Sophocles Electra 1397cont3

Thomas Francklin (Translator)

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She doth prepare the funeral banquet ;
But they are not far from her.

Electra. Sophocles. Thomas Francklin (Translator). London. 1758–1759.

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English (Thomas Francklin, 1758–1759) (OCR draft) (English) (English (Thomas Francklin, 1758–1759))

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Editions (2)
Greek (Lewis Campbell, 1879) (OCR draft) Experimental (Greek (Lewis Campbell, 1879)) — 1397 focus
ὦ φίλταται γυναῖκες, ἄνδρες ἄνδρες αὐτίκα
Greek (F. Storr, 1912) (OCR draft) Experimental (Greek (F. Storr, 1912)) — 1384-1441 focus
Translations (4)
English (Lewis Campbell, 1906) (OCR draft) Experimental (English (Lewis Campbell, 1906)) — 1397 focus
Even to the fatal end in clouds of night.
His time of weary waiting all is o’er.
She decks the vase
For burial, and they both are standing by.
German (J. J. C. Donner, 1875; OCR review) (OCR draft) Experimental (German (J. J. C. Donner, 1875; OCR review)) — 1397 focus
O liebe, theure Frauen, gleich vollenden nun
Das Werk die Männer: also harrt ihr schweigend noch!
English (Robert Potter, 1788) (OCR draft) Experimental (English (Robert Potter, 1788)) — 1397 focus
My dearest friends, they now are in the act,
E'en now: in silence then await 'th' event..
English (Sir Richard Jebb, 1904) (OCR draft) Experimental (English (Sir Richard Jebb, 1904)) — 1384-1440 focus

Commentary

Commentary (R. C. Jebb) (OCR draft) (Commentary (R. C. Jebb))

mvp-comment-777-1 αἰαῖ· ἰὼ στέγαι 1

mvp-comment-778-1 ἀνήκουστα 2

mvp-comment-779-1 ἰδού 3

mvp-comment-779-2 μάλ’ αὖ 4

mvp-comment-780-1 ἐκ σέθεν 5

mvp-comment-780-2 ὁ γεννήσας πατήρ 6

mvp-comment-780-3 1413 f. The traditional reading φθίνει φθίνει 7 σε 8 σοι 9 μοῖρα καθαμερία 10 φθίνει 11

mvp-comment-780-4 Others explain as follows. (1) Keeping both σε 12 φθίνει φθίνει 13 σε 14 φθίνειν φθίνειν 15

mvp-comment-780-5 Nor is the objection to these interpretations merely verbal. They represent the Chorus as deploring that doom of the race which entails yet another deed of bloodshed. But, as Whitelaw well observes, this commits Sophocles to the Aeschylean view of the vengeance ‘as a new crime in the series of crimes’ (Translation, p. 437). The Chorus are in the fullest sympathy with the avengers. They regard the slaying of Clytaemnestra not as a new calamity, but as a welcome retribution: cp. 1434

τὰ πρὶν εὖ θέμενοι
, and 1508 ff. The words
ὦ πόλις, ὦ γενεὰ
express the feeling of these
πολίτιδες
(1227) that the cause of the house is that of the city. They hail the approaching deliverance of Mycenae from the tyrants. The change of
ὦ πόλις, ὦ γενεὰ
into
ὦ Πέλοπος γενεὰ
(cr. n.) is equally rash and infelicitous.

mvp-comment-780-6 1415 f. Cp. Aesch. Ag. 1343

ΑΓ. ὤμοι, πέπληγμαι καιρίαν πληγὴν ἔσω
... 1345
ὤμοι μάλ’ αὖθις, δευτέραν πεπληγμένος.

mvp-comment-780-7 διπλῆν 16

mvp-comment-780-8 εἰ γὰρ Αἰγίσθῳ γ’ ὁμοῦ 17

mvp-comment-781-1 τελοῦς ἀραί 18

mvp-comment-781-2 οἱ … κείμενοι 19

mvp-comment-781-3 ὑπαὶ 20

Commentary (Lewis Campbell, 1879) (OCR draft) (Commentary (Lewis Campbell, 1879)) focus

1398-1441. mvp-comment-660-1 The following passage (1398-1441), although consisting largely of senarii, appears to be antistrophic, nearly corresponding even in the division of the lines. According to this view ll. 1404-1406 are either (1) not to be counted in the strophe, or (2) lines answering to them after l. 1427 must be supposed to have been lost. As the lines in question relate to the sudden cry of Clytemnestra from within, the former supposition is sufficiently probable. Cp. note on O. C. 117 foll., vol. i. p. 298 (Ist column). In the 'strophe,' ll. 1398-1421, Clytemnestra is put to death, -in the 'antistrophe,' ll. 1422-41, the bleeding sword is displayed, and Aegisthus is descried. The young men then retire into the palace, and Electra waits outside.

1407. mvp-comment-663-1 ἀνήκουστα] ‘What is horrible to hear,-as ἄρρητα are 'things horrible to tell.'

1411-1412. mvp-comment-664-1 ἀλλ᾽.. οὗτος] Cp. supr. 296, 7,601.

1413-1414. mvp-comment-665-1 If the text is sound, φθίνει is transitive here. καθαμερία is predicative and adverbial, Is destroying thee this very day.' This brief lyrical utterance fills the moment of dread suspense before the falling of the blow.