Sophocles Electra 287

Robert Potter (Translator)

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Clytemnestra
My son, my son
Have pity on thy mother!

Electra. Sophocles. Robert Potter (Translator). London. 1820.

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English (Robert Potter, 1788) (OCR draft) (English) (English (Robert Potter, 1788))

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Editions (2)
Greek (Lewis Campbell, 1879) (OCR draft) Experimental (Greek (Lewis Campbell, 1879)) — 275 focus
ἡ δ᾽ ἤδ' L Pal. Schaef. corr. ἡ δ' A. ὧδε τλήμων ὥστε τῷ μιάστορι
275
Greek (F. Storr, 1912) (OCR draft) Experimental (Greek (F. Storr, 1912)) — 251-471 focus
Translations (4)
English (Lewis Campbell, 1906) (OCR draft) Experimental (English (Lewis Campbell, 1906)) — 287 focus
EL
Ah me! thou hast unveiled
1245
And thrust before my gaze
That burning load of my distress
No time will soothe, no remedy will heal.
German (J. J. C. Donner, 1875; OCR review) (OCR draft) Experimental (German (J. J. C. Donner, 1875; OCR review)) — 282 focus
Ich Kind des Unglücks, muß ich das im Hause seh'n,
Vergehe, weine, schluchze laut zu diesem Mahl
275
Des Jammers, das sie meines Vaters Mahl benennt,
Allein für mich; denn auch zu weinen ist mir nicht
So viel vergönnt, als meines Herzens Drang genügt.
Denn diese nach dem Namen hochgesinnte Frau 1
Rust höhnend dann mir diese bösen Worte zu:
280
Gottloses Scheusal, ist der Vater dir allein
Gestorben? Trauert außer dir kein Mensch um ihn?
Stirb hin in Elend, und von diesem Fammer soll
Dich auch der Todesgötter Macht niemals befrein! 2
So ruft sie trozend. Aber hört sie dann einmal,
285
Orestes komme, rennt sie flugs auf mich daher,
Und schreit und wüthet: dir allein, dir dank' ich das!
Es war ja dein Werk; hast du doch aus meinem Arm
Entwandt Oresten, und geheim ihn fortgeschafft!
Doch wisse: büßen sollst du mir verdienten Lohn!
290
So bellt sie tobend, und an ihrer Seite reizt
Ihr hochgerühmter Buhle sie noch mehr dazu,
Der überall feigherzig Allverderbliche,
Der im Verein mit Frauen seine Schlachten schlägt.
Ich, ewig harrend, daß Orestes mein Geschick
295
Zu wenden komme, schwinde hin in meinem Gram.
Denn ewig zaudernd hat er meine Hoffnungen,
Die nahen, wie die fernen, mir in Nichts verkehrt.
In solcher Noth, ihr Lieben, wer mag Mäßigung,
Wer fromme Tugend üben? Traun, im Uebel drängt
300
Es uns gewaltsam, auch zu thun, was übel ist.
English (Thomas Francklin, 1758–1759) (OCR draft) Experimental (English (Thomas Francklin, 1758–1759)) — 287 focus
Electra
1397cont2
Hear, then, Apollo, great Lycnean, hear
Who with unsparing hand her choicest gifts
Hath never failed to lay before thy altars !
Accept the little all which now remains
For me to give, accept my humblest prayers,
My vows, my adorations ; smile propitious
On all our counsels ! Oh ! assist us now,
And show mankind what punishment remains
For guilty mortals from ofiended Heaven. [Exeunt.
JJehokl, lie comes ! the slaugliter-beariiig god
Mars, ever thirsting for the murderer's blood ;
And see ! the dogs of war are close behind ;
Naught can escape their all-devouring rage.
This did my conscious heart long since pi'esage,
And the fair dream that struck my raptured mind.
Th' avenger steals along with silent feet,
And sharpened sword, to his paternal seat,
His injured father's wrongs to vindicate ;
Concealed from all by Maia's fraudful son,
Who safe conducts him till the deed be done,
Nor longer will delay the needful work of fate.
Plectra. O my dear friends I they are about it now.
The deed is doing. But be still.
English (Sir Richard Jebb, 1904) (OCR draft) Experimental (English (Sir Richard Jebb, 1904)) — 251-470 focus

Commentary

Commentary (R. C. Jebb) (OCR draft) (Commentary (R. C. Jebb))

mvp-comment-779-1 ἰδού 1

mvp-comment-779-2 μάλ’ αὖ 2

mvp-comment-780-1 ἐκ σέθεν 3

mvp-comment-780-2 ὁ γεννήσας πατήρ 4

mvp-comment-780-3 1413 f. The traditional reading φθίνει φθίνει 5 σε 6 σοι 7 μοῖρα καθαμερία 8 φθίνει 9

mvp-comment-780-4 Others explain as follows. (1) Keeping both σε 10 φθίνει φθίνει 11 σε 12 φθίνειν φθίνειν 13

mvp-comment-780-5 Nor is the objection to these interpretations merely verbal. They represent the Chorus as deploring that doom of the race which entails yet another deed of bloodshed. But, as Whitelaw well observes, this commits Sophocles to the Aeschylean view of the vengeance ‘as a new crime in the series of crimes’ (Translation, p. 437). The Chorus are in the fullest sympathy with the avengers. They regard the slaying of Clytaemnestra not as a new calamity, but as a welcome retribution: cp. 1434

τὰ πρὶν εὖ θέμενοι
, and 1508 ff. The words
ὦ πόλις, ὦ γενεὰ
express the feeling of these
πολίτιδες
(1227) that the cause of the house is that of the city. They hail the approaching deliverance of Mycenae from the tyrants. The change of
ὦ πόλις, ὦ γενεὰ
into
ὦ Πέλοπος γενεὰ
(cr. n.) is equally rash and infelicitous.

mvp-comment-780-6 1415 f. Cp. Aesch. Ag. 1343

ΑΓ. ὤμοι, πέπληγμαι καιρίαν πληγὴν ἔσω
... 1345
ὤμοι μάλ’ αὖθις, δευτέραν πεπληγμένος.

mvp-comment-780-7 διπλῆν 14

mvp-comment-780-8 εἰ γὰρ Αἰγίσθῳ γ’ ὁμοῦ 15

Commentary (Lewis Campbell, 1879) (OCR draft) (Commentary (Lewis Campbell, 1879)) focus

1398-1441. mvp-comment-660-1 The following passage (1398-1441), although consisting largely of senarii, appears to be antistrophic, nearly corresponding even in the division of the lines. According to this view ll. 1404-1406 are either (1) not to be counted in the strophe, or (2) lines answering to them after l. 1427 must be supposed to have been lost. As the lines in question relate to the sudden cry of Clytemnestra from within, the former supposition is sufficiently probable. Cp. note on O. C. 117 foll., vol. i. p. 298 (Ist column). In the 'strophe,' ll. 1398-1421, Clytemnestra is put to death, -in the 'antistrophe,' ll. 1422-41, the bleeding sword is displayed, and Aegisthus is descried. The young men then retire into the palace, and Electra waits outside.

1411-1412. mvp-comment-664-1 ἀλλ᾽.. οὗτος] Cp. supr. 296, 7,601.