Sophocles Electra 18

Robert Potter (Translator)

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Chorus
193
Mournful at his return the voice of woe,
Through all the chambers of thy father's house
Mournful the voice, when the relentless axe
In tempest fell. Fraud first devised, Lust struck
The murderous blow, with horrid thought of old
Forming the horrid image, were these deeds
Or by some god, or daring mortals, wrought.

Electra. Sophocles. Robert Potter (Translator). London. 1820.

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Greek (Lewis Campbell, 1879) (OCR draft) Experimental (Greek (Lewis Campbell, 1879)) — 18 focus
ἑῷα κινεῖ φθέγματ᾽ ὀρνίθων σαφῆ,
Greek (F. Storr, 1912) (OCR draft) Experimental (Greek (F. Storr, 1912)) — 1-120 focus
Translations (4)
English (Lewis Campbell, 1906) (OCR draft) Experimental (English (Lewis Campbell, 1906)) — 18 focus
CH
Take thought to keep thy crying within bound.
Doth not thy sense enlighten thee to see
How recklessly
Even now thou winnest undeservèd woe?
Still art thou found
90
To make thy misery overflow
90
Through self-bred gloomy strife. But not for long
Shall one alone prevail who strives against the strong.
German (J. J. C. Donner, 1875; OCR review) (OCR draft) Experimental (German (J. J. C. Donner, 1875; OCR review)) — 23 focus
bester Diener, liebster Mann, wie legst du mir
Der Treue Zeichen gegen uns so deutlich dar!
Denn wie das Noß aus edler Art, obschon betagt,
25
In keiner Schreckniß und Gefahr den Muth verliert,
Nein, stolz das Ohr aufrichtet: also du, der uns
Zum Kampfe treibt und selbst der Ersten Einer folgt.
Drum will ich offenbaren, was ich ausgedacht;
Doch du vergönne meinem Wort ein scharfes Ohr,
30
Und traf ich nicht das Rechte, gib mir andern Rath.
Nachdem ich angekommen war bei'm pythischen
Orakel, dort zu fragen, wie des Vaters Tod
Ich rächen mög' an jenen, die ihn mordeten,
Gebot mir Phöbos also, wie du gleich vernimmst:
35
Den Streich gerechter Rache mit geheimer List
Allein zu führen, nicht bewehrt mit Schild und Heer.
Nun, da mir solcher Gottesspruch verkündet ward,
Tritt du, sobald die Stunde dich gelegen führt,
Zu diesem Haus ein, auszuspäh'n, was hier geschieht,
40
Auf daß du klar uns meldest, was du wohl erforscht.
Unkenntlich schuf dich Alter und die lange Zeit,
Und vor Verdacht bewahrt dich dieser Blumenschmuck. 1
Doch also sprich zu jenen, daß ein Fremdling du,
Ein Phoker seiest, abgesandt von Phanoteus; 2
45
Denn dieser Mann ist ihres Hauses bester Freund.
Mit Eid betheuernd, melde dann, Orestes sei
Dahingeschieden durch ein unerbittlich Loos,
Bei Kämpfen Pytho's aus dem raschhinrollenden 3
Rennwagen stürzend. Also sei der Rede Sinn.
50
English (Thomas Francklin, 1758–1759) (OCR draft) Experimental (English (Thomas Francklin, 1758–1759)) — 18 focus
Electra
I am myself to blame, and blush to think
How much unfit I seem to liear the weight
Imposed upon me ; but indeed 'tis great.
Forgive me, friends, a woman born as I am,
Must she not grieve to see each added minute
Fraught with new mis'ries? Thus to be a slave
E'en in my father's house, and from those hands
Which shed his blood to ask the means of life !
Think what my soul must sufter to behold
The cursed Aigisthus seated on the throne
Of Agamemnon, in the very robes
Which once were his — to see the tyrant pour
Libations forth e'en on the fat;d spot
Where the sad deed was done. But, worst of all.
To see the murderer usurp his bed.
Embrace my mother (by that honoured name
If I may call a guilty wretch like her).
Who, pleased, returns his love, and, of her crimes i
I Unconscious, smiles, nor fears th' avenging Furies U
I But ever as the bloody day returns ' 1
Which gave the royal victim to her wiles, j ^
Annual the dance and choral song proclaim
A solemn feast, nor impious sacrifice
Forgets she then to her protecting gods.
Shocked at the cruel banquet I letire,
And in some corner hide my griefs, denied
E'en the sad comfort to indulge my sorrows,
For Clytemnestra in opprobrious terms
lleviles me oft ; *' To thee alone," she cries,
" Is Agamemnon lost, detested maid !
Perdition on thee ! May th' infernal gods
J^efuse thee succour, and protract thy pains ! "
Thus rails she bitter, and if chance she hear
Orestes is approaching, stung with rage
Wild she exclaims, " Thou art th' accursed cause ;
This is thy deed, who stole Orestes from mo.
And hid him from my rage ; but be assured
Ere long my vengeance shall o'ertake thee for it
These threats her noble lord still urges on —
That vile adulterei", that abandoned coward,
Whose fearful soul called in a woman's aid
To execute his bloody purposes.
Her wished avenger ; his unkind delay
Destroys my hopes. Alas ! my gentle friends,
Who can bear this, and keep an equal mind?
To suffer ills like mine, and not to err
From wild distraction, would be strange indeed.
Or may we speak our thoughts unblamed ?
English (Sir Richard Jebb, 1904) (OCR draft) Experimental (English (Sir Richard Jebb, 1904)) — 1-120 focus

Commentary

Commentary (R. C. Jebb) (OCR draft) (Commentary (R. C. Jebb))

mvp-comment-114-1 Hitherto the Chorus have offered consolation or counsel. At v. 213 they return to that strain. But here, moved by Electra's misery, they join with her in bewailing its cause.

mvp-comment-114-2 οἰκτρὰ μὲν … πλαγά 1 κοίταις 2 οἰκτρὰ … αὐδὰ 3

mvp-comment-114-3 Sophocles, who follows the Homeric story as to the banquet, could not but remember the

οἰκτροτάτην ὄπα
of the dying Cassandra. And this might naturally suggest to him that other
οἰκτρὰ αὐδή
which she had uttered at an earlier moment, immediately after Agamemnon's return,—her presage of his fate, and her own: Aesch. Ag. 1072 —1314.

mvp-comment-114-4 The sense then is:—‘There was a voice of lamentation at the return from Troy’; alluding especially to Cassandra's laments, but also, perhaps, to forebodings in the mouth of the people at Mycenae. ‘And there was a voice of lamentation

ἐν κοίταις πατρῴαις
, when thy father lay on the couch at the fatal banquet.’ The ‘voice’ at the banquet is, first, that of the dying Agamemnon; but Sophocles may have thought also of Cassandra's death-cry, which was sounding in the king's ears as he fell.—For other interpretations, see Appendix.

mvp-comment-114-5 νόστοις 4 ἐν 5

mvp-comment-114-6 κοίταις 6

mvp-comment-114-7 ὅτε οἱ 7 σοι 8 ἀνταία 9

mvp-comment-114-8 γενύων 10

mvp-comment-115-1 δόλος … ἔρος 11

mvp-comment-116-1 δεινὰν δεινῶς 12 δεινὰν … μορφάν 13

mvp-comment-116-2 εἴτ’ οὖν … εἴτε 14 βροτῶν 15

mvp-comment-117-1 πλέον … ἐχθίστα 16

mvp-comment-117-2 δὴ 17

mvp-comment-118-1 νὺξ 18

mvp-comment-118-2 δείπνων 19

mvp-comment-119-1 ἄχθη 20 τοῖς 21 θανάτους 22

mvp-comment-119-2 διδύμαιν χειροῖν 23 διδύμοιν 24

mvp-comment-120-1 εἷλον … πρόδοτον 25

mvp-comment-121-1 οἷς 26

mvp-comment-121-2 Ὀλύμπιος 27

mvp-comment-122-1 ποίνιμα 28

mvp-comment-123-1 ἀγλαΐας 29

mvp-comment-123-2 ἀποναίατο 30

mvp-comment-124-1 πόρσω 31

mvp-comment-125-1 γνώμαν ἴσχεις 32

mvp-comment-125-2 ἐξ οἵων 33

mvp-comment-125-3 τὰ παρόντ’ 34

mvp-comment-125-4 οἰκείας 35

mvp-comment-126-1 πολύ … τι κακῶν 36

mvp-comment-126-2 ὑπερεκτήσω 37

mvp-comment-127-1 τὰ δὲ 38 οὐκ ἐριστὰ τοῖς δυνατοῖς 39 πλάθειν 40

mvp-comment-127-2 ἐριστά 41

mvp-comment-127-3 πλάθειν 42

mvp-comment-128-1 δεινοῖς ἠναγκάσθην 43

mvp-comment-129-1 ὀργά 44 ἔξοιδ’ 45

mvp-comment-130-1 ἀλλὰ … γὰρ 46

mvp-comment-130-2 ἐν … δεινοῖς 47

mvp-comment-130-3 σχήσω 48

mvp-comment-130-4 ταύτας ἄτας 49

mvp-comment-131-1 ὄφρα 50

mvp-comment-131-2 βίος ἔχῃ με 51 σχήσω 52

mvp-comment-132-1 τίνι γάρ … τίνι φρονοῦντι καίρια 53 ἀκούσαιμ’ ἂν πρόσφορον ἔπος 54 τίνι 55 πρόσφορον 56

mvp-comment-132-2 Other explanations are:—(1) Taking the dative with

πρόσφορον
:—‘To what person who feels aright would that word be suitable which I should hear (=which would be said of me)?’ That is: Should I not deserve to incur a censure from which every right-minded person would shrink? Should I not deserve to be called
δυσσεβής
? This seems forced; and it does not well suit
ἔπος
. (2) Taking the dative with
ἀκούσαιμι
:—‘At whose mouth (= from whom), that thinks aright, could I hear a suitable word of comfort?’ But such a dative seems impossible. In Il. 16. 515
δύνασαι δὲ σὺ πάντοσ’ ἀκούειν
|
ἀνέρι κηδομένῳ
, the dat. is one of interest, denoting the person whose prayer is heard (‘ for him’); cp. Il. 5. 115
κλῦθί μοι
: 24. 335
ἔκλυες ᾧ κ’ ἐθέλῃσθα
.

mvp-comment-133-1 ἄνετε 57

mvp-comment-133-2 ἄλυτα 58

mvp-comment-133-3 κεκλήσεται 59

mvp-comment-133-4 231 f. For ἐκ 60

mvp-comment-133-5 ἀνάριθμος 61 θρήνων 62

mvp-comment-134-1 ἀλλ’ οὖν 63 γε 64 εὐνοίᾳ 65

mvp-comment-135-1 μάτηρ ὡσεί τις 66

mvp-comment-136-1 μὴ τίκτειν 67

mvp-comment-136-2 ἄταν ἄταις 68

mvp-comment-137-1 καὶ τί μέτρον 69 κακότατος 70

mvp-comment-137-2 φέρε 71

mvp-comment-137-3 ἐπὶ τοῖς φθ. 72

mvp-comment-138-1 ἔβλαστ’ 73

mvp-comment-139-1 τούτοις 74

mvp-comment-140-1 εἴ τῳ πρόσκειμαι χρηστῷ 75

mvp-comment-141-1 ξυνναίοιμ’ 76

mvp-comment-141-2 εὔκηλος 77

mvp-comment-141-3 γονέων 78 ἐκτίμους 79

mvp-comment-141-4 ἐκτίμους ἵσχουσα 80

mvp-comment-141-5 πτέρυγας … γόων 81

mvp-comment-141-6 ὀξυτόνων 82

mvp-comment-142-1 εἰ γὰρ 83

mvp-comment-142-2 γᾶ 84

mvp-comment-142-3 οὐδὲν 85 ὢν 86 εἰ 87

mvp-comment-142-4 Electra is contrasting her father, whose earthly life has been cut short, with his murderers, who survive. But she believes that his spirit lives in the world below, and will be active in aiding the vengeance (453 ff.).

mvp-comment-142-5 πάλιν 88

mvp-comment-142-6 ἀντιφόνους δίκας 89

mvp-comment-143-1 ἔρροι τ’ 90

mvp-comment-143-2 αἰδὼς 91 εὐσέβεια 92

mvp-comment-144-1 ἐγὼ μὲν 93

mvp-comment-144-2 καὶ 94 τὸ σὸν … καὶ τοὐμὸν 95

mvp-comment-145-1 νίκα 96

mvp-comment-145-2 ἅμα 97

mvp-comment-146-1 πολλοῖσι θρήνοις 98

mvp-comment-147-1 ἀλλὰ … γὰρ 99

mvp-comment-148-1 ἥτις εὐγενὴς γυνή 100

mvp-comment-149-1 πατρῷα … πήματα 101

mvp-comment-150-1 κατ’ εὐφρόνην 102

mvp-comment-150-2 θάλλοντα 103

mvp-comment-151-1 ᾗ 104

mvp-comment-151-2 πρῶτα μὲν … εἶτα … ἔπειτα 105 ᾗ 106

mvp-comment-151-3 τὰ μητρὸς 107

mvp-comment-151-4 ἔχθιστα συμβέβηκεν 108

mvp-comment-152-1 κἀκ τῶνδ’ ἄρχομαι 109

mvp-comment-153-1 λαβεῖν … τὸ τητᾶσθαι 110

mvp-comment-154-1 ποίας 111 δοκεῖς 112

mvp-comment-155-1 ἴδω 113 εἰσίδω δ’ 114 ἴδω δὲ 115

mvp-comment-155-2 μὲν 116

mvp-comment-156-1 ἐσθήματα 117

mvp-comment-156-2 ἐκείνῳ 118

mvp-comment-156-3 παρεστίους … λοιβάς 119 ἔνθ’ ἐκεῖνον ὤλεσεν 120

mvp-comment-156-4 Acc. to Homer. Hymn. 29. 4 ff., feasts began and ended with libations to Hestia:

οὐ γὰρ ἄτερ σοῦ
|
εἰλαπίναι θνητοῖσιν, ἵν’ οὐ πρώτῃ πυμάτῃ τε
|
Ἱστίῃ ἀρχόμενος σπένδει μελιηδέα οἶνον
. Soph. fr. 658
<*> πρῷρα λοιβῆς Ἑστία
. Other divinities, including Zeus
σωτήρ
, were similarly honoured; then the paean was sung, and the
πότος
began ( Plat. Symp.p. 176 A).

mvp-comment-157-1 τούτων 121

mvp-comment-158-1 αὐτοέντην 122

mvp-comment-158-2 Brunck first adopted αὐτοέντην 123 αὐτοφόντην 124

mvp-comment-158-3 ἡμὶν 125

mvp-comment-159-1 ταλαίνῃ 126

mvp-comment-160-1 ταύτην … τῷδε 127

mvp-comment-161-1 μιάστορι 128 Ἐρινὺν 129

mvp-comment-162-1 ἐγγελῶσα τοῖς ποιουμένοις 130

mvp-comment-163-1 εὑροῦς’ 131 τότε 132

mvp-comment-163-2 The conjecture φρουροῦς’ 133 τηροῦς’ 134

mvp-comment-164-1 χοροὺς ἵστησι 135

mvp-comment-164-2 μηλοσφαγεῖ … ἱερὰ 136

mvp-comment-164-3 ἔμμην’ ἱερά 137

mvp-comment-164-4 τοῖς σωτηρίοις 138

mvp-comment-164-5 Argive tradition placed Agamemnon's death on the 13th of Gamelion (about the end of January). So said ‘the Argive historians’ (

οἱ Ἀργολικοὶ συγγραφεῖς
),— according to an Argive writer named Deinias, who lived about 225 B.C. (Schol. here: Müller, Frag. Hist. vol. III. p. 25.) Possibly, then, the idea of Clytaemnestra's hideous festival may have been suggested to the poet by some actual commemoration of the event in Argolis. There was a cult of Agamemnon in various places,—notably in Laconia. (Cp. Roscher's Lexicon, p. 96.)

mvp-comment-165-1 ἡ δύσμορος 139 κατὰ στέγας 140

mvp-comment-166-1 τέτηκα 141

mvp-comment-166-2 πατρὸς 142

mvp-comment-166-3 The

δαίς
is the feast which, in Homeric fashion ( Il. 1. 467 ), would follow the sacrifice (281). Acc. to Eustathius p. 1507. 61 (on Hom. Od. 4. 524 ff.),
Ἀγαμεμνόνειος δαὶς
(or
τράπεζα
) was a proverb
ἐπὶ τῶν ἐπ’ ὀλέθρῳ εὐωχουμένων
. The poet may mean that Clytaemnestra called the festival
Ἀγαμεμνόνειος δαίς
, in direct allusion to
δεῖπνα ἄρρητα
(203): and this would give a special point to
ἐγγελῶσα
(277). Cp. Eur. Or. 1008
τά τ’ ἐπώνυμα δεῖπνα Θυέστου
. But the words do not necessarily imply more than that she called it
Ἀγαμεμνόνεια
.

mvp-comment-167-1 αὐτὴ πρὸς αὑτήν 143 αὑτήν 144

mvp-comment-167-2 κλαῦσαι 145

mvp-comment-167-3 ἡδονὴν φέρει 146

mvp-comment-168-1 ἡ λόγοισι γενναία 147

mvp-comment-169-1 φωνοῦσα 148

mvp-comment-170-1 δύσθεον 149

mvp-comment-170-2 μίσημα 150

mvp-comment-170-3 σοὶ μόνῃ 151

mvp-comment-170-4 τέθνηκεν 152

mvp-comment-170-5 ἐν πένθει 153

mvp-comment-171-1 ἐκ γόων 154

mvp-comment-171-2 οἱ κάτω θεοί 155

mvp-comment-172-1 τάδ’ 156

mvp-comment-172-2 ἥξοντ’ Ὀρέστην 157

mvp-comment-173-1 παραστᾶς’ 158

mvp-comment-174-1 ἥτις 159

mvp-comment-174-2 ὑπεξέθου 160

mvp-comment-175-1 ἀλλ’ ἴσθι τοι τείσουσά γ’ 161

mvp-comment-176-1 ὑλακτεῖ 162

mvp-comment-176-2 σὺν 163

mvp-comment-176-3 πέλας 164 παρών 165

mvp-comment-176-4 301 The adv. πάντα 166

mvp-comment-176-5 ἄναλκις 167

mvp-comment-176-6 ἡ πᾶσα βλάβη 168

mvp-comment-177-1 σὺν γυναιξὶ 169

mvp-comment-177-2 τὰς μάχας 170

mvp-comment-178-1 ἐφήξειν 171

mvp-comment-179-1 μέλλων … δρᾶν τι 172

mvp-comment-179-2 τὰς οὔσας τε … καὶ τὰς ἀπούσας 173

mvp-comment-179-3 μου 174 μοι 175

mvp-comment-179-4 διέφθορεν 176

mvp-comment-180-1 σωφρονεῖν 177 εὐσεβεῖν 178

mvp-comment-180-2 ἔν τοι κακοῖς 179

mvp-comment-180-3 πολλή )στ’ ἀνάγκη 180 κἀπιτηδεύειν κακά 181

mvp-comment-180-4 I place only a comma, not a colon, after πάρεστιν 182

mvp-comment-181-1 ὄντος … βεβῶτος 183

mvp-comment-182-1 ἦ κάρτα 184

mvp-comment-182-2 θυραῖον 185

mvp-comment-182-3 οἰχνεῖν 186

mvp-comment-182-4 ἀγροῖσι 187

mvp-comment-182-5 τυγχάνει 188

mvp-comment-183-1 ἦ κἂν … ἱκοίμην 189 ἦ τ<*>ν 190 ἦ δἂν 191

mvp-comment-183-2 ἐς λόγους τοὺς σοὺς ἱκοίμην 192

mvp-comment-184-1 ὡς νῦν 193 ὥς νυν 194

mvp-comment-184-2 ἱστόρει· τί σοι φίλον 195 τό 196 τά 197

mvp-comment-184-3 With the other punctuation, ἱστόρει τί σοι φίλον 198

mvp-comment-185-1 καὶ δὴ 199

mvp-comment-185-2 τοῦ κασιγνήτου τί φής 200

mvp-comment-185-3 ἥξοντος 201 ἢ μέλλοντος 202

mvp-comment-186-1 φησίν γε 203

mvp-comment-186-2 ποεῖ 204

mvp-comment-187-1 καὶ μὴν ἔγωγ’ 205 γε 206

mvp-comment-187-2 οὐκ ὄκνῳ 207

mvp-comment-188-1 ἀρκεῖν 208

mvp-comment-189-1 ἐπεί 209

mvp-comment-189-2 μακρὰν 210

mvp-comment-189-3 324 Here, as in 316, νῦν 211 νυν 212

mvp-comment-189-4 δόμων 213 φέρουσαν 214

mvp-comment-190-1 ὅμαιμον 215

mvp-comment-190-2 φύσιν 216

mvp-comment-191-1 Χρυσόθεμιν 217

mvp-comment-192-1 οἷα 218 νομίζεται 219

mvp-comment-193-1 πρὸς θυρῶνος ἐξόδοις 220 φωνεῖς 221 ἐλθοῦσα 222 αὖ 223

mvp-comment-193-2 330 For the absence of caesura, cp. Ph. 101 n.

mvp-comment-194-1 θυμῷ … χαρίζεσθαι 224

mvp-comment-195-1 καίτοι τοσοῦτόν γ’ οἶδα 225

mvp-comment-195-2 κἀμαυτήν, ὅτι 226

mvp-comment-195-3 333 f. For the repeated ἄν 227

mvp-comment-195-4 οἶ) αὐτοῖς φρονῶ 228

mvp-comment-196-1 ὑφειμένῃ 229 πλεῖν 230

mvp-comment-196-2 For the image, cp. Eur. Med. 524

ἄκροισι λαίφους κρασπέδοις
(with close-reefed sails)
ὑπεκφυγεῖν
|
τὴν σὴν στόμαργον, ὦ γύναι, γλωσσαλγίαν
: Ar. Ran. 997
ἀλλ’ ὅπως, ὦ γεννάδα
, |
μὴ πρὸς ὀργὴν ἀντιλέξεις
, |
ἀλλὰ συστείλας, ἄκροισι
|
χρώμενος τοῖς ἱστίοις κ.τ.λ.
: and conversely Soph. Ant. 715
ναὸς ὅστις ἐγκρατῆ πόδα
|
τείνας ὑπείκει μηδέν
. Ovid Epist. 1. 8. 71
moderatius opta, | Et voti, quaeso, contrahe vela tui.
Shakesp. Henry VI., pt. iii, act 3 sc. 3. 5
‘Now Margaret | Must strike her sail, and learn awhile to serve | Where kings command.’

mvp-comment-197-1 καὶ μὴ δοκεῖν 231

mvp-comment-198-1 τοιαῦτα δ’ ἄλλα 232 ἀλλὰ 233 ἄλλα 234

mvp-comment-199-1 καίτοι τὸ μὲν δίκαιον 235

mvp-comment-199-2 κρίνεις 236

mvp-comment-199-3 εἰ … με δεῖ 237

mvp-comment-199-4 ἐλευθέραν 238

mvp-comment-199-5 ζῆν 239

mvp-comment-199-6 πάντ’ 240

mvp-comment-199-7 ἀκουστέα 241

mvp-comment-200-1 δεινόν γε 242

mvp-comment-201-1 τῆς … τικτούσης 243

mvp-comment-201-2 μέλειν 244

mvp-comment-202-1 τἀμὰ νουθετήματα 245

mvp-comment-202-2 κείνης διδακτά 246

mvp-comment-202-3 ἐκ σαυτῆς 247

mvp-comment-203-1 The text, which has been suspected (cr. n.), is sound; but the train of thought is somewhat obscured by compression.

mvp-comment-203-2 ‘You forget your father, and care only for your mother. All your counsels to me come from her. Then (

ἔπειτα
),—that being so,—give up the attempt at a compromise. Make a choice (
ἑλοῦ γε
). You can be imprudent (
φρονεῖν κακῶς
),—as you say that I am,—and loyal to your dead father. Or you can be prudent (
φρονοῦσα
), and forgetful of him,—as you actually are; you who (
ἥτις
) say, indeed, that you would show your hatred of the murderers if you could; and yet, when I do resist them, you try to turn me from my purpose. You merely add the shame of cowardice to our woes.’

mvp-comment-203-3 ἔπειθ’ 248

mvp-comment-203-4 ἑλοῦ γε 249

mvp-comment-203-5 φρονεῖν κακῶς 250

mvp-comment-203-6 Other explanations are:—(1) ‘Choose to be thought either lost to right feeling, or, if you have such feeling, then at least forgetful of your duty.’ (2) ‘Choose to seem either unintelligent (if you are merely the blind instrument of our rulers); or, if you act with clear understanding (

φρονοῦσα
),—thinking to benefit me,—at least forgetful of your father.’ Both these views assume that the question is merely between two interpretations which might be placed on the present conduct of Chrysothemis. But Electra is putting the dilemma between imprudent loyalty and prudent disloyalty.

mvp-comment-204-1 τῶν φίλων 251

mvp-comment-205-1 ἥτις 252 φρονοῦσα 253 μῖσος 254

mvp-comment-206-1 πάντα 255

mvp-comment-206-2 τιμωρουμένης 256

mvp-comment-207-1 οὔτε … τε 257

mvp-comment-207-2 τήν τε δρῶσαν 258

mvp-comment-208-1 πρὸς κακοῖσι 259

mvp-comment-208-2 δειλίαν ἔχει 260

mvp-comment-209-1 ἐπεὶ 261

mvp-comment-209-2 ἢ μάθ’ ἐξ ἐμοῦ 262

mvp-comment-210-1 ἐπαρκούντως 263

mvp-comment-211-1 προσάπτειν 264

mvp-comment-211-2 εἴ τις ἔστ’ ἐκεῖ χάρις 265

mvp-comment-212-1 ἡμὶν 266 ξύνει 267

mvp-comment-213-1 τὰ σὰ … δῶῤ 268

mvp-comment-213-2 ἐφ’ οἶσι 269

mvp-comment-213-3 χλιδᾷς 270

Commentary (Lewis Campbell, 1879) (OCR draft) (Commentary (Lewis Campbell, 1879)) focus

86-250. mvp-comment-59-1 In this long lament there are two principal movements, each of which admits of subdivision. First, the monody of Electra, consisting of two anapaestic systems, of which one (ll. 86-102) is retrospective, and the other (ll. 103-120) is prospective. Secondly, there is the commatic parodos :-the chorus on their entrance address Electra with lyric strains, to which she responds also in lyric measures. This movement consists of three strophes and antistrophes. In στρ. and ἀντ. α' (ll. 121-152), the chorus gently, but gloomily, expostulate with Electra, who is inconsolable. In στρ. and ἀντ. β΄ (ll. 153-192), they vainly try to cheer her. In στρ. and ἀντ. γ΄ (ll. 193- 232), they remind her of her past and present troubles, and exhort her not to add to them. All this is followed by a ῥῆσις of Electra (ll. 254-309) in reply to the coryphaeus, who, at l. 324, again speaks to call attention to Chrysothemis' approach.

86-250. mvp-comment-59-2 Metres. The anapaests in 86-120, although for the most part regular are in so far of the freer kind which belong to laments as to admit the spondaic paroemiacs near the commencement of each system in ll. 88, 9, 105, 6, which, with the opening half line, have a strange effect of heaviness and of struggle and pain. The two systems so nearly correspond, both in this respect and in the number of the lines, that one is tempted to believe that the half line that would complete the antistrophic effect has been lost somewhere between 113 and 117. But anapaestic systems are seldom exactly antistrophic, and the pause after the (dactylic) invocation in l. 115 may be intentional.

194. mvp-comment-116-1 οἰκτρὰ μὲν νόστοις αὐδά] 'Piteous were thy tones at the time of thy father's return.' In the Agamemnon of Aeschylus, the Watchman and the Chorus, i. e. the household and the people, express a vague misgiving, which is not sufficiently definite to enable them to warn Agamemnon. Sophocles here, as elsewhere, concentrates in an individual what in Aeschylus was general. It is quite consistent with his conception of the character of Electra, that, young as she then was, and totally unable, both from her inexperience ( infr. 1024) and her dependent position, of averting the harm which she may have vaguely foreseen, she had a sufficiently clear perception of the situation to be sad instead of joyful on the occasion of her father's coming home, and her sadness would be aggravated by her helplessness :-ἐπεὶ ἐχθίστη ὀδύνη πολλὰ φρονέοντα μηδενὸς κρατέειν. Her friends, of the same age with her, observed this, and in recollecting it, now understand the cause. ooi is easily supplied, both because the whole of Electra's last speech refers to herself, and because σοί occurs immediately afterwards as an ethical' dative. πατρός is no less easily supplied with νόστοις for a similar reason, both because the word occurs three lines above, and because it is implied in πατρώαις in the following line. νόστοις is dative of the occasion, E. on L. § 11. p. 18. For the sense, cp. Aesch. Pers. 935, 6, πρόσφθογγόν σοι νόστου τὰν | κακοφάτιδα βοάν, κακομέλετον ἰὰν | Μαριανδυνοῦ θρηνητῆρος | πέμψω πολύδακρυν ἰακχάν.

195-197. mvp-comment-117-1 οἰκτρὰ δ'.. πλαγά] 'And piteous was thy crying where thy father lay, when thou hadst seen launched the death-stroke of the solid brazen axe.' If Sophocles (see Introduction) follows the form of the legend known to us from Homer, according to which Agamemnon was slain at a feast given in honour of his return, ἐν κοίταις probably means, (1) 'Where he lay in death.' And this is supported by 203. The poet might, no doubt, have so far modified the legend as to suppose Agamemnon after the feast to have been lured by Clytemnestra to his chamber and there slain. ἐν κοίταις might then belong to the relative clause (ὅτε ἐν κ.), and mean 'in his chamber. But this is inconsistent with 203 and 270. For (1) cp. Aesch. Ag. 1494, 1518, Eur. Med. 437, O. C. 1707. The bath, and the entangling garment, which are so prominent in the Agamemnon and Choephori, are in any case not thought of here. Some (including Wecklein) understand aὐδά in both clauses of the death-shriek of the king. σοι (Ε. on L. § 13. p. 19 f.) marks that Electra was the chief sufferer from all that happened. This explanation is rightly defended by Triclinius. Cp. Tennyson's Elaine, -Through her own side she felt the sharp lance go.' Hermann, understanding aὐδά of the people's voice, rejects σοι and reads οἱ instead. The hiatus, which he defends from Trach. 650, ὁ δὲ οἱ φίλα δάμαρ (cp. supr. 157), is still exceptional, but a stronger objection to the removal of σοί is that the connection between this speech and Electra's is thus destroyed.

197-200. mvp-comment-118-1 Sophocles seems here to have in his mind the passage of the Agamemnon where Clytemnestra impersonates the Alastor of Atreus, Aesch. Agam. 1500-1504: Craft pointed out the way, lust murdered him. Between them they produced a monstrous birth, whether he who did this thing were a god or one of mortal mould.' μορφάν the immediate agent and the act itself, as an embodied horror, seem to be confused. See E. on L. § 48. p. 92.

201-212. mvp-comment-119-1 In supr. 185-92, Electra refused consolation and drew attention to her hopeless misery. The women then call to mind how they had pitied her at the time of her father's death. This opens anew the flood-gates of her sorrow. Cp. Ant. 857 foll., ἔψαυσας ἀλγεινοτάτας ἐμοὶ μερίμνας, κ.τ.λ.

203. mvp-comment-120-1 δείπνων] The feast which preceded the murder, according to Od. 4. 535. Agamemnon (see next note) is supposed to have been murdered at table : ὡσεί τε κατέκτανε βοῦν ἐπὶ φάτνῃ (Od. 1. c.).

205. mvp-comment-121-1 For ἄχθη, the grammatical antecedent, the more definite θάνατοι is substituted and taken into the relative clause. The horror of that feast-I mean the death which followed it.'

206. mvp-comment-122-1 διδύμαιν χειροῖν] ‘Effected by joint violence' of Aegisthus and Clytemnestra.

207-208. mvp-comment-123-1 αΐ.. πρόδοτον] 'That wrought treason on my life and ruined me.'

209. mvp-comment-124-1 ois refers to the antecedent implied in χειροῖν, viz. Aegisthus and Clytemnestra.

211. mvp-comment-125-1 'And never may they have any good of their magnificence.' Cp. infr. 267-281: Od. 17. 244, 5, τῷ κέ τοι ἀγλαΐας γε διασκεδάσειεν ἁπάσας, | τὰς νῦν ὑβρίζων φορέεις.

214-216. mvp-comment-126-1 'Seest thou not through what courses thou hast fallen thus cruelly into calamities that come home to thee?' or, with a slightly different shade of meaning, 'which thou hast brought upon thyself.' Cp. Aj. 260: Pind. Nem. 1. 81, τὸ γὰρ οἰκεῖον πιέζει πάνθ᾽ ὁμῶς. ἐξ οἵων is otherwise explained by one Scholiast :-ἐξ οἴων ἀγαθῶν εἰς τί ἀνιαρὸν ἐλήλυθας. Cp. infr. 392. But it is more natural that the Chorus should remind her of the cause of the persecution she is undergoing.

218-219. mvp-comment-127-1 σᾷ . . πολέμους] Ever creating new conflicts for thy burdened soul.'

219-220. mvp-comment-128-1 τὰ δὲ.. πλάθειν] ‘But strife with the powerful is hopeless.' The vague rá is to be supplemented from what precedes and follows,- sc. τὰ πολεμούμενα, οι τὰ ἐρίδος ἐχόμενα. Cp. Plat. Symp. 206 C, ταῦτα δ᾽ ἐν τῷ ἀναρμόστῳ, -sc. κυούμενα καὶ γεννώμενα, - Pind. Nem. 10. 135, χαλεπὰ δ' ἔρις ἀνθρώποις ὁμιλεῖν κρεσσόνων: ΟΙ. 11. 48, νεῖκος δὲ κρεσσόνων ἀποθέσθ᾽ ἄπορον. πλάθειν, sc. τοῖς δυνατοῖς, is epexegetic infinitive.

221. mvp-comment-129-1 The Chorus (l. 214) have reminded Electra of the violent words by which she has earned her present misery. She replies that such words were wrung from her by a fearful cause, viz. by the murder of her father and the subsequent conduct of the murderers. Cp. infr. 271 foll.

222. mvp-comment-130-1 'I know, I am conscious of my passion, viz. that it is inordinate. Cp. infr. 617, 8, μανθάνω δ᾽ ὁθούνεκα | ἔξωρα πράσσω κοὐκ ἐμοὶ προσεικότα : 1011, κατάσχες ὀργήν.

223-224. mvp-comment-131-1 But amid deeds of horror I will not curb or moderate these my calamitous ways' (as ye call them). She echoes the words of the Chorus (l. 215) in a different sense. They meant by οἰκείας ἄτας, 'self-caused calamities:' -she means by ταύτας άτας, 'this infatuate,' or 'fatal,' course,' of which by implication they have accused her.

226-228. mvp-comment-132-1 Electra relapses into despair. If even these Argive women, who know her so well, cannot give her a word of comfort, whence is it to come? 'At whose mouth, then, kind band of friends, can I hope to hear a word of comfort, prompted by seasonable thought?' For the uncommon dative, see E. on L. § 13. p. 20.

229. mvp-comment-133-1 'Press not on me with your consolations,' and cp. Eur. El. 1182, διὰ πυρὸς ἔμολον ἁ τάλαινα ματρὶ τᾷδ᾽.

230. mvp-comment-134-1 For ye shall find this sorrow irremoveable.'

234. mvp-comment-135-1 Like a true-hearted mother.' For this form of expressing sympathy from one woman to another, cp. Trach. 526, ἐγὼ δὲ μάτηρ μὲν οἷα φράζω.

235. mvp-comment-136-1 ἄταν ἄταις] Cp. Αj. 866, πόνῳ πόνον, and note.

236. mvp-comment-137-1 καὶ τί μέτρον κακότατος ἔφυ;] 'And is not my trouble infinite?' (So the Scholiast, -πρὸς γὰρ ἄμετρον κακὸν καὶ ἀμέτρων δεῖται θρήνων.) Cp. infr. 1249, 50, ἁμέτερον οἷον ἔφυ κακόν. For the meaning, cp. Shak. Ant. and Cleo. 4. 15. 4, But comforts we despise; our size of sorrow, Proportioned to our cause, must be as great As that which makes it.'

237. mvp-comment-138-1 ἐπὶ τοῖς φθιμένοις ἀμελεῖν] To treat the dead with forgetfulness.' E. on L. § 19. p. 27.

238. mvp-comment-139-1 ἐν τίνι . . ἀνθρώπων] 'Where amongst men hath such a mind sprung up?'

239. mvp-comment-140-1 τούτοις] Sc. ἐν οἷς τοῦτο ἔβλαστε, the indefinite plural taking the place of the indefinite singular. E. on L. § 20. p. 31. 3. Cp. Hdt. 9. 79. § 3. ἐγὼ δ᾽ οὖν τούτου εἵνεκα μήτε Αἰγινήτῃσι ἅδοιμι, μήτε τοῖσι ταῦτα ἀρέσκεται· ἀποχρᾷ δ᾽ ἐμοί, Σπαρτιήτῃσι ἀρεσκόμενον, ὅσια μὲν ποιέειν, ὅσια δὲ καὶ λέγειν.

240. mvp-comment-141-1 εἴ τῳ πρόσκειμαι χρηστῷ] · If I have near me any good,' = εἴ τι χρηστὸν πρόσκειταί μοι : Ε. on L. § 42. p. 80 β. Cp. infr. 1040, ᾧ σὺ πρόσκεισαι κακῷ.

241-243. mvp-comment-142-1 γονέων .. γόων] • Holding back the wings of my shrill wailings from doing honour to my sire.' Each fresh utterance of the unabating sorrow is imagined as a bird that is eager to fly. ἐκτίμους is predicative and proleptic, = ὥστε ἔξω εἶναι τοῦ τιμᾶν. See E. on L. $ 54. p. 100 d, § 10. p. 16 f., § 23. p. 38 81, § 38. p. 71.

244. mvp-comment-143-1 ya] Prof. Jebb reads ya, i.e. 'buried,' adding, 'it is difficult to believe that yῆ could stand for σποδός.' But the expression is hyperbolical-' mere clay.' Cp. ψήγμα in Aesch. Ag. 442.

251-252. mvp-comment-144-1 καὶ τὸ σὸν.. καὶ τοὐμὸν αὐτῆς] 'More in care for thee than for myself. This is really the meaning, although, by the usual Greek litotes, 'as much as' is put for more than.' The most important matter is put first. E. on L. § 41. p. 78.

253. mvp-comment-145-1 ἑψόμεσθ'] Cp. infr. 1052.

254-255. mvp-comment-146-1 I am ashamed of seeming to you, as I must seem, to be too impatient in multiplying lamentations.' δοκῶ is indicative.

258. mvp-comment-147-1 πατρῷ᾽ ὁρῶσα πήματ'] 'Seeing woful things performed against her sire.' Electra's filial affection for Agamemnon is kept prominently before us as her chief motive; and every insult to his memory, including her own sufferings, is regarded by her as part of the wrong done to him. πατρῷα is at first general, but in the antecedent to a it becomes individual, -' of my father.'

260. mvp-comment-148-1 θάλλοντα .. καταφθίνονθ'] “Not lessening but increasing.'

260-261. mvp-comment-149-1 ᾖ.. συμβέβηκεν] 'Since, first of all, I have found in my own mother the deepest cause for hatred.' This (Paley, etc.) is better than my mother is my enemy.'

264. mvp-comment-150-1 κἀκ τῶνδ᾽ ἄρχομαι] ‘And I am in subjection to them. Cp. O. C. 67, ἐκ τοῦ κατ᾿ ἄστυ βασιλέως τάδ' ἄρχεται.

270. mvp-comment-151-1 ἔνθ᾽ ἐκεῖνον ὤλεσεν] Here again Sophocles seems to follow the account that is given in the fourth book of the Odyssey, ll. 529 foll., according to which Aegisthus murdered Agamemnon at or after a banquet. Hence he is said to have destroyed him beside the hearth. Cp. infr. 1495.

271-274. mvp-comment-152-1 Further, when I see their crowning insult, when I see, forsooth, the author of his death reclining on my father's couch, beside my wretched mother, if so I must call this woman, when cohabiting with him!' The clause τὸν αὐτοφόντην κ.τ.λ. is in the same construction with ὕβριν, governed by ἴδω. ἡμίν is ethical dative, and has a sarcastic force; i.e. That is what I am compelled to look upon.' The participle (κείμενον) which should have gone with ἐν κοίτῃ is absorbed and resumed in συγκοιμωμένην.