And,
οὐκ ἂν γ᾽ ἐράμενος τὸν ἐκείνου ἐλλέβορου.
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It is evident, therefore, that to be detected using this mode of diction is ridiculous. [But measure is common to all the parts of diction 6.
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J For it would produce the same effect, to make an improper and ridiculous use of metaphors, foreign words, and other
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forms of diction. But how great a difference is made by the appropriate use of them, may be seen in epic poetry, by putting the words in metre. And he who transfers proper names into foreign words, into metaphors, and the other forms, will see that what we have said is true.
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Thus, for instance, Aeschylus and Euripides made the same Iambic verse;
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but by only changing one word from its proper and usual to a foreign signification, the one verse appears beautiful, and the other mean. For Aeschylus indeed, in his Philoctetes, writes, A cancerous ulcer feeds upon my foot. But Euripides, instead of
έσθίει, feeds, uses the word
θοινā
ται, banquets on.
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And,
Νῦν δέ μ᾽ ἐὼν ὀλίγος τε καὶ οὐτιδανὸς καὶ ἄκικυς,
by inserting proper [and common] words, it will be,
Νῦν δέ μ᾽ ἐὼν μικρός τε καὶ ἀσθενικὸς καὶ ἀειδής7.
And,
Δίφρον ἀεικέλιον καταθεὶς, ὀλίγην τε τράπεζαν.
Δίφρον μοχθηρὸν καταθεὶς, μικράν τε τράπεζαν.
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Or change,
ἠϊόνες βοόωσιν
(the shores rebellow9) to
ἠϊόνες κράζουσιν (the shores cry out). [10
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Again, Ariphrades used to ridicule the tragic poets for employing modes of diction, which no one would use in common conversation; such as
δωμάτων ἂπο, and not ,iro
δωμάτων, i. e. home from, and not from home;
σέθεν [for
σου̃];
έγὼ δέ νιν1 1, and '
Ἀχιλλέως πέρι, and not
περὶ 'Αχιλλέως, i. e. Achilles about, and not about Achilles;
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and other expressions of the like kind.
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For all such forms of language, because they are not in common use, remove vulgarity from the diction. But this he did not know.
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It is, however, a great thing to use each of the above-mentioned modes in a becoming manner; and also compound and foreign words.
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But the greatest thing is to employ metaphors well. For this alone cannot be acquired from another, but it is an indication of an excellent genius; since to employ metaphors well, is to discern similitude 12.
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But of words, the compound are chiefly suited to dithyrambic verse, the foreign to heroic, and metaphors to Iambic verse.
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And in heroic verse, indeed, all the above-mentioned words are useful; but in Iambics, because they especially imitate common discourse, those words are adapted which may be also used in conversation.
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And words of this description are, the proper, the metaphorical, [and the ornamental.] And thus much may suffice concerning tragedy, and the imitation in acting 13.
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