Sophocles Ajax 1150

Johann Jakob Christian Donner (Translator)

Ich aber sah jüngst einen Mann voll Albernheit,
1105
Der stolz in seines Nächsten Noth sich brüstete;
Und ihn gewahrt' ein Andrer, der mir ähnlich war
Und gleiches Sinnes, - dieser rief das Wort ihm zu:
Mensch, daß du keinen Frevel an den Todten übst!
Denn thust du dies, so wisse, daß Unheil dir droht.
1110
So trat er warnend an den armen Mann heran.
Und diesen seh' ich, und es ist, ich glaube so,
Kein Andrer als du selber. Sprach ich räthselhaft?

Ajax. Sophocles. Johann Jakob Christian Donner (Translator). . .

Current edition Experimental

German (J. J. C. Donner, 1875; OCR review) (OCR draft) (German) (German (J. J. C. Donner, 1875; OCR review))

Provisional text from uncorrected OCR; expect errors.

Editions (4)
Αἴας μαστιγοφόρος First1KGreek (Sophocles. Sophoclis Aiax. Lobeck Christian, editor. Berlin: Weidmann, 1866.) — 1161-1196 focus
Αἴας First1KGreek (Sophocles. Sophoclis Fabulae. Pearson, Alfred Chilton, editor. Oxford: Clarendon Press, 1924.) — 1185-1222 focus
Greek (Lewis Campbell, 1879) (OCR draft) Experimental (Greek (Lewis Campbell, 1879)) — 1150 focus
ἐγὼ δέ γ᾽ ἄνδρ᾽ ὄπωπα μωρίας πλέων,
1150
ὃς οἷσ ὅσ ἐν κακοῖς ὕβριζε τοῖσι τῶν τὸν πέλας.
κατ᾿ αὐτὸν καὐτὸν εἶτ᾿ ἀυτὸν κατ᾿ αὐτὸν εἰσιδών τις ἐμφερὴς ἐμοὶ
ὀργήν τὸν τροπὸν θ᾽ ὅμοιος εἶπε τοιοῦτον λόγον,
ὤνθρωπε, μὴ δρᾶ δρᾶι τοὺς τεθνηκότας κακώς·
εἰ γὰρ ποιήσεις, ἴσθι πημανούμενος.
1155
τοιαῦτ᾽ ἄνολβον ἄνοιτον ἄνδρ᾽ ἐνουθέτει παρών.
ὁρῶ δέ τοί νιν, κἄστιν, ὡς ἐμοὶ δοκεῖ,
οὐδείς ποτ᾽ ἄλλος ἄλλοσ (?) ἢ σύ. μῶν ἠνιξάμην;
Greek (F. Storr, 1912) (OCR draft) Experimental (Greek (F. Storr, 1912)) — 1185-1222 focus
Translations (4)
English (Lewis Campbell, 1906) (OCR draft) Experimental (English (Lewis Campbell, 1906)) — 1150 focus
I too have seen a man whose windy pride
1150
Poured forth loud insults o’er a neighbour’s fall,
Till one whose cause and temper showed like mine
Spake to him in my hearing this plain word:
‘Man, do the dead no wrong; but, if thou dost,
1155
Be sure thou shalt have sorrow.’ Thus he warned
The infatuate one: ay, one whom I behold,
For all may read my riddle—thou art he.
English (Thomas Francklin, 1758–1759) (OCR draft) Experimental (English (Thomas Francklin, 1758–1759)) — 1150 focus
Do thou remember too, I say he shall.
English (Robert Potter, 1788) (OCR draft) Experimental (English (Robert Potter, 1788)) — 1150 focus
Hear thou my answer, He shall be entomb'd.
English (Sir Richard Jebb, 1904) (OCR draft) Experimental (English (Sir Richard Jebb, 1904)) — 1185-1220 focus

Commentary

Commentary (R. C. Jebb) (OCR draft) (Commentary (R. C. Jebb))

mvp-comment-643-1 ὅλων 1 σύμπαντες 2

mvp-comment-643-2 Apart from the difficulty as to

ὅλων
, there is absolutely no ground for rejecting verses 1105 f., as Schneidewin and other critics have done.

mvp-comment-644-1 ὧνπερ ἄρχεις αρχε 3

mvp-comment-644-2 τὰ σέμν’ ἔπη κόλαζ’ ἐκείνους 4

mvp-comment-644-3 εἴτε μὴ σὺ φής, εἴθ’ ἅτερος στρ 5

mvp-comment-644-4 εἰς ταφὰς θήσω 6

mvp-comment-644-5 στόμα 7

mvp-comment-645-1 οἱ πόνου πολλοῦ πλέῳ 8

mvp-comment-645-2 Assuredly

οἱ πόνου πολλοῦ πλέῳ
does not mean ‘busybodies,’
οἱ πολυπραγμονοῦντες
, as some have taken it,—supposing it to be said scornfully of
βασιλεῖς
tributary to Menelaüs and eager to display their zeal.

mvp-comment-646-1 ὅρκων 9

mvp-comment-647-1 σοῦ δ’ οὐδὲν 10

mvp-comment-647-2 τοὺς μηδένας 11

mvp-comment-648-1 κήρυκας 12

mvp-comment-649-1 ψόφου … στραφείην 13

mvp-comment-649-2 ἕως 14 ὡς 15 ὡς ἂν ᾖς 16

Commentary (Lewis Campbell, 1879) (OCR draft) (Commentary (Lewis Campbell, 1879)) focus

1105. mvp-comment-708-1 ἄλλων] i. e. of Agamemnon. ὅλων may be either masculine or neuter, (1) 'Of all the troops,' or (2) 'Of the whole expedition.' Parallels for both are quoted by Lobeck. The first seems the more probable. In this case the plural is equivalent to a collective word, τοῦ στρατοῦ ὅλου, and this may justify the use of ὅλων for πάντων.

1106. mvp-comment-709-1 ὥστ᾽ Αίαντος ἡγεῖσθαί ποτε] This petulant iteration, however natural, is somewhat beneath the level of tragic dignity which is maintained throughout the earlier part of the play. ποτέ, as in supr. 183, οὔ ποτε, gives absoluteness to the denial. 'That could never be!'

1107. mvp-comment-710-1 ὧνπερ ἄρχεις ἄρχε] ‘Exercise command on those over whom you have command.'

1108. mvp-comment-711-1 εἴτε μὴ σὺ φής] i. e. εἴτε σὺ μὴ φής.

1110. mvp-comment-712-1 δικαίως] 'Rightly,' i.e. 'Abating nothing of what is due to him.'

1112. mvp-comment-713-1 ὥσπερ οἱ πόνου πολλοῦ πλέῳ] 'Like those poor men who are consumed with toil;' i. e. the Argive soldiery, who are subject to the behests of the Atreidae. In pitying the men under their command, Teucer conveys his scorn both of the meanness and the tyrannical disposition of the two generals, and also his pride in the independence shown by Ajax and himself. Cp. Il. 9. 348, ἢ μὲν δὴ μάλα πολλὰ πονήσατο νόσφιν ἐμεῖο: supr. 637, πολυπόνων ᾿Αχαιῶν.

1113. mvp-comment-714-1 Ajax served, not because Helen was Menelaus' wife, but because of his oath to her father Tyndareus. Cp. Thuc. 1. 9, τοῖς Τυνδάρεω ὅρκοις κατειλημμένους.

1114. mvp-comment-715-1 σοῦ δ᾽ οὐδέν] This angry repetition (cp. supr. 1106) resumes more explicitly what was implied in σῆς, l. 1111. οὐ γὰρ .. τοὺς μηδένας] For ἀξιοῦν with the accusative only, cp. Eur. Heracl. 918 (lyr.), ὦ Ὑμέναιε, δισσοὺς | παῖδας Διὸς ἠξίωσας. τοὺς μηδένας] Not οὐδένας, because the expression is general, i.e. hypothetical, — εἰ μηδένες εἴησαν.

1115. mvp-comment-716-1 Menelaus came attended by a single herald.

1116. mvp-comment-717-1 τὸν στρατηγόν] 'The generalissimo.' In supr. 1109, to depreciate Agamemnon, Teucer put the two generals on a par: here, to depreciate Menelaus, he makes Agamemnon supreme. τοῦ.. σοῦ ψόφου] 'For any noise of thine.' Cp. Eur. Hipp. 1224-6, οὔτε ναυκλήρου χερὸς | οὔθ' ἱπποδέσμων .. | μεταστρέφουσαι.

1117. mvp-comment-718-1 οὐκ ἂν στραφείην] 'I will not turn this way or that.' ὡς ἂν ἧς—οἷός περ εἰ] 'However you may be just what you are.' The sentence ends, parà prosdokían, after leading the hearer to expect some word like βασιλικός ('However kingly you may be'). Instead of that, Teucer substitutes οἷός περ εἶ, “A man like Menelaus, and nothing more.' Cp. Shak. Ham. 3. 2, 'We shall obey, were she ten times our mother.' For ὡς ἄν, see E. on L. § 28. p. 47, 4 a.