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L'imitation d'une action, c'eſt proprement la fable, car j'appelle fable, la compoſition des choſes.

Poetics. Aristote. Paris. 1692.

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The imitation of the action is the FABLE: for by fable I now mean the contexture of incidents, or the plot. By manners, I mean, whatever marks the characters of the persons. By sentiments 1 , whatever they say, whether proving anything, or delivering a general sentiment, &c.
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The fable (I mean by the fable the combination of the incidents,) comprehends the imitation of the action; the manners enable us to decide on the characters of those who act; and the sentiments discover the intention or opinion of those who speak.
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for I mean by a fable here, the composition of incidents. By manners, I mean those things according to which we say that agents are persons of a certain character; and by sentiment, that through which those who speak demonstrate any thing, or explain their meaning. 1
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Commentary

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τῆς μὲν πράξεως ὁ μῦθος ἡ μίμησις To complete the statement Aristotle might very well have added a clause like
τῶν δὲ πραττόντων τὰ ἤθη καὶ αἱ διάνοιαι
; and it has been suggested ( J. of Phil. 5 p. 119 ) that these words or something equivalent must have dropped out.
In a context like the present, however, this second point may have been left to be mentally supplied by the reader (comp. Vahlen ad loc.), as the emphatic mention of the first point ( τῆς μὲν πράξεως κτέ.) is enough to suggest it (comp. De interpr. 14, 23 b 30 , and Waitz ad loc.). For this use of μέν solitarium comp. 26, 1462 b 5 , and Waitz on An. pr. 2. 11, 61 b 19 .

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1450a4 τοῦτον (= τοῦτο) is preparative and explained by τὴν σύνθεσιν τῶν πραγμάτων. The assimilation of gender has been a stumbling-block to Madius and others, though found again in 22, 1458 a 26
αἰνίγματός τε γὰρ ἰδέα αὕτη ἐστί, τὸ λέγοντα ὑπάρχοντα ἀδύνατα συνάψαι
(comp. Kühner, Gr. Gr. 2. 1 p. 74 ).

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1450a6 διάνοιαν scil. εἶναι λέγω. Instead of attempting a definition, Aristotle evades the difficulty by saying that διάνοια is manifested in the argumentative and reflective utterances of the dramatis personae (comp. infra b 11 ). The statement here is merely provisional, as one may see by comparing the fuller exposition in 19, 1456 a 34 — b 8 —where we are told among other things that the διάνοια of a personage may be shown in his actions as well as in his words. Διάνοια in the sense it bears in the Poetics is, like ἦθος, an element in the personality of the dramatis personae. It is their intellectual capacity, as evinced in their language (or it may be, in their actions), and it is to be seen whenever they argue or make an appeal to the feelings of their hearers, in other words, when they reason or plead with one of the other dramatis personae in the same sort of way as a rhetor might do. Hence it is that the general theory of the διάνοια in a play is said ( 19, 1456 a 34 ) to belong to Rhetoric rather than Poetry; and a speech with a great display of διάνοια in it is a rhetorical speech (v. on b 6 ). The term answering to Aristotle's διάνοια in Isocrates is ἐνθυμήματα, 'arguments': Isocr. 191 B
μετὰ μέτρων καὶ ῥυθμῶν ἅπαντα ποιοῦσιν . . . τοσαύτην ἔχει χάριν, ὥστ᾿ ἂν καὶ τῇ λέξει καὶ τοῖς ἐνθυμήμασιν . . . ἔχῃ κακῶς, ὅμως αὐταῖς ταῖς εὐρυθμίαις καὶ ταῖς συμμετρίαις ψυχαγωγοῦσι τοὺς ἀκούοντας
. — 319 D
καὶ γὰρ τῇ λέξει ποιητικωτέρᾳ καὶ ποικιλωτέρᾳ τὰς πράξεις δηλοῦσι, καὶ τοῖς ἐνθυμήμασιν ὀγκωδεστέροις καὶ καινοτέροις χρῆσθαι ζητοῦσιν
.

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λέγοντες : comp. b 6
ἐπὶ τῶν λόγων
, and b 7
πολιτικῶς ἐποίουν λέγοντας
. Aristotle is thinking more immediately of the ῥήσεις in a tragedy, and of the intellectual, i. e. the rhetorical or argumentative, capacity they may reveal in the personages.

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1450a7 ἀποδεικνύασίν τι :
ἀποδεικνύουσί τι ὡς ἔστιν ἢ ὡς οὐκ ἔστιν
. — 19, 1456 a 37
τό τε ἀποδεικνύναι καὶ τὸ λύειν
. — Rhet. 1. 1, 1355 a 5
ἡ δὲ πίστις ἀπόδειξίς τις· τότε γὰρ πιστεύομεν μάλιστα ὅταν ἀποδεδεῖχθαι ὑπολάβωμεν
.

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ἢ καὶ ἀποφαίνονται γνώμην The equivalent in b 12 is the more general expression,
καθόλου τι ἀποφαίνονται
, but it is hardly worth while to bring the two passages into unison by restoring here (with Bernays, Zwei Abhandl. p. 155 ) ἢ καθόλου ἀποφαίνονται, on the assumption that γνώμην may have come in as a gloss.
A γνώμη as defined in the Rhetoric is a maxim, or general proposition relating to the conduct of life: Rhet. 2. 21, 1394 a 21
ἔστι δὲ γνώμη ἀπόφανσις, οὐ μέντοι περὶ τῶν καθ᾿ ἕκαστον, οἷον ποιός τις Ιφικράτης, ἀλλὰ καθόλου· καὶ οὐ περὶ πάντων καθόλου, οἷον ὅτι τὸ εὐθὺ τῷ καμπύλῳ ἐναντίον, ἀλλὰ περὶ ὅσων αἱ πράξεις εἰσί, καὶ αἱρετὰ ἢ φευκτά ἐστι πρὸς τὸ πράττειν
.
The corresponding Latin term was sententia: Quintilian 8. 5. 3
Antiquissimae sunt quae proprie . . . sententiae vocantur, quas Graeci γνώμας appellant: utrumque autem nomen ex eo acceperunt, quod similes sunt consiliis aut decretis
.
1450a8

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μέρη εἶναι ἕξ An answer to the question announced in 1, 1447 a 10
ἐκ πόσων καὶ ποίων ἐστὶ μορίων
.

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καθ᾿ ὃ ποιά τις ἐστὶν ἡ τραγῳδία The word μέρος being ambiguous ( Metaph. Δ 25, 1023 b 12 ; Ζ 10, 1034 b 32 ), this clause had to be added to mark the distinction between the 'parts' at present under consideration and those to be enumerated hereafter in chap. 12. The parts here described are the formative constituents of a tragedy; whereas those defined in chap. 12 are the sections into which it is divided. It is through these various formative constituents that we are able to speak of a tragedy as ποία τις—as good or bad, as ἠθική or πεπλεγμένη or παθητική, or whatever else it may be said to be, when we come to judge of its quality.
1450a12

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οὐκ ὀλίγοι αὐτῶν =
οὐκ ὀλίγοι τῶν ποιητῶν
. The ὡς εἰπεῖν which follows should perhaps be transposed and inserted after πᾶν in the next line.
Of the many emendations that have been propounded the simplest certainly is that of Bursian, οὐκ ὀλίγοι αὐτῶν 〈ἀλλὰ πάντες〉, on which that formerly suggested by myself, ὀλίγου αὐτῶν 〈ἅπαντες〉 ( J. of Phil. 14 p. 44 ), was based. οὐκ ὀλίγοι αὐτῶν, however, has on it a certain stamp of genuineness. The sense seems to be this: The six parts are in the nature of things possible elements in every tragedy, so to say; and due use has been made of them by not a few of the poets. The statement may be compared with those in a 25 , 36, and 18, 1456 a 3 , where the existence is recognized of plays weak or deficient in some of the parts. For the sense of ἔχει in this passage (='admits of', 'has in it the possibility of') comp. 2, 1448 a 7 ; and for the distinction between it and κέχρηνται, Eth. N. 7. 4, 1146 b 32
ὁ ἔχων μὲν οὐ χρώμενος δὲ τῇ ἐπιστήμῃ
. — 1147 a 1
ἔχοντα μὲν ἀμφοτέρας [scil. τὰς προτάσεις] οὐδὲν κωλύει πράττειν παρὰ τὴν ἐπιστήμην, χρώμενον μέντοι τῇ καθόλου ἀλλὰ μὴ τῇ κατὰ μέρος
(comp. Bon. Ind. 854 b 37 ).

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1450a13 εἴδεσι : see on 4, 1449 a 7 .

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ὄψεις : see on 6, 1449 b 33 .

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πᾶν , i. e. every play; comp. 12, 1452 a 18
ἁπάντων
. — 18, 1456 a 31
ἐξ ἄλλου εἰς ἄλλο
.
1450a15

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μέγιστον κτέ. Aristotle proceeds at this point to arrange the six elements in the order of their relative importances; and he begins by asserting, with an abundance of reasons which seems to imply that it was a subject of controversy at the time, the supreme importance of the μῦθος. As it is the first duty of a tragedy to represent an action, the μῦθος or story of action in it must be the first and most essential element in its construction. The characters, i.e. the personal agents, are mainly required in order to work out the story, and as means to that end; so that this element is to be deemed of secondary and subordinate significance as compared with the μῦθος. The paramount importance of plot in Drama has been re-asserted with equal emphasis in our own time by an eminent living dramatist: 'The idea, the plot, always comes first. The plot, in a sense, is nine-tenths of a play' ( H. A. Jones, Strand Magazine 34 p. 379 ).

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ἡ τῶν πραγμάτων σύστασις = ὁ μῦθος. As the action in a tragedy is a whole of some magnitude (comp. 4, 1449 a 19 ; 6, 1449 b 25 ), it must have a plurality of incidents ( πράγματα) embodied in it. What Aristotle means by a combination of incidents may be seen from his synopses of the Iphigenia and Odyssey in 17, 1455 b 2 sqq. .

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1450a17 βίου : Plato Laws 817 B
ἡμεῖς ἐσμὲν τραγῳδίας αὐτοὶ ποιηταὶ κατὰ δύναμιν ὅτι καλλίστης ἅμα καὶ ἀρίστης· πᾶσα οὖν [? γοῦν] ἡμῖν ἡ πολιτεία ξυνέστηκε μίμησις τοῦ καλλίστου καὶ ἀρίστου βίου, ὃ δή φαμεν ἡμεῖς γε ὄντως εἶναι τραγῳδίαν τὴν ἀληθεστάτην
. — Lycurgus in Leocr. 102
οἱ ποιηταὶ μιμούμενοι τὸν ἀνθρώπινον βίον
. Alcidamas described the Odyssey as a
καλὸν ἀνθρωπίνου βίου κάτοπτρον
( Aristot. Rhet. 3. 3, 1406 b 12 ). Of Menander also it was said:
Μένανδρε καὶ βίε, πότερος ἄρ᾿ ὑμῶν πότερον ἀπεμιμήσατο;
( Nauck, Aristophanis Byz. Fragm. p. 249 ).

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καὶ εὐδαιμονίας : Plato Rep. 603 C
πράττοντας, φαμέν, ἀνθρώπους μιμεῖται ἡ μιμητικὴ βιαίους ἢ ἑκουσίας πράξεις καὶ ἐκ τοῦ πράττειν ἢ εὖ οἰομένους ἢ κακῶς πεπραγέναι
.

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1450a18 ἐν πράξει According to the definition in Eth. N. 1. 6, 1098 a 16 happiness is a certain kind of activity, a
ψυχῆς ἐνέργεια κατ᾿ ἀρετήν
. Comp. Phys. 2. 6, 197 b 4
ἡ δὲ εὐδαιμονία πρᾶξίς τις· εὐπραξία γάρ
. — Pol. 7. 3, 1325 a 32
ἡ γὰρ εὐδαιμονία πρᾶξίς ἐστιν
(also Eth. N. 1. 8, 1098 b 21 ; Rhet. 1. 5, 1360 b 14 ).

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τὸ τέλος : Eth. N. 1. 8, 1098 b 18
πράξεις τινὲς λέγονται καὶ ἐνέργειαι τὸ τέλος
.

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οὐ ποιότης : Eth. N. 10. 2, 1173 a 14
οὐδὲ γὰρ αἱ τῆς ἀρετῆς ἐνέργειαι ποιότητές εἰσιν, οὐδ᾿ ἡ εὐδαιμονία
.
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πράττουσι scil. οἱ μιμούμενοι. The reference is to the actors (see on 3, 1448 a 23 ) rather than the poets.

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συμπεριλαμβάνουσιν scil. ἐν τῇ μιμήσει, 'they include in the representation'; συμπεριλαμβάνειν in this sense is not infrequent in later Greek (v. HSt. s. v. ). It is hardly necessary, therefore, to reject it for the reading of one of the apographs, συμπαραλαμβάνουσιν, though it is no doubt quite true that manuscripts are apt to confuse the two prepositions.

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1450a22 διὰ τὰς πράξεις διά in this connexion must mean 'with a view to', 'for the sake of', as in Thuc. 2. 89. 4
διὰ τὴν σφετέραν δόξαν
.

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καὶ ὁ μῦθος The καί is explanatory, 'that is to say'.

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1450a23 τὸ δὲ τέλος μέγιστον ἁπάντων modelled on the proverb in Plato Rep. 377 A
ἀρχὴ παντὸς ἔργου μέγιστον
, which reappears in Aristotle Soph. el. 33, 183 b 22
μέγιστον γὰρ ἴσως ἀρχὴ παντός, ὥσπερ λέγεται
. — Probl. 10. 13, 892 a 29
ἡ μὲν γὰρ ἀρχὴ παντὸς ἔργου μέγιστον· ἥμισυ γάρ
.
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τῶν νέων As it is clear from 14, 1453 b 28 that Euripides is not classed among the old poets ( οἱ παλαιοί), οἱ νέοι, 'the moderns,' must mean the poets from Euripides downwards. It is to be observed also that, when Aristotle a little further on in this chapter distinguishes between οἱ ἀρχαῖοι and οἱ νῦν, the point noted as characteristic of 'the moderns' ( ῥητορικῶς ποιοῦσι λέγοντας) is manifestly true of Euripides, and was recognized as true of him by the ancients themselves (see on ῥητορικῶς, b 8 ).

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ἀήθεις : 24, 1460 a 11
οὐδέν᾿ ἀήθη ἀλλ᾿ ἔχοντα ἤθη
. ἀήθης is, like other compounds of α privativum ( De anima 2. 10, 427 a 26 ; Metaph. Δ 22, 1022 b 32 ), an ambiguous word, as it may mean either 'destitute of character', or merely 'deficient in character'.
Aristotle must be using it in this latter sense, since a play with personages wholly destitute of character is hardly conceivable. The language in the illustration which follows from painting,
οὐδὲν ἔχει ἦθος
, is an instance of a common form of exaggeration, just like that in the saying of Pope,
Most women have no characters at all
.

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1450a26 τοιοῦτοι i. e. ἀήθεις.

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οἷον καὶ τῶν γραφέων Ζεῦξις πρὸς Πολύγνωτον πέπονθεν : De gen. an. 5. 3, 783 a 6
ἔστι δ᾿ ἔνια τῶν ζῴων . . . μαλακὴν μὲν ἔχει τὴν τρίχα ἧττον δὲ λεπτήν, οἷον τὸ τῶν δασυπόδων πρὸς τὸ τῶν προβάτων πέπονθεν
. — Rhet. 3. 2, 1404 b 22
οἷον ἡ Θεοδώρου φωνὴ πέπονθε πρὸς τὴν τῶν ἄλλων ὑποκριτῶν
.

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γραφέων For other illustrations from painting see on 2, 1448 a 5 .

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1450a27 Πολύγνωτον The same view of him, as one who knew how to indicate character in painting, is implied in Pol. 8. 5, 1340 a 37
τὰ Πολυγνώτου κἂν εἴ τις ἄλλος τῶν γραφέων ἢ τῶν ἀγαλματοποιῶν ἐστιν ἠθικός
.

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1450a28 Ζεύξιδος This taken in connexion with what is said of him later on, in 25, 1461 b 12 , would seem to show that, in Aristotle's view, Zeuxis sacrificed expression to beauty.
1450a29

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ῥήσεις i. e. the speeches put into the mouths of the personages in a play or poem (comp. 15, 1454 a 31 ; 18, 1450 b 31 ). The word had been already used in this technical sense by both Plato and Aristophanes.

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ἠθικάς In the Rhetoric the ἠθικὸς λόγος is one designed to create a favourable idea of the speaker's ἦθος, in contradistinction to the παθητικὸς λόγος, which addresses the feelings, and the ἀποδεικτικὸς λόγος, which addresses the reason of his audience. In matters of imitative art, however, the usual meaning of ἠθικός is μιμητικὸς ἤθους, 'expressive of character' (comp. Bon. Ind. 315 b 21 )—which is the sense the word has in the present and other passages in the Poetics. Thus in 18, 1456 a 1 a certain kind of tragedy is termed the ἠθική τραγῳδία, 'the tragedy of character', because its main interest is as a portraiture of character; in 23, 1459 b 16 the Odyssey is described as ἠθική, because it is more of a portraiture of character than the Iliad; in 24, 1460 b 3 certain passages in a poem are termed ἠθικά μέρη, as serving to bring out the ἦθος of the personages in the story.

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λέξει καὶ διανοίᾳ εὖ πεποιημένας , 'made perfect in the matter of language and thought'. The same use of the dative is found in a 36
τῇ λέξει καὶ τοῖς ἤθεσιν ἀκριβοῦν
. — 24, 1460 b 2
τῇ δὲ λέξει δεῖ διαπονεῖν
; and in Alcidamas De soph. 12
οἱ τοῖς ὀνόμασιν ἀκριβῶς ἐξειργασμένοι [scil. λόγοι].

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1450a30 οὔπω ποιήσει ὃ ἦν τῆς τραγῳδίας ἔργον : Rhet. 3. 2, 1404 b 2
ὁ λόγος, ἐὰν μὴ δηλοῖ, οὐ ποιήσει τὸ ἑαυτοῦ ἔργον
. The Arabic version seems to suggest οὔπω (see on 9, 1451 b 13 ) rather than οὐ. For the fut. with οὔπω comp. Eth. N. 5. 10, 1135 a 22
ὥστε ἔσται τι ἄδικον μὲν ἀδίκημα δὲ οὔπω, ἐὰν μὴ τὸ ἑκούσιον προσῇ
. — 6. 13, 1144 a 35
ὥστε τὴν μὲν ἤδη τὴν δ᾿ οὔπω εἰληφὼς ἔσται
.
The imperfect in ἦν τῆς τραγῳδίας ἔργον implies that the point has been already settled in the preceding discussion (comp. Bon. Ind. 754 a 40 ), the reference being presumably to 6, 1449 b 36 , where Tragedy is said to be a μίμησις πράξεως.

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1450a31 ἀλλὰ πολὺ μᾶλλον scil. ποιήσει, as in Eth. N. 6. 8, 1141 b 18
εἰ γὰρ εἰδείη ὅτι τὰ κοῦφα εὔπεπτα κρέα καὶ ὑγιεινά, ποῖα δὲ κοῦφα ἀγνοοῖ, οὐ ποιήσει ὑγίειαν, ἀλλ᾿ ὁ εἰδὼς ὅτι τὰ ὀρνίθεια [κοῦφα καὶ] ὑγιεινὰ ποιήσει μᾶλλον
. For the form of antithesis comp. De caelo 2. 3, 286 a 5
πόρρω δ᾿ οὐχ οὕτω τῷ τόπῳ, πολὺ δὲ μᾶλλον τῷ ... ὀλίγην ἔχειν αἴσθησιν
, and the instances collected by Vahlen (ad loc.) and Schwab (Schanz's Beiträge 4. 1, p. 66).

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τούτοις refers back to the ῥήσεις ἠθικαὶ καὶ λέξει καὶ διανοίᾳ εὖ πεποιημέναι of 29. Aristotle's point is, that the dramatic effectiveness of a tragedy depends before all else on its plot, and that no literary or rhetorical brilliancy will make up for a weak plot.
1450a33

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ψυχαγωγεῖ comp. b 17
ψυχαγωγικόν
. Said of a work of art the word means no more than to 'move' or 'rivet the attention', and is thus the equivalent of our word 'attract' or (as people now sometimes say) 'fascinate'.
This sense of ψυχαγωγεῖν is as old as Xenophon: Mem. 3. 10. 6
ὃ δὲ μάλιστα ψυχαγωγεῖ διὰ τῆς ὄψεως τοὺς ἀνθρώπους, τὸ ζωτικὸν φαίνεσθαι, πῶς τοῦτο ἐνεργάζῃ τοῖς ἀνδριασιν;
. It is found more than once in Isocrates: 24 D
δέδεικται τοῖς ἐπιθυμοῦσι τοὺς ἀκροωμένους ψυχαγωγεῖν ὅτι τοῦ μὲν νουθετεῖν καὶ συμβουλεύειν ἀφεκτέον, τὰ δὲ τοιαῦτα λεκτέον οἷς ὁρῶσι τοὺς ὄχλους μάλιστα χαίροντας
. — 191 A
τοσαύτην ἔχει χάριν, ὥστ᾿ ἂν καὶ τῇ λέξει καὶ τοῖς ἐνθυμήμασιν ἔχῃ κακῶς, ὅμως αὐταῖς ταῖς εὐρυθμίαις καὶ ταῖς συμμετρίαις ψυχαγωγοῦσι τοὺς ἀκούοντας
. Later writers also often use the word in the sense of to 'attract' or 'please'; comp. the Antiatticista in Bekker's Anecdota 116
ψυχαγωγεῖν: τὸ τέρπειν
, and Vahlen, Symb. Phil. Bonn. p. 168.

17. mvp-aristotle-comment-258

1450a34 αἵ τε περιπέτειαι καὶ ἀναγνωρίσεις These are considered later on in chap. 11 . It will be observed that Aristotle uses the two terms without explanation, as though they were already part of the established language of the theatre. The appositional clause comes in as an afterthought, at some distance from the words it illustrates (comp. Kühner, Gr. Gr. 2. 1 p. 282 ).
1450a37

18. mvp-aristotle-comment-259

συνίστασθαι is apparently a middle in 24, 1460 a 34 also (v. ad loc.).

18. mvp-aristotle-comment-260

οἷον καὶ introduces not an instance but a parallel from a different class of things just like ὥσπερ καὶ, from which it is often hardly distinguishable in sense (comp. Top. 6. 9, 148 a 4 ; Eth. N. 9. 1, 1164 a 15 ; Rhet. 3. 11, 1412 a 11 ; 3. 12, 1413 b 25 ) . In De mem. 1, 450 b 20 and in Plato Phaedr. 255 C
οἷον
is so completely equivalent to ὥσπερ as to have a οὕτως as its antecedent. In Poet. 25, 1460 b 33
οἷον ... ταύτῃ
is practically the same thing as ὥσπερ ... οὕτως.
1450a38

19. mvp-aristotle-comment-261

ἀρχὴ A little before this the μῦθος was said to be the τέλος τῆς τραγῳδίας (a 22). From one point of view it is the ἀρχή, as being the necessary basis of every tragedy; from another it is the τέλος, because it is this much more than the characters that Tragedy
μίμησις πράξεως
has to represent.

19. mvp-aristotle-comment-262

ψυχὴ : Isocrates 142 B
ἔστι γὰρ ψυχὴ πόλεως οὐδὲν ἕτερον ἢ πολιτεία
. — 261 B
πᾶσα πολιτεία ψυχὴ πόλεώς ἐστιν
. — [Demosthenes] 60. 23
ἡ τῶνδε τῶν ἀνδρῶν ἀρετὴ τῆς Ἑλλάδος ἦν ψυχὴ τἀληθὲς εἰπεῖν
— Martianus Capella 3, 268
Est accentus, ut quidam putaverunt, anima vocis
.
1450a39

20. mvp-aristotle-comment-263

παραπλήσιον κτέ. This clause Castelvetro and others would transpose and insert after σύστασιν πραγμάτων in 33. It comes in, however, naturally enough where it stands, as an afterthought to illustrate the secondary position ( δεύτερον δὲ τὰ ἤθη) of the element of character in a play. So also in the sister art of painting, says Aristotle, the colouring is of subordinate importance in comparison with the design which makes the work to mean something and be like something; a portrait is a portrait, and will give us the pleasure of one, even though executed in mere whites and greys; whereas a medley of much more beautiful colours without a design to give them meaning will not produce the same pleasure, because we cannot see that it represents anything. The nature of the pleasure found in a work of imitative art was explained in 4, 1448 b 13 .

20. mvp-aristotle-comment-264

1450b1 εἰ γάρ τις ἐναλείψειε κτέ. The sense is thus given by Goulston:
'si quis tabulam, pigmentis licet pulcherrimis, temere fusimque illeverit; non perinde spectantem oblectet, ac si, albo licet colore, imaginem delinearet certam: pari modo in tragoediis absque constitutione rerum minus valent mores quam morum expers fabula.'
.
The object left to be understood with ἐναλείψειε is τὸν πίνακα, the 'panel' or 'canvas', as we should say; ἀλείφειν and ἐπαλείφειν are used in just the same way, in the sense of covering a surface with colour. ἐναλείφειν, it is to be observed, has apparently a different kind of object in De gen. an. 2. 6, 743 b 23
οἱ γραφεῖς ὑπογράψαντες ταῖς γραμμαῖς οὕτως ἐναλείφουσι τοῖς χρώμασι τὸ ζῷον
('painters first sketch the outline of the figure before proceeding to work it out in colour'). χύδην means 'without system or order', i.e. without a design to give form and sense to the whole.
The direct opposite of this unmeaning medley of the most beautiful colours ( εἴ τις ἐναλείψειε τοῖς καλλίστοις φαρμάκοις χύδην) is a portrait in plain whites and greys ( λευκογραφήσας εἰκόνα); in what follows, therefore, εἰκόνα serves as an antithesis to χύδην (comp. Vahlen, Symb. Phil. Bonn. p. 166) and λευκογραφήσας to τοῖς καλλίστοις φαρμάκοις. λευκογραφεῖν, as a derivative from λευκογράφος (a word no longer to be found), is to 'paint monochromes in white', i.e. in shades of white and grey (it would seem) on a dark ground. Zeuxis, whom Aristotle has just mentioned in 27, was among other things a painter of monochromes in white—
pinxit et monochromata ex albo
( Pliny N. H. 35. 64 ; comp. Brunn, Gr. Künstler 2 p. 55 ).
A portrait, however, even though it be a mere monochrome in whites (comp. λευκογραφήσας εἰκόνα), will have a meaning, and give the mind the intellectual pleasure which accompanies the recognition of the meaning (comp. 4, 1448 b 15 ); whereas a medley of beautiful colours has no meaning, and the pleasure it gives the beholder is of a wholly different order (comp. 4, 1448 b 18
οὐχ ᾗ μίμημα ποιήσει τὴν ἡδονὴν ἀλλὰ διὰ ... τὴν χροιάν
). The antithesis, therefore, is simply between beautiful colours without an εἰκών, and an εἰκών without any beauty of colour.
Vahlen's view of the import of these words is somewhat different. He thinks that λευκογραφήσας may denote the preliminary sketch (like ὑπογράφειν in the above-quoted passage in the De gen. an.) in white, which is afterwards filled in with colour, when the picture comes to be finished; so that the clause may be taken to describe two stages in the process of painting, (1) λευκογραφεῖν εἰκόνα, and (2) ἐναλείφειν φαρμάκοις, and serves to illustrate the order of procedure in Tragedy, where the μῦθος is said to come first, as the ἀρχὴ τῆς τραγῳδίας, and the ἤθη second:
'orationis formam sic accipio, εἴ τις ἐναλείψειε τοῖς καλλίστοις φαρμάκοις χύδην, οὐκ ἂν ὁμοίως εὐφράνειεν καὶ λευκογραφήσας εἰκόνα εἰ ἐναλείψειε φαρμάκοις', ut χύδην, h. e. nulla ante delineatione facta, et λευκογραφήσας εἰκόνα inter se opponantur'
. This very subtle interpretation seems to me to read more into Aristotle's words than is required for the argument. Aristotle would perhaps have said: οὐκ ἂν ὁμοίως εὐφράνειε καὶ εἰ λευκογραφήσας εἰκόνα οὕτως ἐναλείψειε τοῖς φαρμάκοις.
1450b3

21. mvp-aristotle-comment-265

ἔστιν τε μίμησις πράξεως κτέ. supports the statement (38-39) before the parenthesis by recalling the general fact on which it is based (v. 20-23).
1450b4

22. mvp-aristotle-comment-266

τρίτον δὲ ἡ διάνοια As the intellectual quality of the dramatis personae comes out mainly in what they are made to say, διάνοια is provisionally explained (see on 6) as a power of making the best of one's case or of saying the right thing.

22. mvp-aristotle-comment-267

1450b5 τὰ ἐνόντα scil. ἐν τοῖς πράγμασιν, as in Isocr. 292 E
ὑπισχνοῦνται τοιούτους ῥήτορας τοὺς συνόντας ποιήσειν ὥστε μηδὲν τῶν ἐνόντων ἐν τοῖς πράγμασι παραλιπεῖν
(comp. Bon. Ind. 250 a 56 ). The whole expression τὰ ἐνόντα καὶ τὰ ἁρμόττοντα covers the same ground as that in Rhet. 2. 22, 1396 b 5
τὰ ἐνδεχόμενα καὶ τὰ ἐπικαιρότατα
.

22. mvp-aristotle-comment-268

1450b6 ἐπὶ τῶν λόγων has been taken to mean 'in soluta oratione' (Paccius), and 'in orationibus' (Valla) or 'in eloquentia', 'bei der Beredsamkeit' (Vahlen). The explanation, however, in the context, ἐποίουν λέγοντας (57), is enough to show that the λόγοι Aristotle has in mind are the λόγοι in a play, i.e. the ῥήσεις put into the mouths of the personages. This is apparently the sense the word bears in the next sentence also,
τῶν λόγων ἐν οἷς μηδ᾿ ὅλως ἔστιν τι προαιρεῖται ἢ φεύγει ὁ λέγων
(b 9).

22. mvp-aristotle-comment-269

τῆς πολιτικῆς καὶ ῥητορικῆς ἔργον Aristotle seems to be thinking of what is said in a play by the chief personages (e. g. the tragic hero), and of the kind of intellectual capacity ( διάνοια) revealed in their statements. One has to remember that the chief personages in ancient Tragedy are not ordinary men, and that the tragic hero is expressly said by Aristotle ( 13, 1453 a 10-21 ) to be always in the best tragedies a man of great position and lineage. In a play, therefore, such personages might very well be made to speak πολιτικῶς, 'like statesmen', and to show a statesmanlike power of saying what is appropriate to the situation before them ( τὰ ἁρμόττοντα). But it would also be possible to make them speak ῥητορικῶς, 'like rhetors', with something of the rhetor's cleverness in seizing on the various possible points that may be urged on the occasion ( τὰ ἐνόντα, i.e. τὰ ἐνδεχόμενα). Though ῥητορική stands in a certain relation to πολιτική ( Rhet. 1. 2, 1356 a 27 ), the distinction between them is a very real one with Aristotle; πολιτική is with him the practical wisdom of the statesman ( Eth. N. 6. 8, 1141 b 23 ), and ῥητορική only a form of the art of argumentation—a
δύναμις τοῦ πορίσαι λόγους
( Rhet. 1. 2, 1356 a 33 ), or
δύναμις περὶ ἑκάστου τοῦ θεωρῆσαι τὸ ἐνδεχόμενον πιθανόν
( Rhet. 1. 2, 1355 b 26 ). There is no reference to πολιτική in chap. 19 . Aristotle may perhaps have felt that the practice of the later dramatists ( οἱ νῦν) was too firmly established to admit of change, and that the tragic personages accordingly must still be allowed to speak ῥητορικῶς, as they did in the Tragedy of his time.
1450b7

23. mvp-aristotle-comment-270

ἀρχαῖοι : the dramatists anterior to Euripides (see on 6, 1450 a 25 ).

23. mvp-aristotle-comment-271

πολιτικῶς . ... λέγοντας which Valla rendered by 'civiliter dicentes', is often taken to mean 'to speak the language of civil life', like ordinary citizens, as distinct from the professional orator. But as the context shows that the ability to speak πολιτικῶς implies something of πολιτική in the speaker (comp. Newman on Pol. 2. 11, 1273 b 12 ), πολιτικῶς would seem rather to mean 'like a πολιτικός'—the statesman being assumed to say that which is befitting ( τὰ ἁρμόττοντα) without any ostentation of rhetorical cleverness (comp. HSt. s. v. πολιτικός ). Vahlen (Symb. phil. Bonn. p. 175) supposes the expression to coincide in sense with the ἠθικῶς λέγειν of Rhet. 3. 17, 1418 b 38 which means ἀπὸ προαιρέσεως λέγειν, as opposed to ἀπὸ διανοίας λέγειν ( Rhet. 3. 16, 1417 a 23 ). The objection to this interpretation is twofold. (1) Aristotle is to all appearance not contrasting διάνοια with ἦθος, but distinguishing between the two forms it may assume in the dramatic ῥήσεις. (2) πολιτικῶς λέγειν can hardly be identical with ἠθικῶς λέγειν; the personages in Comedy speak ἠθικῶς, but it would be a paradox to say of them that they speak πολιτικῶς, in the sense of there being something of πολιτική in their utterances.

23. mvp-aristotle-comment-272

1450b8 ῥητορικῶς Euripides is termed by Aristophanes ( Pax 534 ) a
ποιητὴς ῥηματίων δικανικῶν
. Quintilian also (10. 1, 68) thinks the study of his plays one of the best preparations for the bar:
'Illud quidem nemo non fateatur necesse est, iis qui se ad agendum comparant utiliorem longe fore Euripidem. namque is et sermone magis accedit oratorio generi et sententiis densus et in iis quae a sapientibus tradita sunt paene ipsis par, et dicendo ac respondendo cuilibet eorum qui fuerunt in foro diserti comparandus.'
.

24. mvp-aristotle-comment-274

1450b09 ὁποῖά τις. This (the reading of o) is very rightly retained by Vahlen, who translates the clause by
quod aperiat voluntatem, qualia quis in quibus apertum non est aut appetat aut fugiat
; the explanation is added to show that προαίρεσις is to be taken in a wide sense, which may include aversion as well as desire. For an explanatory clause of this form comp. 16, 1455b10
συνελογίσαντο τὴν εἱμαρμένην ὅτι ἐν τούτῳ εἵμαρτο ἀποθανεῖν
, and Plato Rep. 535 A
μέμνησαι οὖν τὴν προτέραν ἐκλογὴν τῶν ἀρχόντων, οἷους ἐξελέξαμεν ;
ἐν οἷς οὐκ ἔστι δῆλον is added because there are situations in which the moral purpose of the agent is too obvious to require to be revealed in an 'ethical' speech; see 19, 1456 b7 for a parallel statement on the subject of διάνοια.

24. mvp-aristotle-comment-275

1450b9_2 προαιρεῖται. Though the usual opposite of φεύγειν is the simple verb αἱρεῖσθαι ( Bon. Ind. 18b3 ), there is a certain propriety in προαιρεῖται in a clause explanatory of προαίρεσις. The word is found in a similar antithesis in Eth. N. 10. 1, 1172b25
τὰ μὲν γὰρ ἡδέα προαιροῦνται, τὰ δὲ λυπηρὰ φεύγουσιν.

24. mvp-aristotle-comment-276

1450b11 διόπερ κτέ. In the Rhetoric we are told that a mathematical argument does not admit of any colouring of character, because the facts with which it deals are indifferent to us—not objects of either desire or aversion: Rhet. 3. 16, 1417b9
διὰ τοῦτο οὐκ ἔχουσιν οἱ μαθηματικοὶ λόγοι ἤθη, ὅτι οὐδὲ προαίρεσιν· τὸ γὰρ οὗ ἕνεκα οὐκ ἔχουσιν.
In like manner a speech in a play may be on a subject wholly indifferent to the speaker, and in that case there is no room for any infusion of ἦθος into his statement.
1450b12

25. mvp-aristotle-comment-277

καθόλου τι ἀποφαίνονται replaces the ἀποφαίνονται γνώμην in 7 ( v. ad loc.).
1450b13

26. mvp-aristotle-comment-278

τέταρτον δὲ τῶν ἐν λόγῳ κτέ. On the reading which I have ventured to introduce into the text see the J. of Phil. 5 p. 1191. It is clear that the four elements in a tragedy, the μύθος ἤθη διάνοια and λέξις, belong to it as a work of literature, and that the music and 'spectacle' are accessories, which attach to it only when it comes to be acted on the stage. Apart from these accessories, a tragedy is, like an epic ( comp. 23, 1459 b10 ), a μίμησις ἐν λόγῳ (see on 1, 1447 29 ), and all the elements which constitute it are ἐν λόγῳ. τὰ ἐν λόγῳ, therefore, is a comprehensive designation for the four literary elements, as distinct from the non-literary elements ( τῶν δὲ λοιπῶν b 15), the music and 'spectacle', with which the enumeration concludes. If τῶν μὲν λόγων be retained, the genitive 1 has to be taken as an objective gen. after λέξις. Valla renders the words by
orationum dictio
, Paccius by
sermonum dictio
, and Goulston by
ipsarum orationum elocutio
. The main difficulty, however, is in the particle, which has never been satisfactorily explained. Vahlen formerly ( Symb. Phil. Bonn. p. 181 ) connected the clause with that which follows in 615 τῶν δὲ λοιπῶν κτέ., supposing the sense to be 'viertens für die Dialoge ( τῶν λόγων) die sprachliche Form; für das übrige ( τῶν λοιπῶν) die Melopöie'. His later view (1885) is that the μέν in τῶν μὲν λόγων may be an instance of μέν solitarium, and that Aristotle may have meant at first to append something about the τῶν δὲ μελῶν... Such a division of the fourth part, it seems to me, is wholly inconsistent with the general scheme of the six parts, which is throughout this chapter so clearly before Aristotle's mind, as well as with the express mention of the μελοποιία in its proper place in the next sentence.

26. mvp-aristotle-comment-279

1450b13_2 ὥσπερ πρότερον εἴρηται. If the reference is to 6, 1449 b 34 , where the λέξις is defined as ἡ τῶν μέτρων σύνθεσις, Aristotle must have forgotten the exact terms of his previous formula. The point, however, is practically the same in both instances; λέξις is to be understood in the sense of 'diction' or 'expression in language', and not in any of the other senses which the word might bear (see on 23, 1459 12 ).

26. mvp-aristotle-comment-280

1450b14 διὰ τῆς ὀνομασίας διὰ τῶν ὀνομάτων, i. e. by means of the words or language of the speaker. As the ὄνομα, which includes the verb and the adverb as well as the noun, is the directly significant part of all language, ὀνομασία means practically the same thing as vocabulary or language.

26. mvp-aristotle-comment-281

1450b14_2 ἑρμηνείαν, 'communication', 'expression'; the Latin equivalent for it is interpretatio. After ἑρμηνείαν we may supply τῶν ἐν τῇ διανοίᾳ, the spoken word being the outward sign or expression of a thought in the mind: De interpr. 1, 16ª3
ἔστι μὲν οὖν τὰ ἐν τῇ φωνῇ τῶν ἐν τῇ ψυχῇ παθημάτων σύμβολα.
On the meaning of ἑρμηνεία in Aristotle see Waitz, Organon 1 p. 323 , and Steinthal, Gesch. der Sprachwissenschaft 1 p. 235.

26. mvp-aristotle-comment-282

1450b15 ἔχει τὴν αὐτὴν δύναμιν ταὐτὸ δύναται, 'is practically the same thing' (see on 1, 1447ª8 ).

27. mvp-aristotle-comment-283

1450b16 πέντε Similar instances of an intrusive numeral will be found in Rhet. 1. 2, 1356 21 , and 1. 13, 1373 b3 ( v. Roemer ad loc.). Vahlen accepts the correction πέμπτον, in the sense of quinto loco: 'reliquarum autem partium (h. e. quae post illas quattuor iam reliquae sunt duae) quinto loco μελοποιία gravissimum est condimentum, ὄψις autem ad poeticam artem omnino non pertinet'.
1450b16_2

27. mvp-aristotle-comment-284

μέγιστον τῶν ἡδυσμάτων: see on 6, 1449 b 25 ( ἡδυσμένῳ). For the pleasure given by music comp. Pol. 8. 5, 1339 b 20
τὴν δὲ μουσικὴν πάντες εἶναί φαμεν τῶν ἡδίστων.
— 1340 a 2
δεῖ μὴ μόνον τῆς κοινῆς ἡδονῆς μετέχειν ἀπ᾿ αὐτῆς, ἧς ἔχουσι πάντες αἴσθησιν· ἔχει γὰρ ἡ μουσικὴ τὴν ἡδονὴν φυσικήν, διὸ πάσαις ἡλικίαις καὶ πᾶσιν ἤθεσιν ἡ χρῆσις αὐτῆς ἐστι προσφιλής.
—
οἱ μὲν γὰρ νέοι διὰ τὴν ἡλικίαν ἀνήδυντον οὐδὲν ὑπομένουσιν ἑκόντες, ἡ δὲ μουσικὴ φύσει τῶν ἡδυσμένων [ἡδυσμάτων] ἐστίν.
Bernays ( Zwei Abhandl. p. 157) supposed that a further statement on the subject of music, like that in the Anonymus De Comedy ( Kaibel, CGF. 1 p. 52 ),
μέλος τῆς μουσικῆς ἐστιν ἴδιον, ὅθεν ἀπ᾿ ἐκείνης τὰς αὐτοτελεῖς ἀφορμὰς δεήσει λαμβάνειν
, may have dropped out after ἡδυσμάτων.
1450b17

28. mvp-aristotle-comment-285

ψυχαγωγικόν: see on 33.

28. mvp-aristotle-comment-286

1450b17_2 ἀτεχνότατον: 13, 1453 67
τὸ δὲ διὰ τῆς ὄψεως τοῦτο παρασκευάζειν ἀτεχνότερον καὶ χορηγίας δεόμενόν ἐστιν.
ἄτεχνος is frequently used in the sense of 'depending on means outside the art itself'; comp. Rhet. 3. 16, 1416 b 18
σύγκειται γὰρ ἔχων ὁ λόγος τὸ μὲν ἄτεχνον, οὐθὲν γὰρ αἴτιος ὁ λέγων τῶν πράξεων, τὸ δ᾽ ἐκ τῆς τέχνης.
The opposite of it in this sense is ἔντεχνος ( Bon. Ind. 11964 ).

28. mvp-aristotle-comment-287

1450b18 ἡ γὰρ τῆς τραγῳδίας δύναμις κτέ. The tragic effect may be produced by a good tragedy even without any actual performance of it on a stage, i. e. as a mere work of literature ( comp. 14, 1453b4 , and 26, 1462ª11 ). The reading of A o here, ὡς γὰρ, is defended by Vahlen, who translates it by quia enim (wenn nämlich), on the assumption that the apodosis is omitted in the same way as in Eth. N. 8. 6, 1157 3
οἱ δ᾽ ἀγαθοὶ δι᾽ αὐτοὺς φίλοι· ᾗ γὰρ ἀγαθοί
[scil. φίλοι εἰσίν].— 8. 10, 1159 10
οἱ χρήσιμοι δὲ καὶ ἡδεῖς ἐπὶ πλεῖον διαμένουσιν ἕως γὰρ ἂν πορίζωσιν ἡδονὰς ἢ ὠφελείας ἀλλήλοις
[scil. διαμένουσιν], and certain more or less similar passages. The present passage (with the reading ὡς γὰρ) does not seem to me to be a genuine parallel. On behalf of the amended reading ( ἡ γὰρ) it has to be remembered that a confusion between ἡ and the compendium for ὡς is not so uncommon in MSS. of a certain date ( Bast, Comm. Palaeogr. p. 780 ).

28. mvp-aristotle-comment-288

1450b18_2 ἄνευ ἀγῶνος. ἀγών is generally rendered by certamen or 'contest', but it is not clear that that is the sense Aristotle attaches to it in the present and other places ( 7, 1451b ; 13, 1453ª27 ) of the Poetics. It seems to mean rather little more than a 'public performance'. Similarly ἀγωνίζεσθαι in 7, 1451ª8 and 24, 146089 means apparently 'to perform in public', συναγωνίζεσθαι in 18, 1456ª26 'to take part in such a performance'; and ἀγώνισμα in 9, 1451b37 a 'work to be performed in public'. The word ἀγωνιστής, likewise, in Pol. 8. 7, 1342=18 and Probl. 19. 15, 918b 28 , means no more than a 'public' or 'professional performer' ( comp. πρωταγωνιστής etc.). In Rhet. 3. 12, 1413b4
ἀγωνιστικὴ λέξις
means the style allowable in public speaking, as distinct from the γραφικὴ λέξις, the more formal style required for a purely literary work. The idea of contest or competition, there- fore, is not always a recognizable element in the meaning of this group of words ( comp. Nitzsch, De historia Homeri 2 p. 113 ).

28. mvp-aristotle-comment-289

1450b18_3 ἀγῶνος καὶ ὑποκριτῶν: 13, 1453ª27
ἐπὶ τῶν σκηνῶν καὶ τῶν ἀγώνων.
— Probl. 19. 15, 918 28
ὁ μὲν γὰρ ὑποκριτὴς ἀγωνιστής.
— Rhet. 3. 12, 141358
ἔστι δὲ λέξις γραφικὴ μὲν ἡ ἀκριβεστάτη, ἀγωνιστικὴ δὲ ἡ ὑποκριτικωτάτη κτέ.
The present clause shows that the ὄψις is ἥκιστα οἰκεῖον τῆς ποιητικῆς; the next, that it is ἀτεχνότατον.

28. mvp-aristotle-comment-290

1450b18_4 ὄψεων: for the plural see on 6, 1449b 33 .

28. mvp-aristotle-comment-291

1450b18_5 σκευοποιοῦ, the theatrical costumier, who enabled the actors to appear in character by supplying the masks, dresses, and other paraphernalia of their make-up; comp. Aristophanes Eq. 230
καὶ μὴ δέδιθ· οὐ γάρ ἐστιν ἐξῃκασμένος. ὑπὸ τοῦ δέους γὰρ αὐτὸν οὐδεὶς ἤθελε τῶν σκευοποιῶν εἰκάσαι
(v. Schol. ad loc.). — Aelian V. H. 2. 13
οἱ σκευοποιοὶ ἔπλασαν αὐτὸν ὡς ὅτι μάλιστα ἐξεικάσαντες.
— Pollux 4. 115
σκευὴ μὲν ἡ τῶν ὑποκριτῶν στολή . . . σκευοποιός δὲ ὁ προσωποποιός.
— 2. 47
ἡ δὲ νέα κωμῳδία καὶ προσωποποιὸν εἴρηκεν ὃν ἡ ἀρχαία σκευοποιὸν ἐκάλει
(ν. Meineke, FCG. 4 p. 680). For σκευή in the sense of the make-up of actors see Eurip. Suppl. 1054 , Aristoph. Ran. 108 , Plato Rep. 577 b.

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17. mvp-aristotle-comment-157

6.8 17. Car j'appelle icy Fable, la compoſition des choſes.] 1

18. mvp-aristotle-comment-158

6.8 18. Les mœurs ſont ce qui marque les qualitez de ceux qui agiſſent.] 2

19. mvp-aristotle-comment-159

6.8 19. Et les ſentimens ſont les diſcours, par leſquels ils font connoître quelque action, ou découvrent leur penſée.] 3

20. mvp-aristotle-comment-160

6.10 20. De ces ſix il y en a deux qui regardent le moyen.] 4

21. mvp-aristotle-comment-161

6.10 21. Une qui regarde la maniére.] 5

22. mvp-aristotle-comment-162

6.10 22. Et trois qui regardent le ſujet.] 6

23. mvp-aristotle-comment-163

6.11 23. Il n'y a preſque point de Poëte, pour ainſi dire, qui n'employe ces ſix parties dans ſes pieces tragiques.] 7

24. mvp-aristotle-comment-164

6.11 24. Il eſt vray auſſi qu'elles ſe trouvent toutes, dans toutes ſortes de ſujets.] 8

25. mvp-aristotle-comment-165

6.12 25. Mais la plus conſiderable, c'eſt la fable ou la compoſition des choſes.] 9

26. mvp-aristotle-comment-166

6.12 26. Car la Tragedie eſt une imitation, non pas des hommes, mais de leurs actions.] 10

27. mvp-aristotle-comment-167

6.12 27. De leur vie & de leur bonheur ou de leur malheur.] 11

28. mvp-aristotle-comment-168

6.12 28. Qui conſiſtent dans l'action.] 12

29. mvp-aristotle-comment-169

6.12 29. La fin même que les hommes ſe propoſent eſt toûjours une action, & non pas une qualité.] 13

30. mvp-aristotle-comment-170

6.12 30. On a telles ou telles qualitez par les mœurs.] 14

31. mvp-aristotle-comment-171

6.12 31. Et l'on eſt heureux ou malheureux par les actions.] 15

32. mvp-aristotle-comment-172

6.13 32. Mais ils ajoûtent les mœurs à cauſe des actions.] 16

33. mvp-aristotle-comment-173

6.13 33. De ſorte que les actions & la fable ſont la fin de la Tragedie.] 17

34. mvp-aristotle-comment-174

6.13 34. Or en toutes choſes, la fin eſt ce qu'il y a de plus impor-tant.] 18

35. mvp-aristotle-comment-175

6.14 35. Ajoutez à cette verité, qu'il ne sçauroit y avoir de Tra-gedie ſans action, & qu'il y en peut avoir ſans mœurs.] 19

36. mvp-aristotle-comment-176

6.15 36. En effet il n'y a point de mœurs dans les pieces de la plupart des Poëtes Modernes.] 20

37. mvp-aristotle-comment-177

6.15 37. On peut dire même en general, que l'on trouve preſque entre tous nos Poëtes, la même difference qui eſt entre les Peintres Zeuxis & Polygnote.] 21

38. mvp-aristotle-comment-178

6.15 38. Ce dernier exprimoit parfaitement les mœurs.] 22

39. mvp-aristotle-comment-179

6.15 39. Et on n'en trouve aucun indice dans les ouvrages de l'autre.] 23

40. mvp-aristotle-comment-180

6.16 40. D'ailleurs ſi quelqu'un s'aviſoit de faire une piece, où il y eût de ſuite pluſieurs discours, dans leſquels les mœurs ſeroient parfaitement exprimées, & où il y eût encore une belle diction & de beaux ſentimens.] 24

41. mvp-aristotle-comment-181

6.16 41. On peut aſſeurer qu'il n'auroit pas encore attrapé ce qui eſt le propre de la Tragedie.] 25

42. mvp-aristotle-comment-182

6.16 42. Et qui auroit un ſujet bien conſtitué & bien conduit.] 26

43. mvp-aristotle-comment-183

6.17 43. C'eſt que les moyens les plus efficaces, dont la Tragedie ſe ſert pour toucher & pour plaire, ce ſont les peripeties & les reconnoiſſances.] 27

44. mvp-aristotle-comment-184

6.18 44. Ceux qui entreprenent de faire une Tragedie, trouvent bien plus de facilité à réuſſir dans le ſtyle & dans les mœurs, qu'à bien bâtir le ſujet.] 28

45. mvp-aristotle-comment-185

6.18 45. Et c'eſt une experience que preſque tous les anciens Poëtes ont faite.] 29

46. mvp-aristotle-comment-186

6.20 46. Les mœurs viennent enſuite.] 30

47. mvp-aristotle-comment-187

6.20 47. Car ſi quelqu'un jettoit confuſement & pêle-mêle, les plus belles couleurs ſur une toile, il ne feroit pas le même plaiſir que le ſimple crayon d'un portrait.] 31

48. mvp-aristotle-comment-188

6.20 48. En un mot, la Tragedie eſt une imitation d'une action, & par conſequent elle eſt principalement une imitation de perſonnes qui agiſſent.] 32

49. mvp-aristotle-comment-189

6.21 49. Après les mœurs viennent les ſentimens, c'eſt-à-dire, la faculté d'exprimer les choſes qui ſont du ſujet.] 33

50. mvp-aristotle-comment-190

6.21 50. Les choſes qui ſont du ſujet, & celles qui luy conviennent.] 34

51. mvp-aristotle-comment-191

6.22 51. Or tout ce qui regarde le diſcours, dépend de la Rhetorique & de l'uſage commun.] 35

52. mvp-aristotle-comment-192

6.23 52. Les anciens Orateurs parloient communement & ſimplement.] 36

53. mvp-aristotle-comment-193

6.24 53. Les mœurs ſont ce qui découvre l'inclination de celuy qui parle, & le parti qu'il prendra.] 37

54. mvp-aristotle-comment-194

6.24 54. Dans les choſes où il ne ſeroit pas aiſé de reconnoître ce qu'il veut ſuivre ou éviter.] 38

55. mvp-aristotle-comment-195

6.24 55. C'eſt pourquoy tous les diſcours, qui ne font pas ſentir d'abord à quoy ſe reſoudra celuy qui parle, ſont ſans mœurs.] 39

56. mvp-aristotle-comment-196

6.25 56. Les ſentimens ſont ce qui explique ce qui eſt, ou ce qui n'eſt pas.] 40

57. mvp-aristotle-comment-197

6.26 57. La quatriéme choſe, & qui regarde uniquement le diſcours, c'eſt la diction.] 41

58. mvp-aristotle-comment-198

6.26 58. Et qui a autant de force dans la proſe que dans les vers.] 42

59. mvp-aristotle-comment-199

6.27 59. Aprés la diction vient la muſique, qui eſt le plus grand de tous les agrémens que la Tragedie puiſſe employer.] 43

60. mvp-aristotle-comment-200

6.28 60. La décoration eſt auſſi fort divertiſſante.] 44

61. mvp-aristotle-comment-201

6.28 61. Mais elle ne regarde pas proprement l'art du Poëte, & ne fait point partie de la Poësie.] 45

62. mvp-aristotle-comment-202

6.28 62. Et d'ailleurs tout ce qui regarde la décoration eſt bien plus du reſſort des Ouvriers & des ingenieurs, que de celuy des Poëtes.] 46

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48. mvp-aristotle-comment-48

NOTE 48. P. 76.

6.8 OR DELIVERING A GENERAL SENTIMENT.
In the Rhetoric, Aristotle defines
γνωμη
by
καθολου ἀποφανσις
. [ Lib. ii. cap. xxi. p. 572. ] Thus below, in this chapter, for,
ἀποφαινονται γνωμην
, his first expression, we have,
καθολου ἀποφαινονται
. — This has been loosely and inaccurately rendered in all the translations I have seen, except those of Castelvetro and Goulston.

49. mvp-aristotle-comment-49

NOTE 49. P. 76.

6.11 THESE PARTS----HAVE BEEN EMPLOYED BY MOST POETS.
Locus, as the critics say, conclamatus. Time is too precious to be wasted in the support, or refutation, of random conjectures upon a passage of such desperate corruption. How can
οὐκ ὀλιγοι
, "not a few," be tortured into, "all," or, "almost all?" Yet so Dacier, Batteux, Goulston, &c. On the other hand, if fairly translated, "not a few Poets have made use of these parts," how strangely it will follow—"for EVERY Tragedy has them all!"—And how is the
ὡς εἰπειν
, to be applied? to
οὐκ ὀλιγοι
, or, to
ειδεσι
? In the midst of these difficulties, all I could do was to make my version consistent with itself; faithful to the original, I could not make it, without making it nonsensical. Those commentators, who apply the
ὡς εἰπειν
to the word
ειδεσι
, seem favoured by ch. xii. where, speaking of the same essential parts of Tragedy, Aristotle says—
οἷς μεν ΩΣ ΕΙΔΕΣΙ δει χρησθαι
.

50. mvp-aristotle-comment-50

NOTE 50. P. 77.

6.12 THE SUPREME GOOD ITSELF----IS ACTION, NOT QUALITY.
See Ethic. Nicom. I. 5, 7, 8. ed. Wilk. & Mag. Moral. I. 4, p. 149, 150, ed. Duval.

51. mvp-aristotle-comment-51

NOTE 51. P. 77.

6.15 THE TRAGEDIES OF MOST MODERN POETS HAVE THIS DEFECT.
This receives illustration from what Aristotle presently after says, of "the rhetorical manner prevailing in the Poets of his time:"
οἱ δε νυν, ῥητορικως.
cap. vi: and from his observation, at the close of cap. xxiv. [Transl. Part III. Sect. 6.] that "the manners and sentiments are only obscured by too splendid a diction."
What he has here said of the recent Tragedies of his time, may perhaps be said, in general, of our modern Tragedies, compared with those of Shakspeare. The truth, I believe, is, that the Tragedy of a refined and polished age will always have less manners than that of ruder times, because it will have more dignity; more of that uniform and level elevation, which excludes strong traits of character, and the simple, unvarnished delineation of the manners. Indeed, what the Greeks denominated
ἦθος
, is the peculiar province of Comedy, and is seldom to be found in Tragedy, except in that stage of its progress, when it is not yet thoroughly and distinctly separated from Comedy; from the imitation of common life, and natural manners. 1 Such are the Tragedies of Shakspeare; and such, as I have before ventured to suggest, are those of Euripides in particular, which, in proportion as they have less dignity, have more
ἦθος
, than the Tragedies of Sophocles. But in neither of them, nor, probably, even in those very Poets here censured by Aristotle, was the "language of Poets," substituted for "the language of men," as it is almost constantly in the French Tragedy, and too often, in our own Tragedies of the French School. 2

52. mvp-aristotle-comment-52

NOTE 52. P. 77.

6.15 POLYGNOTUS EXCELS IN THE EXPRESSION OF THE MANNERS.
I see not the smallest reason for the substitution of
ἀγαθων
, for
ἀγαθα
, which is the reading, we are told, of all the MSS. What Aristotle had said before of Polygnotus, cap. ii. —
ότι κρειττους εικαζε
—seems not to afford the slightest ground for alteration here. [See Mr. Winstanley's ed. p. 281. ] Painters are compared in very different points of view, in these two passages: there, as imitating good or bad, serious or ridiculous, elevated or low, objects: here, only as expressing, or not expressing, manners. It was directly to Aristotle's purpose to say, that Polygnotus was a "good manner-painter;" (
ἀγαθος ήθογραφος
)—not at all to his purpose, (besides the awkwardness of the expression itself,) to say, that he was a "manner-painter of good men:" (
ἀγαθων ήθογραφος
). 3

53. mvp-aristotle-comment-53

NOTE 53. P. 77.

6.16 JUST AS IN PAINTING, &c.
I hope I shall not much shock even the most conscientious adherents to the established inaccuracy and authentic blunders of ancient manuscripts, by having ventured to adopt here the transposition first proposed, I believe, by Castelvetro. 4 I can only desire those readers, who may be alarmed at my temerity, to read the passage—
παραπλησιον γαρ ἐστι—κ. τ. αλλ.—γραφεας, εικονα
,—first, where it stands in all the editions, and then, where I have placed it, immediately after the words—
ἐχουσα δε μυθον και συστασιν πραγματων
. 5 —If this experiment alone be not sufficient to convince them of the propriety, or, rather, the necessity, of the transposition, I despair of the success of any arguments I am able to produce in the support of it. To me, I confess, it is among those things that are too evident for proof.

54. mvp-aristotle-comment-54

NOTE 54. P. 77.

6.18 ADVENTURERS IN TRAGIC WRITING ARE SOONER ABLE, &C.
Aristotle argues here upon a principle rather rhetorical and popular, than philosophical—that, which infers superior worth from superior difficulty and rarity: —
το χαλεπώτερον και σπανιώτερον, μείζον
, (sc.
αγαθον
,) as he lays it down in his Rhetoric, lib. i. cap. vii. p. 529. Lord Bacon, in his Essay On Gardens, uses the same argument, and almost in Aristotle's words, with respect to the superiority of gardening to architecture:
"A man shall ever see, that when ages grow to civility and elegancy, men come to build stately SOONER than to garden finely; as if gardening were the greater perfection."
The truth, however, of the fact here asserted by Aristotle, appears, not only from the earlier dramatic Poets of every nation, but from the defects of plots in general, whether Dramatic or Epic; and from the rarity of those dramatic fables, for which the Poet has trusted entirely to his own invention, without recourse to history, or novels, or the productions of other dramatists. 6 —
"En general, il y a plus de pieces bien dialoguées, que de pieces bien conduites. Le Génie qui dispose les incidens, paroit plus rare que celui qui trouve les vrais discours. Combien de belles scènes dans Moliere!—On compte ses dénouemens heureux. On seroit tenté de croire qu'une drame devroit être l'ouvrage de deux hommes de génie, l'un qui arrangeât, et l'autre qui fit parler."
— Diderot, de la Poes. Dram. p. 288.

55. mvp-aristotle-comment-55

NOTE 55. P. 78.

6.22 TO THIS PART BELONGS, &c.-
Aristotle is not here defining
Διανοἰα
, as his expression,
τουτο δε ΕΣΤΙ
, seems, at first view, to imply: he is only explaining the subservience of the sentiments to the manners; he is shewing why they are next in rank and importance to the manners; namely, because manners or characters, are, in great part at least, manifested by the sentiments. Dacier's note here is good.
"Aristote suit ici l'ordre naturel. Les sentimens font pour les mœurs, ce que les mœurs font pour l'action. Comme un Poete tragique ne peut bien imiter une action, qu'en employant les mœurs, il ne peut non plus bien marquer les mœurs, que par le moyen des sentimens, & par consequent les sentimens tiennent le troisieme rang dans la Tragedie."

56. mvp-aristotle-comment-56

NOTE 56. P. 78.

6.22 WHICH, IN THE DIALOGUE, DEPENDS ON THE POLITICAL AND RHETORICAL ARTS.
Ὅπερ, ἐπι των λόγων, της πολιτικής και ῥητορικης ἔργον ἐστιν.
— I have not seen the words,
ἐπι των λογων
, satisfactorily explained. I cannot agree with those commentators, who by
λογοι
, here, understand, oratory, prose eloquence, as opposed to Poetry: a sense, indeed, very common, in Aristotle and other writers; but if we adopt it here, how follows—
ὁι ΓΑΡ ἀρχαιοι πολιτικώς ΕΠΟΙΟΥΝ λέγοντας
? for here, Aristotle evidently speaks of Poets; not of orators, as Dacier renders it. The passage, then, fairly translated, would stand thus:—"which, (i. e. the choice of proper sentiments,) in ORATORY, is the business of the political and rhetorical arts: FOR the antient Tragic Poets made their characters speak politically," &c. Nothing can well be more incoherent.
Επι των λόγων
, means, I think, in the speeches, discourse, or dialogue part of the drama, as distinguished from the choral or lyric part, which had nothing, or comparatively nothing, to do with
ηθος
or character, and in which the Poet was, of course, to draw his
διανοια
, or thoughts, principally at least, from different sources; not from the stores of civil wisdom, or rhetorical art, but from those of Religion, Ethics, Mythology, and Poetry. The word
λογοι
, is clearly used in the same sense, in a passage that presently follows:—
διοπερ ἐκ ἐχεσιν ήθη ἐνιοι των ΛΟΓΩΝ
—"some of the speeches, or the dialogue."

57. mvp-aristotle-comment-57

NOTE 57. P. 78.

6.23 FOR THE ANTIENTS MADE THEIR CHARACTERS SPEAK IN THE STYLE OF POLITICAL AND POPULAR ELOQUENCE; BUT NOW, THE RHETORICAL MANNER PREVAILS.
Οι μεν γαρ άρχαιοι ΠΟΛΙΤΙΚΩΣ ἐποιουν λεγοντας, οι δε νυν, ῥητορικως.
— So, Rhet. lib. ii. cap. xxii. p. 573 ,
ΠΟΛΙΤΙΚΩι συλλογισμῳ
—a Civil or Oratorical syllogism, as opposed to the strict dialectic syllogism: a distinction which he presently after expresses by,
ἀκριβεστερον
, and
ΜΑΛΑΚΩΤΕΡΟΝ, συλλογίζεσθαι
[ibid.] And thus, here, the same term,
πολιτικως
, is used, to distinguish the popular, and less laboured, though more solid, eloquence of the Senate or the Forum, from the studied and declamatory composition of the professed rhetoricians. A similar use of the word occurs in the passage quoted in NOTE 229, from the Euagoras of Isocrates , where,
ὀνομασι ΠΟΛΙΤΙΚΟΙΣ
, is plainly synonymous with
ὀνομασι ΚΥΡΙΟΙΣ
. See also Dion. Halicarn. De Struct. Orat. p. 4. ed. Upton , and Faber's note.
That Aristotle, however, by Politics (
ἡ πολιτικη
), means only, as Dacier asserts,
"l'usage commun, le langage ordinaire des peuples,"
cannot, surely, be admitted. The force and extent of the term is well known 7 .
"CIVILIS SCIENTIA,"
Quintilian
says,
"idem quod SAPIENTIA est."
It comprehended all the necessary knowledge of the
Πολιτικά
, the
vir civilis
, the public man. It included, of course, eloquence, or the faculty of public speaking, but that, of a kind very different from the
"umbratile genus,"
as Cicero calls it, of the rhetorical schools 8 . What Aristotle says of the old Tragic Poets, that they made their personages speak like such a man, not like a Rhetorician, cannot be better illustrated than by Quintilian's character of Euripides.
"Illud quidem nemo non fateatur necesse est, iis qui se ad agendum comparent, utiliorem longè Euripidem fore. Namque is, et in sermone—magis accedit oratorio generi, et sententiis densus; et in iis quæ à sapientibus tradita sunt, penè ipsis par, et in dicendo ac respondendo cuilibet eorum qui fuerunt IN FORO DISERTI comparandus."
[lib. x. cap. i.]
That Dacier, with so precise and clear an expression before his eyes, as,
ΕΠΟΙΟΥΝ λεγοντας
, should understand this of the antient orators, and roundly pronounce Victorius to be mistaken in applying it to the Poets, seems perfectly unaccountable. I do not see in this passage any foundation for the refinement of Castelvetro, Dacier, and other commentators, who refer the
ἐνοντα
to the political science, and the
ἁρμοττοντα
to rhetoric. The word
ἁρμοττοντα
, has, I think, the same sense as in cap. xv. and means, such sentiments, or thoughts, as, being adapted to the person speaking, are expressive of the manners: for it is in this view, as I before remarked, that Aristotle is here considering the Sentiments, or
Διανοια
.
Τα ἐνοντα
, as Victorius has observed, is equivalent to
τα ὑπαρχοντα
; and it was clearly the business of rhetoric (
ῥητορικης ἔργον
,) to teach both the
ὑπαρχοντα
and the
ἁρμοττοντα
. See Rhet. lib. ii. cap. xxii. p. 573, E. and lib. iii. cap. vii. p. 590, D. ed. Duval . 9

58. mvp-aristotle-comment-58

NOTE 58. P. 78.

6.24 THERE ARE SPEECHES, THEREFORE, WHICH ARE WITHOUT MANNERS----AS NOT CONTAINING, &C.
The reading I have followed is, I think, fully authorised, by MSS. and by common sense. See Mr. Winstanley's note, p. 282.—The Abbé Batteux has given the passage thus, from a MS. (No. 2117,) in the King of France's library.
Ἔστι δε ήθος μεν το τοιοῦτον, ὃ δηλοι την προαιρεσιν, ὁποια τις ἐσιν· διοπερ ἐκ ἐχεσιν ἠθη ἐνιοι των λογων, ἐν οἷς ἐκ ἐστι δηλον ὅτι προαιρειται η φευγει ὁ λεγων.
The common reading stands thus:—
Ἔστι δε ήθη μεν το τοιουτον, ὃ δηλοι την προαιρεσιν, ὁποια τις ἐσιν, ἐν οἷς ἐκ ἐστι δηλον, προαιρειται, η φευγει ὁ λέγων· διοπερ ἐκ ἐχεσιν ήθη ἐνιοι των λογων.
— Which is thus rendered by Mr. Harris:
"MANNERS OF CHARACTER is that which discovers WHAT THE DETERMINATION [of a speaker] will be, in matters, where IT IS NOT YET MANIFEST, whether he chuses to do a thing, or to avoid it."
Now if this were true, I do not see how there could be any
ηθος
, in any play, after the first discovery of the speaker's character. In the Avare of Moliere, for instance, it is sufficiently manifest from the very first scene in which Harpagon appears, what his avarice will lead him to chuse or to avoid, in any circumstance of the drama. Is there, for that reason, no
ηθος
, no sentiments that mark his character, in any thing he says during the rest of the play? 10 Nay, more; according to this reading, there can be no
ηθος
at all in any part of that drama: for the
προαιρεσις
or propensity of the Miser is completely known to every reader or spectator from the very title of the piece. I know, indeed, that Le Bossu , and others, have given a meaning to this passage, by making Aristotle say, what he certainly does not say—viz. when it is not yet manifest "ex indicio dicentis," what the will, or choice, of the speaker is. But if the common reading were right, we might, surely, expect to find the words,
ἐν οἷς ἐκ ἐστι δηλον
, &c. subjoined in other places where he defines the
ηθος
. Yet we have nothing like it in cap. xv. initio; nor in the second book of his Rhetoric , where he says only,
ηθος δ᾽ ἐχεσιν λογοι, ἐν ὁσοις δηλη ἡ προαιρεσις
: nor in other passages of the same work, relative to the same subject. Piccolomini's translation agrees with mine, and is expressed with his usual accuracy.
"—Ma il costume nel parlar' é quello, il quale mostra fuora, è apparir fà il volere, et l'elettion di chi parla. Peroche alcuni parlari si truovano, li quali non hanno costume; come ch' in essi non appaia, et non si manifesti, quello, che elegga, ò fugga, con la sua volontà, chi parla."

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6.3. mvp-aristotle-comment-16 6.17

THE FABLE THEN IS THE CHIEF PART, AND, AS IT WERE, THE SOUL OF TRAGEDY.

THIS observation of Aristotle is undoubtedly founded on nature, and is not only applicable to tragedy, but to every other kind of imitative composition, whether dramatic or narrative. Perhaps there is no circumstance in which the tragedies of the present day are so deficient, as in the want of interesting action. This is, in a great measure, owing to the strict adherence to the French rule, of not fuffering the supposed time of action to exceed the real time of reprefentation. Dramatic poetry is, by this regulation, almost confined to the boundary of painting, and can only represent a fsingle scene of any great event. And this is attended by another inconvenience; for the allotted space of five acts becomes as much too great for that single scene, as the confined period of three hours would be too small for the whole action; and hence the poet is obliged to spin out his tragedy by means of the dialogue, and falls under the same [M] inconvenience as would attend a proper and complete dramatic fable, without episodic parts, if swelled to the fize of the epopee. The great defect in that [N] truly fublime poem, the Paradife Loft, is a want of interest in the fable; every character, except two, being fuper- [M] Poetic, Chap. xxvI. [N] See Beattie on Poetry and Music, Part i. Chap. iv. natural;
POETIC OF ARISTOTLE. natural; and we can never be greatly interested in the distress, or profperity, of a person, into whose situation it is impossible for us to [o] put ourselves. Addison, who was determined to find every possible excellence in the Paradife Loft, though he could not help [P] seeing this defect in the fable, nevertheless makes the following remark. After observing that the Iliad and Æneid, from [Q] their national subjects, must have been respectively very interesting to the Greeks and Romans, he proceeds, • Milton's poem is admirable in this respect, since it is impossible for any of its readers, whatever nation, country, or people he may belong to, not to be related to the persons who are the principal actors in it.' Spectator, No. 273. Now, befides the mistake Addison appears to have made as to the effect of national fable, which seems to be rather the foothing the vanity of the reader, than the encrease of his interest in the action, one should hardly have supposed, that Addison could have been ignorant of the obvious truth, that every affection is exactly weakened in proportion to its becoming general. There is no distinction so great in civil life as that between a man and any other animal, and yet I never knew a perfon proud of this last distinction, though there is no elevation of rank so inconfiderable, as not to have awakened pride in some bofoms. [ο] Θόβος δὲ περὶ τὸν ὅμοιον. Poet. Ch. xiii. [P] Spectator, No. 357. [Q] It seems a national hero, in Addison's opinion, was a fine qua non, in the epopee; for he says, in his critique on Chevy Chace, Virgil's hero was the founder of Rome,' (was he?) › Homer's a prince of Greece, and for this reason Valerius Flaccus, and Statius, who were * both Romans, might be justly derided for having chosen the expedition of the golden fleece, ← and the wars of Thebes, for the subjects of their epic writings. SPECT. No. 70. Y 2 The
The fame thing happens to the other paffions. We are strongly affected by a tale of private distress, even if not extending to danger or death; but we read, [R] without any emotion, of In one great day, on Hockstet's fatal plain, • French and Bavarians, twenty thousand flain, Push'd through the Danube to the shores of Styx; Squadrons eighteen, battalions twenty-fix. PRIOR. An error of the opposite side, but arifing from the fame cause, appears in the last book of the English Garden. By making an affecting tale the principal object, the subject of the poem is thrown entirely into the back ground. The mind is so much more influenced by the imitation of human actions and manners, than by any the most beautiful description of inanimate nature, that when they coincide, if the former is not very much kept down, it will entirely destroy all our interest in the latter. The story of Eurydice, in the fourth Georgic, is like the sketch of a mythological incident, such as Niobe, for inftance, introduced into a landscape. But the pathetic tale of Nerina, and especially in the peculiar form in which Mr. Mason has introduced it, takes up our whole attention, and the embellishment of the English Garden becomes the mere scenery of the action. Who will regard the ornament of a temple who is looking at the flaughter of the innocents, or examine the perspective of an apartment, which contains a Beaufort expiring in the agonies of guilt and despair ? [R] This is admirably well illustrated by a story told in one of the numbers of the Adventurer. See also the Encyclopedie, Art. Illusion. NOTE

6.4. mvp-aristotle-comment-17 6.19

THE PROFESSED END OF TRAGEDY IS TO IMITATE AN ACTION; AND, CHIEFLY BY MEANS OF THAT ACTION, TO SHEW THE QUALITIES OF THE PERSONS ACTING.

PERHAPS there is not a stronger instance of the difference between manners introduced as secondary to the action, though arifing immediately, and necessarily, from it; and their holding the first place, than the novel of Tom Jones compared with Triftram Shandy. The masterly contrivance of the fable in the former, at once aftonishes and delights us; but though we may be struck with the high coloring of the other, we foon perceive it is laid on promiscuously; we are amused, but we are not interested, except in those parts where our paffions are engaged by incident, as well as awakened by quality; such as the admirable story of Le Fevre. I have often thought the [s] censure passed by Longinus on the Odyssey, when compared with the Iliad, arose from his misapprehenfion of this and another passage of Ariftotle; for one of the reasons he gives for introducing his unfavourable criticism on the Odyssey, he himself tells us, is to shew, how the greatest writers and poets, when their genius wants strength for the pathetic, naturally fall into description of man- [s] See note 1. chap. xxiv. • ners.'
ners [T]. Now it is true, Aristotle does characterise the Iliad as being simple and pathetic, the Odyssey as complicated and defcriptive of manners. (Poetic, Chap. XXIV.) But he obviously uses pathetic, as applied to the Iliad in the same sense with his definition of tragic pathos in the eleventh chapter; 'the exhibition of deaths, tortures, and wounds;' and not of that pathos which Longinus confiders as a species of the füblime. And to confider the two poems with regard to the passage before us, furely the Odyssey strictly fulfils the idea of Aristotle, in painting the manners through the fable. And though the Iliad, to use the language of the drama, may be fuller of bustle, [u] I cannot think the fable either so well constructed, or so interesting, as that of the Odyssey; and surely if there is only equal excellence in the first requifite, it can, at least, be no fault, to have superior excellence in that which is allowed to hold the second place.

6.5. mvp-aristotle-comment-18 6.28

THE DECORATIONS OF THE STAGE, THOUGH VERY INTERESTING, HAVE THE LEAST CONNECTION WITH THE POETIC ART.

NOTWITHSTANDING the vast size, and superb decorations of the ancient theatres, which were looked upon as a national concern, and kept up at the national expence, they were neither so natural, or so interesting, as those of the moderns. They had no change of scene; for what some critics have urged from a passage in the third Georgic, and [Τ] Δευτέρα δὲ ἕνεκα προσισορείσθω τὰ καλὰ τὴν Οδύσσειαν, ὅπως ἢ σοι γνώριμον, ὡς ἡ ἀπακμὴ τὸ πάθους ἐν τῷις μεγάλοις συἱγραφεῦσι κὶ ποιητᾶις ἐις ἦθος ἐκλύεθαι. Sect. ix. [U] See note Iv. chap. xxvi. the
POETIC OF ARISTOTLE. the observation of Servius on it, in support of the contrary opinion, is certainly ill founded. [x] ' Or as the turning scene its aspect shifts.'- The note of Servius explains how this was done, either by the turning of a machine, for a representation of which the reader is referred to Dr. Warton's Virgil; or by drawing up and letting down curtains. But it appears from Vitruvius, L. v. that this change of scene was according to the different kind of drama, to each of which a particular scene was appropriated, that continued through the whole performance, and was always the fame in every performance of the same kind. The scenery of tragedy represented palaces, whose fronts were ornamented with columns and statues; comedy had the common houses and streets of a city; and the satyric scene was adorned by trees, cottages, rocks, and caves. As tragedy, therefore, was always confined to an area before a palace, and comedy to a street, those actions only could be represented with propriety, which might happen in the open air: this, however, was little additional restraint to tragedy, confined, as it was, by the continual prefence of the chorus; and comedy often broke through it, as may be shewn from many scenes of Ariftophanes. Indeed, I am inclined to think the decoration of the theatre was rather meant to imitate the scene of representation, than of action; and that the area before a palace, or public building, was confidered as a proper place for the exhibition of tragedy, authorised by the magiftrate, while a common ftreet was a likely place for the assembly of the voluntary [Y] performers of comedy; and [x] ' Vel scena ut versis difcedat frontibus.'- [Y] See what Ariftotle says, of the origin and progress of these two species of the drama, in chapters Iv and v. the
the fatyric pieces being less improved, and of inferior estimation, were confidered like comedy in its origin, as performed by village strollers, (See Poetic, Chap. 111.) On any other principle than this, (the stability of the scene, during the performance, being proved by the concurring testimony of all writers on the subject ;) a manifest absurdity must have attended many of the Greek tragedies, where the scene of action is apparently not laid in a town. Sophocles, who is called by Ariftotle the inventor of painted scenery, affords two striking instances of this kind. One in the Ajax, where Minerva says to Ulyffes, [z]' Now on the camp's remotest verge I find you, • Where Ajax' tents the Grecian navy guard.' The other in the Philoctetes, which begins, [A] ' And now we tread the unfrequented sands • Of defart Lemnos' fea-encircled shore.' It has already been observed in a [B] note on the fourth chapter, that the modern drama represented, is the most exact of any of the imitations effected by the arts; if, therefore, according to the hypothefis we have adopted, the illufion, as to objects disagreeable in themselves, was kept up too strongly, they would cease to please, and the practice of our theatre juftifies the remark. The actor does not avail himself of circumstances which are made use of by the dramatic painter with success. Our stage [B] Note 1. [Ζ] Κὰι νῦν ἐπὶ σκηναῖς σε ναυτικᾶις ὁρῶ Αἴαντος, ἔνθα τάξιν ἐσχάτην ἔχει. [Α] Ακλὴ μὲν ἤ δε τῆς περιῤῥύτον χθονός Λήμνε βροζοις ἄσειπζους ἐδ᾽ ὀικαμένη. is
POETIC OF ARISTOTLE. is never stained with blood flowing from the wounds of the dying characters; for, as a very elegant critic observes, 'We ought to exclude those means of imitation which render it too frightfully and horribly true, as when blood is concealed in a bladder under the dress of an actor who ' is to appear to kill himself, and it overflows the theatre.' ENCYCLO- PEDIE, ART. ILLUSION, by M. Marmontel. That our theatre formerly adopted this practice, appears from a stage direction in Dryden's King Arthur, relating to the single combat between Arthur and Ofwald. It begins, 'They fight with sponges in ' their hands, dipt in blood; after some equal passes and clofing, they • both appear wounded.' I cannot quit this subject without paying the tribute of gratitude to the memory of Mr. Garrick, for the improvement he made in the general probability of representation, and particularly in the characteristic dresses of the British theatre. Before his time, or, rather, before his reformation of the stage, which was long subsequent to his being the chief ornament of it, all tragedies were performed in the modern dress, and even Cato used to strut over the stage in a tye wig; and, in fome instances, when this infringement of the coftumi was only partial, the abfurdity was only rendered more glaring. While Brutus and Caffius were in full trimmed coats, and tyes, Cæfar had a robe, a bob wig, and a laurel crown; and Falstaff was as much distinguished by his dress as by his humour, from the other persons of the drama. The reformation of this impropriety is become universal, and extends even to the provincial theatre. Z CHAP.

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6. mvp-aristotle-comment-41

Ritter, cap. 6 § 6

ἔστι δὲ τῆς μὲν πράξεως ὁ μῦθος ἡ μίμησις : multi editores codicibus invitis articulum ante μί μησις expungunt, sed frustra: hoc enim Aristoteles dicere vult, actionis imitationem de qua modo (§. 5) locutus erat contineri fabula ( τῷ μύθῳ) tragoediae subiecta. ipsum μῦθον hisce definire non intendit, sed eius definitionem statim subiunxit. λέγω γὰρ μῦθον τοῦτον τὴν σύνθεσιν τῶν πραγμάτων: dicit μῦθον τοῦτον eum quem modo cogitabat, cum tragicae actionis imitationem contineri τῷ μύθῳ pronuntiabat, h. e. nove et aliter ac vulgo μύθου nomine h. 1.usus est. hoc si bene tenuerimus, errores nonnullos ab aliis viris doctis commissos cavere poterimus. vid. Comment. ad c. 5, 3 et c. 17, 3. ubi μύθον ponit pro parte tragoediae vel epopoeiae, ibi hic novus et technicus vocis significatus valet: alioqui etiam in hoc libro μύθοι sunt fabulae (h. e. fabulosae narrationes). · τὰ δὲ ἤθη, καθ' ἃ ποιούς τινας εἶναί φαμεν: recte scripsit ποιούς τινας εἶναί φαμεν, non ποιοί τινες εἰσί: nam etiam secundum διάνοιαν sunt ποιοί τινες, sed si ποιό τητος hominum mentionem facimus, mores fere respicimus.

7. mvp-aristotle-comment-42

Ritter, cap. 6 § 7

καθ' ἃ ποιά τις ἐστὶν ἡ τραγῳδία : partes illae formam tragoediae et qualitatem efficiunt. infra eaedem (c. 24, 1) nullo additamento μέρη vocantur. interpolator huius operis μέρη οἷς ὡς εἴδεσι χρῆται ἡ τραγωδία c. 12, 1. has partes designavit, idemque alteras tragoediae partes quantitatis habita ratione ( μέρη κατὰ τὸ ποσόν) constituit c. 12, 1., easque c. 18, 2. μέρη simpliciter appellavit. οἷς μὲν γὰρ μιμοῦνται, δύο μέρη ἐστίν: sunt λέξις et μελοποιία. vid. §. 4. ὡς δὲ μιμοῦνται, ἓν : est ὄψις. v. §. 4. ἃ δὲ μιμοῦνται, τρία: sunt μῦθος et ἤθη et διάνοια.

8. mvp-aristotle-comment-43

Ritter, cap. 6 § 8

τούτοις μὲν οὖν - ὡσαύτως: vide possisne vel minimum ingenii Aristotelii vestigium in his agnoscere: ego non potui. cuivis tragoediae inesse sex illas partes dicit auctor personatus: verus autem (§. 11) pronuntiat non solum fieri posse tragoediam moribus carentem sed etiam a novis poetis fere ` ἀήθεις τραγῳδίας fieri. porro ne sibimet ipsa quidem haec consentiunt. nam si οὐκ ὀλίγοι αὐτῶν νίχ aliter atque de poetis tragicis accipi potest, primo non paucos eorum illis partibus (iste εἶδεσι, non μορίοις, posuit) usos esse et statim omnes isdem usos esse audimus. vel sic οὐκ ὀλίγοι αὐτῶν mire et obscure dictum est. tertium interpolationis signum est quod eadem sex nomina frigide et inepte, h. e. sine ullo consilio, recurrunt. accedunt tria indicia secundaria quibus idem probatur. corum primum est mira illa tragicorum poetarum vel generatim poetarum designatio, οὐκ ὀλίγοι αὐτῶν. alterum est πᾶν nude positum, quod quo referatur non habet: interpolator πᾶν δρᾶμα dicere videtur voluisse. tertium est additum ὡς εἰπεῖν, quod homo iste dormitans sine ratione et consilio chartae illevit. quartum adeo accedit. codices enim a Bekkero et Burgesio et aliis collati aut ὄψεις aut ὄψις exhibent, ubi ὄψις a librariis leviter a vero detortum est. quod Victorius in uno vetustissimo exemplari ὄψιν invenit, id correctori vitium ὄψις emendare temere festinanti tribuendum est, eo magis quod Madius ὄψιν in margine trium librorum ab alia manu scriptum repperit. itaque ὄψεις haud dubie vera scriptura est. sed Aristoteles ubi ὄψιν pro parte tragoediae ponit, ibi constanter et recte singularem admisit, non pluralem. vid. c. 6, 4 et 7. c. 24, 1. interpolator igitur nomen ὄψιν a se modo lectum ne repetere quidem recte potuit. conf. Comment. ad c. 6, 19.

9. mvp-aristotle-comment-44

Ritter, cap. 6 § 9

ἡ γὰρ τραγῳδία μίμησίς ἐστιν οὐκ ἀνθρώπων: tragoedia non ipsos homines, h. e. totam eorum qualitatem exprimit, sed singula quaedam eorum facinora imitatur. qualitatem ita tantum pingit, quatenus ea ex actis intelligitur. ἀλλὰ πράξεως [ καὶ βίου- οὐ ποιότης]: sic exhibemus hunc locum restitutum ex librorum scriptorum fide et purgatum additamentis, quae sive Aldus sive alii correctores Itali intulerunt. tragoediam esse imitationem vitae cuiusdam ( βίου) et felicitatis ( εὐδαιμονίας) pronuntiari utique nequit, ne de illis quidem tragoediis quae laeto eventu concluduntur. quid igitur fecerunt Itali ad hoc incommodum sublevandum vel tollendum? post εὐδαιμονίας continuo inseruerunt καὶ κακοδαιμονίας, ut iam tragoedia dicatur esse imitatio felicitatis et infelicitatis. restant alia. statim enim codices praebent καὶ ἡ κακοδαιμονία ἐν πράξει ἐστι. haec cum vel correctis illis καὶ εὐδαιμονίας καὶ κακοδαιμονίας male convenirent, iidem Itali scripserunt καὶ γὰρ ἡ εὐδαιμονία ἐν πράξει ἐστι. antiqua igitur scriptura ex scriptis libris restituta, videamus quid ea faciendum sit. interpolator aliquis antiquus apud Aristotelem paulo post cum legeret εἰσὶ.. κατὰ δὲ τὰς πράξεις εὐδαίμονες ἢ τουναντίον, inde sumpsit primum illud suum καὶ βίου καὶ εὐδαιμονίας, et hoc post πράξεως inseruit; tum propter illud τούναντίον adiecit explicationis gratia καὶ ἡ κακοδαιμονία ἐν πράξει ἐστί. porro cum legeret εἰσὶ δὲ κατὰ μὲν τὰ ἤθη ποιοί τινες, et paulo post ὥστε τὰ πράγματα καὶ ὁ μῦθος τέλος τῆς τραγωδίας, iste iam hic posuit καὶ τὸ τέλος πρᾶξίς τις ἐστίν, οὐ ποιότης. sed finem esse actionem, non qualitatem, monere h. 1. nihil attinebat. finis enim ( τὸ τέλος) per sese est quod homines omnibus factis suis consequi student (v. Ethica Nicom. 1, 5. Magna Mor. I, 4. Eudem. II, 1), tragoediae autem finis singulari quadam actione continetur. de fine igitur generatim dici quidquam h. 1. non aptum erat. quid, quod tragoediae finem esse τὸν μῦθον (h. e. πρᾶξιν sive πράγματα) non multo post ex praecedentibus demum colligitur? sic: ὥστε τὰ πράγματα καὶ ὁ μῦθος τέλος τῆς τραγῳδίας. itaque falsus scriptor verum praecurrens fini generatim vindicat 4) quae ille de tragoediae fine praedicat. insiticiis eiectis, Aristotelis ratiocinatio bene procedit, id quod manifestissimum est interpolationis indicium. propositio maior est ἡ γὰρ τραγῳδία μίμησίς ἐστιν οὐκ ἀνθρώπων (h. e. ποιότητος ἀνθρώπων) ἀλλὰ πράξεως. sequitur minor εἰσὶ δὲ (h. e. atqui sunt cet.) κατὰ μὲν τὰ ἤθη ποιοί τινες, κατὰ δὲ τὰς πράξεις εὐδαίμονες ἢ τουναντίον. inde hoc consectatarium est, οὔκουν (non igitur) ὅπως τὰ ἤθη (sive τὴν ποιότητα) μιμήσωνται πράττουσιν, ἀλλὰ τὰ ἤθη συμπεριλαμβάνουσι διὰ τὰς πράξεις. ex his tribus pronuntiatis consequitur iam altera et primaria conclusio ὥστε τὰ πράγματα καὶ ὁ μῦθος τέλος τῆς τραγῳδίας, cui cum successisset τὸ δὲ τέλος μέγιστον ἁπάντων, nunc ostensum est quod demon- 4) Quae interpolator de fine ( τῷ τέλει) profert, ea Aristotelis doctrinae alibi expositae non quidem repugnant, sed Aristoteles ipse placita sua neque loco non apto neque nisi aliis libris allegatis afferre solet.13) strandum ante proposuerat (§.9 init.), dico μέγιστον δὲ τούτων ἐστὶν ἡ τῶν πραγμάτων σύστασις. ex illo enim additamento τὸ δὲ τέλος μέγιστον ἁπάντων apparet fabulam non solum potiorem esse moribus sed potiorem etiam ceteris tragoediae partibus.

11. mvp-aristotle-comment-45

Ritter, cap. 6 § 11

post absolutam illam ratiocinationem (§. 9-10) hinc iam sequuntur quattuor σημεῖα, quibus quae ante demonstrata sunt firmari auctor voluit. primum est, sine moribus fieri tragoediam posse, sine fabula non posse. a

12. mvp-aristotle-comment-46

Ritter, cap. 6 § 12

ἔτι ἐάν τις ἐφεξῆς – καὶ σύστασιν πραγμάτων: est alterum σημεῖον. particulam negantem ante ποιήσει ex Aldina recepi cum ceteris editoribus. codicibus omittitur, et quidem ab omnibus ut videtur; Buhlius certe ex Winstanleii silentio nimis festinanter collegit οὐ inesse libris Mediceis. etiamsi concedere ultro velis, eum quoque qui deinceqs ponet sermones moratos et locutiones sententiasque bene factas, quodammodo facere quod sit tragici poetae officium, tum saltem scribi oportuit ποιήσει μὲν ὅ ἐστι τῆς τραγῳδίας ἔργον. ut nunc est, particula negante carere non possumus.

13. mvp-aristotle-comment-47

Ritter, cap. 6 § 13

tertium signum ad fabulae praestantiam et dignitatem declarandam ex partibus eius ducitur: nam cum eae valde graves sint, totum non minus grave esse sequitur. ceterum partes illae, περιπέτεια et ἀναγνώρισις, non in omnibus fabulis reperiuntur sed in unis implexis. haec igitur minus accurate scripta sunt.

14. mvp-aristotle-comment-48

Ritter, cap. 6 § 14

ἔτι σημεῖον κτλ. accedit quartum σημεῖον ad obtinendam sententiam §. 9. pronuntiatam. - οἷον καὶ οἱ πρῶτοι ποιηταὶ σχεδὸν ἅπαντες : non solum tragoediarum scriptores qui certare primum incipiunt in operis summa solent deficere, sed ceteri quoque poetae fere omnes, cum carmina pangere primum adgrediuntur.

15. mvp-aristotle-comment-49

Ritter, cap. 6 § 15

-19. quae iam sequuntur ab aliena manu Aristotelis operi inserta esse dico, et inserta quidem ab antiquo interpolatore qui hanc disputationem mancam esse ratus, cum unius fabulae dignitatis explicatio ei sufficere non videretur,ceterarum etiam partium ordinem et gradus exponendos sibi sumpsit, sed efficere quod operae pretium esset tamen non potuit, ut haec pro insiticiis habeam, quinque mihi suadent argumenta. 1. ordo singulis sententiis et nexus deest. 2. quae iam dicta sunt inepte repetuntur. 3. definitiones partim falsae partim inanes proponuntur. 4. nonnulla prioribus repugnant. 5. exposita fabulae prae ceteris partibus praestantia, post §. 14. apte pergere Aristoteles potest ut pergit capitis 7. initio. mores autem post fabulam gravissimam tragoediae partem esse, hoc sibi a legentibus concedi sperare ille poterat. singula ordine persequar. · παραπλήσιον - εἰκόνα: rerum complexionem primum tragoediae negotium esse, proximum autem descriptionem morum, id pessime hoc exemplo illustrari amantissimus quisque veritatis libenter mihi concesserit. scilicet φάρμακα pulcherrima et fuse illita comparavit iste cum moribus, imaginem albam delineatam cum fabula. utrisque delectari homines statuit, sed coloribus istis fuse illitis non aeque ( οὐχ ὁμοίως) atque imagine alba delineata. itaque (sic ille ratiocinatus est) fabula magis delectat quam mores, ideoque mores post fabulam collocandi sunt. hem hominem acutum. praeterea ἐναλείφειν τοῖς καλλίστοις φαρμάκοις est illinere pulcherrimis coloribus, ubi deest quid coloribus inducatur : quippe debuit ἐναλείψειε τὰ κάλλιστα φάρμακα. sed quaeritur possitne vitari offensio, si hic locus in fine §. 12. post ἔχουσα δὲ μῦθον καὶ σύστασιν πραγμάτων inseratur, id quod fecerunt et Buhlius et Hermannus. ego non sequar; primum quia transpositio ipsa violentum est remedium, tum quia non esse Aristotelis scio in re manifesta post minimum intervallum ex eadem arte exemplum petere, quod fit si haec post §. 12. inseruntur, deinde quod comparatio vel sic male instituta est: nam tum colores nullo ordine ( χύδην) illiti conferuntur moralibus sermonibus deinceps positis, cet. aliud indicium, quo transpositionem perperam fieri liquet, ex sequentibus (§. 15 extr.) se offert: nam transpositione facta, iam illa ἔστι τε μίμησις πράξεως, καὶ διὰ ταύτην μάλιστα τῶν πραττόντων sic legi non possunt, sed pro τε cum Hermanno γὰρ substituendum est. sed quis tandem pro γὰρ ponere τε animum induxisset, si id ab initio fuisset? immo τε non mutandum: interpolator enim iam alterum affert σημεῖον, unde mores post fabulam proximum locum occupare iste prò- bare intendit, idque imperite adnectit ἔστι τε μίμησις κτλ., imperite quidem sed tam bene quam ab isto exspectari potest. ipsam suam sapientiam hausit ex Aristoteliis illis (§. 10) οὔκουν ὅπως τὰ ἤθη μιμήσωνται πράττουσιν, ἀλλὰ τὰ ἤθη συμπεριλαμβάνουσι διὰ τὰς πράξεις. cum scribit τῶν πραττόντων, cogitavit iste τῆς ποιότητος (vel ἤθων) τῶν πραττόντων. fortasse respexit etiam illa (§. 9) ἡ γὰρ τραγῳδία μίμησίς ἐστιν οὐκ ἀνθρώπων ἀλλὰ πράξεως.

16. mvp-aristotle-comment-50

Ritter, cap. 6 § 16

τρίτον δὲ διάνοια. τοῦτο κτλ. διάνοιαν Aristoteles definivit §. 6., interpolator definitionem h. 1. promit ab Aristotelia multum diversam et paulo post (§. 17) aliam etiam cum Aristotelia convenientem. num haec Aristostoteli tribuemus ? num Aristolelem eodem capite ter ad idem revolvi putabimus? sed vide mihi priorem hanc interpolatoris definitionem διανοίας: esse facultatem dicendi ( τὸ λέγειν δύνασθαι) quae in re sint quaeque apta sint. nimirum Aristoteles διάνοιαν partem tragoediae intelligit (den Gedankengehalt), interpolator eandem pro facultate humana accipit (die Fähigkeit das Richtige und Passende zu sagen.) - ὅπερ ἐπὶ τῶν λόγων κτλ. technicus noster digreditur ad orationes. conf. Commentar. ad c. 25,3. quod sequitur οἱ μὲν γὰρ ἀρχαῖοι πολιτικῶς ἐποίουν λέγοντας, οἱ δὲ νῦν ῥητορικῶς, perperam de poetis tragicis antiquis et novis dictum esse multi crediderunt: immo tota illa digressio ὅπερ ἐπὶ τῶν λόγων - ῥητορικῶς aperte oratores spectat, non poetas. distinguit interpolator inter oratores politicos, h. e. qui de veris causis dicebant, et scholasticos qui fictas componebant.

17. mvp-aristotle-comment-51

Ritter, cap. 6 § 17

ὃ δηλοῖ τὴν προαίρεσιν ὁποία τις: haec hausta sunt ex Rhetoricis III, 16. p. 1417 a 15. statim autem discurrit iterum ad orationes, διόπερ οὐκ ἔχουσιν ἦθος τῶν λόγων ἐν οἷς cet., et mire scribit τῶν λόγων ἐν οἷς cet. pro τῶν λόγων ὅσοις μηδ' ὅλως ἔνεστι, quam insolentiam in Latina interpretatione servavi. iam tertium revolvitur homo inconstantissimus ad διάνοιαν, et nunc quidem eius definitionem promit Aristoteli consentientem, sed suae modo prolatae repugnantem.

18. mvp-aristotle-comment-52

Ritter, cap. 6 § 18

τέταρτον - δύναμιν: haec omnia inania sunt et inepta et Aristoteliis male convenientia. Aristoteles enim λέξιν partem tragoediae constituit, et quidem eam partem quae numeris inclusa est sed cantu et saltatione caret, senarios, etiam tetrametros et anapaestos plerosque, hic homo orationum elocutionem intelligit et paulo post non recte Aristotelis definitione percepta addit λέξιν esse τὴν διὰ τῆς ὀνομασίας ἑρμηνείαν. scilicet interpolator explicat quam λέξιν vulgo intelligant homines, Aristoteles eodem nomine nove usus est ad designandam tragoediae partem. ἐπὶ τῶν λόγων: in orationibus prosa sermone conscriptis.

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Ritter, cap. 6 § 19

quae a §. 15 usque ad hunc locum tractavi, ea non esse Aristotelis in posterum omnes credituros esse spero : sed quae iam sequuntur fortasse defendi possunt, si quis in fine §. 14. verba δεύτερον δὲ τὰ ἤθη a me Aristoteli relicta etiam interpolatori tribuat, ut finis §. 14. et initium §. 19. in hunc modum connectantur ἀρχὴ μὲν οὖν καὶ οἷον ψυχὴ ὁ μύθος τῆς τραγῳδίας· τῶν δὲ λοιπῶν πέντε ἡ μελοποιία μέγιστον τῶν ἡδυσμάτων. sed haec quoque defensio consistere nequit. nam cum adhuc, ex medio sublatis illis §. 15-18., de duobus (de moribus et fabula) dictum esset, pergere debuit τῶν δὲ λοιπῶν τεττάρων, non πέντε. neque ratio est, cur διάνοιαν et λέξιν silentio transmitti, ὄψιν autem et μελοποιίαν rursus memorari vellet. accedunt alia quae statim afferentur. τῶν δὲ λοιπῶν πέντε: quomodo quinque partes supersunt, cum post quattuor ante commemoratas duae restent, μελοποιία et ὄψις ? dixerit aliquis, postremo disputatum esse de dictione ( λέξει), quam respiciens Aristoteles scripserit τῶν δὲ λοιπῶν πέντε. sed haec vana sunt. sic enim )haec prodit sententia, μελοποιίαν excepta dictione ( λέξει) omnium partium summum esse condimentorum tragoediae, sed quis λέξιν condimentum tragoediae appellaverit? immo tragoediae ne sunt quidem condimenta, sed sunt dictionis ( λέξεως), numeri videlicet et cantus. vid. c. 6, 3. hoc πέντε igitur dormitanti homini tribuendum erit. ἡ δὲ ὄψις-ποιητικῆς: haec per se non falsa videntur, sed vix conciliari poterunt cum illa Aristotelis sententia (§. 4) quae ὄψιν necessariam tragoediae partem constituit. neque id verum omnino videtur, ὄψιν esse ἀτεχνότατον καὶ ἥκιστα οἰκεῖον τῆς ποιητικῆς: immo in excogitandis rerum et casuum formis in scena repraesentandis magna poе- tae solertia versari potest. interpolator de rebus quibusdam externis cogitasse videtur. id apparet ex additis ἡ γὰρ τῆς τραγῳδίας δύναμις καὶ ἄνευ ἀγῶνος καὶ ὑποκριτῶν ἐστίν. est sane, sed tamen sine ὄψει tragoedia consistere non potest: nam si legitur tantum, ὄψις illa suppleri a legentibus vel audientibus debet, ut ne sic quidem deesse possit. - ἔτι δὲ κυριωτέρα- τῶν ποιητῶν ἐστίν: etiam haec argumento sunt, interpolatorem quid ὄψιν Aristoteles intellexerit non satis percepisse. numerum pluralem apud verum Aristotelem in hoc opere non invenio. vid. c. 6, 8., ubi ὄψεις in loco ab aliena manuinserta. numeri insolentiam tenui in Latina interpretatione.