Sophocles Electra 29

Lewis Campbell (Translator)

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His promise comes, but still performance sleeps.

Electra. Sophocles. Lewis Campbell (Translator). London, New York and Toronto. 1906.

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Greek (Lewis Campbell, 1879) (OCR draft) Experimental (Greek (Lewis Campbell, 1879)) — 29 focus
τοιγὰρ τὰ μὲν δόξαντα δηλώσω, σὺ δὲ
Greek (F. Storr, 1912) (OCR draft) Experimental (Greek (F. Storr, 1912)) — 1-120 focus
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German (J. J. C. Donner, 1875; OCR review) (OCR draft) Experimental (German (J. J. C. Donner, 1875; OCR review)) — 23 focus
bester Diener, liebster Mann, wie legst du mir
Der Treue Zeichen gegen uns so deutlich dar!
Denn wie das Noß aus edler Art, obschon betagt,
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In keiner Schreckniß und Gefahr den Muth verliert,
Nein, stolz das Ohr aufrichtet: also du, der uns
Zum Kampfe treibt und selbst der Ersten Einer folgt.
Drum will ich offenbaren, was ich ausgedacht;
Doch du vergönne meinem Wort ein scharfes Ohr,
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Und traf ich nicht das Rechte, gib mir andern Rath.
Nachdem ich angekommen war bei'm pythischen
Orakel, dort zu fragen, wie des Vaters Tod
Ich rächen mög' an jenen, die ihn mordeten,
Gebot mir Phöbos also, wie du gleich vernimmst:
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Den Streich gerechter Rache mit geheimer List
Allein zu führen, nicht bewehrt mit Schild und Heer.
Nun, da mir solcher Gottesspruch verkündet ward,
Tritt du, sobald die Stunde dich gelegen führt,
Zu diesem Haus ein, auszuspäh'n, was hier geschieht,
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Auf daß du klar uns meldest, was du wohl erforscht.
Unkenntlich schuf dich Alter und die lange Zeit,
Und vor Verdacht bewahrt dich dieser Blumenschmuck. 1
Doch also sprich zu jenen, daß ein Fremdling du,
Ein Phoker seiest, abgesandt von Phanoteus; 2
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Denn dieser Mann ist ihres Hauses bester Freund.
Mit Eid betheuernd, melde dann, Orestes sei
Dahingeschieden durch ein unerbittlich Loos,
Bei Kämpfen Pytho's aus dem raschhinrollenden 3
Rennwagen stürzend. Also sei der Rede Sinn.
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English (Thomas Francklin, 1758–1759) (OCR draft) Experimental (English (Thomas Francklin, 1758–1759)) — 29 focus
Electra
It ill becomes great Agamemnon's daughter
Thus to forget her noble father's worth.
And take a base unworthy mother's part ;
For well I see from whom thy counsels flow ;
Nought from thyself thou sayst but all from her X
/^l^ther thy reason 's lost, or if thou hast it,
» Tliou hast forgot thy friends who should be dear
And precious to thee. Of thy boasted hate
Again^i our foes, and what thou vauntst to do
If thou i^adst power I reck not, whilst with me
Thou wilt not join in great revenge, but still
Dissuadsfc nie from it ; is 't not cowardly
To leave me Mius? Tell me, I beg thee, tell me
"What mighty gain awaits my tame submission,
Should I suppress my griefs. I can but live ;
That I do now — aN:jvretched life indeed !
But 'tis enough for\ie, and I am happy
Whilst I can torture ^em, and to the dead
Pay grateful honours — If^tp them such care
Aught grateful can bestov^ij Thy hate, I fear me,
Is but in word : thou dost ibefriend the murderers :
For me, not all the wealth they could bestow,
Not all the gifts which they have poured on thee.
Should bind me to 'em. Take thy costly banquets,
And let thy days with ease and pleasure flow ;
Crive me but focxl, and I am satisfied.
1 wish not for thy houours, nor wouldst
If thou wert wise, receive them at their hands.
Thou mightst be daughter to the best of fathers,
And art thy mother's only. Take that name,
And henceforth all shall mark thee as a wretch
Who hath betrayed her father and her friends.
Choii. 1 do entreat you, let not anger come
Between you thus ; you both have reasoned well,
And much of mutual benefit may flow
If each to other lend a patient ear.
English (Robert Potter, 1788) (OCR draft) Experimental (English (Robert Potter, 1788)) — 29 focus
Chrysothemis
When seated on my father's throne I see
English (Sir Richard Jebb, 1904) (OCR draft) Experimental (English (Sir Richard Jebb, 1904)) — 1-120 focus

Commentary

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mvp-comment-117-1 πλέον … ἐχθίστα 1

mvp-comment-117-2 δὴ 2

mvp-comment-118-1 νὺξ 3

mvp-comment-118-2 δείπνων 4

mvp-comment-119-1 ἄχθη 5 τοῖς 6 θανάτους 7

mvp-comment-119-2 διδύμαιν χειροῖν 8 διδύμοιν 9

Commentary (Lewis Campbell, 1879) (OCR draft) (Commentary (Lewis Campbell, 1879)) focus

86-250. mvp-comment-59-1 In this long lament there are two principal movements, each of which admits of subdivision. First, the monody of Electra, consisting of two anapaestic systems, of which one (ll. 86-102) is retrospective, and the other (ll. 103-120) is prospective. Secondly, there is the commatic parodos :-the chorus on their entrance address Electra with lyric strains, to which she responds also in lyric measures. This movement consists of three strophes and antistrophes. In στρ. and ἀντ. α' (ll. 121-152), the chorus gently, but gloomily, expostulate with Electra, who is inconsolable. In στρ. and ἀντ. β΄ (ll. 153-192), they vainly try to cheer her. In στρ. and ἀντ. γ΄ (ll. 193- 232), they remind her of her past and present troubles, and exhort her not to add to them. All this is followed by a ῥῆσις of Electra (ll. 254-309) in reply to the coryphaeus, who, at l. 324, again speaks to call attention to Chrysothemis' approach.

86-250. mvp-comment-59-2 Metres. The anapaests in 86-120, although for the most part regular are in so far of the freer kind which belong to laments as to admit the spondaic paroemiacs near the commencement of each system in ll. 88, 9, 105, 6, which, with the opening half line, have a strange effect of heaviness and of struggle and pain. The two systems so nearly correspond, both in this respect and in the number of the lines, that one is tempted to believe that the half line that would complete the antistrophic effect has been lost somewhere between 113 and 117. But anapaestic systems are seldom exactly antistrophic, and the pause after the (dactylic) invocation in l. 115 may be intentional.

201-212. mvp-comment-119-1 In supr. 185-92, Electra refused consolation and drew attention to her hopeless misery. The women then call to mind how they had pitied her at the time of her father's death. This opens anew the flood-gates of her sorrow. Cp. Ant. 857 foll., ἔψαυσας ἀλγεινοτάτας ἐμοὶ μερίμνας, κ.τ.λ.

203. mvp-comment-120-1 δείπνων] The feast which preceded the murder, according to Od. 4. 535. Agamemnon (see next note) is supposed to have been murdered at table : ὡσεί τε κατέκτανε βοῦν ἐπὶ φάτνῃ (Od. 1. c.).

205. mvp-comment-121-1 For ἄχθη, the grammatical antecedent, the more definite θάνατοι is substituted and taken into the relative clause. The horror of that feast-I mean the death which followed it.'