Sophocles Electra 51

ed. Francis Storr

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Electra. Sophocles. ed. Francis Storr. London. 1913.

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Ἠλέκτρα (Greek) (Sophocles, Volume 2. Storr, Francis, editor. London; New York: William Heinemann Ltd.; The Macmillan Company, 1913.)

Provisional text from uncorrected OCR; expect errors.

Editions (1)
Greek (Lewis Campbell, 1879) (OCR draft) Experimental (Greek (Lewis Campbell, 1879)) — 51 focus
ἡμεῖς δὲ πατρὸς πρὸς τύμβον, ὡς ἐφίετο,
λοιβαῖσι λοιβαῖσ τε AΓ. λοιβαῖσι C. πρῶτον καὶ καρατόμοις χλιδαῖς
στέψαντες, εἶτ᾿ ἄψορρον ἥξομεν πάλιν,
τύπωμα χαλκόπλευρον ᾐρμένοι χεροῖν,
55
ὃ καὶ σὺ θάμνοις οἶσθά μοι που ποῦ κεκρυμμένον,
ὅπως λόγῳ κλέπτοντες ἡδεῖαν φάτιν
φέρωμεν φέροιμεν φέρωμεν αὐτοῖς, τοὐμὸν ὡς ἔρρει δέμας
φλογιστὸν ἤδη καὶ κατηνθρακωμένον.
τί γάρ με λυπεῖ τοῦθ᾽, ὅταν λόγῳ θανὼν
60
ἔργοισι σωθῶ κἀξενέγκωμαι κλέος;
δοκῶ μέν, οὐδὲν ὡσ οὐδὲν L. μὲ οὐδὲν A. ῥῆμα σὺν κέρδει συγκέρδει κακόν.
Translations (5)
English (Lewis Campbell, 1906) (OCR draft) Experimental (English (Lewis Campbell, 1906)) — 77 focus
(). Woe for my hapless lot!
German (J. J. C. Donner, 1875; OCR review) (OCR draft) Experimental (German (J. J. C. Donner, 1875; OCR review)) — 51 focus
Wir aber kränzen, wie der Gott befahl, zuerst
Mit Spenden und des Hauptes abgeschnitt'ner Zier 1
Des Vaters Hügel, kehren dann hieher zurück,
Den erzgeformten Aschenkrug in meinem Arm,
Den ich im Busch verborgen, wie dir wohlbekannt,
55
Auf daß, in Worten täuschend, wir den Argen hier
Die frohe Botschaft bringen, wie mein Körper schon
Verbrannt zur Asche, schon in Staub zerfallen sei.
Was kann mich's härmen, wenn ich, todt dem Worte nach, 2
In Thaten lebe, strahlend in des Ruhmes Glanz?
60
Kein Wort ja dünkt mir übel, wenn es Nuzen bringt.
Auch weise Männer hört' ich durch ein falsch Gerücht
Schon oft als todt verkünden; wenn sie dann zurück
Nach Hause kehrten, waren sie noch mehr geehrt.
So hoff' ich auch nach dieser Botschaft lebend noch
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Gleich einem Stern zu leuchten vor den Feinden dort.
Vatererd' und meiner Heimat Götter ihr,
Empfanget segenbringet mich auf diesem Pfad,
Und meiner Ahnen Schwelle du: dich komm' ich ja
Zu rächen, dich zu sühnen, durch den Gott erweckt:
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Stoßt nicht, bedeckt mit Schande, mich aus diesem Land,
Nein, laßt des Vaters Macht und Haus mich neu erbau'n!
Nun sagt' ich Alles; du bereite dich sofort
Zu geh'n und deines Amtes treu zu wahren, Greis.
(zu Pylades)
Wir zieh'n hinaus; die mächtige Stunde fordert uns,
75
Die ordnend über jede That der Menschen wacht.
English (Thomas Francklin, 1758–1759) (OCR draft) Experimental (English (Thomas Francklin, 1758–1759)) — 77 focus
Of vile usurpers, and avenge thy wrongs —
Drive me not from thee an abandoned exile
With infamy, but grant me to possess
My father's throne, and fix his injured race.
Thus far 'tis well. My faithful minister,
Thou to thy office, we to ours with speed ;
So time and opportunity require
On whom the fate of mortals must depend.
English (Robert Potter, 1788) (OCR draft) Experimental (English (Robert Potter, 1788)) — 77 focus
O miserable me!
English (Sir Richard Jebb, 1904) (OCR draft) Experimental (English (Sir Richard Jebb, 1904)) — 77 focus

Commentary

Commentary (R. C. Jebb) (OCR draft) (Commentary (R. C. Jebb))

mvp-comment-30-1 ἐφίετο 1

mvp-comment-30-2 λοιβαῖσι 2

mvp-comment-30-3 καρατόμοις χλιδαῖς 3

mvp-comment-30-4 στέψαντες 4

mvp-comment-30-5 ἄψορρον … πάλιν 5

mvp-comment-31-1 τύπωμα 6 χαλκόπλευρον 7

mvp-comment-31-2 ἠρμένοι 8

mvp-comment-31-3 Others take

ἠρμένοι
as middle. This use of
ἦρμαι
is not unknown to later Greek; e.g. Strabo 3. p. 150 has
νίκην ἠρμένοι
=
ἀράμενοι
. But there is no example of it in the classical period.

mvp-comment-32-1 Join που 9 καὶ σὺ 10

mvp-comment-32-2 The v.l. μοι 11

mvp-comment-33-1 λόγῳ κλέπτοντες 12

mvp-comment-33-2 φέρωμεν 13

mvp-comment-33-3 ἔρρει 14

mvp-comment-33-4 δέμας 15

mvp-comment-34-1 τί γάρ με λυπεῖ 16

mvp-comment-34-2 ἔργοισι 17

mvp-comment-34-3 κἀξενέγκωμαι 18

mvp-comment-35-1 δοκῶ μέν 19 σὺν κέρδει 20

mvp-comment-35-2 κακόν 21

mvp-comment-36-1 πολλάκις 22

mvp-comment-36-2 λόγῳ μάτην θνῄσκοντας 23

mvp-comment-36-3 ἐκτετίμηνται 24

mvp-comment-37-1 ὡς 25

mvp-comment-37-2 κἄμ’ ἐπαυχῶ 26

mvp-comment-37-3 ἄπο 27

mvp-comment-37-4 δεδορκότ’ 28

mvp-comment-37-5 ἐχθροῖς 29 λάμψειν 30

mvp-comment-37-6 ἄστρον 31

mvp-comment-37-7 ἔτι 32

mvp-comment-38-1 πατρῴα γῆ 33

mvp-comment-38-2 εὐτυχοῦντα 34

mvp-comment-38-3 ὁδοῖς 35

mvp-comment-39-1 καθαρτής 36

mvp-comment-39-2 πρὸς θεῶν ὡρμημένος 37

mvp-comment-40-1 ἀλλ’ ἀρχέπλουτον 38

mvp-comment-40-2 ἀρχέπλουτον 39

mvp-comment-40-3 καταστάτην 40

mvp-comment-41-1 εἴρηκα μέν νυν ταῦτα 41

mvp-comment-41-2 μελέσθω 42

mvp-comment-42-1 ἐπιστάτης 43

Commentary (Lewis Campbell, 1879) (OCR draft) (Commentary (Lewis Campbell, 1879)) focus

52. mvp-comment-34-1 καρατόμοις χλιδαῖς] ‘With shorn locks luxuriant.' Cp. infr. 901, νεώρη βόστρυχον. The word χλιδή perhaps marks the luxuriance of the youthful Orestes' locks. Cp. Plat. Phaedo, 89 B, αὔριον δή, ἔφη, ἴσως, ὦ Φαίδων, τὰς καλὰς ταύτας κόμας ἀποκερεῖ.

54. mvp-comment-35-1 'Holding uplifted in our hands the shapely urn with sides of brass.' The Scholiast rightly compares the construction of τύπωμα with ᾐρμένοι to such expressions as πώγωνα καθειμένος, – ἀντὶ τοῦ κεχαλασμένον ἔχων. But he does not observe that in both cases the verb is in the middle voice. τύπωμα is literally, A moulded form.' Cp. Ant. 430, ἐκ δ' εὐκροτήτου .. πρόχου, κ.τ.λ. For χαλκόπλευρον, cp. Aesch. Cho. 686, λέβητος χαλκέου πλευρώματα.

55. mvp-comment-36-1 (1) Which, as I believe (που) you know, is hidden in the brake.' For οἰσθά που, cp. infr. 948, 9, παρουσίαν μὲν λέγων, | οἶσθα καὶ σὺ που φίλων | ὡς. κ.τ.λ. (2) The v. r. μοι for που is also possible. Which I have, as you know, hidden in the brake.' μοι, if genuine, is not dative of the agent, but of remote reference not I have hidden it, but 'I have it hidden.'

56. mvp-comment-37-1 λόγῳ κλέπτοντες] 'Stealing our advance through feigned words.' The participle is equally emphatic with the verb.

57. mvp-comment-38-1 φέρωμεν] The optative cannot be defended here.

59-60. mvp-comment-39-1 The precise construction would be either λυπεῖ.. ὅτε σώζομαι, or λυπήσει . . ὅταν σωθῶ. But as the sentence proceeds the mind of Orestes dwells more than at first on the futurity of the event.

60. mvp-comment-40-1 κἀξενέγκωμαι κλέος] ‘And win renown.' Cp. Od. 1. 298, οἷον κλέος ἔλλαβε δῖος Ορέστης.

61. mvp-comment-41-1 δοκῶ μέν] Cp. infr. 547: О. С. 995, δοκῶ μέν, εἴπερ ζῆν φιλεῖς, κ.τ.λ.: Fr. 83, δοκῶ μέν, οὐδείς: Plato, Meno, 94 C, δοκῶ μέν, ἐβούλετο, Methinks, no word is inauspicious that is accompanied with gain.' Cp. Eur. Hel. 1050 foll. (quoted by Brunck), ΕΛ. βούλει λέγεσθαι, μὴ θανών, τεθνηκέναι; ΜΕΝ. κακὸς μὲν ὄρνις· εἰ δὲ κερδανῶ λέγων, | ἕτοιμός εἰμι μὴ θανών λόγῳ θανείν.

62-66. mvp-comment-42-1 Some such story as that of Aristeas of Proconnesus, Hdt. 4. 13-16, is probably in the mind of the poet, who need not however be accused of the anachronism of making Orestes refer to this or any similar story (as of Pythagoras, Epimenides, Solon, Zaleucus, or Zamolxis). Hermann finds here an allusion to some banished Athenian citizen, who (like the late Lord Brougham) may have ambitiously spread the rumour of his own death.

63. mvp-comment-43-1 μάτην] ‘Without reality. For the pleonasm, see E. on L. § 40. p. 75.

64. mvp-comment-44-1 ἐκτετίμηνται πλέον] ‘Their name stands higher than before.' For this intensive use of the perfect, cp. ἐσπούδακα, τετεύτακα, and similar words.

65-66. mvp-comment-45-1 Even so I, having indeed come to life in consequence of this report, shall yet, I trust, flash like a comet on my foes.' δεδορκότα is used intensively for βλέποντα = ζῶντα, but this natural use of language is assisted by the image of the star. (See L. and S. s. ν. δέρκομαι.) The star of Orestes in the ascendant will be of evil omen to his enemies. Cp. Il. 22. 30, λαμπρότατος μὲν ὅδ᾽ ἐστί, κακὸν δὲ τε σῆμα τέτυκται. For ἔτι meaning 'Hereafter, though not now, cp. infr. 471: Trach. 256, 7, ἢ μὴν τὸν ἀγχιστῆρα τοῦδε τοῦ πάθους | ξὺν παιδὶ καὶ γυναικὶ δουλώσειν ἔτι: Ant. 69: Phil. 1359. Compare with ll. 59-66 the comic words of Falstaff, Shak. I Hen. 4. 5. 4. 120, 'To counterfeit dying, when a man thereby liveth, is to be no counterfeit, but the true and perfect image of life indeed.'

68. mvp-comment-46-1 Receive me and let me prosper in this my coming. The participle is proleptic. For ταῖσδε ταῖς ὁδοῖς, cp. Ὁ. C. 553, τανῦν θ᾽ ὁδοῖς | ἐν ταῖσδ᾽ ἀκούων μᾶλλον ἐξεπίσταμαι.

70. mvp-comment-47-1 δίκῃ καθαρτής] ‘A rightful purifier.' See E. on L. § 14. р. 20. Ср. Shak. J. C. 2. 1. 180, We shall be called purgers, not murderers.'

72. mvp-comment-48-1 ἀλλ᾽ ἀρχέπλουτον] Sc. καταστήσατε, the positive notion elicited from the negative, -E. on L. § 36. p. 64. (1) But make me the founder of a wealthy line.' This would seem to be the meaning of the compound, according to the analogy of ἀρχέκακος. The word in this sense may possibly be construed with δόμων, 'Beginner of wealth to the house. Others explain it as equal to ἀρχαιόπλουτος, (2) ‘Enjoying ancient wealth. For this, cp. ἀρχεδίκης, Pind. Pyth. 4. 189-195, ἀρχαίαν κομίζων πατρὸς ἐμοῦ βασιλευομέναν | οὐ κατ' αἶσαν .... τιμάν. | πεύθομαι γάρ νιν Πελίαν . . | ἁμετέρων ἀποσυλᾶσαι βιαίως ἀρχεδικᾶν τοκέων.

74. mvp-comment-49-1 τὸ σὸν .. φρουρῆσαι χρέος] 'Go thy way and watchfully execute thy duty.' Lit. Watch thy service,' i. e. perform thy service which requires watchfulness. τὸ σὸν . . χρέος is cognate acc. after φρουρῆσαι, but also in the first instance the subject of μελέσθω, to which φρουρῆσαι is added as an explanatory infinitive.

75. mvp-comment-50-1 καιρὸς γάρ] Sc. ἐστί. For the occasion is here. See E. on L. § 39. p. 72, 1 α.

75-76. mvp-comment-51-1 ὅσπερ, κ.τ.λ.] 'And of all powers that direct men's enterprises, Occasion is chief.'

77-86. mvp-comment-52-1 As the function of the chorus, see Introduction, is to respond to Electra, who gives the principal interest to the play, their entrance is preceded by a monody from her, which draws the sympathy of the spectators to the chief person, and prepares them to enter more fully into the spirit of the action. And-less to whet the purpose of Orestes, than to show his firmness- he is allowed to hear her wailing from within. It is easy to see how this must excite him. But it does not alter his determination to rely upon himself alone. And thus, although for the moment eager to hear more, he yields at once to the counsel of the old man, that nothing should delay the action for which the moment is come. After l. 85, exeunt Orestes, the Paedagogus, and Pylades, leaving the proscenium vacant.

77. mvp-comment-53-1 -------. A paroemiac, consisting wholly of long syllables, like infr. 88, 89, 105, and other lines in the following lament. See the scheme of metres below.