ἐν ναῶν οἰκοδομήσεσιν
shews that Plato understood Homer's
ἔρεψα (
εἴ ποτέ τοι χαρίεντ’ ἐπὶ νηὸν ἔρεψα) of building. According to Leaf,
ἔρεψα seems to denote the most primitive form of temple —“a mere roof to protect the image of a god standing in a grove.”
τεῖσαι ‐‐ βέλεσιν
. Ἀχαιούς is of course the subject to
τεῖσαι (‘pay for,’ ‘expiate’): in Homer it is
τίσειαν Δαναοὶ ἐμὰ δάκρυα σοῖσι βέλεσσιν. The translation ‘that he would avenge his tears upon the Achaeans’ (D. and V.) is wrong.
ἅ is apparently a solitary instance of
ὅς=‘suus’ in Attic prose (Kühner-Blass l.c. I 1, p. 602). Plato chooses the word because it expresses Homer's
ἐμά briefly and neatly, rather than from any conscious desire to make the paraphrase archaic.
τραγῳδίας
. Adimantus quotes a single concrete instance—‘tragedies’—to shew that he now apprehends the meaning of
μίμησις. Socrates, out of politeness and because he wishes to make progress, interprets this as a recognition of the imitative character of Tragedy and Comedy in general (
ὥσπερ σὺ λέγεις τραγῳδία τε καὶ κωμῳδία), as in point of fact it virtually is.
ὥσπερ σὺ λέγεις is not true in the beggarly literal sense of
λέγειν, but it is sufficiently so for polite conversation. To insert—with Herwerden and Hartman—
τε καὶ κωμῳδίας after
τραγῳδίας seems to me unnecessary and pedantic.
εὕροις δ) ἂν ‐‐ διθυράμβοις
. The dithyramb was at first purely narrative or nearly so; it afterwards became mimetic (Arist.
Probl. XIX 15. 918^{b} 19). Only one of Pindar's dithyrambic fragments appears to be ‘mimetic’ (
Frag. 74). On the growth and decline of the Dithyramb see Smyth
Greek Melic Poets pp. xliii—lviii.
τε ‐‐ δὲ καί
. II 367 C note
εἴ μοι μανθάνεις
: ‘if I can make you understand,’ with reference to
μανθάνω in 392 C, 394 B, C. Heindorf's
εἴ μου μανθάνεις (as in
Phil. 51 C
) is attractive, but the corruption is not easy to explain, and the MS reading is sufficiently defended by I 343 A
ὅς γε αὐτῇ οὐδὲ πρόβατα—γιγνώσκεις (so also Hartman).
τοῦτο ‐‐ αὐτό
refers to
ὅτι χρείη— μιμεῖσθαι, and
ἔλεγον is ‘was saying’ i.e. ‘was trying to say,’ viz. when I digressed.
εἴτε παραδεξόμεθα κτλ.
Krohn (
Pl. St. p. 13) declares this passage to be inconsistent with II 373 B, where
ὑποκριταί, χορευταί, ἐργολάβοι are admitted. He forgets or ignores the fact that in § 373 Plato is describing the
τρυφῶσα πόλις, which he is now engaged in ‘purging’ (399 E). See II 372 D note
ἴσως δὲ ‐‐ τούτων
. In this remark J. and C. find “an anticipation of the condemnation of epic poetry in Book X.” I cannot see that it does more than prepare the way for
ἀλλ’ ὅπῃ ἂν—ἰτέον. See on X 595 A.
πότερον μιμητικοὺς κτλ.
The question is not ‘Are our guardians to become dramatic poets?’ but ‘Are they to have the imitative habit of mind?’ The answer is in the negative, and the drama is banished because it fosters this habit in spectators. Cf. 395 D note
ὅτι ‐‐ πολλὰ δ) οὔ
explains
τοῖς ἔμπροσθεν, as Hartman points out, and not
τοῦτο, as D. and V. translate.
ἔμπροσθεν refers to II 370 B.
πολλῶν κτλ.
suggests, perhaps intentionally,
πόλλ’ ἠπίστατο ἔργα, κακῶς δ’ ἠπίστατο πάντα. The words
ὥστ’ — ἐλλόγιμος—equivalent to a neuter accusative—are undeservedly cancelled by Herwerden and Hartman. Translate ‘he will fail in all of them to attain creditable distinction’: cf. the adverb
κακῶς in
κακῶς δ’ ἠπίστατο πάντα.
οὐκοῦν κτλ.
The reasoning is
a fortiori: if two or more departments of merely imitative art cannot be represented by the same person, still less can imitation be combined with any serious pursuit (
σχολῇ ἄρα κτλ.).