W. S. Teuffel Persians 280-289.comm-280-289

ed. N. Wecklein

Persians. W. S. Teuffel. ed. N. Wecklein. . .

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Commentary (W. S. Teuffel; revised by N. Wecklein, 1886; German; OCR draft) (German) (Persians, explanatory commentary pp. 43–97. Single-witness OCR; source readings and all reference placements require scan review.)

Provisional text from uncorrected OCR; expect errors.

Editions (7)
Πέρσαι First1KGreek (Aeschyli Tragoediae. Sidgwick, Arthur, editor. Oxford: Clarendon Press, 1902.) — 256-289 focus
Πέρσαι Perseus (Aeschylus, Volume 1. Smyth, Herbert Weir, editor. London; New York: William Heinemann; G.P. Putnam's Sons, 1922.) — 256-289 focus
Πέρσαι (OCR draft) Experimental (Πέρσαι. Guilielmus Dindorfius, 1882.) — 249 focus
Πέρσαι (OCR draft) Experimental (Πέρσαι. Gottfried Hermann, 1852.) — 249 focus
ὦ γῆς ἁπάσης Ασιάδος πολίσματα,
ὦ Περσίς αἷα καὶ πολὺς πλούτου λιμήν,
ὡς ἐν μιᾷ πληγῇ κατέφθαρται πολὺς
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ὄλβος, τὸ Περσῶν δ᾽ ἄνθος οἴχεται πεσόν.
ὤμοι, κακὸν μὲν πρῶτον ἀγγέλλειν κακά·
ὅμως δ᾽ ἀνάγκη πᾶν ἀναπτύξαι πάθος,
Πέρσαι· στρατὸς γὰρ πᾶς ὄλωλε βαρβάρων.
ἄνι᾽ ἄνια νεόκοτα καὶ δάϊ, αἰαῖ.
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διαίνεσθε, Πέρσαι, τόδ᾽ ἄχος κλύοντες.
ὡς πάντα γ' ἔστ' ἐκεῖνα διαπεπραγμένα
καὐτὸς δ᾽ ἀέλπτως νόστιμον βλέπω φάος.
ΠΕΡΣΑΙ (OCR draft) Experimental (ΠΕΡΣΑΙ. Paul Mazon, 1920-1925.) — 249 focus
Πέρσαι (OCR draft) Experimental (Πέρσαι. N. Wecklein, 1885.) — 249 focus
ὦ γῆς ἁπάσης Ἀσιάδος πολίσματα,
ὦ Περσὶς αἶα καὶ πολὺς πλούτου λιμήν,
ὡς ἐν μιᾷ πληγῇ κατέφθαρται πολὺς
ὄλβος, τὸ Περσῶν δ᾽ ἄνθος οἴχεται πεσόν.
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ὤμοι, κακὸν μὲν πρῶτον ἀγγέλλειν κακά,
ὅμως δ᾽ ἀνάγκη πᾶν ἀναπτύξαι πάθος,
Πέρσαι· στρατὸς γὰρ πᾶς ὄλωλε βαρβάρων.
ἄνι᾽ ἄνια κακά,
νεόκοτα καὶ δάι. αἰαῖ,
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διαίνεσθε, Πέρσαι,
τόδ᾽ ἄχος κλύοντες.
ὡς πάντα γ᾽ ἔστ᾽ ἐκεῖνα διαπεπραγμένα,
καὐτὸς δ᾽ ἀέλπτως νόστιμον βλέπω φάος.
ἦ μακροβίοτος
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ὅδε γέ τις αἰὼν ἐφάνθη
γεραιοῖς, ἀκούειν
τόδε πῆμ᾽ ἄελπτον.
καὶ μὴν παρών γε κοὐ λόγους ἄλλων κλύων,
Πέρσαι, φράσαιμ᾽ ἂν οἷ᾽ ἐπορσύνθη κακά.
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οτοτοτοῖ, μάταν
τὰ πολλὰ βέλεα παμμιγῆ
γᾶς ἀπ᾽ Ἀσίδος ἦλθ᾽ ἐπ᾽ αἶαν
δάιαν Ἑλλάδα χώραν.
πλήθουσι νεκρῶν δυσπότμως ἐφθαρμένων
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Σαλαμῖνος ἀκταὶ πᾶς τε πρόσχωρος τόπος.
ὀτοτοτοῖ, φίλων
ἁλίδονα σώματα πολυβαφῆ
κατθανόντα λέγεις φέρεσθαι
πλαγκτοῖς ἐν διπλάκεσσιν.
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οὐδὲν γὰρ ἤρκει τόξα, πᾶς δ᾽ ἀπώλλυτο
στρατὸς δαμασθεὶς ναΐοισιν ἐμβολαῖς.
ἴυζ᾽ ἄποτμον βοὰν
δυσαιανῆ Πέρσαις
δαίοις, ὡς πάντα παγκάκως
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ἔθεσαν. αἰαῖ στρατοῦ φθαρέντος.
ὦ πλεῖστον ἔχθος ὄνομα Σαλαμῖνος κλύειν·
φεῦ, τῶν Ἀθηνῶν ὡς στένω μεμνημένος.
στυγναί γ᾽ Ἀθῆναι δᾴοις·
σιγῶ πάλαι δύστηνος ἐκπεπληγμένη
κακοῖς· ὑπερβάλλει γὰρ ἥδε συμφορά,
τὸ μήτε λέξαι μήτ᾽ ἐρωτῆσαι πάθη.
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ὅμως δ᾽ ἀνάγκη πημονὰς βροτοῖς φέρειν
θεῶν διδόντων· πᾶν δ᾽ ἀναπτύξας πάθος
λέξον καταστάς, κεἰ στένεις κακοῖς ὅμως,
τίς οὐ τέθνηκε, τίνα δὲ καὶ πενθήσομεν
τῶν ἀρχελείων, ὅστ᾽ ἐπὶ σκηπτουχίᾳ
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ταχθεὶς ἄνανδρον τάξιν ἠρήμου θανών.
Aeschyli Persae (OCR draft) Experimental (Aeschyli Persae. Ulrich von Wilamowitz-Moellendorff, 1914.) — 249 focus
Translations (8)
Persians Perseus (Aeschylus, Volume 1. Smyth, Herbert Weir, translator. London; New York: William Heinemann; G.P. Putnam's Sons, 1922. (Modernized by Perseus.)) — 256-286 focus
The Persians. (OCR draft) Experimental (The Persians.. Theodore Alois Buckley, 1849.) — 249 focus
O ye cities of the whole land of Asia! O realm of Persia, and mighty haven of opulence, how hath the ample weal been demolished by a single stroke, and the flower of the Persians is fallen and gone. Woe's me, 'tis an ill office to be the first messenger of ill, but yet it is necessary to unfold the whole of the disaster of the Persians, for all the army of the barbarians hath perished.
Dismal, dismal, strange evils, and adverse,-alas. Drench yourselves in tears, ye Persians, hearing of this sorrow.
How has all that armament gone to ruin! But I myself, beyond my hope, behold the day of my return.
Verily this life of ours appears too long protracted to us aged men, that we should hear of this unlooked-for calamity.
And in very deed I, being on the spot, and not having heard reports from others 1 , can tell how great ills have been dealt out to the Persians.
Woe! woe! in vain did the multitude of shafts of every kind go from the land of Asia, against a hostile land, the realm of Hellas.
The shores of Salamis, and all the adjoining region, are full of the corpses of those who miserably perished.
Woe! woe! thou tellest us that the dead bodies of our friends, tossed on the billow, oft immersed, are borne along on the twice-changing surface of the tide 2 .
Yes, for our bows availed us nought, and our whole host perished, beaten down by the collision of the beaks of the vessels.
Shriek forth a doleful outcry, full of woe to the wretched Persians; for ill did they succeed in all things, alas! when their host was destroyed.
O name of Salamis, most hateful to our ears. Alas! how I sigh when I remember Athens.
Hateful is Athens to us miserable: we have to remember, in sooth, how many of the Persian matrons it has made widows and bereft of their husbands to no gain 1 of ours!
I, wretched, have for a long time kept silence, utterly astounded by the evils: for this calamity is too great for me to speak, or to enquire about our sufferings. Nevertheless, it is necessary for mortals to endure afflictions, when the gods award them : and do thou compose thyself and tell us, unfolding the whole of our suffering, even though thou sigh est over the evils: who is there that hath not fallen? and whom of the leaders of the host shall we bewail, who, having been appointed to a sceptred office, by his death left his file desolate without their chief?
LES PERSES (OCR draft) Experimental (LES PERSES. Paul Mazon, 1920-1925.) — 249 focus
O cités de l'Asie entière, ô terre de
Perse, havre de richesse infinie, voici donc, d'un seul coup, anéanti un immense bonheur, abattue et détruite la fleur de la Perse ! — Hélas ! c'est un malheur déjà que d'annoncer le premier un malheur. Et pourtant il me faut déployer
devant vous toute notre misère, Perses : l'armée
barbare tout entière a péri !
à l'annonce de telle douleur.
moi-même, c'est contre tout espoir que je vois le soleil du retour.
aujourd'hui trop longue, l'existence qui laisse les vieillards que nous sommes ouïr
ce coup inattendu !
ô Perses, quels maux vous ont été préparés là-bas.
rien qu'ensemble des milliers d'armes de toute espèce ont passé du
pays d'Asie sur une terre ennemie, sur le sol de Grèce !
heure le rivage de Salamine et tous ses alentours.
j'aime roulés du flot, où sans cesse ils replongent, corps sans vie emportés dans leurs larges saies errantes !
était impuissant, et toute notre armée succombait écrasée sous le choc des trières.
Clame sur notre misère une plainte
désolée, lugubre. Les dieux ont tout fait pour que tous les maux s'abattent sur les Perses. Hélas ! hélas ! sur notre armée anéantie !
Ah ! quels sanglots me coûte le souvenir d'Athènes !
The Persians (OCR draft) Experimental (The Persians. Robert Potter, 1779.) — 249 focus
Send they embattled numbers to the field?
Slaves to no lord, they own no kingly pow'r g .
Thy words ſtrike deep, and wound the parent's
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breaſt,
Whoſe ſons are march'd to ſuch a dangerous field.
But, if I judge aright, thou ſoon ſhalt hear
Each circumſtance; for this way, mark him,
ſpeeds
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A Perſian meſſenger; he bears, be ſure,
Tidings of high import, or good or ill.
Woe to the towns thro' Aſia's peopled realms!
Woe to the land of Perſia, once the port
Of boundleſs wealth, how is thy glorious ſlate
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Vaniſh'd at once, and all thy ſpreading honours
Fall'n, loſt!
Ah me! unhappy is his taſk
That bears unhappy tidings: but conſtraint
Compels me to relate this tale of woe.
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Perſians, the whole barbaric hoſt is fall'n.
O horror, horror! What a baleful train
Of recent ills!
Ah Perſians, as he ſpeaks
Of ruin, let your tears ſtream to the earth.
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It is e'en ſo, all ruin; and myſelf,
Beyond all hope returning, view this light.
How tedious and oppreſſive is the weight
Of age, reſerv'd to hear theſe hopeleſs ills?
Woe, woe is me! Then has the iron ſtorm,
That darken'd from the realms of Aſia, pour'd
In vain its arrowy ſhow'r on ſacred Greece.
In heaps th' unhappy dead lie on the ſtrand
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Of Salamis, and all the neighbouring ſhores.
Nought did their bows avail, but all the troops
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In the firſt conflict of the ſhips were loſt,
Eschilo, I Persiani: traduzione italiana di Ettore Romagnoli (OCR draft) Experimental (Eschilo, I Persiani: traduzione italiana di Ettore Romagnoli. Ettore Romagnoli, 1922.) — 249 focus
O voi, città dell'Asia tutte, o terra
di Persia, porto di ricchezza immenso,
come ad un colpo solo andò distrutta
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la gran felicità, come dei Persi
cade il fiore e si perde!
Ahimè! Che male
è mirar primo i mali! E pure, è forza
che intiero il danno, o Persi, io sveli.
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Tutto distrutto fu dei barbari l'esercito !
Ahimè, miseri miseri,
mali novelli e immani!
Sgorghin le vostre lagrime
all'udir tanto strazio, o Persïani!
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Tutto in rovina è andato.
Del ritorno contro ogni speme anch'io veduto ho il giorno.
Ahimè! Del nostro vivere
troppo son lunghi gli anni,
quando, o vegliardi, simili
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udir dobbiamo inopinati affanni.
Vi narrerò, né per veduta altrui,
ciò che patimmo: ivi presente fui.
Indarno, indarno, ahimè,
delle commiste frecce il fitto stuolo
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dalle contrade d'Asia
all'inimico mosse elleno suolo!
Piene le spiagge son di Salamina
di tristi spoglie, e ogni terra vicina.
Che dici? Ahimè, ahimè!
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Senza piú vita i corpi erran dei Persi,
nel turbinio del pelago,
fra cozzo alterno di marosi immersi!
Gli archi nulla giovâr:
l'urto dei rostri tutti quanti distrusse i legni nostri.
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Leva angoscioso un gemito
sui Persïani, un ululo di lutto.
Oh derelitti! Ahi sorte in tutto misera!
Oh esercito distrutto!
Oh Salamina, esoso nome!
Oh!, quanto d'Atene al sovvenir mi sciolgo in pianto!
Atene, oh! come t'odia
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chi t'è avverso!
Il ricordo andrà lontano
di quante donne persïane furono
e spose e madri invano.
Artèmbare sbatté, di diecimila
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cavalli duce, alle Silenie rupi:
e Dadàce, di mille, un salto a vuoto
spiccò dal bordo, d'una lancia all'urto.
Tenagone, che il primo era dei figli
di Battrïana, l'isola d'Aiace
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flagellata dai flutti, abita.
Arsame,
Lilaio, e terzo, Argeste, intorno all'isola
di colombi nutrice, all'aspra cozzano
spiaggia coi comni, spenti.
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Artèo, finitimo
del Nilo egizio ai fonti, Adève, e terzo
il clipeato Fàrnuco, piombarono
da un legno sol.
Criseo Matallo, capo
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di trentamila cavalieri negri,
bagnò la rossa fitta ombrosa barba,
color mutando entro purpureo bagno.
L'arabo Mago, il battrio Artame, giacquero,
nuovi meteci, in quella terra dura.
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Ed Amistri e Anfistrèo, che la terribile
lancia vibrava, e Arïomarde il buono
che lutto a Sardi ora procaccia, e Sísamo
misio, e Taribi che guidava navi
cinque volte cinquanta, e nacque a Lirna,
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fulgido eroe, giace ora spento, misero,
ché non gli arrise la ventura.
E Sínnesi
re dei Cilici, il primo fra i magnanimi,
cruccio, ei da solo, agl'inimici, grande,
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morte ebbe e gloria.
Io questi sol rammemoro
dei condottieri. Ma ben pochi sono
questi che annuncio, dei malanni molti.
Aeschylus, Persae: versio Latina Ioannis Sanravii (OCR draft) Experimental (Aeschylus, Persae: versio Latina Ioannis Sanravii. Ioannes Sanravius, 1555.) — 249 focus
O terræ totius Afiæ urbes,
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O Perſica terra, magnus diuitiarum portus,
Vt in uno cõflictu interijt ingens
Fœlicitas, flos autem Perſarum profligatus uenit.
Heu malum quidem est, primò nunciare mala.
Tamen neceſse est omnem calamitatem aperire:
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Amat nullus nuncium malorum fermonum.
O Perſe, exercitus omnis barborum interijt.
Triftia mala, triſtia molesta,
Recenter nata, hoſtilia heu heu.
Madefiamini lachrymis Perſæ audientes hunc dolorem.
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Quoniam illa peracta ſunt,
Et ipfe præter ſpem gratam uideo lucem.
Longaua certè nobis hæc uita uiſa est,
Senibus ad audiendum infperatam hanc cladem.
Attamen preſens, & non uerba alioru audi
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Perſe, dicerem qualia fint peracta mala.
Heu heu fruftra
Multa iacula mixta,
A' terra Aſiatica uenerunt in terram
Sacram Græciam.
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Plena ſunt cadauerum corruptorum infœliciter
Salaminis littora, omnisq; finitimus locus.
Heu beu falſa corpora amicorum,
Demersa intereuntia dicis ferri,
In errabundis diploidibus.
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Nihil iuuerunt arcus, omnis uerò perijt
Exercitus, domatus roftratis nauibus.
Clama miferum clamorem,lugubrem Perfis
Miseris, ut omnia admodum malè
Difpofita firm:heu heu, corruptus est exercitus.
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O magnum odiū, nomen Salaminis audire:
Heu quam lugeo, memor Athenarum.
Mæſtæ ſunt quoq; Athene memores hoſtiu:
Quàm multas Perfidum fine cauſa
Fecerunt uiduas, aui uiris priuatas.
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Taceo diu infœlix, obstupefacta
Malís.ſuperat enim hec calamitas,
Vineq loqui,neq; interrogare mala liceat.
Attamen neceſse est mortales calamitates ferre
Dijs dantibus.omnem dolorem aperiens
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Dicito aſtans tamen, etfi luges propter mala.
Quis non occubuitsquem lugebimus.
Populi principum, qui ſub ſceptrifera potentia
Ordinatus, moriens caterua fine principe deferuit.
English (E. D. A. Morshead, 1908) (OCR draft) Experimental (Aeschylus, Persians — Morshead translation. Wikisource transcription; speech corresp and card milestones aligned to Smyth perseus-grc2.) — 249 focus
O walls and towers of all the Asian realm,
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O Persian land, O treasure-house of gold!
How, by one stroke, down to destruction, down,
Hath sunk our pride, and all the flower of war
That once was Persia's, lieth in the dust!
Woe on the man who first announceth woe—
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Yet must I all the tale of death unroll!
Hark to me, Persians! Persia's host lies low.
O ruin manifold, and woe, and fear!
Let the wild tears run down, for the great doom is here!
This blow hath fallen, to the utterance,
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And I, past hope, behold my safe return!
Too long, alack, too long this life of mine,
That in mine age I see this sudden woe condign!
As one who saw, by no loose rumour led,
Lords, I would tell what doom was dealt to us.
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Alack, how vainly have they striven!
Our myriad hordes with shaft and bow
Went from the Eastland, to lay low
Hellas, beloved of Heaven!
Piled with men dead, yea, miserably slain,
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Is every beach, each reef of Salamis!
Thou sayest sooth—ah well-a-day!
Battered amid the waves, and torn,
On surges hither, thither, borne,
Dead bodies, bloodstained and forlorn,
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In their long cloaks they toss and stray!
Their bows availed not! all have perished, all,
By charging galleys crushed and whelmed in death.
Shriek out your sorrow's wistful wail!
To their untimely doom they went;
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Ill strove they, and to no avail,
And minished is their armament!
Out on thee, hateful name of Salamis,
Out upon Athens, mournful memory!
Woe upon this day's evil fame!
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Thou, Athens, art our murderess;
Alack, full many a Persian dame
Is left forlorn and husbandless!
Mute have I been awhile, and overwrought
At this great sorrow, for it passeth speech,
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And passeth all desire to ask of it.
Yet if the gods send evils, men must bear.
( To the Messenger)
Unroll the record! stand composed and tell,
Although thy heart be groaning inwardly,
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Who hath escaped, and, of our leaders, whom
Have we to weep? what chieftains in the van
Stood, sank, and died and left us leaderless?
German (J. J. C. Donner, 1854; OCR review) (OCR draft) Experimental (Aeschylos. Deutsch in den Versmaßen der Urschrift. Stuttgart: Hoffmann, 1854. Native Donner line citations, Smyth card correspondence, selected textual readings and metrical facsimiles. Remaining OCR differences and unattributed reading notes are documented in the linked review inventory.) — 249 focus
Weh euch, des ganzen Asia's Burgfesten ihr,
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Weh, Perserland, des stolzen Reichthums weiter Port !
Wie ist in Einem Schlage doch das große Glück
Vernichtet; Persis' Blüte welkt dahingestürzt!
Fluchvolles Amt, des Fluches erster Bote sein!
Und doch - die Noth will, daß ich euch das ganze Leid
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Enthülle, Perser: ganz vertilgt ist euer Heer!
Traurig, o traurig, unerhört grimmig Leid!
O weint, Perser, weint über die schwere Kunde!
Wie fand doch Alles, Alles dort den Untergang!
Den Tag der Heimkehr schau' ich selber unverhofft.
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Wahrlich zu lange währte dies Leben mir,
Um solch niegeahnt Leiden, ein Greis, zu hören!
Und als ein Augenzeuge, nicht aus Andrer Mund
Verkünd' ich euch, o Perser, was uns Schweres traf.
Wehe! Vergeblich, daß
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So viel Geschosse buntgedrängt
Stolz aus Asia's Neich sich stürzten
Auf dich, göttliche Hellas!
Bedeckt mit Leichen kläglich Hingemordeter
Sind Salamis' Felsufer und die Gau'n umher.
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Wehe! Gestürzt in's Meer,
Ein Spiel der Wogen, blutgefärbt,
Treiben, sagst du, der Freunde Leichen
Todt auf Trümmern der Schiffe?
Nicht schüste Pfeil und Bogen; nein, das ganze Heer
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Erlag, bewältigt in der Schiffe wildem Kampf.
Hebt über euch Unselige
Des Weh's angstvollen Ruf!
Denn, ach! Leid häuften uns auf Leid
Durch des Heers Untergang die Götter!
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O Salamis, o Name, tiefverhaft dem Ohr!
Weh dir, mit welchem Jammer denk' ich dein, Athen !
Wohl ist Athen der Feinde Fluch!
Und allzeit denk' ich sein,
Das so viel Perserfrauen, voll
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Blinder Wuth, Söhne, Gatten raubte.
Schon lange schweig' ich Arme, durch das schwere Leid
Betäubt: so ungeheuer ist das Mißgeschick,
Und drängt zurück die Rede, hemmt der Frage Lauf.
Doch muß der Mensch die Schmerzen, die der Götter Rath
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Verhängt, ertragen. Ganz enthülle, denn das Leid,
Und ob das Herz auch seufze, dennoch sprich gefaßt:
Wer blieb am Leben? Welchen Fürsten müssen wir
Betrauern? Wer mit hohem Feldherrnstabe fiel,
Und ließ die führerlose Schaar verwaist zurück?
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Notes on the current edition

Persians

1. Single-witness OCR: uncollated. Source layout and readings require scan review; automatic flags are not exhaustive.
2. Reference placement provisional: provisional local reference window from running Greek. Verify the printed source numbering and note scope against the scan.

Commentary

Critical apparatus to The Persians (OCR draft) (Latin and Greek critical apparatus to Gottfried Hermann's 1852 edition of The Persians.) focus

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Ἀθηνῶν: Post
Ἀθηνῶν
comma habent Ald. Rob. Turn. Omittunt interpunctionem Vict. et reliquae editiones, male, si quid video. Inficetum enim videtur nuntium de eo loqui, quam ipse ingemiscat. Gravis autem est sententia, si dicit nam ingemisco, quum recordor, quo indicat vel recordationem mali tantam vim habere ut a gemitibus temperare sibi nequeat, ex quo colligi posse quantum praesentibus videri istud malum debuerit.

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στυγναί γ': Brunckius dedit
στυγναί γ' Ἀθῆναι
. Et habet M.
στυγναί γ' ἀθῆναι
. Ex Par. B.
δ'
, superscripto
γ'
, ex Par. C.
γ'
, superscripto
γ'
, ex Ven. A. et Ox.
θ'
adnotatum est.
στυγναὶ δ' ἀθῆναι
G. Ald. Rob.
στυγναὶ δ᾽ ἀθῆναι
Vit. Lips.
στυγναὶ δ᾽ Ἀθῆναι
Turn.
στυγναὶ ἀθῆναι
Ven. B. Et
ἀθῆναι
quidem habent etiam Par. B. F. I. N. Acquiescendum erat in plerorumque librorum lectione. Nam
δέ
particula continuat orationem iis quae chorus postrema dixerat ut v. 297. 475. Ceterum Lips. Ald. Rob. interpungunt post
Ἀθῆναι
, nomine
δαίοις
ad sequentia relato. Recte inde a Turn. post
δαίοις
interpunctum est.

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μεμνῆσθαί τοι:
μεμνῆσθαί τε
Vit. Lips. Ven. A. Mosc. Par. N. πάρα:
παρεὶς
pro
πάρα
Ven. A. quod natum ex interpretatione
πάρεισι
.

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Περσίδων:
τῶν περσίδων
Vit. Lips. Mosc.

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ἠδ᾽ ἀνάνδρους: omittit Lips. Boeckhius in praefatione lectionum aestivarum a. 1827. p. 12. scribendum esse coniecit
εὔνιδας ἔκτισσαν ἠδ᾽ ἀνάνδρους
.

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NA: Praeclare Atossa regiam maiestatem et huc usque silentio conservavit et nunc gravitate orationis tuetur.

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κακοῖς:
κακοῖσιν
Lips. ὑπερβάλλει:
ὑπερβάλλοι
Vit.

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βροτοῖς:
βροτοὺς
Lips. Rob. sed in Lips.
οις
supra scriptum.
βροτοῖς
M. G. aliique et Ald. Turn. Idem ex corr. Vit. quum antea
βροτοὺς
scriptum fuisset. Propter exquisitiorem structuram praeferendum videtur
βροτοῖς
. Nam ne quis putet traiectionem verborum indicio esse potius
βροτοὺς
scriptum fuisse a poeta, hoc argumentum nihil probare moneo. Etenim
βροτοῖς
ideo ante
φέρειν
collocatum est, quia non
φέρειν
, sed
βροτοῖς
primariam notionem esse poeta voluit, quod idem est ac
νοῖς οὖσι βροτοῖς
, quoniam mortales sumus.

Commentary (W. S. Teuffel; revised by N. Wecklein, 1886; German; OCR draft) (Persians, explanatory commentary pp. 43–97. Single-witness OCR; source readings and all reference placements require scan review.) focus

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1
2
Kommos, drei Stro- phenpaare des Chors, unterbrochen je durch zwei Trimeter des Boten.

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4
Drei iambische Verse (1. katal. Pentapodie mit Synkope des dritten u. vierten Iambus, 2. u. 3. Tetrapodie, bez. Pentapodie ᾿Αντιστρ. γ΄. mit Synkope im zweiten u. dritten Iambus) u. ein logaödischer, be- stehend aus Choriambus (d. h. Dak- tylus u. synk. Trochäus) und drei Trochäen. δᾶοι wie 239. – όνομα Σαλαμίνος πλεῖστον ἔχθος κλύειν wie ἔχθιστον κλύειν. αἰαῖ στρα- τοῦ φθαρέντος ist wie 116 der an- zustimmende Klageruf. δάοις, Athen seinen Feinden, also hier den Persern. ὡς . . . ἔκτισαν ist nicht ein von μεμνῆσθαι abhängiger Satz, sondern ein kausaler Nebensatz, da sich zu μεμνῆσθαι aus dem Vor- hergehenden ᾿Αθηνῶν ergänzt. - μάταν εὔπαιδας, weil sie die Söhne, καταπαίδας, ἀνάνδρους, weil sie die Gatten ver- loren haben.