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Objections have been made to the traditional order of these verses, chiefly in two respects. (1) 755
εἰ μὴ πατὴρ ἦσθ’
is—it is argued—the strongest thing said by Haemon, and ought therefore to come immediately before Creon's final outburst,
ἄληθες
; (758). How could it be followed by merely so mild a phrase as
μὴ κώτιλλέ με
?—We may reply:— Haemon says that,
if Creon were not his father, he
would have thought him mad. It is to this that
μὴ κώτιλλέ με
refers, meaning, ‘Do not seek to deceive me by an affectation of filial deference.’ (2) 757
βούλει λέγειν τι
is too mild a remark—it is said—to form the climax of provocation to Creon's anger. We may reply:—It is in substance, if not in form, such a climax, —for a father who holds that
unquestioning obedience (640) is a son's first duty. It asserts Haemon's right to maintain his own views against his father's,—
διὰ δίκης ἰέναι
, as Creon put it (742). The traditional order seems, therefore, to be right.
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Three modes of transposition have been proposed. (1) Enger puts 756 and 757 after 749. Then
κώτιλλε
(756) refers to Haemon's plea that he has his father's cause, and that of religion, at heart. We lose nothing by such a transposition; but neither do we gain.
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(2) Donner (in his transl., ed. 1863) simply transposed verses 755 and 757, leaving the rest as they stand. For this it may fairly be said that 757 comes very fitly after 754. On the other hand it seems to me that 756 does not aptly follow 757.
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(3) Pallis arranges thus:—749, 756, 755, 754, 757, 750—753. Thus
κενὰς γνώμας
(753) becomes the last sting.— The fact is that, in a stormy altercation, we do not look for a closely logical texture and a delicately graduated
crescendo. The MS. order is (to my mind) the best; but other arrangements are possible, and would be nearly as good.
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Creon, instead of replying to v. 749, abruptly repeats his resolve.
οὐκ ἔστιν ὡς ταύτην ἔτι ζῶσαν γαμεῖς
(fut.)
ποτέ
, it cannot be that you shall ever wed her while she yet lives; i.e. she is to die at once, and can become your bride, if ever, only
ἐν Ἅιδου
(654).
Cp. 1240
.—
ὡς
1
ποτέ
2
ταύτην
3
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ἥδ’
4
ὀλεῖ τινά
5
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ἦ ἐπεξέρχει και ἐπαπειλῶν ὧδε θρασύς;
6
καί
7
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κλαίων
8
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φρενώσεις
9
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οὐκ εὖ φρονεῖν
10
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δούλευμα
11
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μὴ κωτιλλέ με
12
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Cp. Theognis 363
εὖ κώτιλλε τὸν ἐχθρόν
(cajole)'
ὅταν δ’ ὑποχείριος ἔλθῃ, | τῖσαί νιν, πρόφασιν μηδεμίαν θέμενος
: id. 851
Ζεὺς ἄνδρ’ ἐξολέσειεν Ὀλύμπιος, ὃς τὸν ἑταῖρον | μαλθακὰ κωτίλλων ἐξαπατᾶν ἐθέλει
.
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λέγειν … κλύειν;
13
λέγειν τι
14