τριττὰ ‐‐ ὄντος
: ‘are three stages removed from Truth.’ One of Schneider's MSS has
τριτὰ (
sic), and Herwerden conjectures
τρίτα, comparing
τρίτος ἀπὸ τῆς ἀληθείας in D. Possibly Proclus also read
τρίτα: see the critical note in Kroll's edition of the
in remp. I p. 203. 22. If the numeral is an adjective agreeing with
ἔργα, we must certainly read
τρίτα, but it may be an accusative of extent, i. q.
τρία ἀπέχοντα. I therefore think it safer to retain the MS reading, especially as
τριττά was more likely to be corrupted into
τρίτα than conversely.
φαντάσματα ‐‐ ποιοῦσιν
. 596 E.
ἤ τι καὶ κτλ.
: ‘or whether again there is something in what they say.’
ἢ καί is sometimes thus used instead of
ἤ, from a feeling that it introduces something additional, viz. an additional alternative. Cf. (with Schneider) Hom.
Il. II 238 and Pl.
Laws 744 A. The force of
ἢ καί in
Ap. 27 E
,
Phaedr. 269 A
and infra 602 D, 605 D is nearly, but not quite, the same.
ἐπὶ ‐‐ δημιουργίᾳ
depends on
σπουδάζειν, rather than on
ἀφεῖναι. The word
σπουδάζειν is emphatic: he might occasionally
παίζειν ἐν τοῖς τοιούτοις, but he would never make it the serious business of his life: cf. infra 602 B, VII 536 C note and
Phaedr. 276 C
ff. The whole of this passage reminds us very strongly of the depreciatory estimate of written books in the
Phaedrus. Cf. 599 B note
τοῦτο ‐‐ ἔχοντα
: ‘set this in the forefront of his life as his best possession,’ in accordance with the maxim
τὰ καλὰ τρέψαι ἔξω in Pind.
Pyth. 3. 83.
προστήσασθαι is used like
πρόστασις IX 577 A, and
προστησάμενοι in VII 531 B is not very different. Others (Schneider, Stallbaum, etc.) think
προστήσασθαι κτλ. means ‘to set before his life’ as an aim or goal. In itself, this rendering is unexceptionable; but it does not suit with
ὡς βέλτιστον ἔχοντα. The word
ἔχοντα cannot be equivalent to
ἡγούμενον ‘considering’ (in spite of the exceptional phrase
ἐντίμως ἔχειν VII 528 B note); nor is it easy to accept the version of Schneider “und dieses als das beste was er
könnte.” The emphasis requires us to take
ἔχοντα in its full sense (“als das beste was er habe” Schleiermacher). Stallbaum conjectures
ὡς βέλτιστ’ ἂν ἔχοντα, but the text is sound. For
βέλτιστον instead of
τὸ βέλτιστον cf. (with Schneider)
μέγιστον ἀγαθόν in I 330 D.
ἐν τοῖς ἔργοις
. ἐπί for
ἐν is called for by Herwerden, but cf.
Laws 834 B
τὰς σπουδὰς—τάς τε ἐν τῇ τροφῇ καὶ τὰς περὶ ἀγωνίαν αὐτῶν. In
ἔργοις there is combined the twofold sense of ‘deeds’ and ‘originals’ )(
μιμήματα: the originals of dramatic
μίμησις are actions (603 C note).
καὶ εἶναι ‐‐ ἐγκωμιάζων
. He would rather be Achilles than Homer. There is another side of the question, represented by Pindar's
ῥῆμα δ’ ἑργμάτων χρονιώτερον βιοτεύει (
Nem. 4. 6), and by Plato himself very forcibly in
Symp. 209 D
, and it is certainly unfair to insinuate that no one would write good poems if he were capable of doing great deeds. Some of Plato's expressions in this passage almost suggest the tone of a man of letters pining for a life of action: cf. VI 496 D notes
ὠφελία
: not simply to the agent himself: cf.
σφᾶς ὠφεληκέναι 599 E.
ἐρωτῶντες κτλ.
Cf.
Ion 537 C ff.,
Ap. 22 A
—C.
τοὺς ἐκγόνους are of course the Asclepiadae: see on III 405 D.
ὡρισάμεθα κτλ.
See 597 E f. From
ἀλλὰ καὶ δεύτερος we may infer that “the actual law-giver, in Plato's view, is second from reality” (Bosanquet).
τίς τῶν πόλεων κτλ.
Contrast
Symp. 209 C
ff. where Homer and Hesiod are linked with Lycurgus, Solon,
καὶ ἄλλοι ἄλλοθι πολλαχοῦ ἄνδρες, καὶ ἐν Ἕλλησι καὶ ἐν βαρβάροις, πολλὰ καὶ καλὰ ἀποφηνάμενοι ἔργα, γεννήσαντες παντοίαν ἀρετήν.
σὲ δὲ τίς κτλ.
Yet it is a genuinely Greek sentiment that ‘Poets are the unacknowledged’—a Greek would have said ‘acknowledged’—‘legislators of the world’ (Shelley).
Χαρώνδαν κτλ.
Charondas, of Catana in Sicily, the legislator of the Chalcidian colonies in Italy and Sicily, is not elsewhere mentioned by Plato, though frequently by Aristotle: see Susemihl and Hicks on Arist.
Pol. A 2. 1252^{b} 14. The date of Charondas is probably the sixth century B.C.: see Niese in Pauly-Wissowa
art. Charondas, where the authorities relating to this early legislator are cited and reviewed. It is worth noting, in view of
Ἰταλία here and elsewhere in Plato (
Laws 777 C,
Tim. 20 A
: cf. also
Laws 659 B), that an argument against the genuineness of the seventh Platonic Epistle has been derived from the fact that it mentions Italy (326 B, 339 D): see Hermann,
Gesch. u. System p. 591 note 213.
Ὁμηριδῶν
: ‘votaries of Homer,’ ‘Homer's devotees.’ So the word is rightly explained by Heine (
de rat. quae Pl. c. poet. Gr. intercedit pp. 18—22), and also by Jebb (
Homer p. 78). Cf.
Ὁμήρου ἐπαινέταις 606 E and the use of
Ὁμηρίδαι in
Ion 530 E,
Phaedr. 252 B
. The original meaning of
Ὁμηρίδαι is discussed by Jebb l.c.
ἀλλὰ δή
like
ἀλλὰ γάρ=‘at enim’ (II 365 C note).