν ἀνάκτοιν.
Ἑπτὰ ἐπὶ θήβας (OCR draft) Experimental (Ἑπτὰ ἐπὶ θήβας. N. Wecklein, 1885.) — 911 focus
Σιδαρόπληκτοι μὲν ὧδ᾽ ἔχουσιν,
895
Aeschyli Septem contra Thebas (OCR draft) Experimental (Aeschyli Septem contra Thebas. Ulrich von Wilamowitz-Moellendorff, 1914.) — 911 focus
Translations (8)
Seven Against Thebes Perseus (Aeschylus, Volume 1. Smyth, Herbert Weir, translator. London; New York: William Heinemann; G.P. Putnam's Sons, 1922. (Modernized by Perseus.)) — 957-965 focus
The Seven against Thebes. (OCR draft) Experimental (The Seven against Thebes.. Theodore Alois Buckley, 1849.) — 911 focus
Smitten by the steel, here they lie; and smitten by the steel there await them—one may perchance ask what?—the inheritance of the tombs of their fathers.
LES SEPT CONTRE THÈBES (OCR draft) Experimental (LES SEPT CONTRE THÈBES. Paul Mazon, 1920-1925.) — 911 focus
bien quelque reproche à faire 1 : Arès manque de douceur !
The Seven Chiefs against Thebes (OCR draft) Experimental (The Seven Chiefs against Thebes. Robert Potter, 1779.) — 911 focus
From the father's furious breath
Discord rose, and rage, and death.
Eschilo, I Sette a Tebe: traduzione italiana di Ettore Romagnoli (OCR draft) Experimental (Eschilo, I Sette a Tebe: traduzione italiana di Ettore Romagnoli. Ettore Romagnoli, 1922.) — 911 focus
Cosí, punti dal ferro, entrambi giacciono :
l'uno dell'altro sotto il ferro piomba.
Or che li attende chiedi forse? Il termine
1010
della paterna tomba.
E dalle case, con lunga eco, un ululo
acuto li accompagna,
che si accora, si lagna,
che fuga ostile ogni letizia, e lagrime
1015
vere versa dal seno.
Aeschylus, Septem ad Thebas: versio Latina Ioannis Sanravii (OCR draft) Experimental (Aeschylus, Septem ad Thebas: versio Latina Ioannis Sanravii. Ioannes Sanravius, 1555.) — 911 focus
Ex ferro dementes hic habent,
Ex ferro dementes hos ſuſtinent.
840
Forte dixerit aliquis quæ?
Sortes ſepulchrorum paternorum,
Ex domo ualde uocem mittit in ipſos
Gemitus lamentabilis, luctus ex ſe malus
Bellicosusq;, non non probus, uerè
845
Lachrymas fundens uerò ex mente, quæ
English (E. D. A. Morshead, 1908) (OCR draft) Experimental (Aeschylus, Seven against Thebes — Morshead translation. Wikisource transcription; speech corresp and card milestones aligned to Smyth perseus-grc2.) — 911 focus
Here, by the stroke of steel, behold! they lie—
And rightly may we cry
Beside their fathers, let them here be laid—
925
Iron gave their doom, with iron their graves be made—
Alack, the slaying sword, alack, th' entombing spade!
Alas, a piercing shriek, a rending groan,
A cry unfeigned of sorrow felt at heart!
With shuddering of grief, with tears that start,
930
With wailful escort, let them hither come—
For one or other make divided moan!
No light lament of pity mixed with gladness,
But with true tears, poured from the soul of sadness,
Over the princes dead and their bereavèd home
935
German (J. J. C. Donner, 1854; OCR review) (OCR draft) Experimental (Aeschylos. Deutsch in den Versmaßen der Urschrift. Stuttgart: Hoffmann, 1854. Native Donner line citations, Smyth card correspondence, selected textual readings and metrical facsimiles. Remaining OCR differences and unattributed reading notes are documented in the linked review inventory.) — 911 focus
Von Stahles Schlag liegen sie getroffen,
Von Stahles Schlag wartet auf die Beiden
875
Du wirst vielleicht fragen, was?
Der Vatergruft herbes Loos.

Notes on the current edition

Seven Against Thebes

1. Single-witness OCR: uncollated. Source layout and readings require scan review; automatic flags are not exhaustive.
2. Reference placement provisional: 1885 correspondence corroborated by source Greek on this page. Verify the printed source numbering and note scope against the scan.

Commentary

Critical apparatus to Seven Against Thebes (OCR draft) (Latin and Greek critical apparatus to Gottfried Hermann's 1852 edition of Seven Against Thebes.) focus

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δόμων μάλ᾽ ἀχὰν ἐπ' αὐτοῖς προπέμπει Hemichorii notam omittunt Vit. Lips. Ox. Ald. Rob. Turn.
δόμων μαλαχάεσσα τοὺς προπέμπει
Μ. a prima manu: secunda fecit
μάλ' ἀχάεσσα
et in margine adscripsit
λείπει τὸ προπομπώ
: recentior manus
μάλ' ἠχῶ ἐπ᾿ αὐτοὺς
adiecit.
μάλ' ἀχὼ ἐπ᾿ αὐτοὺς
Vit. aliique, ut videtur, codices et Ald. Turn. γρ.
ἀχήεις
adscriptum in Par. B.
μάλ' ἀχὴ εἰς αὐτοὺς
Par. C.
μάλ' ἀχὼ ἐς αὐτοὺς
Colb. 2. Ask. A. Ven. Β.
μάλ' ἠχὴ ἐπ' αὐτοὺς
Lips.
μάλ' ἀχὴν ἐς αὐτοὺς
Arund. Rob. et agnoscunt
ἠχὴν
scholiastae.
μάλ' αὐτοὺς ἀχὼ
G. (sic G.) Vind. 1.
μάλ᾽ ἀχὼ αὐτοὺς
Vind. 3.
δὲ αὐτοὺς
ex Par. E. enotatum est.
πέμπει
Colb. 2. Elmsleius ad Eur. Med. v. 147. scribendum putavit
δόμων μάλ᾽ ἀγὼν ἐς οὖς προπέμπει δαϊκτὴρ γόος
. Equidem scribendum potius censeo
δόμων μάλ' ἀχὰν ἐπ' αὐτοῖς προπέμπει δαϊκτὴρ γόος
, aedium propter eos lamenta meus prosequitur regum luctus.

Commentary (N. Wecklein, 1902; German; OCR draft) (Seven Against Thebes, explanatory commentary pp. 15–100. Single-witness OCR; source readings and all reference placements require scan review.) focus

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ein ἰάλεμος nach der Angabe in 900, wonach dieser Ge- sang mit Zerreißen der Wangen (und mit Schlägen an Kopf und Brust nach 840f.) begleitet ist. Vgl. Cho. 422f., Soph. Αi. 627 f. mit Eur. Or. 1395. Diese Totenklage (854 f.) wird von Halbchören gesungen, welche in gleicher Weise abwechseln wie in Eum. 143-168, im ersten Strophenpaar zweimal, in den bei- den folgenden nur einmal. Auch die Unterbrechung des ersten Satzes durch den anderen Halbchor findet sich in den Eum. ebenso. 872 Η. δι' εὐωνύμων ὁμοσπλάγχνων τε (vgl. Pers. 569 Θρήκης ἂμ πε- διήρεις δυσχίμους τε κελεύθους) πλευρωμάτων τετυμμένοι, „,ins Herz, ins Bruderherz getroffen", Das schmerzliche Wort τετυμμένοι be- stätigt ( δῆτα: zu 864) der andere Halbchor. In der Lücke ist das verb. fin. verloren gegangen (etwa ἐπέσετε μέλεοι).

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Schol. ὀξύθυμοι ὄντες ἐμοι- ρήσαντο καὶ διενείμαντο τὰ κτήματα ὥστ᾽ ἴσον λαχεῖν. 8921. διαλλακτῆρι δ' οὖν (gesetzt für δ' οὐκ) κτέ., jedenfalls können die Freunde beider (als ἀμφὶς ἀρω- γοί vor Gericht) sich nicht über Ares beklagen, als ob er als Schieds- richter parteiisch gewesen sei und den einen der Streitenden begünstigt habe. Vgl. 927. Für φίλοις kann man nach dem vorhergehenden Da- tiv διαλλακτῆρι den Gen. φίλων er- warten.