Chorus
Thywords too strongly bore the stamp of truth: [to Tecmessa
How high his frenzy rose these deeds declare.
Ajax. Sophocles. Robert Potter (Translator). London. 1820.
Ajax. Sophocles. Robert Potter (Translator). London. 1820.
English (Robert Potter, 1788) (OCR draft) (English) (English (Robert Potter, 1788))
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mvp-comment-167-1 The words λαμπρᾶς ἄτερ στεροπῆς 1 λήγει 2 ᾄξας 3
mvp-comment-168-1 οἰκεῖα πάθη 4
mvp-comment-168-2 παραπράξαντος 5
mvp-comment-168-3 ὑποτείνει 6
mvp-comment-169-1 πέπαυται 7 εὐτυχεῖν 8
mvp-comment-169-2 φρούδου γὰρ 9 λόγος 10
mvp-comment-170-1 πότερα 11
mvp-comment-171-1 The words κοινὸς ἐν κοινοῖσι 12
mvp-comment-172-1 τὸ … διπλάζον 13
mvp-comment-173-1 Though οὐ νοσοῦντος 14 οὐ νοσοῦντες 15
mvp-comment-173-2 ἀτώμεσθα 16
mvp-comment-174-1 πῶς … ὅπως 17
mvp-comment-175-1 οἷσιν εἴχετ’ ἐν κακοῖς 18
mvp-comment-175-2 φρονοῦντας 19 βλέποντας 20 κακοῖς 21
mvp-comment-176-1 κἀνέπνευσε 22 ἔληξε 23
mvp-comment-177-1 Instead of κεῖνος 24
mvp-comment-177-2 πᾶς 25
mvp-comment-177-3 ἐλήλαται 26
mvp-comment-178-1 ἆῤ 27
mvp-comment-178-2 δὶς τός’ 28 ἐξ ἁπλῶν 29
mvp-comment-179-1 δέδοικα μὴ … ἥκῃ 30 ἥκει 31 ἥκῃ 32 ἥκοι 33
mvp-comment-179-2 πῶς γάρ 34
mvp-comment-179-3 εἰ πεπαυμένος 35
mvp-comment-179-4 μηδέν τι 36
mvp-comment-180-1 ὡς ὧδ’ ἐχόντων 37
mvp-comment-181-1 τίς γάρ 38
mvp-comment-181-2 προσέπτατο 39
mvp-comment-181-3
From the Homeric
mvp-comment-181-4 τύχας 40 δήλωσον 41 τύχαις 42 ξυναλγοῦσιν 43
mvp-comment-182-1 κεῖνος γὰρ 44
mvp-comment-182-2 ἄκρας νυκτός 45
mvp-comment-183-1 λαμπτῆρες 46
mvp-comment-183-2
For this mode of indicating the time, cp.
Her. 7. 215
mvp-comment-184-1 ἔγχος 47
mvp-comment-184-2 ἐξόδους ἕρπειν 48
mvp-comment-184-3 κενάς 49
mvp-comment-185-1 The general word, ἄκλητος 50 οὔτε 51
mvp-comment-185-2 ἀφορμᾷς 52 πεῖραν 53
mvp-comment-185-3 σάλπιγγος 54
mvp-comment-185-4 πᾶς εὕδει στρατός 55
mvp-comment-186-1 ὑμνούμενα 56
mvp-comment-186-2 γυναιξὶ 57
mvp-comment-186-3 κόσμον 58
mvp-comment-187-1 μαθοῦς’ 59
mvp-comment-187-2 ἐσσύθη 60
mvp-comment-188-1 τὰς ἐκεῖ … πάθας 61 τύχας 62
mvp-comment-189-1 κύνας βοτῆρας 63
mvp-comment-189-2 εὔερον 64 εύκερων 65
mvp-comment-190-1 ηὐχένιζε 66
mvp-comment-190-2 ἄνω τρέπων 67
mvp-comment-190-3 ἔσφαζε 68
mvp-comment-190-4 κἀρράχιζε 69
mvp-comment-190-5 δεσμίους 70
mvp-comment-190-6 ὥστε 71
mvp-comment-190-7 φῶτας 72
mvp-comment-191-1 ὑπᾴξας 73 ἀπᾴξας 74 ἐπᾴξας 75
mvp-comment-191-2 σκιᾷ τινὶ 76
mvp-comment-191-3 λόγους ἀνέσπα 77
mvp-comment-191-4 Ἀτρειδῶν κάτα 78
mvp-comment-192-1 ἀμφ’ Ὀδυσσεῖ 79
mvp-comment-192-2 συντιθεὶς γέλων πολύν 80
mvp-comment-192-3 γέλων 81 τ 82
mvp-comment-193-1 ὕβριν 83
mvp-comment-193-2 ἐκτείσαιτο 84 ἐκτείσοιτο 85 αὐτῶν 86
mvp-comment-193-3 ἰών 87
mvp-comment-194-1 ἐπᾴξας 88 ἀπᾴξας 89
mvp-comment-194-2 αὖθις … πάλιν 90
mvp-comment-195-1 μόλις πως 91
mvp-comment-196-1 ἄτης 92
mvp-comment-197-1 )θώϋξεν 93
mvp-comment-197-2 ἐρειπίοις 94 νεκρῶν 95 ἀρνείου φόνου 96
mvp-comment-197-3 ἐρειφθεὶς 97 ἐρεισθεὶς 98 ἐρειφθεὶς 99 ἐρειπίοις 100
mvp-comment-198-1 ἀπρὶξ … συλλαβὼν 101
mvp-comment-198-2 ὄνυξι … χερί 102
mvp-comment-199-1 καὶ τὸν μὲν ἧστο πλεῖστον 103
mvp-comment-200-1 τὰ δείν’ … ἔπη 104
mvp-comment-201-1 φανοίην 105 ιη 106
mvp-comment-202-1 ἐν τῷ πράγματος 107
mvp-comment-203-1 The words κἀγώ, φίλοι, δείσασα 108
mvp-comment-204-1 πρὸς γὰρ κακοῦ τε 109
mvp-comment-204-2 βαρυψύχου 110
mvp-comment-204-3 ἐξηγεῖτ’ 111
mvp-comment-205-1 ἀψόφητος … κωκυμάτων 112 ὑπεστέναζε 113
mvp-comment-205-2 ὀξέων 114
mvp-comment-205-3 ταῦρος ὣς βρυχώμενος 115 βριμώμενος 116
mvp-comment-206-1 νῦν δ’ 117
mvp-comment-207-1 ἄσιτος 118
mvp-comment-207-2 σιδηροκμῆσιν 119
mvp-comment-208-1 ὥς τι δρασείων 120
mvp-comment-208-2 δρασείων 121
mvp-comment-209-1 τοιαῦτα 122 πως 123
mvp-comment-209-2 καὶ λέγει κὠδύρεται 124 ἥσυχος 125
mvp-comment-209-3
The verse is rejected by Nauck and others as though it were inconsistent with v. 325, and had been patched up from v. 383. There is no ground for this view. On the other hand, after
mvp-comment-210-1 ἐστάλην 126
mvp-comment-210-2 εἰσελθόντες 127
mvp-comment-211-1 λόγοις 128 φίλοι 129
mvp-comment-212-1 Τελεύταντος 130
mvp-comment-212-2 ἡμῖν 131 λέγεις 132
mvp-comment-212-3 διαπεφοιβάσθαι 133 κακοῖς 134
mvp-comment-213-1 ἰώ μοί μοι 135
mvp-comment-214-1 μᾶλλον 136
mvp-comment-214-2 ἢ οὐκ 137
mvp-comment-214-3 Αἴαντος, οἵαν 138 θωΰσσει 139
mvp-comment-215-1 τοῖς πάλαι νοσήμασι ξυνοῦσι 140 ξυνοῦσι 141
mvp-comment-215-2 παρών 142
mvp-comment-216-1 ἰὼ παῖ παῖ 143 Τεῦκρον καλῶ 144
mvp-comment-216-2
Prof. Campbell understands
mvp-comment-217-1 ὤμοι τάλαιν’ 145
mvp-comment-217-2 Εὐρύσακες 146
mvp-comment-217-3 ἀμφὶ σοὶ 147
mvp-comment-217-4 ποῦ ποτ’ εἶ 148
mvp-comment-218-1 Τεῦκρον 149
mvp-comment-218-2 τὸν εἰσαεὶ … χρόνον 150 λεηλατήσει 151
mvp-comment-219-1 ἀνοίγετε 152
mvp-comment-219-2 αἰδῶ … λάβοι 153
mvp-comment-219-3 κἀπ’ ἐμοὶ 154 βλέψας 155
mvp-comment-220-1 διοίγω 156
mvp-comment-220-2 πράγη 157
mvp-comment-220-3
The
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Ajax, sitting among his victims, and meditating his own destruction, was the subject of a famous picture by Timomachus of Byzantium. Philostratus (
Vit. Apoll. 2. 22 § 5) thus describes it:
mvp-comment-221-1 This kommos serves, like the last (201—262), as a lyric expression of tragic pathos; after which the situation is further developed, as in the former case, by iambic dialogue. But in one respect this kommos differs from its predecessor. In order to bring the mind of Ajax into fuller relief, the lyrics are given to him alone, while the Chorus and Tecmessa speak only trimeters.
mvp-comment-221-2 The structure is as follows:—1st strophe 348—355=1st antistr. 356—363: 2nd str. 364—378=2nd ant. 379—393: 3rd str. 394—411=3rd ant. 412—429. For the metres see Metrical Analysis.
mvp-comment-221-3 ἰὼ φίλοι ναυβάται 158
mvp-comment-221-4 ἐμμένοντες 159
mvp-comment-221-5 ὀρθῷ νόμῳ 160
mvp-comment-222-1 ἴδεσθέ μ’ 161
mvp-comment-222-2 κῦμα 162 ζάλης 163 φοινίας 164
mvp-comment-222-3 ἀμφίδρομον 165 κυκλεῖται 166 κυκλοῦται 167
mvp-comment-223-1 οἴμ’ 168
mvp-comment-223-2 ἀφροντίστως ἔχει 169
255. mvp-comment-185-1 τὸν αἰσ᾿ ἄπλατος ίσχει] 'Possessed by an all-endangering doom.' The chorus long to stand by Ajax, but are deterred by his madness. Cp. Trach. 785, κοὐδεὶς ἐτόλμα τἀνδρὸς ἀντίον μολεῖν : ib. 797, ὦ παῖ, πρόσελθε, μὴ φύγῃς τοὐμὸν κακόν, | μηδ' εἴ σε χρὴ θανόντι συνθανεῖν ἐμοί: ib. 1030, ἀποτίβατος ἀγρία νόσος.
257. mvp-comment-186-1 οὐκέτι] Sc. ἴσχει νιν ἡ μανία. 'He may be approached with safety now.' λαμπρᾶς, κ.τ.λ.] 'For he, like a Southern storm, after a sharp outburst, ceases to rage, and the lightning plays no more.' ἄτερ, κ.τ.λ. is to be taken proleptically = ὥστε ἄτερ στεροπῆς εἶναι. E. on L. § 38. p. 70. Otherwise the words might mean, 'He desists without lightning:' i.e. his violence comes to an end without doing irreparable harm. Cp. Eur. Med. 93, 4, οὐδὲ παύσεται | χόλου, σάφ' οἶδα, πρὶν κατασκῆψαί τινα: Shak. King John, 4. 2, 'So foul a sky clears not without a storm.' But although Tecmessa is for the moment relieved, her apprehensions are not sufficiently calmed to make this natural.
259. mvp-comment-187-1 Φρόνιμος] Sc. ὤν. Essay on L. § 39. Ρ. 72. φρόνιμον (sc. ὄντα) is a v. r. or MS. conjecture.
260. mvp-comment-188-1 οἰκεῖα πάθη] Troubles all one's own.' i.e. both as home-felt and self-wrought. Cp. El. 215, οἰκείας εἰς ἄτας.
261. mvp-comment-189-1 παραπράξαντος] «Having assisted.' Cp. παραδράω ( οἷά τε τοῖς ἀγαθοῖσι παραδρώωσι χέρηες, Od. 15, 324).
262. mvp-comment-190-1 μεγάλας ὀδύνας ὑποτείνει] 'Causes intense grief within.' ὑποτείνει, 1.2. ὑπέχει ἐντεταμένως. Cp. Pind. O1. 2. 100, βαθεῖαν ὑπέχων μέριμναν ἀγροτέραν.
263. mvp-comment-191-1 'But if he hath ceased' (from his madness), 'he must be surely happy.' Others take εὐτυχεῖν impersonally, as in Oed. Tyr 88, πάντ᾽ ἂν εὐτυχεῖν, –‘All must be well.'
264. mvp-comment-192-1 'For trouble counts for less when it is gone.' The gen. is first absolute, and then in regimen with λόγος. Cp. infr. 1161, 2, κἀμοὶ γὰρ αἴσχιστον κλύειν | ἀνδρὸς ματαίου φλαῦρ᾽ ἔπη μυθουμένου.
265. mvp-comment-193-1 αἵρεσιν] Sc. τούτων, viz. ll. 266, 7, which πότερα anticipates.
266. mvp-comment-194-1 ἔχειν] Supr. 203.
267. mvp-comment-195-1 κοινὸς ἐν κοινοῖσι] Essay on L. § 44. p. 83. Or to be with others and mingle your sorrow with theirs.' ξυνών marks that while Ajax was delirious, he stood apart from the grief which others felt for him.
269. mvp-comment-196-1 'Our case, then, since the madness left us, is grown more desperate.' Tecmessa identifies her lot with that of Ajax. Compare infr. 791, μῶν ὀλώλαμεν; A few lines below (273-6) she speaks of herself in the plural as contrasted with him.
272. mvp-comment-197-1 οἶσιν. . κακοῖς] i. e. κακοῖς ἐν οἶσιν εἴχετο. Cp. infr. 1144, 5, ἡνίκ᾽ ἐν κακῷ | χειμῶνος εἴχετ'.
275. mvp-comment-198-1 πᾶς ἐλήλαται] 'Is vexed to the uttermost.' πᾶς is adverbial. See Essay on L. § 23. p. 38, and cp. infr. 519, ἐν σοὶ πᾶσ᾽ ἔγωγε σώζομαι. The perfect, as in πεφόβημαι, supr. 139, expresses a completed state.
277. mvp-comment-199-1 ἆρ'..;] Essay on L. § 29. p. 50. 'What is this but to have the sorrow doubled that before was single?' Cp. Constance in King John, 3. 4. 'I am not mad; - I would to heaven I were! For then 'tis like I should forget myself: O, if I could, what grief should I forget!'
278-279. mvp-comment-200-1 μὴ ἐκ θεοῦ | πληγή τις ἥκει] 'That a calamity is really come from Heaven.' The chorus before admitted as a possibility ( supr. 186, ἥκοι γὰρ ἂν θεία νόσος) what now appears to be too certain. Hence the indicative is more forcible here, although the subjunctive ( ἥκῃ) is more regular and may be the true reading.
282-283. mvp-comment-201-1 'In what wise lighted on you the commencement of the trouble? Tell us, who grieve with you at the misfortune, what it is.' τύχας, continuing the notion of κακοῦ, is governed either (1) both of δήλωσον and of ξυναλγοῦσιν, or (2) of ξυναλγοῦσιν only.
284. mvp-comment-202-1 ὡς κοινωνὸς ὤν] 'As you are no less interested.'
285. mvp-comment-203-1 ἄκρας νυκτός] 'At dead of night.' That this, and not 'on the verge of night,' is the meaning here, appears from the context. The flames lighted at evening were burnt out, so that all was dark. ἄκρᾳ σὺν ἑσπέρᾳ in Pind. Pyth. 11. 16, is explained by Dissen 'ad seram vesperam.'
286. mvp-comment-204-1 Cp. Od. 18. 307, αὐτίκα λαμπτῆρας τρεῖς ἵστασαν ἐν μεγάροισιν, | ὄφρα φαείνοιεν, περὶ δὲ ξύλα κάγκανα θῆκαν καὶ δᾷδας μετέμισγον: ib. 19. 64, φύως ἔμεν ἠδὲ θέρεσθαι.
287. mvp-comment-205-1 κενάς] «Objectless;' i.e. without apparent cause. Tecmessa knows little of what Ajax does abroad. But she knows that there is something strange in his going forth at night without a summons.
289. mvp-comment-206-1 ἄκλητος is expanded with οὔτε-οὔτε, 'neither-nor.'
291. mvp-comment-207-1 ἀλλά] i. e. 'Instead of there being an alarm of any kind.'
292. mvp-comment-208-1 βαί, ἀεὶ δ᾽ ὑμνούμενα] 'Few words, but to a well-known tune.' Eur. Phoen. 438, πάλαι μὲν οὖν ὑμνηθέν, ἀλλ᾽ ὅμως ἐρῶ: Plat. Rep. 8. 549 D, ὅσα φιλοῦσιν αἱ γυναῖκες περὶ τῶν τοιούτων ὑμνεῖν.
293. mvp-comment-209-1 Cp. Fr. 61, ἄλλως τε καὶ κόρῃ τε κἀργείᾳ γένος, | αἷς κόσμος ἡ σιγή τε καὶ τὰ παῦρ᾽ ἔπη.
294. mvp-comment-210-1 μαθοῦσ᾽] 'When I perceived,' viz. that he was not to be reasoned with. The unusual division of the line marks the reluctant desistence of Tecmessa. Cp. O. T. 1513, ib. 110, and notes.
295. mvp-comment-211-1 πάθας] 'Misfortunes.' The word is used with a vague sense of the horror of a scene, in which Ajax was no less unfortunate than his victims.
297. mvp-comment-212-1 εὔκερών τ᾿ ἄγραν] The horns of the sheep are the most conspicuous object as they are seen in front and from above. The objection 'that the bulls were also horned' is absurdly logical. There is no sufficient reason for preferring the conj. εὔερον. The word describes all the cattle, small and great, excepting the bulls, which have been mentioned separately.
298. mvp-comment-213-1 τοὺς μέν] The bulls.
299. mvp-comment-214-1 ἐρράχιζε] 'Clove in twain.'
299-300. mvp-comment-215-1 τοὺς δὲ δεσμίους | ᾐκίζεθ᾽] 'Others, as his prisoners, he tormented at his pleasure.' ὥστε φῶτας] 'As if human creatures.' ἐν ποίμναις πίτνων] 'Making onsets on the cattle.' Cp. supr. 185.
301. mvp-comment-216-1 ὑπάξας διὰ θυρῶν] 'Issuing suddenly through the doorway.' ὑπό = 'from beneath the tent.' σκιᾷ τινί «In converse with some shadow.' The dative as with διαλέγεσθαι. Tecmessa, not seeing or hearing Athena, supposes Ajax to be addressing some 'bodiless creation' of his brain. Cp. Shak. Hamlet, 3, 4, 'How is't with you, That you do bend your eye on vacancy, And with the incorporal air do hold discourse?'
302. mvp-comment-217-1 ἀνέσπα] «Heaved forth.' Cp. Plat. Theaet. 180 Α, ὥσπερ ἐκ φαρέτρας ῥηματίσκια αἰνιγματώδη ἀνασπῶντες ἀποτοξεύουσιν : Αr. Ran. 903, ῥήματα γομφοπαγή. πινακηδὸν ἀποσπῶν.
303. mvp-comment-218-1 συντιθείς] Sc. τοῖς λόγοις. Εp. προστίθημι.
304. mvp-comment-219-1 ὅσην. . ἰών] 'What insults he had gone and wreaked upon them.' This clause depends at once on λόγους and on γέλων. The participle adds liveliness,-'how he had gone and paid them.'
305. mvp-comment-220-1 ἐπάξας] L. has ἀπάξας both here and supr. 301. Supposing this were right, the same word would be used in two different senses, 'rushing off' and 'rushing back;' but the two words, ὑπάξας, ἐπάξας, seem more appropriate.
306. mvp-comment-221-1 μόλις πως] ‘By slow stages.' The phrase recalls the anxiety with which Tecmessa had watched the gradual awakening. Cp. Thuc. 8. 86, § 2, ἔπειτα μέντοι μόλις ἡσυχάσαντες ἤκουσαν.
307. mvp-comment-222-1 'As he cast his eye along the room, and saw that it was full of ruin.' ἄτη is calamity caused by infatuation. Cp. infr. 351 foll.
308-309. mvp-comment-223-1 ἐν δ᾽ ἐρειπίοις . . ἀρνείου φόνου] 'Amidst the carnage of the flock he sate, a ruin amongst ruins.' The tautology, ἐν ἐρειπίοις ἐρειφθείς, is here expressive. The 2nd genitive, ἀρνείου φόνου (see Essay on L. § 23. p. 37 a), is added to give greater distinctness to ἐρειπίοις νεκρῶν as a single notion.
310. mvp-comment-224-1 'With clenched nails grasping his hair with his hand.' ὄνυξι adds force to ἀπρίξ.
311. mvp-comment-225-1 The order (Essay on L. § 41. p. 76) shows that πλεῖστον is an afterthought. 'For some while, indeed for most of the time.'
312. mvp-comment-226-1 τὰ δείν᾽ . . ἔπη] 'Those dreadful words,' which I remember so vividly. Cp. Ant. 408, τὰ δείν᾽ ἐκεῖν᾽ ἐπηπειλημένοι. Not merely, 'Words that are dreadful.'
313. mvp-comment-227-1 φανοίην] Fut. opt. Ajax' words were εἰ μὴ φανεῖς.
314. mvp-comment-228-1 ἐν τῷ πράγματος] Cp. Trach. 375, ποῦ ποτ᾽ εἰμὶ πράγματος;
315. mvp-comment-229-1 δείσασα,] 'Being overcome with fear.' As the deprecating φίλοι shows, Tecmessa is excusing herself to the chorus for having told Ajax, under the influence of his threats, that which only plunged him into fresh sorrow. For the participle thus used without an express object, cp. Ant. 1005, δείσας δ' εὐθὺς ἐμπύρων ἐγευόμην. Hermann punctuates as in the text. Others join δείσασα τοὐξειργασμένον, which is less simple.
316. mvp-comment-230-1 ὅσονπερ ἐξηπιστάμην] For this limitation, cp. supr. 295, καὶ τὰς ἐκεῖ μὲν οὐκ ἔχω λέξαι πάθας.
319-320. mvp-comment-231-1 (1) 'He used to teach us that such complainings indicated a degraded and leaden soul.' The infinitive is added epexegetically to complete the abrupt expression ἐξηγεῖτο τοὺς τοιούσδε γόους πρὸς βαρυψύχου ἀνδρός. For ἔχειν, sc. τοὺς τοιούσδε γόους, cp. Il. 18. 495, αὐλοὶ φόρμιγγές τε βοὴν ἔχον. (2) But an inf. after ἐξηγεῖτο is rather required: cp. Aesch. Eum. 595, ὁ μάντις ἐξηγεῖτό σοι μητροκτονεῖν. Can ἔχειν with the adverbial phrase πρὸς... ἀνδρός be used intransitively (= 'proceed from') ( εἶναι appears as a gloss), or should ἄγειν be read, 'He taught us to esteem'? Cp. Ant. 34, καὶ τὸ πρᾶγμ᾽ ἄγειν | οὐχ ὡς παρ᾿ οὐδέν. For βαρυψύχου it is possible that βραχυψύχου ought to be read.
321. mvp-comment-232-1 ἀλλ᾽ ἀψόφητος, κ.τ.λ.] ἀλλά opposes what follows to the general sense of what precedes. ἀψόφητος ὀξέων κωκυμάτων] ‘Uttering no sound of shrill lamentation.'
322. mvp-comment-233-1 'He breathed deep groans like a lowing bull.' ὑπὸ in comp. implies 'not loud, but deep.'
323. mvp-comment-234-1 νῦν δ'] At first he uttered shrill lamentings, unlike the deep mutterings which before expressed his discontent. 'But now' he is silent. κείμενος] 'Prostrate.' Cp. supr. 207, infr. 427.
325. mvp-comment-235-1 ἥσυχος] « Without sound or motion.' The quietness of Ajax' present mood is ominous. This description prepares the spectator for what he is to see infr. 346.
327. mvp-comment-236-1 τοιαῦτα] Sc. ὥς τι δρασείων κακόν. Tecmessa already apprehends the danger of suicide.
329. mvp-comment-237-1 εἰσελθόντες] When Ajax is discovered by the ἐκκύκλημα, infr. 346, this is equivalent to the scene being changed to within the hut.
330. mvp-comment-238-1 οἱ τοιοίδε] · Men in such mood;' i. e. gloomily bent on self-destruction. λόγοις] This word, to be joined with φίλων, is restored from the quotation of Stobaeus. The reading of the MSS. is hardly possible. λόγοις may have been lost from its similarity to λέγεις in the termination of the next line, and φίλοι may have been added to supply the gap.
331. mvp-comment-239-1 On the order, see Essay on L. § 41. p. 77.
332. mvp-comment-240-1 'That our hero is frenzied with his trouble.' The mariners apprehend that the madness of Ajax is in some way connected with his disappointment. Cp. infr. 925-32. ἡμῖν is dative of the person interested. See Essay on L. § 13. p. 19 f, and cp. supr. 216, ἡμὶν ὁ κλεινὸς | Αἴας ἀπελωβήθη: infr. 733, ἀλλ᾽ ἡμὶν Αἴας ποῦ ᾿στιν, ὡς φράσω τάδε ; κακοῖς] Supr. 275, infr. 532.
333. mvp-comment-241-1 The voice of Ajax is heard from within.
334. mvp-comment-242-1 μᾶλλον] Sc. δεινά σοι λέξω, or γνώσεσθε ταῦτα.
335. mvp-comment-243-1 οἵαν] She judges from the intonation of the cry, which the chorus, infr. 337, do not know whether to interpret as importing madness or grief.
337. mvp-comment-244-1 ἢ τοῖς . . παρών] 'Or to grieve at witnessing the effects of past madness which remain with him.' Cp. supr. 307. The addition of παρών suggests that Ajax, seeing the carnage in the tent, is the eye-witness of his own madness.
339. mvp-comment-245-1 Ajax calls upon Teucer. παῖ is frequently addressed by an elder person to a younger, even by the Corinthian messenger to Oedipus, O. Τ. 1008, and by Electra (under excitement) to the supposed Phocian stranger, El. 1220. The picture in the Iliad, 8. 271, of Teucer retiring behind the shield of Ajax, παῖς ὡς ὑπὸ μητέρα, suggests that Teucer was the younger brother. And it is natural to suppose Ajax to have been born before Telamon's expedition in which he won Hesione, the mother of Teucer.-According to Pindar in the fifth (or sixth) Isthmian ode, Ajax was given to Telamon in answer to the prayer of Heracles before the expedition. But in such details the legends are not constant. See O. C. 375, and note. Lycophr. 445 and schol. -The need of Teucer's presence is Ajax' first thought on coming to himself. Tecmessa at first thinks of the child, until, in l. 342, Ajax calls Teucer by name. He does not ask to see the child till l.530, after his attention has been vividly drawn that way by Tecmessa.
341. mvp-comment-246-1 τάλαιν᾽ ἐγώ] Tecmessa is distracted between the fear of crossing Ajax and the fear of harm to the child. The division of the line helps to mark this distraction of the wife and mother.
343. mvp-comment-247-1 λεηλατήσει] Teucer is gone foraging into the Mysian highlands, infr. 720. Compare Thuc. 1. 11, φαίνεται .. πρὸς γεωργίαν τῆς · Χερσονήσου τραπόμενοι καὶ λῃστείαν τῆς τροφῆς ἀπορίᾳ. ἐγὼ δ'] · While that I.'
345. mvp-comment-248-1 κἀπ᾿ ἐμοὶ βλέψας] ‘Even at me, on seeing me.' The abrupt expression, αἰδῶ λαβεῖν ἐπί τινι, is supplemented by the addition of the participle, i.e. εἰς ἐμὲ βλέψας. αἰδώς is the feeling which prompts σωφροσύνη.
346. mvp-comment-249-1 ἐκκύκλημα. Ajax is disclosed with signs of slaughter about him. He is sitting upright. The slaughtered sheep are the evidence of his situation ( τὰ τοῦδε πράγη): his wild, dishevelled appearance betrays the condition of his mind ( αὐτὸς ὡς ἔχων κυρεῖ).
348. mvp-comment-250-1 The lyrical numbers of this commos are chiefly dochmiac, mixed with iambic and trochaic rhythms, which increase in the third strophe and antistrophe. The scheme is the following...
348. mvp-comment-250-2 The arrangement of the latter part of γ' is rendered doubtful by the manifest corruption of ll. 406, 7. Perhaps- εἰ τἀμὰ μὲν φθίνει, φίλοι, πάλαι· μώραις δ᾽ ἄγραισι ταῖσδ᾽ ὁμοῦ προσκείμεθα. And in the antistrophe, 424, 5, τύδ᾽ ἐξερῶ μέγ᾽ οἷον οὔτινα Τροία στρατοῦ δέρχθη χθονὸς μολόντ' ἀπό. Or, reading τάδε for τά, and omitting τοῖσδ᾽ ὁμοῦ, στρατοῦ, and ἀπό, - εἰ τάδε μὲν φθίνει, φίλοι, πάλαι· μώραις δ᾽ ἄγραις προσκείμεθα, | πᾶς.
348. mvp-comment-250-3 and- ἐξερέω μέγ', οἷον οὔτινα Τροία χθονὸς δέρχθη μολόνθ' | Ἑλ.. See note on 405 foll.
348. mvp-comment-250-4 Ajax at once perceives the mariners. 'The great rage, you see, is killed in him,' but the ground-swell of his passion is still heard.
349. mvp-comment-251-1 μόνοι ἐμῶν φίλων] Sc. παρόντες, or some such word, which is expanded in what follows.
350. mvp-comment-252-1 ὀρθῷ νόμῳ] Sc. τῷ τῆς φιλίας.
351. mvp-comment-253-1 ἴδεσθέ μ᾽ οἷον, κ.τ.λ.] με is to be taken (1) after ἴδεσθε, and (2) after ἀμφίδρομον κυκλεῖται, the latter being a picturesque expansion of ἀμφικυκλεῖται. φοινίας ὑπὸ ζάλης] 'Lashed by a cruel storm.' ζάλη is a squall accompanied with rain or hail. The surge surrounding Ajax is the heap of mangled victims, together with the horror which they symbolize. For the boldness of this image, cp. El. 733, κλύδων᾿ ἔφιππον ἐν μέσῳ κυκώμενον.