Homer Iliad 23.514

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Young Nestor follows, (who by art, not force,
O'erpass'd Atrides,) second in the course.
Behind, Atrides urged the race, more near
Than to the courser in his swift career
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The following car, just touching with his heel
And brushing with his tail the whirling wheel: 1
Such, and so narrow, now the space between
The rivals, late so distant on the green;
So soon swift Æthe her lost ground regain'd,
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One length, one moment, had the race obtain'd.

Iliad. Homer. London. 1863.

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Current edition Experimental

English (Alexander Pope, 1720, ed. Watson, 1857) (OCR draft) (English) (English (Alexander Pope, 1720, ed. Watson, 1857))

Provisional text from uncorrected OCR; expect errors.

Editions (1)
Ἰλιάς Perseus (Homer. Homeri Opera, Volumes 1-2. Monro, D. B. (David Binning), editor; Allen, Thomas W. (Thomas William), editor. Oxford: Clarendon Press, 1908-1920.) — 23.514 focus
Translations (8)
Iliad Perseus (Homer. The Iliad, Volume 1-2. Murray, A. T. (Augustus Taber), translator. London: William Heinmann; New York: G.P. Putnam's Sons, 1924-1925.) — 23.514 focus
Iliad Perseus (Homer. The Iliad of Homer, rendered into English prose for the use of those who cannot read the original. Butler, Samuel, 1835-1902, translator. London: Longmans, Green, and Co, 1898.) — 23.500 focus
English (Butler, rev. Nagy et al., 2020) (OCR draft) Experimental (English (Butler, rev. Nagy et al., 2020)) — 23.514 focus
Next after him came in Antilokhos of the race of Neleus, [515] who had passed Menelaos by craft [ kerdos] and not by the fleetness of his horses; but even so Menelaos came in as close behind him as the wheel is to the horse that draws both the chariot and its master. [520] The end hairs of a horse’s tail touch the tire of the wheel, and there is never much space between wheel and horse when the chariot is going; Menelaos was no further than this behind Antilokhos, the blameless, though at first he had been a full disc’s throw behind him. He had soon caught him up again, for Agamemnon’s mare, Aethe [525] of the fair mane, kept pulling stronger and stronger, so that if the course had been longer he would have passed him, and there would not even have been a dead heat. Idomeneus’ brave attendant [ therapōn] Meriones was about a spear’s cast behind glorious Menelaos. [530] His horses were slowest of all in the contest [ agōn], and he was the worst driver. Last of them all came the son of Admetos, dragging his chariot and driving his horses on in front. When radiant swift-footed Achilles saw him he was sorry, [535] and stood up among the Argives saying, “The best man is coming in last. Let us give him a prize for it is reasonable. He shall have the second, but the first must go to the son of Tydeus.”
English (William Cullen Bryant, 1870) (OCR draft) Experimental (English (William Cullen Bryant, 1870)) — 23.514 focus
English (Thomas Hobbes, 1667, ed. Molesworth 1843) (OCR draft) Experimental (English (Thomas Hobbes, 1667, ed. Molesworth 1843)) — 23.514 focus
English (George Chapman, 1611, ed. Hooper 1857) (OCR draft) Experimental (English (George Chapman, 1611, ed. Hooper 1857)) — 23.514 focus
English (William Cowper, 1791, ed. Southey) (OCR draft) Experimental (English (William Cowper, 1791, ed. Southey)) — 23.514 focus
English (F. W. Newman, 1856) (OCR draft) Experimental (English (F. W. Newman, 1856)) — 23 focus

Notes on the current edition

Iliad

1. Menelaus followed as close upon Antilochus as a chariot follows upon the horse that draws it.

New Alexandria Commentaries

Douglas Frame

analysis of the motivation of Nestor’s speech of advice to Antilochus – evoking Nestor’s own earlier race (the turning post, on which Nestor spends so much time, is ignored in the description of the race)

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comparison of Antilochus with the skilled charioteer in Nestor’s speech and Antilochus’ taking to heart what Nestor says (oude me lēsei/he lēthei)

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analysis of the role of noos in Antilochus’ race (contra Menelaus’ words regarding Antilochus’ noos)

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analysis of the role of noos in Antilochus’ race (contra Menelaus’ words regarding Antilochus’ noos)

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comparison of Antilochus’ and Menelaus’ race with Nestor’s against the Epeian twins, in terms of incitement and (not) crashing

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comparison of Antilochus’ and Menelaus’ race with Nestor’s against the Epeian twins, in terms of incitement and (not) crashing

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comparison of Antilochus’ heedless incitement to Nestor’s state of mind when he crashed, and Patroclus’ when the gods call him to death (I.16.693)

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comparison of Antilochus’ and Menelaus’ race with Nestor’s against the Epeian twins, in terms of incitement and (not) crashing

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analysis of Menelaus’ characterization as a follower in his relationship with Agamemnon, here in particular the use of the verb methiēmi of him in these verses and in I.10.121

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analysis of Antilochus’ and Menelaus’ dispute over the second prize in the chariot race

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analysis of Eumelos’ virtual race (as surmised by Idomeneus) and comparison with Nestor’s race in his youth

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Eumelos’ virtual race as a description of Nestor’s youthful race, in the context of analyzing Nestor and Diomedes as charioteers in I.08 and Nestor’s dropping the reins

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analysis of Eumelos’ virtual race (as surmised by Idomeneus) and comparison with Nestor’s race in his youth

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analysis of Eumelos’ virtual race (as surmised by Idomeneus) and comparison with Nestor’s race in his youth

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analysis of the symbolism of the whip and the yoke in Diomedes’ race

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analysis of the symbolism of the whip and the yoke in Diomedes’ race

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analysis of Antilochus’ mētis and comparison of this verse with I.23.322

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analysis of the attitude towards, and the reality of, the ability of female horses in chariot races

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analysis of Antilochus’ and Menelaus’ dispute over the second prize in the chariot race

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analysis of Antilochus’ and Menelaus’ dispute over the second prize in the chariot race

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analysis of Antilochus’ and Menelaus’ dispute over the second prize in the chariot race

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analysis of the role of mētis and noos in Antilochus’ race, and specifically the significance of the verse 590 on noos and mētis

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analysis of the role of mētis and noos in Antilochus’ race, and specifically Antilochus’ uncharacteristically unbalanced mind during the race, according to Menelaus

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analysis of Antilochus’ and Menelaus’ dispute over the second prize in the chariot race

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analysis of the role of mētis and noos in Antilochus’ race, argument that Antilochus’ victory is a victory of noos, and the name of Noēmōn in these verses corroborating this interpretation

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analysis of Nestor’s role in the chariot race and the relevance of Nestor’s youthful crash to Patroclus, with reference to Nestor’s story to him in I.11

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traces of solar myth in Nestor’s traditions, here the funeral games of Amarunkeus

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Gregory Nagy

The funeral that Achilles arranges here for Patroklos in the Iliad is in some ways a preview of the funeral that the Achaeans will arrange for Achilles himself beyond the time-frame of the Iliad. A high point of the funeral in Iliad 23 is a spectacular chariot race arranged by Achilles to honor his dead comrade Patroklos. But an earlier high point is a comparably spectacular cremation of his friend’s body. But this cremation of Patroklos, as a ritual, is far from perfect: it is in fact polluted, and the pollution will make Achilles look bad, at least for the moment. The polluted thoughts of the hero, as evidenced by his dragging the corpse of Hector behind his speeding chariot, will drive him to extremes that will challenge the cosmic order. But the Master Narrator of the Iliad will remedy the pollution, and the remedy will take the form of actually narrating the grim story. In the process of this narration, a great lesson will be learned about life, death, and a hoped-for recovery of life.

draft js image errorAchilles dragging the body of Hector. Copperplate etching (1795) by Tommaso Piroli, after a drawing (1793) by John Flaxman. Image via Wikimedia Commons.

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one of the two attestations of histor in the Iliad or the Odyssey

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Here we see an example of pherein and agein in a construction that corresponds to what we find in Cato's De agri cultura 141.1-2, where we read circum-ferō and circus-agō in a ritual context.

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See anchor comment at I.23.113 on Meriones as therapōn of Idomeneus.

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the funeral of a hero as the primary occasion for athletic contests in Homeric narrative, in the context of the analysis of the evidence of hero cult in the Iliad and the Odyssey

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Leonard Muellner

in a list of examples of eukhesthai + dative (formulas which report prayers)

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analysis of the enjambed attestations of #[eukh– –] with dative

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Richard Martin

The dispute between Ajax and Idomeneus at the Funeral Games (23.457-98) illustrates several features of the flyting genre in sequence. Idomeneus' muthos is an attempt to gain authority by the suggestion that he alone has the ability to discern the race results before it is over (23.457-72), and also gives him an opportunity to single out Diomedes for praise (23.471-73). Ajax recognizes the move for what it is and criticizes the older hero's style: "Why are you blustering beforehand?" (labreueai, 23.474). Ajax then denigrates Idomeneus not only for the content of his speech but for his proficiency at this abased speech form itself: "You are always blustering with muthoi. You mustn't be a blustering speaker. There are better ones present" (23.479-80). Idomeneus springs on Ajax the same rhetorical trap seen elsewhere (Agamemnon at 4.399-400), implicitly conceding the honor of best flyting speaker to Ajax while suggesting that prowess in flyting is accompanied by incompetence at all else (23.483-84). Achilles interrupts the escalating flyting match with a command to focus attention on nikē rather than neikos (23.496), deflecting blame onto those who would use the genre: "Get angry at another, whoever would do such things" (23.494) (Martin 1993:75-76).

For the broader analysis of the flyting genre, see the comment on Iliad 4.336-421.

References

Martin, R. P. 1993. The Language of Heroes: Speech and Performance in the Iliad. Ithaca.

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