Sophocles Electra 284

Thomas Francklin (Translator)

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Electra
1354
\io the Governor]. Deax'est of men, great
guardian of our race,
1355
Art thou then here 1 Thou, who hast saved us both
From countless woes ! Swift were thy feet to bring
Glad tidings to me, and thy hand stretched forth
1372
Its welcome succour. But, oh ! why deceive me 1
Why wouldst thou kill me with thy dreadful tiilo,
E'en when thou hadst such happiness in store?
Hail ! father, hail ! — for I must caU thee so —
1380
Know, thou hast been to me, in one short day,
Both the most hated and most loved of men.

Electra. Sophocles. Thomas Francklin (Translator). London. 1758–1759.

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Greek (Lewis Campbell, 1879) (OCR draft) Experimental (Greek (Lewis Campbell, 1879)) — 275 focus
ἡ δ᾽ ἤδ' L Pal. Schaef. corr. ἡ δ' A. ὧδε τλήμων ὥστε τῷ μιάστορι
275
Greek (F. Storr, 1912) (OCR draft) Experimental (Greek (F. Storr, 1912)) — 251-471 focus
Translations (4)
English (Lewis Campbell, 1906) (OCR draft) Experimental (English (Lewis Campbell, 1906)) — 284 focus
OR
Hush! speak not loud, lest one within should hearken.
German (J. J. C. Donner, 1875; OCR review) (OCR draft) Experimental (German (J. J. C. Donner, 1875; OCR review)) — 282 focus
Ich Kind des Unglücks, muß ich das im Hause seh'n,
Vergehe, weine, schluchze laut zu diesem Mahl
275
Des Jammers, das sie meines Vaters Mahl benennt,
Allein für mich; denn auch zu weinen ist mir nicht
So viel vergönnt, als meines Herzens Drang genügt.
Denn diese nach dem Namen hochgesinnte Frau 1
Rust höhnend dann mir diese bösen Worte zu:
280
Gottloses Scheusal, ist der Vater dir allein
Gestorben? Trauert außer dir kein Mensch um ihn?
Stirb hin in Elend, und von diesem Fammer soll
Dich auch der Todesgötter Macht niemals befrein! 2
So ruft sie trozend. Aber hört sie dann einmal,
285
Orestes komme, rennt sie flugs auf mich daher,
Und schreit und wüthet: dir allein, dir dank' ich das!
Es war ja dein Werk; hast du doch aus meinem Arm
Entwandt Oresten, und geheim ihn fortgeschafft!
Doch wisse: büßen sollst du mir verdienten Lohn!
290
So bellt sie tobend, und an ihrer Seite reizt
Ihr hochgerühmter Buhle sie noch mehr dazu,
Der überall feigherzig Allverderbliche,
Der im Verein mit Frauen seine Schlachten schlägt.
Ich, ewig harrend, daß Orestes mein Geschick
295
Zu wenden komme, schwinde hin in meinem Gram.
Denn ewig zaudernd hat er meine Hoffnungen,
Die nahen, wie die fernen, mir in Nichts verkehrt.
In solcher Noth, ihr Lieben, wer mag Mäßigung,
Wer fromme Tugend üben? Traun, im Uebel drängt
300
Es uns gewaltsam, auch zu thun, was übel ist.
English (Robert Potter, 1788) (OCR draft) Experimental (English (Robert Potter, 1788)) — 284 focus
Chorus
I heard; and shuddering horror chills my blood.
English (Sir Richard Jebb, 1904) (OCR draft) Experimental (English (Sir Richard Jebb, 1904)) — 251-470 focus

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mvp-comment-750-1 φῶς 1

mvp-comment-751-1 τόνδε κἄμ’ 2

mvp-comment-751-2 ἔσωσας 3 κεῖνος 4

mvp-comment-752-1 ὦ … χεῖρες 5

mvp-comment-753-1 οὐδ’ ἔφαινες 6 ἀλλά με 7

mvp-comment-754-1 ἔργ’ ἔχων 8 ἐμοί 9 με 10

mvp-comment-755-1 πατέρα 11 χαῖῤ, ὦ πάτερ 12 πατέρα 13

mvp-comment-756-1 τοὺς … ἐν μέσῳ λόγους 14

mvp-comment-756-2 The acc. τοὺς … λόγους 15 ταῦτα 16

mvp-comment-756-3 κυκλοῦνται 17 κυκλοῦσι 18

mvp-comment-757-1 σφῷν δ’ ἐννέπω γε 19 γε 20

mvp-comment-758-1 τούτοις 21 ἄλλοισι 22 σοφωτέροις 23 τούτων 24

mvp-comment-758-2 Another view is that

ἀνδρῶν
in 1369 refers to Aegisthus and his armed followers, while τούτοις 25

mvp-comment-759-1 οὐδὲν 26

mvp-comment-760-1 πατρῷα 27

mvp-comment-760-2 ἕδη 28 πρόπυλα 29

mvp-comment-760-3 προσκύσαντε 30

mvp-comment-761-1 ἀφ’ ὧν 31

mvp-comment-761-2 ἔχοιμι 32

mvp-comment-761-3 λιπαρεῖ 33

mvp-comment-761-4 Blaydes and Wecklein read )πέστην 34

mvp-comment-762-1 ἐξ οἵων ἔχω 35 αἰτῶ 36

mvp-comment-762-2 1380 I read προπίπτω 37 προπίτνω 38 ι^ 39 ι— 40

mvp-comment-763-1 τἀπιτίμια 41

Commentary (Lewis Campbell, 1879) (OCR draft) (Commentary (Lewis Campbell, 1879)) focus

1354. mvp-comment-634-1 ὦ.. φῶς] ‘O joyful day!' The words have the same meaning as in supr. 1224, though they do not carry the same strength of feeling.

1356. mvp-comment-635-1 The Paedagogus had proved his faithfulness by saving both Electra and Orestes from danger, before she entrusted him with the precious charge. Cp. supr. 1351, 2.

1357. mvp-comment-636-1 'She addresses the hands, which she is holding in her own.' Wecklein.

1357-1358. mvp-comment-637-1 ἥδιστον.. ὑπηρέτημα] ‘And thou whose feet have done most precious service;' viz. in going to and returning from Phocis.

1359. mvp-comment-638-1 οὐδ᾽ ἔφαινες] 'And not make thyself known.' The use of the active voice is softened by the possible resumption of ξυνών, i. e. συνόντα σέ. But it is also justified by the implied metaphor from a body shining with its own light. Cp. Aesch. Ag. 101, 2, ἀγανὰ φαίνουσ᾽ | ἐλπίς.

1360. mvp-comment-639-1 ἔργ᾽.. ἐμοί] 'While engaged in a course of action most delightful to me.'

1361. mvp-comment-640-1 'Hail, father! For methinks I see a father in thee.' In such words of affection, Electra's long repressed feelings naturally overflow. Cp. supr. 1220, πῶς εἶπας, ὦ παῖ; and note.

1364. mvp-comment-641-1 τοὺς . . λόγους] ‘For as to what has happened in the interval.' The turn of expression in the next line (πολλαὶ κυκλοῦνται, κ.τ.λ.) leaves this accusative out of construction, and it is resumed in ταῦτα (1366).

1365. mvp-comment-642-1 κυκλοῦνται] The change to κυκλοῦσι in some MSS. may have been occasioned either by the wish to obtain a construction for λόγους, or by the similarity of δείξουσι. It is better therefore to retain κυκλοῦνται.

1370-1371. mvp-comment-643-1 σοφωτέροις πλείοσιν] 'Not only with these, but with others who have superior cunning and superior numbers.' σοφωτέροις, because men and not women; πλείοσιν, because the guards of Aegisthus would overpower the Phocian men.'

1372-1373. mvp-comment-644-1 οὐκ ἂν . . τοὔργον] It would seem, Pylades, that our business here no longer has to do with words.'

1374. mvp-comment-645-1 χωρεῖν] Sc. ἔργον ἐστὶν ἡμῖν.

1374-1375. mvp-comment-646-1 'Having first bowed before the shrines of my father's gods.' ὅσοιπερ .. τάδε] Cp. Aesch. Ag. 509-19, where Zeus, Apollo (supr. 637), Hermes, are expressly mentioned, and other deities spoken of as δαίμονες ἀντήλιοι.

1375. mvp-comment-647-1 - After some moments of silent devotion, Orestes, Pylades, the Paedagogus, and their attendants, enter the palace. Electra remains outside and prays aloud to Apollo.

1377. mvp-comment-648-1 σε is governed by λιπαρεῖ προὔστην χερί = ἱκέτευσά σε.

1378. mvp-comment-649-1 λιπαρεῖ . . χερί] 'Came before thee with ever-instant hand.' The gloss of Suidas, λιπαρεῖ· ἀφθόνῳ, πλουσίᾳ, must be attributed to misapprehension.

1379. mvp-comment-650-1 ἐξ οἴων ἔχω] Sc. εὐχομένη, 'Vowing of such things as I have.' Cp. Aesch. Cho. 486-8, ΗΛ. κἀγὼ χοάς σοι τῆς ἐμῆς παγκληρίας | οἴσω πατρῳων ἐκ δόμων γαμηλίους· | πάντων δὲ πρῶτον τόνδε πρεσβεύσω τάφον. This and the following lines are said by Electra in an attitude of prayer, and fitly prepare the spectator for the solemn strain which is raised by the Chorus after she has entered the palace at l. 1383.

1382-1383. mvp-comment-651-1 τἀπιτίμια.. θεοί] ‘What reward the gods bestow upon impiety.'