Chorus
Do it thyself, nor trust another hand.
Antigone. Sophocles. Thomas Francklin (Translator). London. 1758–1759.
Antigone. Sophocles. Thomas Francklin (Translator). London. 1758–1759.
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mvp-comment-667-1 ἐπ’ ἄλλ’. τρέπε 1
mvp-comment-668-1 ὡς ἔχω 2
mvp-comment-668-2 στείχοιμ’ ἄν 3
mvp-comment-668-3 ἴτ’ ἴτ’ 4 εἶ’ 5
mvp-comment-669-1 οἵ τ’ ὄντες οἵ τ’ ἀπόντες 6
mvp-comment-669-2 ἀξίνας 7
mvp-comment-670-1 ἐπόψιον 8
mvp-comment-671-1 ἐγὼ δ’ 9 ἐπιστράφη 10 τῇδ’ 11
mvp-comment-672-1 αὐτός τ’ ἔδησα 12
mvp-comment-673-1 δέδοικα μὴ … ᾖ 13 τοὺς καθεστ. νόμους 14
mvp-comment-673-2 σῴζοντα … τὸν βίον τελεῖν 15
mvp-comment-675-1 πολυώνυμε 16
mvp-comment-675-2 Καδμείας 18
mvp-comment-675-3 ἄγαλμα 19
mvp-comment-675-4 νύμφας 20 βαρυβρεμέτα 21
mvp-comment-676-1 The traditional reading, Ἰταλίαν 22
mvp-comment-676-2
The only worthy rival of
mvp-comment-677-1 παγκοίνοις 25
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mvp-comment-677-3 κόλποις 26
mvp-comment-677-4 Ἐλευσι^νίας 27 ι^ 28
mvp-comment-678-1 Βακχεῦ 29 ὦ 30 ὁ 31 ματρόπολιν 32
mvp-comment-678-2 ματρόπολιν 33
mvp-comment-679-1 L has ὑγρὸν … ῥέεθρον 34 ὑγρῶν … ῥεέθρων 35 ῥεῖθρον 36 ὑγρόν 37 παρά 38 ῥεῖθρον 39 ὑγρόν 40
mvp-comment-679-2 Ἰσμηνοῦ 41
mvp-comment-680-1 ἐπὶ σπορᾷ δρ. 42
mvp-comment-681-1 The general sense is: ‘and on the heights of Parnassus thou holdest thy revels by night amid the Corycian Nymphs, who brandish torches.’
mvp-comment-681-2 διλόφου πέτρας 43
mvp-comment-681-3 By ὑπὲρ διλόφου πέτρας 44
mvp-comment-681-4 λιγνύς 45 στέροψ 46
mvp-comment-681-5 ὄπωπε 47
mvp-comment-681-6 Κωρύκιαι … Νύμφαι 48
mvp-comment-681-7 The simple transposition, στείχουσι νύμφαι 49
mvp-comment-682-1 Κασταλίας τε νᾶμα 50
mvp-comment-683-1 καί σε Νυσαίων 51
mvp-comment-684-1 κισσήρεις ὄχθαι 52
mvp-comment-684-2
for the fact was noticed in antiquity (schol. on Aratus
Phaenom. 33). Thus
Pind.
P. 1. 64
mvp-comment-685-1 πολυστάφυλος 53
mvp-comment-685-2 πέμπει 54
mvp-comment-686-1 The words ἀμβρότων ἐπέων 55
mvp-comment-686-2 εὐαζόντων 56
mvp-comment-687-1 τὰν ἐκ πασᾶν 57 τάν 58 ἐκ 59 ὑπερτάταν 60
mvp-comment-688-1 κεραυνίᾳ 61
mvp-comment-689-1 ἔχεται ἐπὶ βιαίας νόσου 62 ὑπό 63 ἔχεται 64 βιαι^ας 65 ἀμὰ 66 πόλις 67
mvp-comment-689-2 πάνδαμος 68
mvp-comment-690-1 μολεῖν 69
mvp-comment-690-2 καθαρσίῳ 70
mvp-comment-690-3 κλιτύν 71
mvp-comment-690-4 πορθμόν 72
mvp-comment-690-5 στονόεντα 73
mvp-comment-691-1 πνειόντων 74 πνειόντων 75
mvp-comment-691-2 Other conjectures are: (1) ἰὼ πύρπνων ἄστρων χοραγὲ καὶ νυχίων 76 πῦρ πνεόντων χοραγὲ καὶ νυχίων 77 χοραγὲ ἄστρων 78
mvp-comment-691-3
originally preceded
mvp-comment-691-4 χοράγ’ ἄστρων 81
mvp-comment-691-5 νυχίων φθεγμάτων 82
mvp-comment-692-1 παῖ Διὸς 83
mvp-comment-693-1 ὦναξ 84
mvp-comment-694-1 Θυίαισιν 85
mvp-comment-694-2 χορεύουσι 86
mvp-comment-695-1 ταμίαν 87
mvp-comment-695-2 Ἴακχον 88
mvp-comment-697-1 δόμων 89 Κάδμου 90 πάροικοι 91 δόμων 92
mvp-comment-698-1 οὐκ ἔστι 93 στάντα 94 στάντα 95
mvp-comment-698-2 βίον 96 ὁποίᾳ 97
mvp-comment-699-1 μάντις … τῶν καθεστώτων 98 ἐφεστώτων 99
mvp-comment-700-1 ὡς ἐμοί 100
mvp-comment-701-1 σώσας … ἐχθρῶν 101 δέ 102 τε 103 λαβών τε 104 ηὔθυνε 105 παντελῆ 106
mvp-comment-701-2 ηὔθυνε 107
mvp-comment-701-3 εὐγενεῖ 108
mvp-comment-702-1 ἀφεῖται πάντα 109
mvp-comment-703-1 προδῶσιν 110 προδῶσιν 111 ἀνδρὸς 112 προδῶσιν 113 ἄνδρες 114 ἀνδρός 115 τὰς γὰρ ἡδονάς 116
mvp-comment-703-2 οὐ τίθημι 117
mvp-comment-704-1
For
mvp-comment-704-2 τοῦτον 118
mvp-comment-704-3 ἔμψ. νεκρόν 119
mvp-comment-705-1 πλούτει … ζῆ 120
mvp-comment-705-2 εἰ βούλει 121 ζῆ 122 σχῆμα 123
mvp-comment-706-1 τὸ χαίρειν 124
mvp-comment-706-2 καπνοῦ σκιᾶς 125
mvp-comment-707-1 πριαίμην ἀνδρί 126
mvp-comment-707-2 πρὸς τὴν ἡδ. 127
1107. mvp-comment-638-1 ἐπ᾿ ἄλλ. τρ. i. e. ἐπίτρεπτε ἄλλ.
1108. mvp-comment-639-1 ἴτ' τ' This reading, which ap- pears only in the text of Triclinius, is more probable than any other, the broken tribrach being excused by the agitation of Creon.
1109. mvp-comment-640-1 οἵ τ᾿ ὄντες οἵ τ᾿ ἀπόντες ὄντες = παρόντες, as in El. 305, τὰς οὔσας τέ μου | καὶ τὰς ἀπούσας ἐλπίδας διέφθορεν.
1110. mvp-comment-641-1 εἰς ἐπόψιον τόπον To the place in view. Polynices was exposed on the highest part of the plain, and this may have been represented in outline as part of the scenery.
1111. mvp-comment-642-1 For the personification of δόξα, cp. Ο. Τ. 911, δόξα μοι παρεστάθη, and see Essay on Language pp. 91, 92, 105.
1112. mvp-comment-643-1 αὐτός τ᾽ ἔδησα καί For the sake of emphasis, what would naturally be expressed by the participle is made into a coordinate sentence with the finite verb. Cp. Ο. Τ. 413, σὺ καὶ δέδορκας κού βλέπεις ἵν' εἶ.. Ε. on L. p. 68.
1115. mvp-comment-644-1 In the excitement of a desperate hope caused by the late repentance of Creon, the chorus break forth into a joyous invocation to Dionysus, accompanied with dancing or gesticulation, as appears in comparing the similar canticle in Aj. 693, where the chorus are under the excitement of a similar delusive expectation. Cp. Tr. 205-224. The Dionysiac worship, of which the tragic poet is a votary, is associated with the mystic hopes which Creon denied, supr. 780.
1115. mvp-comment-644-2 Glory of Semele, child of Zeus, Thou that tendest Campania And rulest in Eleusis' mystic vale, Dwelling, where thy votaries dwell, In Thebes by Ismenus' waters, Presiding o'er the dragon's brood: Seen o'er the forked height By the pitchy flame, Where move the Bacchic nymphs of Corycus, Where is the Castalian fount: And ushered on thy way to visit Thebe's roads By the ivy-clad banks of Nysean mountains, And the bloomy shore with many a cluster, While the shout of the immortal strain resounds. Thebè thou honourest far above all cities, Thou and thy mother whom the lightning glorified. And now that our whole multitude Is overtaken by misfortune dire, Appear with healing tread, Over the Parnassian steep Or groaning narrow sea. Thou that leadest up the dance of the fire-breathing stars, Visitant of nightly voices, Son born of Zeus, Rise with thy attendant Maenads, Who, all night long. Celebrate thee with dances, Iacchus, the dispenser of their joys.
1115. mvp-comment-644-3 This ode has been variously arranged. The arrangement in the text is that of Böckh, with a few slight changes. a'. First strophe and antistrophe. ICICIC lululuclalalclcl luclcla 5----- 다 !トーートしcita ICICーートト β'. Second strophe and antistrophe. トCICICに The prevailing rhythm is logaoedic, with frequent syncope (or antispastic movement), long syllables in thesi, and occasional resolution both of arsis and thesis. Each strophe begins with an anacrusis.
1115. mvp-comment-644-4 πολυώνυμε Schol. ὦ Διόνυσε· οἱ μὲν γὰρ Βάκχον, οἱ δὲ Ιακχον, οἱ δὲ Λύαιον, οἱ δὲ Εὔιον, οἱ δὲ Διθύραμβον αὐτὸν καλοῦσιν. Bacchus is claimed as a Theban God, and at the same time, the wide extent of his dominion is celebrated.
1115. mvp-comment-644-5 ἄγαλμα Delight, or Glory. The word expresses the pride taken by a mother in her child. Plat. Tim. 37 D, τῶν ἀϊδίων θεῶν γεγονὸς ἄγαλμα: Eur. Suppl. 370, ματέρος ἄγαλμα.
1118. mvp-comment-645-1 κλυτὰν .. Ἰταλίαν The mention of Italy is singular, but hardly more so than that of Naxos in connection with Dionysus. The aim of the song being to celebrate the universality of his empire, it is not wonderful that allusion should be made to Italy, quam gravidae fruges et Bacchi Massicus humor Implevere, Virg. Georg. 2. 143. And if Italy was mentioned by Sophocles in the Triptolemus in connection with Demeter, why not here in connection with Bacchus? Fr. 540 N. Ut.. Sophocles poeta in fabula Triptolemo frumentum Italicum ante cuncta laudaverit, ad verbum translata sententia Et fortunatam Italiam frumento canere candido. Plin. H. N. 18. 12. Some edd. substitute Ἰκαρίαν, an eastward deme of Attica, and a seat of Dionysiac worship.
1120. mvp-comment-646-1 In the all-receiving bosom of Eleusinian Demeter;' i. e. In the vale of Eleusis, where the mystae from all parts of Greece were received. Cp. Pind. Ol. 14. 23, κόλποις Πίσας: Hdt. 4.99, κόλπου . . ἀγομένου τῆς γῆς ταύτης, and esp. Aristoph. Ran. 373, χώρει νυν πᾶς ἀνδρείως | ἐς τοὺς εὐανθεῖς κόλπους | λειμώνων, κ.τ.λ.
1123-1124. mvp-comment-647-1 παρ' ὑγρὸν Ἰσμηνοῦ ῥεῖθρον] Some have preferred, chiefly for metrical reasons, the Triclinian reading παρ᾽ ὑγρῶν .. ῥεέθρων, for which compare supr. 1. 966.
1125. mvp-comment-648-1 ἐπί Cp. Τr. 356, τἀπὶ Λυδοῖς.
1126-1127. mvp-comment-649-1 στέροψ.. λιγνύς The blinding torch-flame hath beheld. There is an opposition of sound rather than of sense in στέροψ ὄπωπε. Cp. Eur. Phoen. 226, ὦ λάμπουσα πέτρα πυρὸς | δικόρυφον σέλας ὑπὲρ ἄκρων | Βακχείων Διονύσου, where the succeeding lines also deserve to be compared with the description of Mount Parnassus in this passage. The fabled fire on Mount Parnassus was commonly explained of the torches of the Maenads, and seems to have been so understood by Sophocles.
1128. mvp-comment-650-1 Κωρύκιαι So named from the Corycian cave on Mount Parnassus. Aesch. Eum. 22, σέβω δὲ νύμφας, ἔνθα Κωρυκὶς πέτρα, | κοίλη, φίλορνις, δαιμόνων ἀναστροφαί.
1130. mvp-comment-651-1 Κασταλίας.. νᾶμα (1) Sc.
1130. mvp-comment-651-2 ὄπωπέ σε, or (2) ἔνθα Κασταλίας νᾶμα, sc. ἐστί. Probably the latter (2).
1131-1136. mvp-comment-652-1 Νυσαίων. ἀγυιάς Bacchus is imagined as leaving the throng of revellers, who follow in his train along the Nysaean slopes in Euboea, and as crossing the sounding frith' (1. 1145) to visit the streets of Thebes.
1133. mvp-comment-653-1 χλωρά Lustrous with fresh green. The word suggests the richness of young vegetation, especially of the vine. See Essay on Language p. 103. Stephanus in Νύσαι .. δεκάτη ἐν Εὐβοίᾳ, ἔνθα διὰ μιᾶς ἡμέρας τὴν ἄμπελόν φασιν ἀνθεῖν, καὶ τὸν βότρυν πεπαίνεσθαι.
1134. mvp-comment-654-1 By adding *τῶν in this line, and reading ῥεῖθρον in 1124, we obtain ーーム, a diiambus followed by an epitritus, and a trochee or spondee.
1140. mvp-comment-655-1 νύν, νῦν, as in Pindar.
1141. mvp-comment-656-1 έχεται Cp. Plat. Legg. 10. 887 Ε, ἐν συμφοραῖς παντοίαις ἐχομένων.
1141. mvp-comment-656-2 ἐπὶ νόσου] See Essay on Language § 19. p. 27.
1143.
mvp-comment-657-1
μολεῖν
1146-1147. mvp-comment-658-1 πῦρ πνεόντων *ἄστρων χοραγέ*] Cp. Ar. Ran. 341-342, Ιακχ᾽, ὦ Ιακχε, νυκτέρου τελετῆς φωσφόρος ἀστήρ. Bacchus is lord and leader of the sights and sounds of night. The stars in their courses hold revel with his torchbearers: the voices of the night are wakened by their shouting. This is more probable than an allusion to the mystical notion that Bacchus was an impersonation of the sun. I have ventured to retain καί, transposing the two preceding words and scanning πνεόντων as a spondee by synizesis.
1146-1147. mvp-comment-658-2 πυρπνεόντων may be taken as a compound. Cp. Hom. Il. 7. 310, άελπτεοντες.
1149. mvp-comment-659-1 παῖ Διὸς γένεθλον i.e. as Hermann says, παῖ Διὸς γεγώς. Ever youthful offspring of Zeus.
1150. mvp-comment-660-1 Ναξίαις i.e. From Ariadne's island.
1152. mvp-comment-661-1 τὸν ταμίαν The word ταμίας, as appears from its use in Pindar, had in Doric Greek the special meaning of Lord (cp. the Anglo-Saxon Hlafford): and may have been a favourite attribute of Bacchus in this sense.
1156. mvp-comment-662-1 στάντα (1) The participle is to be taken closely with the adjective = τινὰ στάσιν ἔχοντα, as in the gloss of V. There is no present position of a human life, in which I would praise it, or find fault with it. Cp. Phil. 174, ἐπὶ παντί τῳ χρείας ἱσταμένῳ, where the participle is similarly added in epexegesis. Or, χώρας] χέων Ε.
1156. mvp-comment-662-2 ἐμοί, ποτέ] 1164. θάλλων] possibly, (2) No settled condition, or (3), like στάντες τ' ἐς ὀρθών, Ο. Τ. 50, No life that is in prosperity. (1) is confirmed by 1160.
1160. mvp-comment-663-1 And no one can prophesy to mortals respecting their present state:' i.e. Whether it will continue or change.
1162. mvp-comment-664-1 σώσας.. εὔθυνε There is a change from the participial construction to the indicative as well as from μὲν.. δέ τo τε: ie. σώσας agrees with the subject of ἦν, and the finite verb εὔθυνε is substituted for εὐθύνων. This is more in accordance with the growing nature of the language of Sophocles, than to suppose, with Seyffert, that σώσας begins a new sentence in apposition to, and epexegetic of, the previous clause. 1165 ff. See v. rr. Seyffert conjectures καὶ γὰρ ἡδοναὶ ὅταν προδῶσιν ἀνδρός. Cp. supr. 578, and note. On the change from plural to singular, see Essay on Language §20. p. 31. And on the inversion (ἡδονὰς προδῶσιν ἄνδρες = ἡδοναὶ προδῶσιν ἄνδρας), ibid. § 42. p. 80, β. In favour of the reading of the MSS. it must be admitted that the plural ἄνδρες, in this pronominal sense, is unusual. The meaning of the MS. reading is, 'A man's pleasures, when they have deserted him, I hold of no account.' But this does not agree with the concluding lines of the speech. Line 1167 had been dropped, and then l. 1166 was altered so as to make sense.
1168. mvp-comment-665-1 πλουτεῖ.. καὶ ζῇ This is the first hand of L, and the words are so quoted by Athenaeus according to some MSS. I have always felt that the transition to the second person imperative (which has been suggested by εἰ βούλει) was somewhat harsh. The present indicative is sometimes used in putting a hypothetical case: (Plat. Theaet. 192 Ε, Σωκράτης ἐπιγιγνώσκει Θεόδωρον καὶ Θεαίτητον, ὁρᾷ δὲ μηδέτερον. So the aor. indicative in Hdt. 7. 10, καὶ δὴ καὶ συνήνεικε ἤτοι κατὰ γῆν ἢ καὶ κατὰ θάλασσαν ἑσσωθῆναι, κ.τ.λ.) And the conversational use of εἰ βούλει (which assists the expression) is too familiar to need illustration. See L. and S. s. v. βούλομαι, 11. 2.
1171. mvp-comment-666-1 πρὸς τὴν ἡδονήν resumes and supplements τὸ χαίρειν. Essay on Language § 40. p. 75.