N. Wecklein Seven Against Thebes 15.comm-15

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Editions (7)
Ἑπτὰ ἐπὶ Θήβας First1KGreek (Aeschyli Tragoediae. Sidgwick, Arthur, editor. Oxford: Clarendon Press, 1902.) — 1-107 focus
Ἑπτὰ ἐπὶ Θήβας Perseus (Aeschylus, Volume 1. Smyth, Herbert Weir, editor. London; New York: William Heinemann; G.P. Putnam's Sons, 1922.) — 1-107 focus
Ἑπτὰ ἐπὶ θήβας (OCR draft) Experimental (Ἑπτὰ ἐπὶ θήβας. Guilielmus Dindorfius, 1882.) — 1 focus
Ἑπτὰ ἐπὶ θήβας (OCR draft) Experimental (Ἑπτὰ ἐπὶ θήβας. Gottfried Hermann, 1852.) — 1 focus
ΕΠΤΑ ΕΠΙ θΗΒΑΣ (OCR draft) Experimental (ΕΠΤΑ ΕΠΙ θΗΒΑΣ. Paul Mazon, 1920-1925.) — 1 focus
Ἑπτὰ ἐπὶ θήβας (OCR draft) Experimental (Ἑπτὰ ἐπὶ θήβας. N. Wecklein, 1885.) — 1 focus
Κάδμου πολῖται, χρὴ λέγειν τὰ καίρια
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ὅστις φυλάσσει πρᾶγος ἐν πρύμνῃ πόλεως
οἴακα νωμῶν, βλέφαρα μὴ κοιμῶν ὕπνῳ.
εἰ μὲν γὰρ εὖ πράξαιμεν, αἰτία θεοῦ·
εἰ δ᾽ αὖθ', ὃ μὴ γένοιτο, συμφορὰ τύχοι,
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Ἐτεοκλέης ἂν εἷς πολὺς κατὰ πτόλιν
ὑμνοῖθ᾽ ὑπ᾽ ἀστῶν φροιμίοις πολυρρόθοις
οἰμώγμασίν θ᾽, ὧν Ζεὺς ἀλεξητήριος
ἐπώνυμος γένοιτο Καδμείων πόλει.
ὑμᾶς δὲ χρὴ νῦν, καὶ τὸν ἐλλείποντ᾽ ἔτι
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ἥβης ἀκμαίας καὶ τὸν ἔξηβον χρόνῳ,
βλαστημὸν ἀλδαίνοντα σώματος πολύν,
Aeschyli Septem contra Thebas (OCR draft) Experimental (Aeschyli Septem contra Thebas. Ulrich von Wilamowitz-Moellendorff, 1914.) — 1 focus
Translations (9)
Seven Against Thebes Perseus (Aeschylus, Volume 1. Smyth, Herbert Weir, translator. London; New York: William Heinemann; G.P. Putnam's Sons, 1922. (Modernized by Perseus.)) — 1-105 focus
The Seven against Thebes. (OCR draft) Experimental (The Seven against Thebes.. Theodore Alois Buckley, 1849.) — 1 focus
Citizens of Cadmus! it is fitting that he should speak things seasonable, who has the care of affairs on the poop of a state, managing the helm, not lulling his eyelids in slumber. For if we succeed, the gods are the cause; but if, on the other hand, (which heaven forbid,) mischance should befall, Eteocles alone would be much bruited through the city by the townsmen in strains clamorous and in wailings, of which may Jove prove rightly called the Averter to the city of the Cadmaeans
. And now it behoves you—both him who still falls short of youth in its prime, and him who in point of age has passed his youth, nurturing the ample vigour of his frame and each that is in his prime
, as is best fitting— to succour the city, and the altars of your country's gods, so that their honours may never be obliterated; your children too, and your motherland, most beloved nurse; for she, taking fully on herself the whole trouble of your rearing, nurtured you when infants crawling on her kindly soil, for her trusty shield-bearing citizens, that ye might be [trusty]
for this service. And, for the present indeed, up to this day, the deity inclines in our favour; since to us now all this time beleaguered the war for the most part, by divine allotment, turns out well. But now, as saith the seer, the feeder
of birds, revolving in ear and thoughts, without the use of fire, the oracular birds with unerring art,—he, lord of such divining powers, declares that the main Achaean assault is this night proclaimed
, and [that the Achaeans] attempt the city.
But haste ye all, both to the battlements and the gates of the tower-works; On! in full panoply throng the breastworks, and take your stations on the platforms of the towers, and, making stand at the outlets of the gates, be of good heart, nor be over-dismayed at the rabble of the aliens; God will give a happy issue. Moreover, I have also despatched scouts and observers of the army, who will not, I feel assured, loiter on their way; and when I have had intelligence from these, I shall, in no point, be surprised by stratagem.
LES SEPT CONTRE THÈBES (OCR draft) Experimental (LES SEPT CONTRE THÈBES. Paul Mazon, 1920-1925.) — 1 focus
Peuple de Cadmos, il doit dire ce que l'heure exige, le chef qui, tout à sa besogne, au gouvernail de la cité, tient la barre en main, sans laisser dormir ses paupières. Car, en cas de succès, aux dieux tout le mérite !
Si au contraire — ce qu'au Ciel ne plaise ! — un malheur arrive, « Étéocle ! » — un seul nom dans des milliers de bouches sera célébré par des hymnes grondants et des lamentations, dont Zeus Préservateur, pour mériter son nom, puisse-t-il préserver la cité cadméenne ! Et vous
aussi, vous devez tous à cette heure, ceux qui attendent encore la pleine force de la jeunesse comme ceux qu'elle a fuis avec l'âge, gonflant du moins vos muscles pour en doubler la vigueur, chacun enfin se donnant au rôle qui convient à ses forces, porter secours à la cité, aux autels
des dieux du pays afin que leur culte ne soit pas à jamais effacé — à vos fils, et à la Terre maternelle, la plus tendre des nourrices, qui, à l'heure où, enfants, vous vous traîniez sur son sol bienveillant, a pris toute la charge de votre nourriture et fait de vous les loyaux citoyens armés du
bouclier qu'elle attend en ce besoin. — Sans doute, jusqu'ici le Ciel penche pour nous : depuis de longs jours que Thèbes est assiégée, la guerre, grâce aux dieux, nous a le plus souvent donné l'avantage. Mais voici qu'aujourd'hui parle le devin, pâtre des oiseaux, qui, sans recourir aux
The Seven Chiefs against Thebes (OCR draft) Experimental (The Seven Chiefs against Thebes. Robert Potter, 1779.) — 1 focus
YE citizens of Cadmus a
, it behoves
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The man that guides the helm of state b
, to speak
What the sad times require; nor suffer sleep
To weigh his eyelids down.
For if success
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Attends our toils, to the good Gods we bow c
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The authors of the blessing: Should misfortune,
Avert it Heav'n! befall, Eteocles
Shall hear his name alone wide thro' the city
Insulted by each tongue, that vents its spleen
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In mutinous reproach, or loud laments:
From which may Jove, the guardian of our state,
Defend the sons of Cadmus!
But this hour
Calls on you all, whether your flow'ry spring
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Yet wants the prime of manhood, or your age
Puts forth its firmest strength, t' exert your pow'rs,
Well it becomes you, to defend the city,
The altars of the Gods presiding here,
(Ah, never may their honours be effac'd!)
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Your children, and this land, your common parent,
And dearest nurse, who on her soft'ring soil
Upheld with bounteous care your infant steps,
And train'd you to this service, that your hands
In her defence might lift the faithful shield.
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E'en to this day indeed the Gods incline
To favour us; and tho' so long immur'd
Within our rampires, each bold work of war
Hath prosper'd in our hands.
But now the seer,
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That listens to the flight of birds d
, and thence
Forms in his præscient mind the sure presage,
Guiltless of fire, from their oracular wings
Draws his deep skill, and warns us that the pow'rs
Of Greece, combin'd against us, in the night
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Advancing, meditate the dark assault.
Haste all then to the walls, haste to the bulwarks
With all your arms, fill ev'ry tow'r, secure
Each pass, stand firm at ev'ry gate, be bold,
Nor fear th' assailing numbers: Heav'n is with us.
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Meanwhile on ev'ry quarter have I sent
T' observe their forces, and descry their march:
By these, not charg'd, I trust, in vain to watch,
Inform'd I guard against the wiles of war.
Eschilo, I Sette a Tebe: traduzione italiana di Ettore Romagnoli (OCR draft) Experimental (Eschilo, I Sette a Tebe: traduzione italiana di Ettore Romagnoli. Ettore Romagnoli, 1922.) — 1 focus
ETEOCLE
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ARALDO
CORO DI FANCIULLE TEBANE
ANTIGONE
ISMENE
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BANDITORE
POPOLO
Aeschylus, Septem ad Thebas: versio Latina Ioannis Sanravii (OCR draft) Experimental (Aeschylus, Septem ad Thebas: versio Latina Ioannis Sanravii. Ioannes Sanravius, 1555.) — 1 focus
Cadmi ciues, quæ opportuna sunt,
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opus est dicere.
Quicunq; negotioru curam habet,
in puppi ciuitatis
Habens clauum, palpebras ne det
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somno.
Si bene nobiscum agitur, cauſa dijs tribuenda eſt:
Si uerò uiciſsim (quod ne contingat) calamitas acci-derit,
Etheocles unus multus per ciuitatem
Conuicijs afficiatur proæmijs tumultuoſis,
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Et fletibus: quibus Iupiter defensor,
Nominatus sit Thebanorum urbi.
Vos uerò oportet nunc, et eum qui adhuc
Impubes est, et eu qui tépore exceſsit ex pubertate,
Florens ac creſcens, multum corporis
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Vigorem habere quemq;, ut decet,
Vrbemq; iuuare deorum patriorum
Abaris, nunquam honores delere:
Filiosq; & matrem chariſsimam, terram altricem.
Quæ enim uenietes iuuenes in propitium campum,
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Omnia admittens labore diſciplinæ,
Aluit incolas ſcutatos
Fideles ut sitis in hoc opere.
Et nunc in hoc die bene uertat Deus:
Nam hoc tempore turrium cuſtolibus,
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Fœliciter plerumq; bellum ex dijs ſuccedit.
Nunc uerò ut uates ait auium pastor,
In auribus conſiderans mentibus sine igne,
Fatidicas aues uera arte:
Ipſe talium uaticinationum dominus
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Dicit, maximam incurſionem Grecanicam
Noctu deliberare, & inſidiari urbi.
Sed ad propugnacula, portas turrium
Festinate omnes, cum armis:
Implete thoraces, in tabulatis
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Turrium state, in exitibus portarum
Manentes, confidite: neq;
hostium
Timete admodum multitudinem, bene uertat Deus.
Speculatores ego, & exploratores exercitus
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Miſi, quibus persuasi ne frustra iter aggrederentur,
Vt illos audiens non capiar dolo.
Seven Against Thebes (OCR draft) Experimental (Seven Against Thebes. Anna Swanwick, 1886.) — 1 focus
ETEOCLES
BURGHERS of Cadmos, timely words beseem
Him at the stern who guards the city's weal,
Guiding the helm with lids unsoothed by sleep;
For, if we prosper, God alone is praised,
But if, which Heaven forefend, mischance befall,
One man, Eteocles, through all the town,
In noiseful rhymes and wailings manifold
Would by the folk be chanted; which may Zeus,
True to his sacred name, Averter, turn
From our Cadmeian city; you meanwhile
It now behoves—both him who faileth yet
Of youth's fair prime, and him whose bloom is past,
His body's vigour nursing to the full,
And each with service that befits him best—
The State to aid and shrines of native gods,
That ne'er their honours be erased; to aid
Your children too, and this your mother earth,
Beloved nurse, who, while your childish limbs
Crept on her friendly plain, all nurture-toil
Full kindly entertained, and fostered you
Her denizens to be, in strait like this
Shield-bearing champions, trusty in her cause.
And so far, to the present day, in sooth
God in our favour hath inclined the scale;
For unto us, so long beleaguered here,
War prospers in the main, through heaven's high will;—
But now, so speaks the seer, augur divine,
Without fire omens, but in ear and mind
Marking, with faultless skill, presageful birds,—
He, lord of these divining arts, declares
That the prime onset of the Achaian host,
Night-plotted, threatens even now the town;
Haste, to the turrets then and bastion-gates
Rush in full panoply;—the breastworks throng,
Take station on the platforms of the towers,
And, biding at the outlets of the ports,
Be of good courage, nor this alien swarm
Dread over-much; God will rule all for good.
Myself have scouts sent forth and army spies,
Who, as I trust, no bootless journey make;
And having heard their tidings, in no wise
Shall I by guileful stratagem be caught.
MESSENGER
Noble Eteocles, Cadmeians' lord,
I come clear tidings bringing of the host;—
Myself eye-witness am of what befel;
For seven impetuous warriors, captains bold,
Slaving the sacred bull o'er black-rimmed shield,
And touching with their hands the victim's gore,
Ares, Enyo, and blood-thirsting Fear
Invoked, and sware before them,—Cadmos' town
To pillage, and its fort to raze, or else,
Dying themselves, to steep this earth in blood.
But for their parents whom at home they left,
With their own hands around Adrastos' car
Memorials they were hanging, shedding tears,
But from their lips no word of ruth was heard;
For iron-hearted purpose, all aglow
With manly courage, breathed as lions breathe,
Whose eyeballs glare with battle. Such my news,
Which by no sluggishness have been delayed.
I left them casting lots that each might lead,
As Fate assigned, his squadron to the gates;
Hence at their outlets marshal with all speed
Our bravest men, our city's chosen sons;
For near already, raising dust, comes on,
Full-armed, the Argive host, while glistening foam
Mottles the plain with flakes from panting steeds.
But thou, like prudent helmsman of the ship,
Make stanch the city, before Ares' blasts
Swoop down upon it; loud the land-wave roars;
Thou, for this charge, the swiftest moment seize:
Myself, sure watch, a wary eye will keep,
And thou, through certain tidings, knowing all
Outside that happens, without scath shalt be.
ETEOCLES
O Zeus, and Earth, and Gods our town who guard,
And thou strong curse, Erinys of my sire,
My city, where the speech of Hellas flows,
With utter ruin, captured by the foe,
Uproot ye not, nor our domestic hearths,
But grant that our free land and Cadmos' town
In vassal bondage never may be held.
Be ye our strength;—our common weal, I urge,
For thriving cities honour best the gods.
CHORUS
I wail forth mighty, fear-inspiring woes!
An army hurries, from its camp set free!
A mounted host onward in ample tide
Towards our city flows.
Dust that on air doth ride,
Dumb herald, clear and true, persuadeth me.
Clatter of horse-hoofs on my natal plain
Brings to mine ear war's dismal sound;
Air-borne it floats around;
Like mountain-lashing flood's resistless flow
It roars amain.
Alas! ah me!
Ye gods and goddesses, oh turn aside
The impending woe.
LEADER OF THE 1ST HALF CHORUS
With battle-shout, straight to our city-wall
The host white-shielded speeds in fair array.
FIRST MAIDEN
Who will deliver?
SECOND MAIDEN
Succour us who may,
Or god or goddess?
THIRD MAIDEN
Prostrate shall I fall
Their shrines before?
FOURTH MAIDEN
Ye Blest ones here who reign
Now is the time to clasp your statues, now.
FIFTH MAIDEN
Burdened with sorrow, why, oh why delay?
SIXTH MAIDEN
The clash of shields meets it, or not your ear?
SEVENTH MAIDEN
† When, if not now, shall we our prayers begin
With sacred peplus and wool-tufted bough?
EIGHTH MAIDEN
I mark the rattling din!
It is the clatter of no single spear.
NINTH MAIDEN
O Ares, tutelary god of old,
Thy proper soil betraying what wilt gain?
TENTH MAIDEN
O golden-helmed god, the State behold
Which once to count beloved thou didst deign.
LEADER OF 1ST HALF CHORUS
†Ye tutelary gods, the land who hold,
Come ye, come all, look on this virgin train
Who, dreading bonds, as suppliants on you call.
LEADER OF 2ND HALF CHORUS
For lo! with slanting plumes
A surge of warriors round our city wall,
On blasts of Ares riding, hoarsely booms.
CHORUS
STROPHE I.
†Do thou, O Zeus, all-perfect Sire, do thou
Avert, thou canst, our capture by the foe;
For Cadmos' fort Argives encircle now;
Weapons of war my heart appal, for lo,
To chargers' mouths made fast, their metal gear
Rings slaughter, and with pride elate,
Seven chiefs, conspicuous o'er the host,
With panoply of spear,
Each having gained by lot his post,
Stand, prompt for battle, at the seventh gate.
English (E. D. A. Morshead, 1908) (OCR draft) Experimental (Aeschylus, Seven against Thebes — Morshead translation. Wikisource transcription; speech corresp and card milestones aligned to Smyth perseus-grc2.) — 1 focus
Clansmen of Cadmus, at the signal given
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By time and season must the ruler speak
Who sets the course and steers the ship of State
With hand upon the tiller, and with eye
Watchful against the treachery of sleep.
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For if all go aright, thank Heaven, men say,
But if adversely—which may God forefend!—
One name on many lips, from street to street,
Would bear the bruit and rumour of the time,
Down with Eteocles!—a clamorous curse,
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A dirge of ruin. May averting Zeus
Make good his title here, in Cadmus' hold!
You it beseems now—boys unripened yet
To lusty manhood, men gone past the prime
And increase of the full begetting seed,
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And those whom youth and manhood well combined
Array for action—all to rise in aid
Of city, shrines, and altars of all powers
Who guard our land; that ne'er, to end of time,
Be blotted out the sacred service due
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To our sweet mother-land and to her brood.
For she it was who to their guest-right called
Your waxing youth, was patient of the toil,
And cherished you on the land's gracious lap,
Alike to plant the hearth and bear the shield
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In loyal service, for an hour like this.
Mark now! until to-day, luck rules our scale;
For we, though long beleaguered, in the main
Have with our sallies struck the foemen hard.
But now the seer, the feeder of the birds,
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(Whose art unerring and prophetic skill
Of ear and mind divines their utterance
Without the lore of fire interpreted)
Foretelleth, by the mastery of his art,
That now an onset of Achaea's host
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Is by a council of the night designed
To fall in double strength upon our walls.
Up and away, then, to the battlements,
The gates, the bulwarks! don your panoplies,
Array you at the breast-work, take your stand
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On floorings of the towers, and with good heart
Stand firm for sudden sallies at the gates,
Nor hold too heinous a respect for hordes
Sent on you from afar: some god will guard!
I too, for shrewd espial of their camp,
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Have sent forth scouts, and confidence is mine
They will not fail nor tremble at their task,
And, with their news, I fear no foeman's guile.
[ Enter A Spy.
German (J. J. C. Donner, 1854; OCR review) (OCR draft) Experimental (Aeschylos. Deutsch in den Versmaßen der Urschrift. Stuttgart: Hoffmann, 1854. Native Donner line citations, Smyth card correspondence, selected textual readings and metrical facsimiles. Remaining OCR differences and unattributed reading notes are documented in the linked review inventory.) — 1 focus
Ihr Kadmosbürger, reden muß das Treffende, 1
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Wer, wach für seines Volkes Wohl, das Ruder lenkt
Am Bord des Staates, nie das Aug' in Schlaf gewiegt.
Denn sind wir glücklich, wissen wir's den Göttern Dank;
Doch wenn ein Leid uns träfe, - mög' es nie gescheh'n! -
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Dann würde durch die ganze Stadt Eteokles nur
Vielfach von alles Volkes weithinſchallendem
Wehklageruf gefeiert: Zeus der Schüßende,
Treu seinem Namen, wende dies von Kadmos' Stadt!
Auf, Bürger alle, wer zu voller Manneskraft
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Noch nicht gereift ist oder wer bereits ergraut,
Pflegt eures Leibes, stählet ihn zu frischer That,
Voll regen Eifers alle, wie's die Pflicht gebeut,
Die Stadt zu schirmen und der Landesgötter Herd,
Daß ihrer Ehren Sterne niemals untergeh'n,
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Auch Söhn' und Mutter Erde, die uns hold gepflegt!
Denn als ihr, klein noch, spieltet auf dem weichen Grund,
Hat sie der Kindespflege Last all' über sich
Genommen, hat zu schildbewehrten Bürgern euch
Erzogen, daß ihr rüstig wärt zu solchem Dienst.
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Bis diesen Tag nun neigte sich ein Gott zu uns.
Denn sind wir auch belagert schon die lange Zeit,
Gewährten gute Götter uns doch meist den Sieg.
Doch, wie der Seher heute sprach, der Vögel Wart,
Der, ohne Flammenzeichen, nur mit Geist und Ohr
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Der Vögel Schicksalsfluge lauscht voll weiser Kunst, -
Er, solcher Sprüche Meister, that uns heute kund,
Das Heer Achäa's habe sich zahlreich zu Nacht
Gesammelt, und bedrohe Kadmos' Stadt mit Sturm.
Drum auf die Mauerzinnen, an die Thorbastei'n
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Eilt alle, stürmt in voller Rüstung all' hinaus,
Besekt die Brustwehr, stellet auf die Platten euch
Der Thurmeshöhen, an den Thorausgängen harrt
Getrostes Muthes, zaget nicht in banger Angst
Vor diesem Fremdlingsschwarme: wohl vollbringt's ein Gott!
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Kundschafter sandt' ich, Späher in das Heer hinaus,
Und die verfehlen sicher nicht des Weges Ziel.
Wenn sie mir Kunde bringen, fängt mich keine List.
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Notes on the current edition

Seven Against Thebes

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Commentary

Critical apparatus to Seven Against Thebes (OCR draft) (Latin and Greek critical apparatus to Gottfried Hermann's 1852 edition of Seven Against Thebes.) focus

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μὴ 'ξαλειφθῆναι ποτε: Inter
μας
et
αλειφθῆναι ποτε
litura est in M.
μὴ ἐξαλειφθῆναι ποτέ
Vit.
μὴ ξαλειφῆναι ποτέ
G. Mosc. 2.
μὴ ἐξαλειφῆναι ποτὲ
Lips.
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Commentary (N. Wecklein, 1902; German; OCR draft) (Seven Against Thebes, explanatory commentary pp. 15–100. Single-witness OCR; source readings and all reference placements require scan review.) focus

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Prolog, in welchem mit tiefer Empfindung und stimmungs- voll die Situation und der Drang des Augenblicks gekennzeichnet wird, nachdem die vorausliegenden Begebenheiten durch die voran- gehenden beiden Dramen der Tri- logie gegeben sind. Dabei tritt uns der Charakter des Eteokles in seiner entschlossenen Tatkraft und patrioti- schen Begeisterung entgegen und wird durch V. 28f., 57f. der weitere Verlauf des Dramas vorbereitet. Eteokles kommt aus dem Palaste und spricht zu den vor dem Hause versammelten Kriegern, Jünglingen, Männern und Greisen, welche nach 35 abziehen.

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μὴ ἐξαλειφθῆναι nach ἀρή- γειν wie nach einem Verbum des Hinderns.