ἄγριος κτλ.
: like the Spartans towards slaves and Helots: cf.
Laws 777 A ff. and Gilbert
Gk Const. Ant. E. T. pp. 32 ff.
οὐ καταφρονῶν κτλ.
is a subtle psychological touch. Those who have no moral or intellectual right to ‘despise’ inferiors are apt to treat them harshly, in the vain effort to convince themselves of their own superiority.
ὁ ἱκανῶς πεπαιδευμένος uses those below him “as creatures of another place” (
All's well that ends well I 2. 41). Cf. Arist.
Eth. Nic. IV 8. 1124^{b} 5. 20 and (for
καταφρονῶν) Thuc. II 62. 4
αὔχημα μὲν γὰρ καὶ ἀπὸ ἀμαθίας εὐτυχοῦς καὶ δειλῷ τινι ἐγγίγνεται, καταφρόνησις δὲ ὃς ἂν καὶ γνώμῃ πιστεύῃ τῶν ἐναντίων προέχειν.
οὐκ ἀπὸ τοῦ λέγειν κτλ.
Cf.
Prot. 342 E
ff. The Spartans were men of deeds, not words.
φιλογυμναστής ‐‐ φιλόθηρος
. as in Sparta: see Hermann-Thumser l.c. p. 182 notes 1, 2.
ὅσῳ δὲ πρεσβύτερος κτλ.
The life of the timocratical man is an epitome of that of the State, in which, as actually happened at Sparta, the oligarchical element grows more and more powerful as time goes on (547 C note).
λόγου ‐‐ κεχραμένου
recalls the
ἀληθινὴ Μοῦσα of 548 B.
σωτὴρ ἀρετῆς
. Virtue is never secure unless it rests on knowledge, and can render a
λόγος of itself: cf. VI 497 C and VII 531 E notes
ἐνίοτε κτλ.
Krohn finds a difficulty in
οὐκ εὖ πολιτευομένῃ, for timarchy is a degeneration of the perfect city (
Pl. St. pp. 208 ff., insufficiently refuted by Grimmelt
de reip. Pl. comp. et unit. p. 71). But Plato is here speaking of the origin of the ‘timarchical’
man, not of the ‘timarchical’
State, and the
ἀριστοκρατικός whose son becomes
τιμοκρατικός may be found in any one of the degenerate commonwealths, although he will not rule except ‘in his
own city,’ i.e. aristocracy. We must beware of supposing that there is no remnant of good men in depraved States (cf. VI 492 E ff., 496 C ff., IX 591 E ff.). If Plato had here preserved the fiction of a historical narrative and made the
τιμοκρατικὸς νεανίας the son of an
ἀριστοκρατικός in his own ideal city, he could only have attributed his fall to the same law of natural degeneration which subverted the
καλλίπολις (546 A ff.). As it is, the description is drawn from facts of daily experience and observation, and Plato, as is suggested by the Oxford editors, may well be thinking of some ‘Laconizing youth of Athens,’ perhaps of some member of the Socratic circle. We have already seen that Plato frequently deserts the epic or narrative form of exposition which he has chosen to express his views: see above on 548 D. I formerly printed a comma after
πως and a full stop after
ἔχειν, but now revert to Stallbaum's punctuation, because (1) the contrast with
καὶ ἔστι μέν γε κτλ. seems to require a fuller pause after
πως, (2)
ἐνίοτε —ἔχειν does not explain the
γένεσις of the
τιμοκρατικός, as it ought to do, if
γίγνεται—ἔχειν is all one sentence, (3) Adimantus' interruption
πῇ δὴ—γίγνεται, which calls attention in a lively manner to the point which Plato wishes to emphasise, is most easily accounted for on the supposition that
ἐνίοτε κτλ. begins a separate sentence: cf. 567 E note and
Soph.
O. C. 644
f., with Jebb's note.
νέος ὑός is resumed in
νέος (550 A), and has no other predicate except
ἦλθε etc. in 550 B.
φεύγοντος κτλ.
Cf. VI 496 C ff. and
Theaet. 173 C
ff.
φυγαρχία (if the word may be allowed) on the part of the best men was a growing evil in Athenian politics: see Hermann-Thumser l.c. p. 749 note 4. In a bad State, according to Aristotle (
Pol.
Γ 4), the good man is apt to be a bad citizen.
ὅταν κτλ.
: ‘whenever, I continued, he listens in the first instance to his mother, who is annoyed because her husband has no place in the government and is on that account belittled among the other wives, and who also sees’ etc.
πρῶτον μέν has nothing to do with
ἔπειτα, but prepares us for
καὶ οἱ οἰκέται κτλ. in 549 E. See also on 549 D. Krohn (
Pl. St. p. 198) thinks the present sentence inconsistent with the position assigned to women in V; but actual wives
ἐν πόλει οὐκ εὖ πολιτευομένῃ may be allowed to differ from the perfect products of an ideal city. Plato's description is as realistic as anything could well be: he speaks as though
ξυνῳκηκὼς ἐν τῷ αὐτῷ καὶ παραγεγονὼς ἐν ταῖς κατ’ οἰκίαν πράξεσιν (IX 577 A). Socrates and his relations with Xanthippe possibly furnished some details of the picture (so also Müller on p. 749 of his Translation).
λοιδορούμενον
is certainly middle, not passive, as Ast imagined: cf. VI 500 B.
ἐν δικαστηρίοις
. The opposition between
ἴδιαι and
δημόσιαι δίκαι (cf.
Laws 957 A) is not to the point here, as Vermehren remarks (
Plat. Stud. p. 107), but we should not, with that critic, expunge
ἐν δικαστηρίοις. The expression
ἰδίᾳ ἐν δικαστηρίοις refers to
ἴδιαι δίκαι: and
δημοσίᾳ to other public gatherings, as e.g. the assembly: cf.
Theaet. 174 C
ὅταν ἐν δικαστηρίοις ἤ που ἄλλοθι ἀναγκασθῇ κτλ.
ῥᾳθύμως κτλ.
: ‘indifferent to everything of the sort’: cf.
Xen.
Mem. II 9. 1
,
Theaet. 173 C
, D and (for the vague use of
τὰ τοιαῦτα) VII 536 A.
αἰσθάνηται
is usually explained as by anacoluthon for
αἰσθανομένης: but no parallels have been cited, nor are the anacolutha by which Engelhardt (
Anac. Pl. Spec. III p. 42) illustrates the sentence in any degree comparable. The sense compels us to regard the subject of
αἰσθάνηται as the mother, but grammatically it can only, as with
ἀκούῃ, be the son. I formerly placed
αἰσθάνηται after
ἀχθομένης τε: Richards excises it altogether. Neither solution is perfectly satisfactory; and it is possible that the sentence by some accident or other was imperfectly revised by Plato. The grammatical structure of this chapter from
ἐνίοτε πατρός down to
ἐπαινουμένους (550 A) is considerably freer than is usual even with Plato, and there are other passages in Book VIII which seem to stand in need of revision: cf. 558 A note Nothing is easier than to ‘emend’ them all in accordance with our grammatical rules, but such emendations involve so great a departure from the MSS that they lack every element of probability, and as it is possible that the fault is Plato's, it is safer for us to adhere to the MSS. Nearly all the greatest writers occasionally offend against the rules by which we seek to bind them. See the excellent remarks of Longinus on the subject of correctness
versus fire in composition (
περὶ ὕψους 33—36).
ἄνανδρος ‐‐ καὶ λίαν ἀνειμένος
rings poetical. The rhythm may be intentional, to suit
ὑμνεῖν: or Plato may have taken the words from a tragedian. Such a line as
ἄνανδρός ἐστι καὶ λίαν ἀνειμένος might well have been applied by Zethus to Amphion in Euripides'
Antiope, which was in effect a comparison between the
πρακτικός and the
θεωρητικὸς βίος: see
Gorg. 485 E
ff. and
Eur.
Frag. 187
Dind. Cf. also VI 494 D note