Sophocles Electra 187

Thomas Francklin (Translator)

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Electra
1126
[taking the Urn]. O ye dear remains
Of my Orestes, the most loved of men !
How do I see thee now ! How much unlike
What my fond hopes presaged, when List we parted l
I sent thee forth with all the bloom of youth
Fresh on thy cheek, and now, O dismal change !
I bear thee in these hands an empty shade.
Would I had died ere X had sent thee hence,
Ere I had saved tliee from the tyrant's hand !
Would thou liadst died thyself that dreadful day,
And joined thy murdered father in the tomb,
Rather than thus a wretched exile fallen,
1130
Far from thy sister, in a foreign land I
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I was not there with pious hands to wash
Thy breathless corpse, or from the greedy flame
To gather up thy ashes. What have all
My pleasing toils, my fruitless cares availed,
E'en from thy infant years, that as a mother
I watched thee still, and as a mother loved ?
I would not trust thee to a servant's hand.
But was myself the guardian of thy youth,
Thy dear companion. All is gone with thee !
Alas ! thy death, like the devouring storm,
Hath borne down all. Thy father is no more,
And thou art gone, and I am going too.
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Our foes rejoice. Our mother, mad with joy,
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Smiles at our miseries — that unnatural mother,
She whom thou oft hast promised to destroy.
But cruel fate hath blasted all my hopes,
And for my dear Orestes left me naught
But this poor shadow. Oh ! th' accursed place
Where I had sent thee ! Oh ! my hapless brother,
Oh ! take me to thee ! Let this urn enclose
My ashes too, and dust to dust be joined,
That we may dwell together once again :
In life united by one hapless fate,
I would not wish in death to be divided.
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The dead are free from sorrows.
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Do not indulge thy griefs ; but, oh ! remember,
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Sprung from a mortal like thyself, Orestes
Was mortal too — that we are mortal all.

Electra. Sophocles. Thomas Francklin (Translator). London. 1758–1759.

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Editions (2)
Greek (Lewis Campbell, 1879) (OCR draft) Experimental (Greek (Lewis Campbell, 1879)) — 186 focus
ἅτις ἄνευ τοκέων κατατάκομαι,
Greek (F. Storr, 1912) (OCR draft) Experimental (Greek (F. Storr, 1912)) — 251-471 focus
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English (Lewis Campbell, 1906) (OCR draft) Experimental (English (Lewis Campbell, 1906)) — 187 focus
CHR
No, no! Not shame, but care for thine estate.
German (J. J. C. Donner, 1875; OCR review) (OCR draft) Experimental (German (J. J. C. Donner, 1875; OCR review)) — 193 focus
Wehruf scholl, als er zurückkam,
Wehruf scholl, als auf gastlichem Pfühl
Scharfzielend auf ihn einstürmte der Schlag,
Von dem ehernen Beile geschwungen.
Arglist sann's aus, Lust übte den Mord,
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Und sie zeugten vereint graunvolle Gestalt
Graunvoll an das Licht, ob ein Gott, ob ein Mensch
Solche That verübt hat.
English (Robert Potter, 1788) (OCR draft) Experimental (English (Robert Potter, 1788)) — 187 focus
Electra
I am Electra, and a very wretch.
1180
English (Sir Richard Jebb, 1904) (OCR draft) Experimental (English (Sir Richard Jebb, 1904)) — 251-470 focus

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mvp-comment-636-1 ψυχῆς Ὀρέστου λοιπόν 1

mvp-comment-636-2 ἀπ’ ἐλπίδων 2

mvp-comment-636-3 Then οὐχ ὧνπερ 3

mvp-comment-636-4 Other possibilities are the following. (1) Keeping both

οὐχ ὧνπερ
and
ἀπ’
, to take
ἀπ’ ἐλπίδων
as=‘ with hopes.’ The prep. would then be used as when it denotes a resource: 1378
ἀφ’ ὧν ἔχοιμι
: Thuc. 1. 91 § 7
ἀπὸ ἀντιπάλου παρασκευῆς
. (Observe that in Soph. Tr. 667
ἀπ’ ἐλπίδος καλῆς
is not really similar; it means, ‘as the outcome of a fair hope.’) The prevailing usage of
ἀπό
condemns this view.

mvp-comment-636-5 (2) Still keeping

οὐχ ὧνπερ
, to change
ἀπ’
, with Schaefer, to
ὑπ’
. Cp. Eur. Hec. 351
ἐθρέφθην ἐλπίδων καλῶν ὕπο
. This is possible; though
ὑπό
, when thus used, commonly denotes an external accompaniment ( Soph. Tr. 419 n.); as, indeed, even in Hec. l. c., the hopes are not merely Polyxena's own, but those of her friends. Further:
ὥς σ’ ἀπ’ ἐλπίδων— ἀπό
meaning ‘contrary to’—strikes the note of despair more forcibly.

mvp-comment-636-6 (3) Keeping

ἀπ’
as=‘contrary to,’ to alter
οὐχ ὧνπερ
either to οὐχ ὅνπερ 4 οὐχ ὥσπερ 5

mvp-comment-636-7 On the whole, I retain the traditional reading, though not without a suspicion that either

ἀπ’
or
ὧνπερ
is unsound.

mvp-comment-637-1 νῦν μὲν γὰρ 6

mvp-comment-637-2 οὐδὲν ὄντα 7

mvp-comment-637-3 βαστάζω 8

mvp-comment-637-4 λαμπρὸν 9

mvp-comment-638-1 ὡς ὤφελον 10

mvp-comment-638-2 The v.l. ὤφελες 11 κλέψασα 12

mvp-comment-638-3 τοῖνδε 13

mvp-comment-638-4 κἀνασώσασθαι 14

mvp-comment-638-5 φόνου 15

mvp-comment-639-1 ὅπως … ἔκεισο 16

mvp-comment-639-2 τύμβου πατρῴου 17

mvp-comment-640-1 φυγὰς 18

mvp-comment-641-1 ἐν 19

mvp-comment-641-2 φίλαισι 20

mvp-comment-642-1 λουτροῖς σ’ ἐκόσμης’ 21

mvp-comment-643-1 ἄθλιον βάρος 22

mvp-comment-644-1 ἐν ξέναισι χερσὶ κηδευθεὶς 23

mvp-comment-644-2 σμικρὸς … ὄγκος 24

Commentary (Lewis Campbell, 1879) (OCR draft) (Commentary (Lewis Campbell, 1879)) focus

1126-1128. mvp-comment-539-1 O sole memorial and relic of the living Orestes, dearest of mankind to me, how far otherwise than I had hoped do I receive thee! with thoughts how different from those with which I sent thee forth!" By a confusion to which double negatives are liable (Essay on L. § 29. p. 49), the negative implied in ἀπό is first expanded in a negative sense, and then ἀπό is resumed with ὧνπερ in a different (positive) sense. For a negative similarly ignored in the relative clause, cp. Ant. 1064-7, κάτισθι, μὴ πολλοὺς .. τελῶν | ἐν οἷσι, κ.τ.λ. Wecklein in l. 1128 reads οὐχ ὅνπερ with an inferior MS. • How contrary to my hopes I receive- not him whom I sent forth.'

1130. mvp-comment-540-1 λαμπρόν] 'Bright,' i.e. full of promise. Cp. supr. 685, εἰσῆλθε λαμπρός. ἐγώ has a pathetic, not a logical emphasis, and reminds the spectator that Electra's action at the critical moment was the saving of her father's house. Cp. supr. 12.

1131. mvp-comment-541-1 The v. r. ὡς ὤφελες (suggested by 1134) is far inferior to ὡς ὤφελον. The struggle of the intervening years now seems worse than yain.

1139-1140. mvp-comment-542-1 οὔτε .. βάρος] ‘Nor took up, as I should have done, from the all-consuming fire, the miserable remains.' See E. on L. § 8. p. 11. For βάρος, cp. Aesch. Ag. 442, βαρὺ ψήγμα, παμφλέκτου suggests that the fire has done its utmost. Cp. Od. 11. 220, 1, ἀλλὰ τὰ μέν τε πυρὸς κρατερὸν μένος αἰθομένοιο | δαμνᾷ, ἐπεί κε πρῶτα λίπῃ λεύκ᾿ ὄστεα θυμός. See Essay on L. $ 53. p. 98.