Aristotle Poetics 8.3

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But HOMER, among his many other excellences, seems also to have been perfectly aware of this mistake, either from art or genius. For when he composed his ODYSSEY, he did not introduce all the events of his hero's life,—such, for instance, as the wound he received upon Parnassus 1 —his feigned madness when the Grecian army was assembling, &c. 2 —events, not connected, either by necessary or probable consequence, with each other; but he comprehended those only which have relation to one action; for such we call that of the Odyssey. And in the same manner he composed his Iliad 3 .

Poetics. Aristotle. Thomas Twining (Translator). London, UK. 1789.

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madness at the assembling of the army, between which events there was no necessary or probable connexion; but he confined the Odyssey and the Iliad likewise, to one action.
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but he composed the Odyssey, as also his Iliad, upon one action. 1 It is requisite, therefore, that as in other imitative arts one imitation is the imitation of one thing, thus, 2 3 4 5 also, [in tragedy,] the fable, since it is an imitation of action, should be the imitation of one action, and of the whole of this,
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Homere, qui a excellé en tout ſur les autres Poëtes, me paroît avoir parfaitement connu ce défaut, ou par les lumiéres naturelles d'un heureux génie, ou par les regles de l'art, car en compoſant ſon Odyſſée, il n'y a pas fait entrer toutes les avantures d'Ulyſſe, par exemple, il n'a pas mêlé la bleſſure qu'il receut ſur le Parnaſſe, avec la folie qu'il feignit, lorſque les Grecs aſſembloient leur Armée, car de ce que l'une eſt ariſtee, il ne s'enſuit, ny neceſſairement ny vray-ſemblablement, que l'autre doive arriver auſſi; mais il a employé tout ce qui pouvoit avoir raport à une ſeule & même action comme eſt celle de l'Odyſſée. Il en a uſé de même dans ſon Iliade.
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Poetics

1. This incident is, however, related, and at considerable length, in the xixth book of the Odyssey, (v. 563 of Pope's translation) but digressively, and incidentally; it made no essential part of his general plan. See Sect. 17.
2. "A ridiculous story." To avoid going to the Trojan war, Ulysses pretended to be mad; and, to prove his insanity, went to plough with an ox and a horse; but Palamedes, in order to detect him, laid his infant son, Telemachus, in the way of the plough; upon which Ulysses immediately stopped, and thereby proved himself to be in his right senses." (Hyginus, &c.)
3. Or, according to a different, and perhaps preferable, reading, thus: "but he planned his Odyssey, as he also did his Iliad, upon an action that is one in the sense here explained." See the NOTE.

Commentary

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1451a16 μύθος δ᾽ ἐστὶν εἷς κτἑ. See Schoemann, Opusc. Acad. 3 p. 31 . ὥσπερ τινὲς οἴονται: i. e. certain post-Homeric poets, whose theory apparently is inferred from their practice (comp. a 21).

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1451a17 πολλὰ γὰρ καὶ ἄπειρα De caelo 1. 9, 278 a 19
ὁρῶμεν ... πλείω καὶ ἄπειρα ὄντα τὰ ὁμοιοειδῆ
.
Vahlen (Rh. Mus. 28 p. 184) quotes also Plato Theaet. 159 B
ἐλέγομεν ὡς πολλὰ μὲν εἴη τὰ ποιοῦντα καὶ ἄπειρα
. — Tim. 31 A
πότερον οὖν ὀρθῶς ἕνα οὐρανὸν προσειρήκαμεν, ἢ πολλοὺς καὶ ἀπείρους λέγειν ἦν ὀρθότερον;

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τῷ ἑνὶ Phys. 2. 5, 196 b 28
τὸ δὲ κατὰ συμβεβηκὸς ἀόριστον· ἄπειρα γὰρ ἂν τῷ ἑνὶ συμβαίη
.
On the strength of this parallel τῷ ἐνί in the present passage is taken as a neuter by Vahlen, who translates the clause accordingly by 'in unam rem innumera cadunt'. This interpretation, it seems to me, misses the point — the distinction Aristotle assumes between the many things that befall the individual ( πολλὰ τῷ ἑνὶ συμβαίνει), i. e. that he suffers or has done to him, and the many things that he does ( πράξεις ἑνὸς πολλαί εἰσιν a 18). That τῷ ἑνί is masculine here is shown not only by περὶ ἕνα (a 17), πράξεις ἑνός (a 18), and ὅσα αὐτῷ συνέβη (25) in the context, but also by the parallel in 23, 1459 a 23
ὅσα ἐν τούτῳ συνέβη περὶ ἕνα ἢ πλείους
.
The version in the Paraphrase of Averroes, 'uni rei multa accidunt', implies the same interpretation.

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1451a18 ἐνίων which has been questioned by Spengel and others, is an understatement of a kind not so uncommon in Aristotle (see on 6, 1450 a 12 ). The sense is: In the infinite variety of things that befall the individual in the course of his life there are some [i. e. many] which it is impossible to bring into relation with the rest, as parts of one connected whole. The qualifying ἐνίων is like ἐνίοτε in 23, 1459 a 27
οὕτω καὶ ἐν τοῖς ἐφεξῆς χρόνοις ἐνίοτε γίνεται θάτερον μετὰ θάτερον, ἐξ ὧν ἐν οὐδὲν γίνεται τέλος
.
ἐξ ὧν ἐνίων has been rendered by 'ex quorum aliquibus' (Tyrwhitt), or 'quorum ex quibusdam' (Hermann). In the parallel, however, in Dem. 18. 12
περὶ ὧν ἐνίων
both Weil and Goodwin regard ἐνίων as appositional; and the same view has been taken of the word in Dem. 19. 260 (
τὰς ἀκροπόλεις αὐτῶν ἐνίων
), and in Xen. Anab. 6. 6. 34 (
περὶ ὑμῶν ἐνίων
).
Another instance of this same ambiguity is in Meteor. 1. 3, 339 b 9
πολὺ καὶ τῶν ἄστρων ἐνίων ἐλάττων ἐστίν
(comp. L. Dindorf in HSt. s. v. ἔνιος).
There is a clear instance of the appositional use of ἔνιοι, in a different case, in Poet. 9, 1451 b 19
ἐν ταῖς τραγῳδίαις ἐνíαις μὲν κτέ.
1451a19

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πάντες ἐοίκασιν ἁμαρτάνειν comp. 23, 1459 a 29 , 37.

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1451a20 Ἡρακληίδα Several Ἡράκλειαι were known in antiquity ( Kinkel, EGF. 1 p. 212, 249, 254 ).

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Θησηίδα Kinkel, 1 p. 217 .

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1451a22 προσήκειν = 'must be', 'ought to be' according to the fitness of things, as in Meteor. 1. 3, 340 a 26 , De anima 1. 5, 411 b 15 , Rhet. 2. 2, 1379 b 3 , and Plato Rep. 362 C .
1451a24
Ὀδύσσειαν for the absence of the article see on 4, 1448 b 38 .

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οὐκ ἐποίησεν ἅπαντα ὅσα αὐτῷ συνέβη i. e. his poem was not made to cover the whole ground of the life of Ulysses, but only a selected section of it, a limited group of incidents sufficiently coherent and connected to form a single action of the requisite kind ( μίαν πρᾶξιν οἷαν λέγομεν a 28 ). The unity in the story of the Odyssey, as Aristotle conceives it, may be seen from his survey of the poem in 17, 1455 b 17 . The sense of the οὐκ ἐποίησεν ἅπαντα in the text may be illustrated by the very similar expressions in 18, 1456 a 13
τὸν τῆς Ἰλιάδος ὅλον ποιεῖν μῦθον
, 16
πέρσιν Ἰλίου ὅλην ποιεῖν
, and 23, 1459 a 32
τὸν πόλεμον ποιεῖν ὅλον
.

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1451a27 ὧν οὐδὲ θατέρου γενομένου ἀναγκαῖον ἢ εἰκὸς θάτερον γενέσθαι οἷον πληγῆναι μὲν, scil. αὐτῷ συνέβη. This and the second incident, μανῆναι δὲ προσποιήσασθαι ἐν τῷ ἀγερμῷ, are given as examples of two disconnected events in the life of Ulysses ( ὧν οὐδὲ θατέρου γενομένου ἀναγκαῖον ἢ εἰκὸς θάτερον γενέσθαι, a 27 ). The antithetic particles ( μέν, δέ) imply a difference between them; the one ( πληγῆναι) is a πάθος, and the other ( μανῆναι προσποιήσασθαι) a πρᾶξις — a distinction which the preceding context (see on a 17 ) shows to have been already present in Aristotle's mind. I have ventured to restore οὐδέ in place of οὐδέν for two reasons, partly because with οὐδέν the verb ( γενέσθαι) seems to have two subjects ( οὐδέν and θάτερον), and partly because the ὧν being followed by θατέρου and θάτερον naturally refers to the two incidents just mentioned. It has been urged, as one of the difficulties in this statement, that the wounding of Ulysses is actually part of the Odyssey, being described at considerable length in the story of the Discovery in Od. 19, 392-466 . The Discovery is certainly part of the action of the Odyssey (v. 17, 1455 b 21 ), but the incident on Parnassus is in a very different position; it comes in as an episode (v. 17, 1455 b 23 ), not as one of the series of incidents which form the action of the poem. The action in the Odyssey (summarized in 17, 1455 b 17 sqq. ) extends over a space of some six weeks; but the encounter of the boy Ulysses with the boar belonged to a period of his life not covered by the Odyssey. The second incident, his feigned madness, is said to have been part of the story in the Cypria ( Kinkel, EGF. p. 18 ). Bergk (Gr. Litt. I p. 711) thinks there may have been some epic in which both incidents were included. The superior unity of the Homeric Epic is emphatically reasserted in 23, 1459 a 30 .

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ὧν = ἀλλὰ τούτων.

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1451a28 μίαν πρᾶξιν οἵαν λέγομεν 'a single action of the kind we are describing', i. e. one that forms a coherent and closely connected whole. The opposite of this is the μία πρᾶξις πολυμερής of the inferior epics ( 23, 1459 b 1 ). The reading of Ac, οἷαν λέγοιμεν, may have arisen through OIAN being misread, and taken to stand for οἷ᾽ἄν.
1451a34

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διαφέρεσθαι καὶ κινεῖσθαι has been rendered in various ways— by
'diversum reddatur vel moveatur'
(Victorius)
, by
'dissolvatur et luxetur'
(Heinsius)
, and by
'differatur et moveatur'
(Tyrwhitt)
.
The general sense is clear: when a part in a whole is removed, by being transferred to another place or withdrawn altogether, the continuity of the whole is broken at that point. Both διαφέρεσθαι and κινεῖσθαι seem to be (as Heinsius must have seen) metaphors from surgery. διαφέρεσθαι may be regarded as a synonym for διίστασθαι, the term in use in medical Greek for the diastasis of a limb as distinct from a complete luxation ( ἐξίστασθαι or ὀλισθάνειν); comp. Hippocrates 3 p. 132 K.
ὁκόσα διίσταται καὶ ὁκόσα ὀλισθάνει
.
If this view is correct, the κινεῖσθαι which follows will mean to be 'dislocated'. Hippocrates often has κινεῖσθαι and κίνημα in the sense of 'displacement' as an equivalent for diastasis (comp. 3 p. 81 K.
ἢν δέ τι κινηθῇ ἐκ τῆς χώρης
).

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προσὸν ἢ μὴ προσόν comp. Metaph. M 10, 1076 a 2
οὐθὲν γὰρ ἡ ἑτέρα [scil. οὐσία] τῇ ἑτέρᾳ συμβάλλεται οὖσα ἢ μὴ οὖσα
, and Plato Rep. 449 D
μέγα γάρ τι οἰόμεθα φέρειν καὶ ὅλον εἰς πολιτείαν ὀρθῶς ἢ μὴ ὀρθῶς γιγνόμενον
.
For this use of the participle see Goodwin, Syntax of Gk. moods and tenses § 829 (6) .

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1451a35 οὐδὲν μόριον it is not a part of the whole, but an accident or addition to it; comp. De gen. an. 1. 4, 717 b 34
οὐθὲν γάρ εἰσι μόριον τῶν πόρων οἱ ὄρχεις, ἀλλὰ πρόσκεινται καθάπερ τὰς λαίας προσάπτουσιν αἱ ὑφαίνουσαι τοῖς ἱστοῖς
.
In Metaph. Γ 5, 1010 a 30
οὗτος [scil. ὁ περὶ ἡμᾶς τόπος] οὐθὲν ὡς εἰπεῖν μόριον τοῦ παντός ἐστιν
, the phrase means practically 'is as nothing compared with', just like οὐδὲν μέρος in Isocrates 90 E
εἴ τις ἀθρήσειε καὶ σκέψαιτο τὰς τῶν Ἑλλήνων συμφοράς, οὐδὲν ἂν μέρος οὖσαι φανεῖεν τῶν ... ἡμῖν γεγενημένων
.

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8.1 1. E ſujet doit être an, & non pas, comme pluſieurs penſent, qu'il ſuffiſe qu'il ſoit d'un ſeul homme, car il luy arrive une infinité de choſes, &c. 1

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8.1 2. Car, comme on voit tous les jours une infinité d'accidens, de la plupart desquels, on ne peut rien faire qui ſoit un, il arrive de mème, que les actions d'un mème homme, ſont en ſi grand nombre & ſi differentes, &c.] 2

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8.2 3. C'eſt pourquoy il me ſemble que tous les Poëtes qui ont fait, ou l' Heracleide, ou la Theſeide, ou pluſieurs autres Poëmes ſemblables, ſe ſont fort trompez.] 3

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8.3 4. Homere, qui a excellé en tout ſur les autres Poëtes, me paroit avoir parfaitement connû ce défaut, ou par les lumières naturelles d'un heureux génie, ou par les regles de l'art.] 4

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8.3 5. Par exemple, il n'a pas mêlé la bleſſure qu'il receut ſur le Parnaſſe, avec la folie qu'il feignit, lorſque les Grecs aſſembloient leur Armée.] 5

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8.3 6. Avec la folie qu'il feignit, lorſque les Grecs aſſembloient leur Armée.] 6

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8.3 7. Car de ce que l'une eſt arrivée, il ne s'enfuit, ny neceſſairement ny vray-ſemblablement, que l'autre doive arriver.] 7

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8.3 8. Mais il a employé tout ce qui pouvoit avoir raport à une ſeule & mème action, comme eſt celle de ſon Odyſſée. Il en a uſé de mème dans ſon Iliade.] 8

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8.4 9. Comme donc dans toutes les autres imitations, ce que l'on imite eſt un, il faut de mème que dans la Tragedie.] 9

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8.4 10. Et que ſes parties ſoient tellement liées les unes avec les autres, que ſi l'on en tranſpose, ou que l'on en ôte une ſeule, le tout ſoit entierement, ou changé, ou détruit.] 10

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8.4 11. Car tout ce qui peut être mis ou omis, ſans faire un changement ſenſible, ne peut être partie d'une action.] 11

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NOTE 65. P. 80.

8.1 A FABLE IS NOT ONE—MERELY BECAUSE THE HERO OF IT IS ONE.
Mr. Hume, in his Essay on the association of ideas, represents this passage of Aristotle as contrary to the doctrine he there lays down, and which is unquestionably true—that
"in all productions, as well as in the Epic and Tragic, a certain unity is required,"
&c.—and,
"that the unity of action which is to be found in biography or history, differs from that of Epic Poetry, not in kind, but in degree."
I see here no contrariety at all. Aristotle certainly did not mean to say, that a biographical Poem, if I may so term it, (a Poem
περι ἐνα
,) has no unity, no relation of cause and effect, &c. to connect the incidents; but only, that it has not that degree of unity, which is requisite for the purpose of Tragic, or even Epic, Poetry. Mr. Hume himself allows, that Poetry
"requires a stricter and closer unity in the fable;"
and this is all that Aristotle appears to mean. The persons censured by him for concluding, that,
"because Hercules was one, so also must be the fable, of which he was the subject,"
were right enough, as philosophers, but as poets, certainly wrong.
This chapter, in which Aristotle considers so particularly the unity of fable, as distinct from its totality, led me once to think it probable, that the word
μιας
was originally in the definition of Tragedy, cap. vi. as we find it afterwards in cap. xxiii.
περι ΜΙΑΝ πραξιν όλην και τελειαν
. But perhaps the supposition is unnecessary, and unity may be sufficiently implied in the words
τελειας και όλης
:
ΟΛΟΤΗΤΟΣ
, as he elsewhere says,
ΕΝΟΤΗΤΟΣ ΤΙΝΟΣ ΟΥΣΗΣ
. 1

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NOTE 66. P. 80.

8.3 EITHER FROM ART, OR GENIUS.
Ἢτοι δια τέχνην, Ἢ ΔΙΑ ΦΥΣΙΝ
. It appears from this, as well as from other passages of Aristotle's treatise, that in the midst of all the coldness of philosophical investigation and analysis, he never lost sight of the difference between that spontaneous operation of genius and feeling in the Poet, which produces poetic beauty, and the slow and cautious process of calm examination and inquiry in the Critic, whose business it is to discover its principles. It is not every philosophical critic that avoids this error. Nothing is more common, than to suppose that to have been produced by art and reflection, about which, when produced, art and reflection have been employed. Thus languages, we are told, must have been originally formed by art, because they cannot be analysed without art: Grammarians and Philosophers must have formed language, because language has formed Grammarians and Philosophers. 2

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NOTE 67. P. 81.

8.3 BUT HE COMPREHENDED THOSE ONLY WHICH HAVE RELATION TO ONE ACTION, &C.
Οδυσσειαν γαρ ποιων, ἐκ ἐποιησεν ἅπαντα όσα αυτῳ συνεβη—ΑΛΛΑ περι μιαν πραξιν, οἱαν λεγομεν την Οδυσσειαν, ΣΥΝΕΣΤΗΣΑΝ.
So the text stands.
"Non cecinit omnia----sed quæ circa unam solam actionem, qualem Odysseam dicimus, constituerunt."
[Goulston.]
Victorius reads,
ΑΛΛ' Ἃ
, and
ΣΥΝΕΣΤΗΣΕΝ
; but does injustice, I think, to his own reading, by his construction and his version:
πέρι μιαν πραξιν συνεστησεν
:
"circa unam actionem-MANSIT."
This is, surely, very harsh. I should punctuate, and translate, thus:—
ἀλλα περι μιαν πραξιν, οἱαν λεγομεν, την Οδυσσειαν συνεστησεν· ὁμοἰως δε και την Ιλιαδα.
[fc.
συνεστησεν
].
"Sed circa unam actionem, qualem dicimus, Odysseam constituit; pariterque Iliadem."
—"But he planned his Odyssey, as he also did his Iliad, upon an action, that is one, in the sense here explained." And that this is the true reading, and the true sense, of the passage, I was once thoroughly persuaded. The construction of the whole is, thus, clear and natural. The circumstance of the plural verb
συνεστησαν
with the plural neuter,
ἅ
, is avoided; and the word
συνεστησεν
retains its proper and usual sense, as applied, throughout, by Aristotle, to the composition, or construction, of the Fable. So, cap. ix.
συστησαντες τον μύθον
. cap. xvii. and xxiii.
τους μύθους συνισταναι
et passim. I will not, however, dissemble what is against me. The reading
ἀλλ' ἅ
, besides its support from MSS. answers better to the
ἅπαντα όσα
, which precedes:
οὐκ ἐποιησεν ΑΠΑΝΤΑ όσα αυτῳ συνεβη—ΑΛΛ' Ἃ περι μ. π. &c.
But, if
ἀλλ' ἅ
be retained, the passage, I think, should stand thus:—
ἀλλ' ἅ περι μιαν πραξιν, [sc. ἐστι,] οἱαν λεγομεν την Οδυσσειαν, ΣΥΝΕΣΤΗΣΕΝ.
According to the construction of Piccolomini:—
"quelle cose accolfe, ch'al corpo d'una attione, la qual chiamiamo Odissea, servissero:"
—and the Abbé Batteux—
"Il a rapproché tout ce qui tenoit à une seule action."
—
συνεστησεν περι μιαν πραξιν
: i. e. composed his fable of those circumstances only, which relate to one action. Thus, immediately after—
τα ΜΕΡΗ ΣΥΝΙΣΤΑΝΑΙ των πραγματων
. Unwilling to make alterations that do not appear absolutely necessary, I have followed this last reading though with some remaining partiality to my first conjecture. That the sense would be clearer, and the construction less elliptical and embarrassed, is certain. But I am afraid this is but a questionable proof of corruption in the writings of Aristotle. 3

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NOTE 68. P. 81.

8.4 THE WHOLE WILL BE DESTROYED, OR CHANGED.
Destroyed, if any part be taken away, (
ἀφαιρεμενου
) — disturbed or changed, if it be transposed (
μετατιθεμενου
). In the first case it will be no longer a whole; in the last, not the same whole. This seems the meaning, as it is well rendered by M. Batteux:
"Que les parties en soient tellement liées entre elles, qu'une seule transposée, ou retranchée, ce ne soit plus un tout, ou le même tout."
—But I cannot think
διαφερεσθαι
right. It is rendered by Goulston,
"diversum reddatur, et moveatur, totum."
So Piccolomini,
"diverso----e mutato,"
&c. But, besides the manifest tautology, I doubt whether there be any good authority for this sense of the verb
διαφερεσθαι
—i. e. to be made different, or changed. At least I have not found any instance of it in Aristotle's writings. If we retain
διαφερεσθαι
, it must, I think, be taken in the sense of discerpi, distrahi, &c. But I am almost persuaded, that Aristotle wrote
ΔΙΑΦΘΕΙΡΕΣΘΑΙ
, spoiled, or destroyed. So in his Topics,
ΦΘΕΙΡΕΣΘΑΙ το ΟΛΟΝ
. vol. i. p. 258. B. ed. Duval
.

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THE UNITY OF A FABLE DOES NOT DEPEND UPON ITS RELATING TO ONE PERSON ONLY.

THIS by no means implies, that there is [A] no kind of unity in a tale which relates the actions of one perfon only; or, that there is not more uniformity in the works of a biographer than a general historian : though a certain degree of unity of action is necessary even in hiftory to render it perfect [B]. But that a greater degree of unity is necessary in a dramatic action, of which he is now treating, and even in the similar though more extended composition of the epopee. It therefore follows, that all works of fiction that assume an historic, rather than an epic form, are deficient in poetical arrangement. The instances he produces are loft. However, there is no deficiency of examples, both ancient and [A] See Hume's Essay on the Association of Ideas. [B] See Note 11. Chap. xxIIн. The following judicious observation of Mr. Gilpin, will elucidate the difference between the unity of poetry and history. It is, perhaps, ' one of the great errors in painting, (as, indeed, it is in all literary as well as picturesque ' compofition,) to be more attentive to the finishing of parts, than the production of a whole. • Whereas the master's great care should be, first to contrive a whole, and then to adapt the ، parts as artificially as he can. I speak of imaginary landscape: when he paints a real ' view, his management must be just the reverse. He has the parts given him; and he muft • form them into a whole as he can.' REMARKS ON FOREST SCENERY. modern,
modern, fuch as the (c) Cyropædia of Xenophon, the Achilleid of Statius, and Gil Blas [D]. Metastasio is of opinion, that Aristotle has carried the unity of poetic fable too far, when he says nothing can be esteemed a part of it, which cannot be taken away without deranging the whole. But he is obvioufly speaking here of the fimple tragic, and epic action, divested of all their epifodic and ornamental parts; just like the specimen he gives of the Iphigenia in Tauris, and the Odyssey, in the seventeenth chapter. One of the incidents of the Life of Ulyffes, which he mentions as omitted by Homer, ([E] except the reading proposed by Harles is adopted,) is introduced in detail, in the ninth book of the Odyssey; but it is only introduced, to use the words of Mr. Twining, digressively and incidentally, it makes ، no essential part of his general plan.' Aristotle, in another instance, has not [F] been accurate in marking the distinction between the plain fable, and the fable adorned with episodes. If this rule is applied to the inimitable comic epopees of Fielding, and especially to Tom Jones, how many of the essential parts will be found fo wonderfully connected, that even circumftances, apparently the most trifling, have consequences so interwoven with the plot, and fo conducive to the solution of it, that they cannot be taken away, or [c] The principal part, even of this work, is confined to the transactions of one campaign; and it is a doubt if it is fictitious. The facts are certainly altered and embellished; but this is too often the cafe with the ancient hiftorians. [D] See Beattie on Fable and Romance. [E] See Note [B] Chap. VIII. on the tranflation. [F] See Note [1] Chap. xxvI. on the tranflation. altered,
POETIC OF ARISTOTLE. altered, without changing and injuring the whole composition. And yet there are many episodic parts, which, though highly ornamental, may be removed without at all interfering with the general effect of the action. (I [G] do not call the History of the Man of the Hill an episode; it is a separate tale.) That in all fictitious narrative, whose aim is to affect the paffions, the poetical arrangement is naturally and obviously preferable to the historical, may be fairly inferred, from the universal adoption of it by all the novel-writers, good and bad : a description of authors not very likely to be influenced in their choice by the rules of Aristotle. Indeed, the historic form, though it may succeed in humorous compofitions, is almost incompatible with a pathetic tale; fince to be interesting, the circumstances must be particularly related, which would either swell the work to an enormous size, or [H] break it so into parts, as must be difagreeable to every reader. For this reason the extent of the dramatic action is naturally more confined than the epic, both from the interest being stronger [1], and, consequently, its going more into detail, and the division of the fable into parts being more obvious, and on that account more disgusting to the spectator, and hence the unity of time, though not carried to the excess prescribed by the French critics, is a necessary confideration in the drama. Shakespear, it is true, reconciles us to the breach of it; but what modern poet would prefume to follow his example? [G] See Note 1. Chap. xxIII. [H] See Note 11. Chap. xxiv. [1] Note III. Chap. xxvi. CHAP.

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Ritter, cap. 8 § 1

Fabulam tragoediae unam esse oportet. unitas fabulae quomodo concilietur, una est, si unius actionis eiusque totius imitatio est. : μύθος δ᾽ ἐστὶν εἷς, οὐχ ὥσπερ τινὲς οἴ ονται, ἐὰν περὶ ἕνα ᾖ : primum refellit falsam aliorum opinionem de fabulae unitate conceptam, sed respi. cere haec reprehensio videtur non tam eos qui ante se de arte poetica disputaverant, quam illos poetas qui editis carminibus prodiderant se de unitate fabulae falsam imbibisse sententiam. scribit enim οὐχ ὥσπερ τινὲς οἴονται, non οὐχ ὥσπερ τινὲς λέγουσιν, ac continuo addit διὸ πάντες ἐοίκασιν ἁμαρτάνειν, ὅσοι τῶν ποιητῶν Ἡρακληΐδα καὶ Θησηΐδα καὶ τὰ τοιαῦτα ποιήματα πεποιήκασιν· οἴονται γὰρ ἕνα καὶ τὸν μῦθον εἶναι προσήκειν. ... πολλὰ γὰρ καὶ ἄπειρα τῷ γένει συμβαίνει κτλ. multa et infinita genere contingunt, quorum nonnulla unitate carent. ἄπειρα τῷ γένει dictum est ut τῷ γένει ἕτερα 1) Conf. Sophoclis Antig. 367. sive editionis Herm. 364. ποτὲ μὲν κακόν, ἄλλοτ᾽ ἐπ᾿ ἐσθλὸν ἕρπει.c. 1, 3. genitivus ἐνίων pendet a praepositione, sed pronominis relativi ( ὧν) casus ab ἐνίων aptus est. multa et ges nere diversa inter homines contingunt, sive ab ipsis hominibus sive alia vi efficiuntur, quorum nonnulla ita comparata sunt ut unum in illis non reperiatur. Victorius γ' ἑνὶ pro γένει a se inventum commendavit et pluribus editoribus adprobavit. tum oritur inanis oppositio inter ea quae accidunt ( ἃ συμβαίνει) uni alicui et inter actiones ( τὰς πράξεις) unius, sed utrumque nomen non contraria significatione sed eadem h. 1. positum esse apparet ex §. 3., ubi simulata Ulixis insania in iis refertur, ὅσα αὐτῷ συνέβη. itaque nonnisi variationis gratia statim scribit οὕτω δὲ καὶ πράξεις ἑνὸς πολ λαί εἰσιν pro οὕτω δὲ καὶ συμβαίνει ἑνὶ πολλά, ex una igitur parte quae contingunt vel fiunt generatim ponuntur, ex altera casus et facta ( αἱ πράξεις utraque denotant) unius memorantur. in lectione a Victorio excogitata particula illa πανακής ( γ') tolerari nequit.

2. mvp-aristotle-comment-60

Ritter, cap. 8 § 2

διὸ πάντες ἐοίκασιν ἁμαρτάνειν-τὴν Ἰλιάδα: mirari subeat cur Aristoteles tragicis poetis missis ad epicos evagetur, sed hoc ille rationis habuit: nimirum violatae unitatis insigne exemplum et ad hanc disputationem prae ceteris accommodatum illi poetae suggerebant qui unius viri facta carmine illustraverant. iam cum ex poetis epicis vitiosae compositionis exempla dedisset, ex eisdem bonum exemplum et imitandum proposuit Homerum. ὅσοι τῶν ποιητῶν Ἡρακληΐδα καὶ Θησηΐδα κτλ. notat Pisandrum et Panyasin Herculeidum auctores satis notos incertumque Theseidos scriptorem a Plutarcho Thes. c. 28. memoratum. conf. de hoc postremo Welckeri Cyclus epicus p. 321. praeterea Diogenes Laertius Pythostratum Theseidos auctorem satis recentem et ipso Aristotele fortasse aetate minorem nominat II, 59. γεγόνασι δὲ Ξενοφῶντες ἑπτά· πρῶτος αὐτὸς οὗτος· δεύτερος ᾿Αθηναῖος, ἀδελφὸς Πυθοστράτου 1) τοῦ τὴν Θη- 1) Scriptura Νικοστράτου minus a codicibus commendatur. σηΐδα πεποιηκότος, γεγραφὼς ἄλλα τε καὶ βίον Ἐπαμινώνδου καὶ Πελοπίδου. Diphili Theseis commemorata a scholiasta Pindari ad Olymp. X (XI), 83. an fuerit unquam et an epо- poeia fuerit ego vehementer dubito. hanc certe Aristoteles respicere non potuit 2). - καὶ τὰ τοιαῦτα ποιήματα: poetarum cyclicorum poemata praecipue designat. conf. c. 23, 3.

3. mvp-aristotle-comment-61

Ritter, cap. 8 § 3

Ὀδύσσειαν γὰρ ποιῶν: nomen Ὀδύσσειαν h. 1. posuit pro Ὀδυσσέως ποίημα, ein Odysseus-Gedicht. hoc tenendum est, primum ut cur articulus absit intelligamus, qui paulo post non deest ante Ὀδύσσειαν et Ἰλιάδα, tum ut mirum ne videatur post Ὀδύσσειαν ποιῶν sequi αὐτῷ, ad quod Ulixis nomen subintelligendum est. conf. Comment. ad c. 4,10. - οἷον πληγῆναι μὲν ἐν τῷ Παρνάσσῳ, μανῆναι δὲ προσποιήσασθαι ἐν τῷ ἀγερμῷ: quemadmodum Homerus a violanda unitatis lege sibi caverit ut exemplo monstraretur, duo quae ex Ulixis vita memorari poterant selecta, sed ea et tempore discreta et nullo causae effectusque vinculo connexa, Aristoteles composuit, quorum prius ab Homero episodii loco narratur (Od. T. 430 sqq.), alterum silentio ab eodem transmittitur. nimirum talia qui coniuncta refert, is in rebus succedentibus neque probabilitatem neque necessitatem consectatur. nam post vulnus in Parnasso acceptum consequi fictam Ulixis insaniam, dum Graecorum exercitus repetendae a Troianis Helenae causa colligitur ( ἐν τῷ ἀγερμῷ), id neque probabile videtur neque necessario postulatur. qui haec iungit, τὰ γενόμενα narrat, non οἷα ἂν γένοιτο. nihil quidem refert, quod earum rerum 2) Theseis Diphili, unde duos versiculos metro Hipponacteo scriptos servavit Pindari scholiasta, huius hominis errori deberi videtur. nimirum Diphilus novae comoediae scriptor comoediam Θησέα, non epopoeiam Θησηΐδα, fecit. vid. Athen. VI. p. 262 A. X. p. 451 B et C. antiquam Θησηΐδα Pindari scholiasta sine nomine auctoris designavit ad Ol. ΙΙΙ, 52. ὁ γὰρ Θησηΐδα γράψας τοιαύτην ( χρυσόκερων) αὐτὴν (h. e. τὴν θήλειαν ἔλαφον) λέγει καὶ Πείσανδρος ὁ Καμειρεὺς καὶ Φερεκύδης.quae h. 1. commemorantur, una ab Homero proposita altera praetermissa est, sed tamen prudenter hoc fecisse Aristoteles videtur, ut magis illarum rerum discrepantia intelligeretur, cum idem poeta qui unam occasione data exposuit, alteram ne in episodio quidem admittendam putaret. copiose acuteque de hoc loco disputavit Gr. Guil. Nitzsch de Historia Homeri Meletem. fasc. II. pag. 4-6. περὶ μίαν πρᾶξιν, οἵαν λέγομεν: ne perperam acciperentur quae de una actione dicuntur, additum est οἷαν λέγομεν, qualem dicimus (was wir darunter verstehen). quippe intelligit πρᾶξιν ex pluribus quidem πράγμασιν constantem sed in unum collectam, eo quod singulae actionis partes secundum legem necessitatis vel probabilitatis sese excipientes totum quoddam conficiunt. hoc unum in Odyssea est reditus Ulixis, in Iliade ira Achillis.

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Ritter, cap. 8 § 4

χρὴ οὖν - ταύτης ὅλης: exemplis rectae factorum compositionis ac vitiosae propositis, norma iam et lex unitatis constituitur. quemadmodum in aliis imitandi generibus una imitatio unum quoddam exprimit imitando, sic fabula, cui actio ad imitandum destinata est, hoc suum obiectum unum totumque exprimere debet. – διαφέρεσθαι καὶ κινεῖσθαι τὸ ὅλον: si singulae actionis partes per sese constant, una vel altera moveri potest ex toto, et hoc nihilo minus remanet: sin omnes artissimo vinculo cohaerent, sublata una totum dissipatur ( διαφέρεται), ceteraeque loco suo moventur ( κινοῦνται).